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KIRAN KI KAHANI US KI ZUBANI
« on: July 25, 2012, 11:47:28 PM »
DOSTO YE KAHANI MERI IK FRND KI HAI MERA NAAM UMAIR HAI OR MN US KI KHANI KO US KI HE ZUBAAN MN LIKHNY LAGA HUN CMNTS ZAROOR DIJIYE GAMera naam kiran hai...mera janam ek ameer gharany main rahim yar khan k  ek chote se gaon main
hua … mere ghar muje se badi ek bahan hai us ki shadi ho chuki hai … ye tab ke baat hai jab mere age 18 saal thee.. abhi jawani ani shuru hee hui thee tab mere didi ke shadi ko 5 saal ho chuke thee aur main 12th main padh rahi thee…

ek din jab main school se ghar aye, to ghar main matam chaya hua tha… maa neeche jameen par bethi ro rahi thee jab mene maa se poocha to maa ne koi jawab nahi daya.. aur papa jo ek kone main khade ro rahe thee .. unhone muje uthaya, aur mere aur dekhate hue bole….. beta tumhari didi humen chod kar isdunaya se chali gaye….

Mere parion se tale se jameen khisak gaye, aur main foot -2 kar rone lagi…didi ko ek beti thee jo shadi ke ek saal baad hue thee main apne saree ghar walo ke sath jija jee ke ghar ke lye chali gaye

Uske baad dhere -2 sab normal hone laga… didi ke mout ke do mahine baad jija jee apne beti ko lekar hamre ghar aye… tab main school gaye hui thee… jija jee ke ghar walon se kaya baat hui, muje pata nahi…. par jab main ghar phunchi to, maa muje ek room main le gaye, aur muje se boli…..

Maa: beta meri baat dhayan se sun…. tuje to pata hai na aab teri didi ke gujar jane ke baad… tere didi ke beti ke dekh bhaal karen wala koi nahi hai, aur tere jija jee doosri shadi karen ja rahe hain… abb sirf tum hee apne didi ke beti ke jindgi kharab hone se bacha sakti ho….

Main: (harain hote hue) main par kaise maa…..

Maa: beta tun apne jija se shadi kar lee… yahin akhir rasta hai…. Dekh beti manna mat karna… main tumhare hath jodati hun…(aur maa ke ankhon main ansoon aa gaye)

Main: (maa ke ansoon mujse dekhe na gaye) theek hai maa , aap jo bhee kaho gee…main karen ke laye tayar hoon..

Maa: beta tune mere baat maan kar, mere dil se bhut bada boj utar daya hai…

Aur uske baad maa doosre room main chali gaye…. Didi ke mout ke 6 mahine baad, mere shadi mere jija jee se karwa dee gaye…mere sare armano ke bali de dee gaye…

Jija jee abb mere pati ban chuke thee….unka naam ASIF tha… shadi ke baad main jab apne sasural phunchi…raat ko mere saas ne muje, ghar ke kamren main betha daya…bistar jameen par laga hua tha…ghar kacha tha…yahan tak ke ghar ka farsh bhee kacha hee tha….main neeche jameen par lage hue bistar par bethi… apni anne wale jindgi ke baren main soch rahi thee….aisa nahi tha ki muje sex ke baren main kuch nahi pata tha…. Par bhut jayda bhee nahi janti thee…


Achank room ka door khula, aur ASIF ander aa gaye…ander ate hee unhone door ko lock kaya aur mere pass aakar beth gaye….main ek dum se ghabra gaye… mere dil ke dhadken ek dum teji se chal rahi thee…..kuch der bethane ke baad wo achank se bole

ASIF:abb bethi hee rahogee chal khadi ho kar apni saree utar

Main ek dum se ghabra gaye…muje ye umeed bikul bhee nahi thee, ki koi adami apni suhag raat ko aise apni patni se pesh ata hoga…

