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Bou ku gheili jamei ki
« on: May 15, 2009, 10:25:35 PM »
     Bou ku gheili jamei ki     
   By: Raju 
  Bhai o Bhauni mane, setebele mu 29 barsa ra abibahita mast jubaka.Bank chakiri karu thae Bhubaneswar re.Agaku gote promotion ku apekha kari sejae mu jani suni deri karuthae baha habaku.Mo Bapa Bou rahuthanti Cuttack re.Sethi Bapa State govt office re section officer thanti.Mu majhire majhire ghara adu jaai buli dei asuthae.
 
 Semiti thara kara ghatana.Mu gharaku asithae.Sedina mora kama ku feribara thibaru mu khub sighra uthipadi thili sakalu.Toilet ade jau jau hathat najar re padila,mo Bou agana nala pakhe parisra kari basichhi.Mu feri padu padu puni kana bhabi kabata pachha re luchi padili.Usually ete sakalu ama ghare kehi uthi nathau.Bodhe sethi paiin aau besi chinta nakari mo Bou tara tara re aau paikhana ku napasi agana nala pakhe kaama sari dabaku bhabichhi.Luga teki pachha kari basithibaru ta langala picha ta pura pariskar disuthae mote.Mastabada gora takatakaa maikinaa picha ! Dekhiki mo deha munda kana heigala jemiti.Nija bouku emiti luchiki dekhibaku tike kharap laguthila,tathapi mana chhadu nathila mora.Thik Bou uthila belaku mu khasi asili.
 
 Gharu ferila pare bi mana ta memiti kemiti laguthae.Khali sakala ghatana manepadi jauthae.Office re jama mana lagu nathae.Thara ku thara Bou katha mane padile pant bhitare asambhala hei tanei jauthae mora.
 
 Para thara ghara ku jaithila bele,kana paain kejani Bou pakha chhadibaku jama ichha hou nathae.48 barsara darabudhi helani asiki,tathapi rani parika chehera rakhithae se.E bhitare tike moti heigalani.Gora taka taka champa fula parika ranga,punei jahna pari munha,chalila bele tara picha thala thala hei paduthae.Satare e bayasa re bi pura mast maikina te pari heithae mo Bou.Mu mo mana ku aayata re rakhi paru nathili.Agaru emiti ka chinta mu swapna re bi bhabi nathili.Emiti mo Bou bhari dharmaparayana o khub snehi.Hele sedina sakala ra sei Bou ra langala picha ku dekhila parathu mu jemiti sabu niti adarsha bhuli jau thili.Jadio janithili eita bhala katha nunha,aau emiti chinta ra kounasi artha nanhi.Tathapi mu nija mana ku sambhali paru nathili.Dina ku dina Bou prati mora lalasa badhibaku lagithila.
 
 Di masa para ghatana.Mu ghara ku asithae.Bapa tour re jaithanti.Mu dinabela gote friend sangare
 Matinee show cinema dekhi jaithili.Cinema sarila bela ku sandhya.Saanga au mu bhanga lassi piilu.Barsa uthei thae jor re.Tara tara hei ghara ku palei asili.Dekhili gaan ru Dada Khudi herika pilachhua dhari asi pahanchi thanti.Bou thu janili semane rati ta rahi sakalu Bus re Puri jibe bulibaku.Amara sarakari quarter.Danda ghara ku misei tini bakhara ghara.Danda ghare soibaku subidha nanhi.Tenu mu southiba ghare dadakhudi herika nka paain bichhana padila.Mote birakta na habaku bujhei Bou kahila rati re bhitara ghare ekathi soi padibaku.
 
 Khai ki soila bela ku rati dasa ta.Bahare prabala tofan.Line kati galani.Mote sete belaku bhanga nisa jor dharilani.Mu deri nakari bhitara gharaku gali soiba ku.Tike pare Bou bhitaru kabata dei asila soiba ku.Ghara bhitara ta pura andhara.Se asi gadi padila mo pakhe.Ete pakha ru Bou ra jhalua nari sulabha sugandha ku mu khub bhala bhabe anubhaba karu karu hathat mo mana kana heigala.Hathat kemiti gote hinsra kama lalasa re mo sara deha kampi uthila.Bhanga nisa re mu emiti jhum hei ki thili.Eina Bou ku ete pakha re dekhi mu nija ku niyantrana re rakhi paru nathili.Prachanda uttejana re mu mora sabu niti adarsha o bichara pasori dau thili.Ja haba katha haba,dekha jiba pare.Au sambhali parilini.Bhanga ranga re mu hei jaithili bhinna manisa te!
 
 Pakhei gali Bou pakha ku.Bou hai mari nidau thae.Mu taku kundhei pakeili.Hata mari deli ta blouse upare.Bou chamaki padila jor re.Mo udhhesya bujhi baku tara deri helani.Unhu unhu hei theli pakei chapa kantha re kahila-"Ei,kan emiti sabu?Chhad mote."
 
 Mu setebele asambhala.Kahili-"Bou,mana kar ni."
 
