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Re: Talaash..."Real story"
« Reply #12 on: January 21, 2013, 11:19:47 AM »
Wah G wah zabardast start lia hai aur hottttt scene tha 69 ka ehmmm

Aur fazi ki friendship aur uska pehle piyar... Good going G... Waititng for next... Suspense per a kar end kar jatay ho... Buhattt tezz ho ap

Thanks for comment Zaibi.. Actually its my first experiance to write story... Basically yeh story nhi haqeeqat hai... Jissy main apny alfaz main biyan kr raha hu.... Agar koi mistake ho jaye tu sorry in advance... Koshish karonga k asan alfaz main apni baat Aap log tak pohncha don... Or specially jisky liye yeh story likhi hai uss tak bhi... Aap sb bhi dua krna....

Main apke pehli koshish ko fully support karti hn. Pehli koshish hai lakin apne andaz acha chuna ha likhne ka. Main "thori" si sharminda hn apki theek se help nahi kar pai. Lakin yahan apki help zaror karon gi...


Thanks Zaibi... Laikin Aap ko sharminda nhi hona chahiye.... wesy bhi koi aisy hi nhi kissi pr trust kr leta.... Khair ab tu start kr hi di pta nhi kaisy apni yaadon ko alfaz ki shakal main dhalta hun... Wel, thx for supporting....

Dear bat trust ki nahi, aisa to socha bhi nahi main ne. Bat hai masrofiyat ki, main apne fans ko kafi arsay se disappointe kar rahi hn, ab wo tang a kar kehtay bhi nahi story update ka, so ap bhi kuch time bad disappointe ho jatay to acha nahi hona tha. I hope you can understand
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Re: Talaash..."Real story"
« Reply #13 on: January 21, 2013, 11:22:04 AM »
Zaibi jee  :angel: app ki baat sat Ankhoon par ab May har writer ko Fuel  :scooter: dalnay k liay Chokanaa khara rahooon ga .. Lakin app ka bhee farz hai k app un ko mery he ppetrol pump par bhajin gen   :gunsmilie:  :gunsmilie:
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Re: Talaash..."Real story"
« Reply #14 on: January 21, 2013, 11:23:43 AM »
Quote from: dada_loug link=topic=23420.msg159466#msg159466 date=13587 :46478
Mr un known . mery bhai mery dost  :alucard: Naraz na hona i m just joking.. yeh tumhari phele koshish hai All my best wishes with u .. Kam sy kam tum hum say to achay ho Jiss nay likhnay ki  Koshish to ki  :cowboy: :rockon:  :rockon:


C'mon me was jocking tooo...... I hope U dnt mind.. Wesy bhi yahan log enjoy k liye aaty hain.. Larny k liye nhi.. Or agar kissi ko mind krna ho tu yahan aye hi kun... So just chilll.............  :cool2: :cool2:

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Re: Talaash..."Real story"
« Reply #15 on: January 22, 2013, 02:16:19 AM »
Door lock kiya hi tha k Mery phone ki ghanti ny mery tatton main sy jaan nikaal di… wel, phone nikal kr check ki tu bhayya ki call thi Mainy phone receive kiya or bhayya ny seedha yehi pocha k konsy hospital main hon mainy unhy btaya tu kehny lagy k mery dost Dr hain wahan agar koi problem ho tu btana… mainy thanks keh kr phone bnd kiya tu Fazi apna gown utaar kr dupatta pehan chuki thi….. Main ussey dekhta hi reh gaya… itni cute or masoom larki tu mainy aaj tak dekhi hi nhi thi… Mujhy apni qismat pr naaz hony lga… Fazi ki height 5.2” thi… rang gandami laikin bilkul saaf chehra… baal hips sy bhi neechy tak gaye huwy thy jinhy usny chutiya sy bandha hua tha… purple qameez or white shalwar pehni hui thi or white hi dupatta tha… aankhein bohat bari or gehri thein.. bilkul cute si naak jismain usny nosepin pehni hoi thi… gulaab ki pankharion ki tarah usky lips jin per purple color ki lipstick lagai hoi thi… patli si neck jis main locket or chain thi… meri nazar us per tehar si gai… or woh bhi thora sa Sharma gai.. Mainy ussey bethny k liye kaha or khud bhi sofa per beth gaya… hum dono main koi khaas baat ab tak nhi hoi thi bas haal chaal pocha tha or ab jab hum akaily room main thy tu usny Mujhy pehli baar mera Naam ly kr pukara tha… Zaib kiya main aap k pass baith jaon… Fazi ka ishara mery sath waly sofy per tha… Such kahon tu iss sy pehly mainy kabhi kssi larki ko itna free nhi hony diya tha… main just apni school friends sy hi baat karta tha or humari kaafi achi understanding thi.. mohally ki 3,4 larkiyan bohat aagay peachy ghomti thein but kabhi demagh main itni garmi nhi ayi thi k kissi larki ko chodny ka socha jaye.. jab bohat garmi aati thi tu hum 2 friends mil kr koi Call girl arrange kr lety thy or apni garmi nikal liya karty thy… woh bhi bohat simple tareeqy sy… Laikin Fazi k samny mujhy bilkul kuch samajh nhi aaraha tha k situation ko kaisy handle karon… phone friend or dosri mulaqat … baat ko abhi 8 din hi hoye hain… kuch bhi samjh nhi aaraha tha… mera demagh 500 Km ki speed sy chal raha tha… saans phool raha tha… or mun sy baat nhi nikal paa rahi thi… khair Mainy ussey kaha k Aap relax ho kr betho Main washroom sy ho kr aata hon… or khud washroom ghus gya… andar ghusty hi Mainy cigarette jalai or khud ko sheeshy Main dekhny laga… Yaar tu itna khobsurat tu hai nahi jitna tujhy yeh samjh rahi hai… aam si shakal hai teri… Konsi burai hai jo tu nhi karta… Charas, Sharab, Cocaine, Afeem or larkian tak nhi chori Tu ny… kyun iss larki ki zindagi kharab kr raha hai… issey sab such such bta dy iss sy pehly k Koi ghalti ho… fresh ho kr bahar nikla tu Fazi apny sofy sy hat kr Mery sofy per Meri jaga choor kr bethi Mera Wait kr rahi thi… Mujhy nikalta dekh kr Muskra di… Main bhi Jawab main muskrat diya.. or chalta hua seedha bed per taik laga kr baith gaya or shoes utaar kr blanker main ghus gaya.. Fazi ny pocha kya hua.. Mainy kaha yaar raat theek sy soo nhi paya headache hai… thora relax hona chahta hon.. Fazi ki face per fikar k asrat nazar ana shuro hogaye or woh foran uthny lagi.. mainy ussey khra hota dekha tu foran kaha k Tum relax hokr betho main thori dair laitna chahta hon… ussey kiya batata k Mery demagh main kiya chal raha hai… woh wapis beth gai… Mainy Moqa dekhty hi remote utha kar T.V On kr diya… Khair woh T.V dekhty huwy Mujhy bhi dekh rahi thi… Mujhy lait kr kuch sakoon mila or Mainy ussey kaha k ghar kab tak jana hai tu woh kehny lagi k 2 bjy tk chali jaongi… abhi taqreban 10 bjy thy 4 ghanty mazeed usky sath guzarny thy... such kahon tu Mujhy ab tention hony lagi thi… kahin koi gar bar na hojaye… koi chaapa hi na parr jaye… Meri tu khair thi magar uski Izzat ka ehsaas horaha tha… pta nhi kyun ussey badnaam nhi krna chahta tha… Khair mainy cigarette jalai or beth kr t.v dekhny laga … aakhir khamoshi ko Fazi ny hi tora or kaha k Hum yahan t.v dekhny tu nhi aye hain… Mainy kaha phir kyun aye hain.. kehny lagi Mainy Aap sy batein karni hai bohat dhair sari or Aap hain k Mujhsy theek sy baat bhi nhi kr rahy… Mujhy thori si sharmindagi bhi hoi Main ussey apni halat zahir nhi krna chahta tha or kaha k agar ijazat do tu main thori dair sojaon sir main bohat pain hai shayed sakoon mil jaye kehny lagi theek hai Aap thora rest karein Main Aap ka Sir daba deti hon.. or uth kr bed pr akar beth gai… Mainy blanket oper kiya or lait kr aankhein close kr lien… usny hath barha kr Mery sir per rakha tu Mujhy ek shock lga… aakhir tha tu Main bhi Mard hi Mery andar bhi jazbat thy.. Main eyes close kr k lait gaya or situation ka maza leny lga .. uska sir dabana acha lg raha tha … shayed Meri aankh lg gai… jb aankh khuli tu woh bhi bed sy taik lga kr eyes close kr k bethi thi.. Mainy ussey awaz di tu usny aankhein kholien or dard ka pocha mainy kaha ab araam hai laikin dum ghut raha hai… woh phir pareshan hogai or kehny lagi dum kyun ghut raha hai.. Mainy ussey btaya k Main ghar main without shirt sota hon or iss waqt tu sweter bhi pehna hua hai… woh hasny lgi or kehny lagi k tu utaar dein kisny roka hai… Mujhy thori sharam bhi aarahi thi usky saamny shirt utaarty huwy Mainy ussey kaha k agar Tum sofy per beth jao tu main Shirt utaar kr thora or rest kr lon .. Woh uth kr chali gai.. Main sweater or shirt utaar kr wapis blanket main ghus gaya ab thora sakoon mila tha or raat ki neend ab aankhon or demagh per charr rahi thi… abhi thori dair hi guzrahi thi k Fazi ki awaz mery kano sy takrai… “Zaib Aap soo gaye hain..” mainy blanket sy sir nikala or kaha k nhi jag rha hon.. tu Woh kehny lagi.. “ agar Aap ko bura na lagy tu main blanket main ajaon Mujhy thand lg rahi