ASIF: kaya hua sunai nahi daya …. Chal jaldi kar apni saree utar…

Mere hath pair kanmapne lagee…mathe par paseena anne laga…dil ke dhadken tej ho gaye….main kisi tarhan khadi hui, aur apni saree ko utaren lagi...jab main saree utar rahi thee..to ASIF ek dum se khade ho gaye….aur apna payjam aur kurta utar kar khunte se taang daya, aur phir se bistar par lete gayee…main apni saree utar chuki thee…abb mere badan par peticote aur blouse hee tha….aur uske ander panty aur bra…ASIF ne muje hath se pakad kar kheencha…main bistar par gir padhi…

ASIF: kaya itna time laga rahi ho… itne time main to mian tumhen do baar chod chukka hota…chal aab let ja…

ASIF ne muje peeth ke bal leta daya….jaise mene apni sahelyon se suhagraat ke baren main sun rakha thaa…waisa abb tak bilkul kuch bhee nahi hua thaa…unhone ek hee jhatke main mere peticote ko kheench kar mere kamar par chadha dya,aur mere jhangon ko phela kar, mere jhangon ke beech main ghuntno ke bal beth gaye…mene sharam ke maren ankhen band kar lee…akhir main kar bhee kaya sakti thee…aur anne walon palon ka dhadkate dil ke sath intjaar karen lagi…ASIF ke hath mere jhangon ko masal rahe thee…main apni mulyam jhangon par gopal ke khurdare aur, sakhat hathon ko mahsoos karke, ek dum sihar gaye…wo mere jhangon ko buri tarahan masal raha tha…mere dard ke marre jaan nikli ja rahi thee…par tab tak main dard ko bardast kar rahi thee, aur apni awaz ko dabye hue thee…

Phir eka ek unhone ne mere panty ko dono taraf se pakad kar, ek jhatke main kheench daya… mere dil ke dhadken aaj se pehale itni tej kabhi nahi chali thee…use bereham insaan ko apne samen padi **** saal ke najuk se ladki ko dekh kar bhee daya nahi aa rahi thee…phir ASIF ek dum se khada hua aur, apna underwear utar daya…kamren main lalteen jal rahi thee…lalteen ke roshani main uska kala lund, jo ki 5 inch se jayada lamaba lahi thaa, mere ankhon ke samen hawa main jhatke kha raha tha…ASIF phir se mere jhangon ke beech main beth gaya, aur merejhangon ko phela kar, apne lund ke supad ko mere choot ke ched par tika daya…mere jism main ek pal ke lye masti ke lehar doud gaye…choot ke ched aur diwaron par sarsarhat hone lagi…par agle hee pal mere sari masti khatam ho gaye…us jalim ne bina koi der kaye, apni poor takat ke sath apna lund mere choot main pel daya… mere ankhen dard ke maren phat gaye,aur dard ke mare chila padhi…mere ankhon se ansoo bahane lage…par us hawasi dirende ne mere chikhon ke parwah kye bigare ek aur dhakha mara, mere poora badan dard ke mare enth gaye…mere mooh se cheekh nikalne hee wali thee ke, usen apna hath mere mooh par rakh dya… aur mere cheekh mere mooh ke ander hee ghut kar reh gaye…main rone lagi

Main: (rote hue) bhut dard ho raha hai isse nikal laye jee ahhh

ASIF: chup kar Sali, kyon nakhare kar rahi hai pehali baar dard hota hai…abhi thodi der main theek ho jayega…

Main roti rahi, gidgidati rahi, par usen mere ek na suni,aur apna lund mere choot ke ander bahar karen laga… mere choot se khoon nikal kar mere jhangon tak phel chukka tha..khoon nikalne ka pata muje subhe chala, jab main subhe kapdhe pehane ke lye uthi thee..dard ke maren mere jaan nikli jaa rahi thee…par dirende ne muj par koi taras nahi khaya…na hee usen muje payar kaya, na hee mere chuchyon ko masla, na hee chusa bus apna lund daal kar, wo muje pele ja raha tha…main uske bhari badan ke neeche padi dard ko sahan kar rahi thee…5 min lagataar choden ke baad,uska badan akden laga, aur uske lund se pani nikal gaya…aur mere ooper nidhal hokar gir gaye…uska sara wajan mere ooper tha..mene ASIF ko kandhon se pakad kar side karen ke kosih kee….par uska wight muje kahin jayda tha..akhir kaar wo khud hee uth kar bagal main nidhal hokar gir gaya…