 Bou byasta hei kahila-"Dhat,kemitika katha kahuchhu?Kaha sange kana ejae janinu?Chhad mote kahuchhi."
 
 Mu ethara ta gala ku chuma mari deli.Ta kana pakhe munha nei kahili-"Bou,jaha kaha pachhe mu kichhi sunibini.Bhari mana.Jama au paruni."
 
 Bou asahya lajja re kampi uthila mo katha suni.Ta deha jhalei gala.Tathapi vidimodi hou thae.Chapa gala re kahila-"He bhagaban,aji tora kana heichhi?Kichhi manunu!Esabu bhala katha nunhe.Kebethu emiti mana karichhu?Chhad mote.Emiti re paapa."
 
 Mu ahuri masti re Bou ku kundhei ta munha re munha ghasi kahili-"Paapa Faapa sesabu kichhi habani.Mana karni jama.Tote mo raana.Tote mo hazare raana."
 
 Mo raana paka dekhi Bou tike narami jai thila.Unhu..unhu hei kahila-"he bhagaban,kana emiti tike katha re raana pakei dauchhu?"Dari jaithila Bou.Mu chuma deli taku.Mote chumuti pakeila Bou.Kahila-"Sabda houchhi.Ara ghare sabu soichhanti.Ijjat mahat kichhi rahibani eka."
 
 Bahare prabala barsha tofan.Kie sunuchhi kanei ki?Mu uttejana re mati uthu thili.Bou mo asambhala jiddi au pakha ghare soithiba loka nku dari sesaku nirab rahila.Mu chadhi gali Bou upare.kamudi pakeili ta gala munha ku.Bou lajja re munha bulei nou thae.Mu tara tara hei blouse kholili.Bada bada mansala dudha jodaka mo Bou ra.Chipi pakei vundi jodaku pati re chuchumi pakeila bela ku Bou naka ru garam niswas bahari gala.
 
 Mu hinsra hei uthu thili.Bhanga nisa mote ahuri akranta kari deithila.Deri karibaku bela nathila.Mu hata pureili Bou ra saree tale.Bou lajja re mote theli pakau thae.Mu hata mari deli sethi.Ta jangha sandhi jaga bhari mansala.Jungle pari bala varti sethi.Mu Bou ra bia ku khub saunli anguli pureili fata bhitare.Bou kandunu mandunu hei padu thila saram re.Mu mo trouser kholi deli.Chakhand lamba ra mastabad mota ghoda banda mora pura asambhala hei thengei ki thae.Bahut tike kasta kari Bou ra dui jangha mela kari dhari hamudi padili.Bia uparu bala sabu adei banda chhodi ku nei madi deli fata talei ki.Bou eeess..eess hei padila.Bou ra sei vitara ta nalua lagila.Mu mo picha halei/madi pura banda pura mula jae madi deli vitara ku.Bhari kanla laguthae bia vitara ta.Bou ra pithi talu kundhei dhari picha halei ghei baku lagili.Bou oohh..ooohh..houthae pati chapi ki.
 
 Mo mastabada banda bhari maja re khasadu thae Bou vitare.Oh,emitika maja ! Mu uttejana re maati utili.Kamudi chuchumi pakeili Bou ra munha sara.Bou aste aste gumuru thae.Bele bele vidi modi hei padu thae.Bhanga nisa re kete jae ghei li mora hosh nanhi.Garam garam birya pichiki gala mo banda ru.Oh ! Charam ananda re mo sara deha jhan jhan kari uthila.Eka sukhakar anubhuti re mo mana deha re bijuli kheli jau thila.Deri nakari uthi asili Bou uparu.Halia hei padi gali seja re.Bou sajadi pakeila ta luga pata.Uthi ki kabata kholi paleila bath room ku.Mote nida heigala sange sange.
 
 Sakalu uthila belaku Dada Khudi herika sabu jibaku baharu thanti.Gala raati katha mane pakei bhari sankocha laguthila.Chhada.Jaha haba katha ta hei galani.Bou rosei ghare thae.Munha taku bada karithae.Mu chup chap nityakarma,gadhua padhua sarili.Bou agaku jibaku sahas hou nathae.Bou asi Chai cup rakhi paleila.Pade bi katha barta nanhi.Mu bi dadakhudi herika nka sange najani la pari gharu bahari asili.
 
 Di masa jae ghara ku galini Bank audit ra bahana kari.Satare Bou ku saamna karibaku munha nathila mora.Bou bi phone jama karu nathila aga bhali.Dine Bapa phone kari kahile ki se Bou ku nei asuchhanti mo pakha ku.Tanka ra kana gote dui dinia programme achhi Bhubaneswar re.Mu tike byasta hei padili.
 Sandhya bele bapabou pahanchile.Bou tike muchuki muchuki hasu thae.Ekutia dekhi Bou pacharila-"Kana kire,di masa helani samay miluni ghara ade asibaku?"
 