hai”… Mainy kuch socha or kaha k theek hai or khud ek side per ho ker lait gya.. woh mery sy kuch door blanket main akar baith gai.. ab sorat-e haal yeh thi k Main just jeans main tha or blanket oorha hua tha.. or Mujhsy kuch door ek bohat hi khobsurat haseena bethi Mujhy dekh rahi thi… Fazi ny pehli bat blanket main bethny k baad jo pehli baat ki Woh Alfaz yeh thy.. “Zaib Aap sooty huye bohat cute lagty hain..” Main ab ussey sab bta dena chahta tha or ahista sy apni baat ka aghaaz kiya .. Fazi main wesa nhi ho jaisa Tum mujhy samajh rahi ho.. Main itna acha nhi hon jitna Aap ny Mujhy samajh liya hai.. main ek bohat hi awara type ka larka hon.. jissy apna hosh nhi rehta.. smoking or drinking tu Mery liye Aam si baat hai… Tum kyun Mujhy itni importance dy rhi ho Mujhy yeh baat samajh nhi aarahi… Tu woh Muskara kr kehny lagi k Aap jaisy bhi hain Mery liye bohat achy hain.. Aap jesa insaan Mainy aaj tak nhi dekha jo Ek larki k itny pass hoty huye bhi ussey dour bhaag rha hai… woh Mujhy samjhany ki koshish karti rahi or Main ussey samjhata raha… thori dair bad usny behas khatam karty huwye kaha k saari batein chorein Mujhy Aap ko hug karni hai… Mujhy hairat ka ek or jhatka lga.. Main without shirt leta tha or Woh MUjhy hug krna chah rahi hai.. zehan bohat si sochon main gud mud horaha tha … soorat-e hal samjh nhi aarahi thi.. Usny phir wohi sawal kiya.. “Zaib hug karny deingy ya nhi..?” Main abhi bhi chup hi tha.. woh Khud hi Mery pass ayi or Mery bazo khool kr Mery sath chupak kr lait gai or Mujhy zoor sy apny sath laga liya or Mery Seeny main Mun chupa liya… uss time Fazi main jitni taqat thi Woh uska muzahira mery jism per kr rahi thi.. Akhir Mery sabar khatam hogya or Mainy bhi ussey hug kr li or apny sath lga liya.. hum kuch dair aisy hi laity rahy… ab Mujhy apny seeny per usky honton ka ehsaas hona shoro hogaya tha mainy feel kiya tu woh Mery chest per kiss kr rahi thi or ahista ahista Mery neck sy hoty huwy Mery kaano or phir mery cheecks per agai or phir meri eyes ko kiss karty huwye Mery honton per apny hont rakh kr mery sath lg gai.. Mujhy ab maza ana start hogaya tha jo k natural baat thi.. mainy ussey zoor sy hug ki or kiss ka pressure barha diya.. Fazi ny apny lips kholy or Apny honton sy Mery hont daba liye or unhy choosny lgi.. ab mazy ki Meri bari thi.. Usky hath mery back per thy or oper nechy horahy thy kabhi woh Meri neck pakar leti or kabhi baal.. or dosra hath musalsal meri back per chal raha tha… Mainy bhi himmat bnai or uski back per hath phairna start kr diye… ab Mera hath uski back k sath sath Usky hips tk jaa raha tha Usny usky hips bohat naram or bary thy I think 38 size hoga.. usny tang utha kr Mery oper rakhi or zor dy kr kiss karny balky Mery hont chabany lagi… Main thora darr bhi raha tha or Maza bhi ly raha tha… kissi bhi shareef larki k sath yeh Mera pehla experience tha… Fazi k zor sy hug karny ki wajah sy Mery seeny main uski qameez or bra chub rahi thi. Mainy thora uljhan bhary andaz main ussey btaya k Mujhy kuch chub raha hai… Usny kamal confidence k sath uth kr Apni qameez bhi utaar di or khali bra main Mujhy phir sy chipak si gai… ab tu Mera bura haal tha mera 7” ka lund ab full tight hogaya tha or Jeans main sy bahar ana mang raha tha, jiski wajah sy Mujhy thori takleef bhi horahi thi khair Mainy Apny hath sy lund ko side per kiya or phir Mazy ki duniya main kho gaya… Fazi ki sansein tez sy tez hoti jaa rahi thi or ab usny Apni Tang jo k Mery oper rakhi thi hilana start kr diya or Apni body ko Meri body k sath ragarny lagi or uski choot wali jaga Meri tang per ragarny lagi.. Mera hath ab uski back sy front per agaya tha or main bra k oper sy hi usky 36 Size k mummay dabany lga tha jiss sy woh or tez hogai or Mujhy kha jany waly andaz sy kiss karny lagi or sath zor zor sy hilny bhi lagi… kuch hi dair main woh bilkul thandi hogai or mery andar ghus kr zoor sy hug kr li… Mainy apna hath usky hips per phair or jab choot ki jaga per pohncha tu uski shalwaar bilkul geeli ho chuki thi Mujhy apny jeans bhi geeli mehsoos ho rahi thi… Mainy ussey Awaz di laikin usny koi response nhi diya or leti rahi… Mainy ussey ziyada disturb nhi kiya… Dil tu kr raha tha k abhi shalwar utaron or lund sedha andar ghusa kr chood dalon… laikin pta nhi usky chehry ki masoomiyat mujhy aisa karny sy rok rahi thi… Main wait karny laga k woh koi jawab dy magar usny kuch na kaha or leti rahi… Thori dair aisy hi rehny k bad jab ussey hosh aya tu phr sy usny mery face per kissing start kr di.. Mainy ussey kaha k kya hua tha tu kehny lagi k Zindagi main itna sakoon kabhi nhi Mila jitna Aaj mila hai “I Love You”.. Mujhy samjh nhi aya k kiya jawab don… time dekha tu 1:45 ho chukay thy.. Fazi ki phone per call ny hum dono ko jhatka lga diya… woh foran uthi or phone receive kr k apni bhabi ko kehny lagi k bus function khata hua hi hai or Main aanay lagi hon… yeh sunty hi Mery Lund ny Mujhy gaaliyan dena start kr di… Fazi uthi or washroom chali gai or qameez pehen kr jab wapis nikli tu bohat jaldi main thi… main still wesy hi bina shirt k leta tha… Mainy Ussey itni jaldi main dekha tu kaha k abhi mat jao kuch dair or ruk jao.. kehny lagi k phir mileingy tu ziyada dair rukon gi… hotel sy uska ghar nazdeek hi tha kehny lagi rikshaw ly longi Aap rest karein.. itna keh kr Mujhy zoor dar kiss ki or khud hi nikal kar bhagny k andaaz chalti hoi chali gai… Main bed per laita khud ko galiyan deta raha k itna acha moqa tha kuch bhi na kr saka.. or lund bhi bilkul kissi naraz haseena ki tarah aansoo baha baha kr beth chuka tha… abhi soch hi raha tha k kiya karna chahiye k hairat ka ek or jhatka laga… darwaza bohat tezi sy khula or ek 17,18 saal ki larki andar aayi or darwaza lock kr diya..........