Mene rahat ke saans lee… main abhee bhee ro rahi thee…mene apna peticote ko neeche kaya aur, ASIF ke taraf peeth karke late gaye…wo to 5 min main hee jhad kar so gaya tha…uske kharton ke awaz se muje pata chala… main bathroom jana chathi thee… par mera poora badan dukh raha tha… mere choot suj chuki thee…islaye main uth bhee na
Paye…aur wahin lete -2 muje kab neend aa gaye…muje nahi pata…uske baad muje tab hosh aya, jab mere saas ne muje subhe uthaya…

muje kab neend aa gaye…muje nahi pata…uske baad muje tab hosh aya, jab mere saas ne muje subhe uthaya… mere sare armaan ek hee pal main toot gaye thee… main sochane lagi kassh ke mene maa ko mana kar daya hota…par honi ko kon taal sakta hai…abb yahi mere jeevan hai…mene apne aap se samjota kar laya…mere jindgi kisi machine ke tarah ho gaye…din bhar ghar ka kaam karna, aur raat ko ASIF se chudana yehi mere nayatee ban gaye thee…kuch dino ke baad mere choot thodi se khul gayee…is laye abb muje dard nahi hota thaa…par ASIF apni adaat ke ansuar, roj raat ko mere peticote ko ooper utha kar muje chod dete… ajj tak unhone muje kabhi poora nanga bhee nahi kaya…

ASIF jis gaon main rehthe thee…us gaon ke autren se bhee dhere -2 mere pehchan hone lagi…unki chudai ke baton ko sun main ek dum se mayoos ho jati…par mene kabhi apne dil ke baat kisi se nahi kahi…bus chup-chap ghut-2 kar jeeti rahi…asif muje na to sharirk roop se santust kar paya, aur na hee use mere bhavno ke koi parwah thee….din jun hee gujarte gaye…mera sasural ek seedha sa pariwar tha…mere pati asif naa hee bhut jayda padhe likhe thee, aur naa hee koi naukari karte thee…mere jeth jee bhut padhe likhe adami thee…ghar ke jameen jaydaad jayda nahi thee… islye ghar ko chalana bhee muskil ho raha thaa…jeth jee sarkari teacher thee…par wo alag ho chuke thee…. Jameen ko jo hisaa mere pati ke hisse aya to uske bharose jeevan ko chalana na munkin ke barbar tha…

Time gujarta gaya… par time ke gujaren ke sath ghar ke kharche bhee badhate gayee…mere shadi ko 10 saal ho chuke thee…main 28 saal ke ho chuki thee…par mere koi bacha nahi hua thaa…aur main bacha chathi bhee nahi thee…kyonki didi ke beti ko jo abb **** saal ke ho chuki thee unke kharche hee nahi sambhal rahee thee…ladki ka naam neha hai… wo muje maa keh kar hee pukarte thee…neha par jawani aa chuki thee… uski chuchyon main bhee bharav anne laga tha…wo janti thee ke main uski asli maa nahi hun, par aab mujme wo apni maa ko hee dekhati thee…abb ghar ke halat bhut kharaab ho chuke thee…ghar ka kharach bhee sahi dang se nahi chal paa raha tha…


Ek din main kitchen bartan saaf kar rahi thee… to asif ander aye… wo bhut khush dikhai de rahe thee….