 Mu tike thata mata hei munha ferei li ta adu.Hasi baku chesta kali.Bou tike chup rahi kahila-"Tora kintu bhari sahas."Mu puni chup rahili.Bou tike hasi dei kahila-"Kana,Bou katha mane paduni?"
 Mu kahili-"Mane paduchi khub.Hele to aga ku jibaku sahas houni."Bou hasa chapi kahila-"Kali thu to Bapa nkara programme achhi.Tu chhuti nei ghare raha.Ekutia ethi mote bhari bore lagiba." Hasi dela Bou.Mu bujhi ki bi bujhi parilini.
 
 Para dina sakale Bapa bahari gale tanka kamare.Mu Bou katha mani chhuti nei ghare rahili.Bou randha badha sarila.Mu TV dekhu thae.Dina egara ta bela ku Bou asi mo pakha re basila.Mu taku chanhili.Se lajei ki hasi dela.Mu bi hasi deli.Bou TV band kari bed uparaku jai soila.Mu bi jai ta pakhe basili.Bou ethara akhi band kari muchu muchu hasu thae.Mu ta upare jai ta otha ku chuma deli.Bou mote chanhi hasi dei kahila-"E katha jemiti khub gupta rahe.Paapa ta kari sarileni.Au chinta kari labha kana?"
 Mu Bou ku nibida alingana re bandhi nei kahili-" Satare Bou,e bayasa re bi tu pagal kari dauchhu!"Bou kahila-"Sata kahuchhi,sedina sina mote bhari kharap lagu thila prathame,kintu tu jemiti dustami kalu,mane mane mote bhari bhala lagu thila.Khali dara madu thila ara ghare to dadakhudi herika thibaru."
 
 Mu uttejita hei Bou ra otha gala ku chuma pare chuma dau thili.Bou ra munha bi nali padi galani garam re.Se mote thara ku thara bhidi pakau thae.Ta naka ru garam paban fiti paduthila.Bou mote kahila light libhei dabaku.Kahila-"Khub lajja laguchi to agare."Mu jai light libhei deli.
 
 48 barsa bayasa re bi mo Bou atyanta kamatura lagu thila.Mu tara saree saya blouse sabu kholi deli.Nije bi langala hei gali.Dunhe dunhi nku bhidi dhari mati galu.Bou ra mansala deha taku saunli saunli prema kariba ku khub bhala lagu thae.Mu bou patire jibha purei ta jibha sathe khub khelili.Bou prathama kari mote chuma dela.Khub mitha chuma.Tapare Bou mo banda ku dhari muthei pakei kahila-" satare,to jantra ta khub tagada achhi."Mu khub saunlili Bou ra balua Bia ku.Pura pakala bia darabudhi maikina ra.Bou nanhi nanhi karu karu mu munha lagei ta Bia fata re jibha lagei chati pakeili.Bou maja re picha teki pakei kahila-"eess..eess...kan karuchu re? Bhari maja lagu chi."Mu aste ki hata tale nei ta picha sandha re pureili.Anguli mari deli ta gandi kana re.Bou uthi ki mote bhidi pakei kahila-"Deri karni.Pare gela karibu mote.Mora bhari mana helani."
 
 Mu chadhi gali bou upare.Bou jangha mela kari dharila.Mu mo banda ku pureili ta asala jaga re.Bou ra setebela ku rasa bahari pura nalua Bia bhitara ta.Phachei ki pura mula jae pasi gala.Bou mo picha ku dui hata re chapi dhari kahila-"bhari badhia laguchi re."
 
 Mu Bou ku ta pithi talu dhari mo picha halei gheiba arambha kali.Dali hei mo banda khasadu thae Bou ra sei bhitare.Bou pati mela kari maja re san..san..niswas nou thae.Mu asambhala unmadana re Bou ra otha ku kamudi pakei gheili.Tara thala thala dudha jodaku dali pakei kamudi pakeili.Bou pura nali padigalani setebela ku.Khali picha teki pakau thae talu thai.Mo banda ghei ghei Bia bhitaru fena bahari asu thae.Bou pura masti re thae eina.sali darabudhi maikina ra ebe bi khub garam achhi deha re.Pura 15 minute jae Bou ku vidi dali gheu gheu mu au sambhaali paru nathili.Bou ra tini thara garam bia rasa bohi galani.Mu kahili-"Bou lo, eina mora bahari jiba."Bou kahila-"bhitara ku pura madi ki bija chhadi paka.Bhari bhala lagiba.Daribara kichhi nanhi.Mora mense band helani kebe thu."
 
 Pare pare mora prachur garam birya pichki gala Bou ra bia bhitare.Prachanda sukha re matuala hei gali mu.Bou ra nali otha ku ghana ghana chumbana dei mu ananda re atmahara heli.Bou bi charama trupti re kampu thila.
 
 Dunhe paraspara ku chanhi muruki hasa hasi helu.Jai bathroom re dhoi hei asilu.Bou kahila-"satare,to picha re khub bala achhi.Rasika nagar tie hei galuni e bhitare."
 
 Mu hasili.Bou puni chetei dela-"dekh,e sabu jemiti to mo chhada au kehi bhul re bi na jananti.Munha dekhei habani kahaku."
 
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Re: Bou ku gheili jamei ki
« Reply #1 on: September 13, 2013, 11:52:00 AM »
good worked .nice storie............