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Re: Talaash..."Real story"
« Reply #16 on: January 22, 2013, 06:46:51 AM »
Nice update, bas aise hi time pe update karte rehna ap
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Re: Talaash..."Real story"
« Reply #17 on: January 22, 2013, 07:21:23 AM »
Or Fuel (Encourgment) k liay Dada Bhai k Petrol Pump Atay Rehna  :scooter: . Wesay Mr Unknown Ab tak Story may nay parhe nahi hai Kiun k us k Start may "Dum Gutnay laga tha" may samjha k Writer ki Gardan  :hang: rasi may Phansi hui hai lakin woh to Kahin orr he Phasee hue thee. . . Kamal kartay ho yaar "Whann" say zeda to tum ko Shudd Oxygen khain bhe nahi milte or tumhara dum gutnay laga tha  :clown:  :clown:  :clown:
~*~  Love is Everywhere and a Part of Everything. It spreads like the Wind & Flows like water. You may not be able to see it, but it is all around! ~*~

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Re: Talaash..."Real story"
« Reply #18 on: January 22, 2013, 09:08:51 AM »
Or Fuel (Encourgment) k liay Dada Bhai k Petrol Pump Atay Rehna  :scooter: . Wesay Mr Unknown Ab tak Story may nay parhe nahi hai Kiun k us k Start may "Dum Gutnay laga tha" may samjha k Writer ki Gardan  :hang: rasi may Phansi hui hai lakin woh to Kahin orr he Phasee hue thee. . . Kamal kartay ho yaar "Whann" say zeda to tum ko Shudd Oxygen khain bhe nahi milte or tumhara dum gutnay laga tha  :clown:  :clown:  :clown:

Dada loug ap tu acha khasa mazah kar laity hain... Story bhi parh len
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Re: Talaash..."Real story"
« Reply #19 on: January 22, 2013, 09:26:24 AM »
Zaibi jee .... 10 bar Koshish kae chuka hoon lakin har bar  :eek: mera Apna Dum bhe gutnay lagta hai  :chris: . wesay app pareshan na hoon k Mr unknown ko disopintkar raha hon un say mere achay say baat hogae hai or woh jantay bhe hain k yeh sab may mazaq may he kheta hoon werna mere best wishes un k sath he hain :punk:
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Re: Talaash..."Real story"
« Reply #20 on: January 22, 2013, 11:51:37 AM »
Nice update, bas aise hi time pe update karte rehna ap

THANKS ALOT zaibi... Lgta hai Aap dono k ilawa kssi ny story parhny ki koshish bhii nhi ki.....  Anyways Mujhy jo karna hai woh tu kr k hi rahonga... Laikin or bhi bohat sy experiance thy jo shre krny thy iss story k bad... Laikin ab nahi............. Itna hi boht hi....

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Re: Talaash..."Real story"
« Reply #21 on: January 22, 2013, 09:38:38 PM »
Nice update, bas aise hi time pe update karte rehna ap

THANKS ALOT zaibi... Lgta hai Aap dono k ilawa kssi ny story parhny ki koshish bhii nhi ki.....  Anyways Mujhy jo karna hai woh tu kr k hi rahonga... Laikin or bhi bohat sy experiance thy jo shre krny thy iss story k bad... Laikin ab nahi............. Itna hi boht hi....

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Re: Talaash..."Real story"
« Reply #22 on: January 23, 2013, 12:08:16 AM »
dear Mr Unknown yar ap ki story bht achi hai aur maza bi aa rha hai aur is mazay ko aur bharaye aur story ko complete kry aur zaibi jaisi achi writer ny ap ko commemts kiye hai its me u are a good writer so don't be upset and continue ur story 


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Re: Talaash..."Real story"
« Reply #23 on: January 23, 2013, 12:32:37 AM »
THANKS ALOT zaibi... Lgta hai Aap dono k ilawa kssi ny story parhny ki koshish bhii nhi ki.....  Anyways Mujhy jo karna hai woh tu kr k hi rahonga... Laikin or bhi bohat sy experiance thy jo shre krny thy iss story k bad... Laikin ab nahi............. Itna hi boht hi....
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~*~  Love is Everywhere and a Part of Everything. It spreads like the Wind & Flows like water. You may not be able to see it, but it is all around! ~*~