asif:anu suno aaj ke baad humen kisi cheez ke tangi nahi ho gee…mere ek dost jo do saal pehale MULTANgaya tha, naukari ke taalsh main aaj wapis aa gaya hai… uske that dekhate hee banten hain…wo muje bol raha tha ki wo kisi factory main kaam karta hai…
Aur 10000 rs mahina salary le raha hai…mene usse baat kar lee…isbaar main bhee uske sath jaunga… aur wo is baar apni gharwali aur bachon ko bhee sath main le jar aha hai…
Bus kuch mahino ke baat hai, main ek baar wahan set ho jaun, phir tumhen aur neha ko wahin bula loonga…

Main: par aap

asif: (muje beech main tokate hue) dekho tum kisi baat ke fikar na karo main tumhen jald hee bulawa loonga

Aur asif ne mere koi baat na suni aur MULTAN chale gaye…mene unke peeche ghar aur kheti (jo thodi bhut thee) ke kaam main apne saas sasur ka sath dene lagi..waqt apni rafatr se chal raha tha…ek dhed mahine baad ek din jab main dophar main khanna bana rahi thee… to mene gate par ahat suni…main apne mathe ka paseena phunchate hue ahar aye…samen postman khada tha…usen muje money order daya…. Main khus ho gaye aur ander aakar invelap ko khola…uske ander 5000 rs thee aur ek chota sa patar likha hua tha…main ne padhana shuru kaya

ASIF: KIRAN main yahan theek hun…. mene yahan par ek room rent pe laya… main jald hee tumhen aur bachon ko wahan pe apne sath le aunga … baki kuch pasie bhej raha hoon…aur umeed karta hun kit um sabhi log wahan par khushi se hogee gopal

Maine pasion ko sambhal laya… mere dil ko itni to tasli ho gaye thee…chalo abb ASIF kuch kamane to lagge…

ASIF ko ludhiana gaye hue 6 mahine ho chale thee…har mahine wo paise bijawa dete…ghar ke sabhi jaroorten poore ho rahi thee… main bhee kafi khus thee…ki chalo ASIF ne koi kaam to dhang ka kaya….

Main roj subhe 6 baje uthati thee…uthane ke baad main bhains ko chara dalti aur doodh dhoti… ye mere roj ka kaam tha…ek din main subhe 5 baje uth gaye….maine time dekha par muje neend nahi aa rahi thee… is lye mene socha kyon na aaj jaldi doodh dho loon…phir ghar ka kaam bhee jaldi nipat jayega….ye soch kar main khadi hui, aur room se bahar aa gaye… hum apni bhainson ke ghar ke peeche bane ghass phuss ke jhopadyon main bandhte thee…jab main balti lekar wahan phunchi, to muje kuch awaz se sunai dee…main ander se aa rahi awaz ko dhayan se sunane lagi…awaz mere jeth aur jethani jee kee thee…jethani ka naam SADAF hai, aur jeth jee ka naam ALI hai

SADAFi: choro na kaya kar rahe ho, time to dekho kitna ho gaya hai….koi aa jayega

ALI: inti subhe-2 kon ayega, ghar ke ander hath nahi lagane dete ho, bache hain abb yahan to manna mat karo…

Main dabe paon us jhopdi ke taraf badhen lagi…jahan mere jeth jee apne bhianson ko badathe thee…main jaise hee darwaje ke pass phunchi aur ander jhanka mere dil ke dhadken tej ho gaye…ander jeth jee apni patni ko bahon main le hue thee…aur shanti unki bahon main kasmas rahi thee…jeth jee ke hath mere jethani ke churon ko unke peticote ke ooper se masal rahe thee….

SADAF: uiiii maa kaya kar rahe ho koi aa jayegaa…..

aLI: koi nahi ayega janeman…

Aur jeth jee ne uske honto ko apne honto main le laya aur chosen lagee…mera dil joron se dhadak raha tha…mere choot main khujali hone lagi….aur mere choot ne pani chorna chalu kar daya…mere jethani ussamen sirf mehroon colour ke blouse aur peticote main thee…ALI peticote ke ooper se uski gaand ko masal raha tha…aur sAdaf ahhh ohhh karen lagi tabhi ali ne uske honto ko chuste hue…uske blouse ke hooks ko kholana chalu kar daya….jaise hee ali ke blouse ke hooks khule… uski gore gore 40 size ke chuchayan uchal kar bahar aa gaye…usen neeche bra nahi pehani thee…ali ne jhat se sadaf ke chuchi ko mooh main le laya, aur chusna chalu kar daya….mere to halat dekh kar hee kharab ho rahi thee…mera ek hath mere choot ko peticote ke ooper se sahala raha tha…aur doosre sath se main apni chuchi ko masal rahi thee…

ali teji se sadaf ki ek chuchi ko chus raha tha…aur doosre hath se doosri chuchi ko masal raha tha…sadaf ke kamuk siskaryan sun kar main aur bhee garam hone lagi…mere panty geeli hone lagi…ALI ne apni lungi ko nikal kar phenk kar khunte se taang daya…mere hath pair ek dum se sun padh gaye…mere nazar jeth jee ke kale fanfante lund par jam gaye…itna mota aur lamba lund mere aaj tak nahi dekha tha…mere choot ke phankhen phudken lagi…saDAF parion ke bal neeche beth gaye…aur kale lund ke chamdi ko supad se peeche kar daya….mere jism main dekh kar hee masti ke lehar doud gaye…jeth jee ke gulabi supad kisi chote sev jitna mota tha…sadaf ne ek do baar lund ko hilaya, aur phir apni jeebh ko bahar nikal kar wo lund ke supad par charon taraf ghuma – 2 kar chaten lagi

ali: kaya kar rahe janeman… poora mooh main lekar chus na….

Aur sadaf ne poora mooh khol kar lund ke supad ko ander le laya, aur supad ko chosen lagi…lund ka supad sadaf ke thook se gila hokar chamken laga….sadaf teji se apne pati ke lund ko mooh ke ander bahar karke chus rahi thee….
Hari: abb bus karo… chal aa..

Aur ali ne apni lungi ko neeche jameen par bicha daya….sadaf teji se uspar let gaye, aur apne peticote ko ooper utha kar apni jhangon ko phela daya…uski choot ek dum saaf thee….jhanton ka koi naamo nishan nahi tha….ali sadaf ke jhangon ke beech main aakar beth gaya…aur apne lund ke supad ko uski choot ke ched par laga kar jodar dhakha mara….

Sadaf: ahhhhh margee, jee kaya karte ho, aram se karo na

Aur ali ne sadf ke tangon ko uth kar apne kandhon par rakh laya aur , teji se apne lund ko ander bahar karen laga….lund fatch-2 ke awaz se ander bahar hone laga…sadaf ke siskaryan muje saaf sunai de rahi thee…jise sun kar mere choot ke aag aur badhaken lagi…ali kareeb 10 min use lagtaar chodata raha…phir kuch der baad dono shant padh gaye…ali khada ho gaya… sadaf bhee khadi ho gaye, aur apne kapdhe theek karen lagi…ali ne apni lungi phan lee…sadaf kapdhe theek karke doodh dhone beth gaye…

sadaf kapdhe theek karke doodh dhone beth gaye…aur alio bahar anne laga…main ek dum se dar gaye…aur wapis mud kar anne lagi…bahar abhi bhee andhera tha…main apne ghar main aa gaye..par jaise hee main door band karen lagi…ali aa gaya, aur door ko dhakel kar ander aa gaya…

Main: (hadbadte hue) bhai sahab aap, koi kaam tha….(mere hath pair dar ke maren kaanp rahe thee…)

ali: kyon kaya hua… bhag kyon aye wahan se… accha nahi laga kaya?

Main: (anjaan banne ka natak karte hue) kahan se bhai sahab main samaji nahi…

Wo ek pal ke lye chup ho gaya….aur mere taraf dekhate hue usen apna lund lungi se nikal laya…aur ek hee jhatke main mera hath pakad kar apne lund par rakh laya….

Main: ye kaya kar rahe hain bhai sahab? Choro muje (gussee se boli)

ALI: abb muj se kaya sharman mere jaan….wahan to dekh dekh kar apni choot ko masal rahi thee…abb kaya hua…

Main: (apne hath ko chudane ke kosish karte hue gusse se boli) dekhe bhai sahab aap jo kar rahe hai, theek nahi kar rahe hai…mera hath chor do…

ali apne honto par behuda see muskan late hue muje dhakha de kar diwar se sata dya…aur mere dono hathon ko pakad kar mere kamar ke peechediwar se sata daya…..mere saree ka pallu neeche gir gaya…aur mere blouse main tani hui chuchyan mere jeth jee ke samen aa gaye…unhone ek hath se mere dono hathon ko pakad kar diwar se sataye rakha…phir wo parion ke bal neeche beth gaye…aur mere saree aur peticote ko ooper karen lagee…mere to dar ke marre jaan nikli jaa rahi thee…ki kahin koi uth na jaye…ghar par bache aur saas sasur thee….agar wo muje is halat main dekh lete to main kahin ke naa rehthi…..main apni taraf se chuten ka poore koshish kar rahi thee…par uski pakad bhut majboot thee….use tab tak mere saree aur peticote ko mere jhangon tak utha daya thaa….aur apni kameeni nazron se mere doodh jaise gori aur mulayam jhangon ko dekh raha thaa….achank unhone ne mere saree aur peticote ko ek jhatke main mere khulon tak ooper utha daya…mere black colour ke panty aab unki ankhon ke sameen thee…isse pehale ki main aur kuch kar pati yan bolti, usen apne honto ko mere jhangon par rakh dya…mere jism main current sa doud gaya…badan main masti aur MAZY ke lehar doud gaye…aur na chathe hue bhee mooh se ek kamuk aur ashleel siskari nikal gaye…jo usen sun lee wo teji se apne hotno ko mere jhangon ko par ragren laga…mere hath pair mere sath chor rahe thee…unhone ne mere dono hathon ko chor daya…aur apne dono hathon ko mere saree aur peticote ke neeche se lejakar mere chutron ko mere panty ke ooper se pakad laya….mera jism kaanp utha…aaj kai mahino baad kisi ne muje mere chutodon par chua tha…wo mere jhangon ko choomata hua ooper anne laga…aur mere panty ke ooper se mere choot ke phankon par apne honto ko rakh daya ….main apne hathon se apne jeth ke kandhon ko pakad kar peeche dhekale rahi thee…panty ke ooper se hee choot par unke honto ko mahsoos karke main ek dum kamjor padh gayee…

Main: (abb mene mana karna chor dya tha bus apne maryada ka khayal rakhe hue mana kar rahi thee) nahi bhai sahab chor dye jee…koi aa jayegaa…. Ahhhhhhhh nahi ohhhh buss bachee uth jayngee ohhh ohhhh

Achank unhone apne honto ko mere panty ke ooper se hata laya…mere panty mere choot ke pani se ek dum geeli ho chuki thee…..usen mere taraf dekhte hue, apne hathon se mere chutdon ko panty ke ooper se kas ke masal dya…mere badan ek dum enth gaya…phir wo ek dum se khada hua…aur mere hath ko apne fanfante lund par rakh daya… mere sansen itni teji se chal rahi thee..ki main bata nahi sakti…unke mota lund kise lohe ke rod ke tarahn dehak raha thaa…mere hath apne aap uske 7 inch ke lund par kaste chale gaye…mere saree abhee bhee mere kamar par ataki hui thee…usen muje apne bahon main bhar kar apne se chipka laya… aur mere chutron ko dono hathon se pakad kar maslane lagee…mere sanse teji se chal rahi thee…aur unhone ne achank mere honto par apne honto ko rakh daya….main ek dum se machal uthi…..aur chatpaten lagi….par unke hath lagataar mere churon ko sahla rahe thee…jise mere virodh karen ke shakti lagbhag khatam ho chuki thee…unhone mere honto ko 2 min tak chusa… ye mera pehala chumban tha…phir unhen ne apne honto ko hatya aur peeche hat gaye…

ali: main aaj dophar 12 baje tumhara intjaar karunga … tumhari jethani aaj apne mayke ja rahi hai aur bache school main hongee…main tumhara intjaar karunga

Main bina kuch bole apne room main chali gaye….thodi der baad bahar aakar maine phir se ghar ke peeche chali gaye… ali ja chukka tha…mene doodh dhaya aur wapis aakar naste ke tayari karen lagi…neha ko tayar karke mene school bej daya…mera dil kahani nahi lag raha tha…jeth jee ne mere choot ke aag ko itna badha daya tha… ke baar-2 mera dhayan subhe hue ghatno par ja raha tha…jaise -2 12 baje ka time nazdeek aa raha tha mere dil ke dhadken badhati ja rahi thee…


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Re: KIRAN KI KAHANI US KI ZUBANI
« Reply #1 on: July 26, 2012, 03:50:15 PM »
meri kahani kisi ne nahi parhi

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Re: KIRAN KI KAHANI US KI ZUBANI
« Reply #2 on: July 30, 2012, 10:25:07 PM »
age kya hua o to likho yaar bahut achhi story hai our aap jo likh rahe hai bahut achha likh rahe hai
ab story ko complete bhi karo yaar tadapao mat ek to tumhari story padh karke padap gaya hun.
maine bahut si story padhi hai lekin aap ka jo likhane ka style our story muze bahut pasand aya hai to aap jald sr jald story complete kare please please

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Re: KIRAN KI KAHANI US KI ZUBANI
« Reply #3 on: July 31, 2012, 02:28:26 AM »
umair wat the fuck dis is yar????????.sorry to say bht afssos hu tm itne ache story likhte ho.aik indian story ko copy past kar kr ke rahimyarkhan ke story bana diya hai,larki ameer ghar ke the larke ke ghar m farash be kacha aur neche zamen pe chudai.tm n hindu name change kiye hain aur asif likhte gae ho.beach m aasif ludihana chale gae.chottya banane ke be had hote hai.pakistan m kahan hai ludhyana???????m jo copy kar raha hn ise parho aur phr apni galti dhond ke reply karo.

aya sakti thee…aur anne walon palon ka dhadkate dil ke sath intjaar karen lagi…ASIF ke hath mere jhangon ko masal rahe thee…main apni mulyam jhangon par gopal ke khurdare aur, sakhat hathon ko mahsoos karke, ek dum sihar gaye,
yeh zuban pakistan m kahan bole jate hai.
yeh qasoor mera ke yaqeen kia re,,,,,,,,,

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Re: KIRAN KI KAHANI US KI ZUBANI
« Reply #4 on: August 15, 2012, 10:03:23 PM »
sorry bhai lekin ik frnd ki farmaesh pe likhni parri mere paas time nahi tha or us ko jaldi thee i m realy sorry

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Re: KIRAN KI KAHANI US KI ZUBANI
« Reply #5 on: August 16, 2012, 08:27:53 AM »
sorry bhai lekin ik frnd ki farmaesh pe likhni parri mere paas time nahi tha or us ko jaldi thee i m realy sorry
Khair bhai jo bhi hua ab apni is galti ko sudharo bhi,story ko edit kr k jo galtian hain unhe theek kro. Pehle kaha Asif ko multan mein nokri mill gyi or wo wahan chala gya phir agay likha hua tha Asif ludhyana se chitthi likhta rehta tha, pehle jeth ki bivi ka naam sadaf likh dia phir beech mein ek jagah shivani likh dia, in sub galtion ko theek kr k agay barho or story complete kro or haan aap mein talent ki kami nhi hai is liye is story k baad ap apni khud ki bhi koi story likhna

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Re: KIRAN KI KAHANI US KI ZUBANI
« Reply #6 on: August 19, 2012, 01:34:00 AM »
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