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Re: Anjaan rasta (by zaibi)
« Reply #1200 on: September 04, 2012, 04:11:33 PM »
24 updates aur 100 pages great achievement

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Re: Anjaan rasta (by zaibi)
« Reply #1201 on: September 04, 2012, 04:36:51 PM »
EXBII dot com par ek writer hain unhon ne story Thread main sirf story ka naam likha aur sath bas itna likha very soon...aap yaqeen karein gey us Thread par itney replies aaye - Congratulations to start a new story... waiting for story ETC aur 1day us Thread par 20 pages 200 replies thi....yaqinan ye writer ke acha likhne ki waja se hai us writer ne us story se pehle bhi ek story likhi thi jise saraha gaya tha.mujhe umeed hai agar zaibi bhi jab koi nai story start karein gi aur sirf yahi likh dain ke very soon to yahan members itne hi replies phir karein gey un replies se hi 20 pages ho jaein gey.,''
replies se hi writer ka pata lagta hai ye forum to bohut chota sa hai aur as forum main kafi kam members hain phir bhi agar yahan kisi story par itne replies hoye to as ka matlab hai ke tusi cha gaye ho..
main ne ek baat not ki hai yahan kafi members sirf urdu stories hi parhte hain Roman urdu main kam yahi waja hai ke abhi bhi bohut kam replies hain warna 100 pages na hote 1000 pages hote.

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Zeshan ap ki bat 100 % theek hai. Exbii per buhat hi achi achi kahaniyan hain Jo 100 kia kai so pages ka record bna chuki hain. Laikin yahan main apni tareef nahi karna chahti aur na khud ki tareef karne ki adat hai. Yahan aik change jo main ne dekhi hai  wo yeh keh anjaan rasta se pehle ki kahaniyan dekh lo readers story read karte thay phir kesi ka dil kia to ''nice ya hot'' ka comment kar dia bas. Laikin anjaan rasta ke bad se ab readers baqi stories per bhi achay achay comments kartay hain ye nahi keh rahi pehle nahi karte thay laikin ab zayda karte hain. Aur yahan itni ziyada safhat ki kahani parhne ka riwaj bhi nahi tha is lye kuch readers ko ajeeb bhi laga. Ap exbii per dekhen sab readers 10 11 page khol kar update dhondty hain aur writer ko encourage karte hain achi story per. Yahan aik lamha fikriya ye bhi hai keh story per ziyada replies ko gup shup ka name dia gya halan keh gup shup bhi anjaan rasta ke characters per hi hoi wo bhi zayda nahi aur koshish ki gai keh kesi tarah ye sab comments khatam ho jain. Even main ne readers ki asani ke lye story ke shoro main aur har update ke end per next update ka link bhi dia. Laikin lafzoon ke teer phir bhi janay kiyon writer ki taraf phainkay gaye.

Acha aur positive response denay walay readers na hotay to main ye kahani abhi tak continue na kar pati. Is moqa per agar Suny shah, areu4me  ka name na lon to ziyadti ho gi. Ye dono readers aaj kal nahi a rahay forum per laikin in dono achay dostoon main mujhe yahan bhi aur personal text main bhi buhat encourage kia.

Exbii ke achay achay writers se mera PM main contact hai unhoon ne mujh se shikwa bhi kia keh ap yum ki bajaye yahan time do ap ki story yum se ziyada yahan hit ho gi. Wahan bhi unhoon ne best story of forum kaha halan keh wo itna bara forum hai. But main ne anjaan rasta ka aghaz yahan se kia aur meri sari mehnat yum ke lye hi hai.
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Re: Anjaan rasta (by zaibi)
« Reply #1202 on: September 04, 2012, 04:52:24 PM »

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Boht boht boht Mubarik ho writer sahiba ap ne anjaan rasta ko likha hi itnay achay andaz se hai k tamam members isay read kernay or apni keemati raye dainy pe majboor ho jatay hain.
Sachi suba jab apki profile pic chang daikhi tab se hi boht khushi feel ho rahi thi k aaj anjaan rasta or zaibi ne aik or target achieve ker lia target is liye kiu k ye yum ki 1st story hai jo 1200 replies or 100 pages pe mabni hai and still continue...
Main subha aik topic main read ker raha tha kai members and writers apni stories ka compare anjaan rasta se ker rahy hain apni story k viewers ki taadad anjaan rasta se ker rahy hain but shayed wo bhool gaye hain k anjaan rasta english roman main likhi gai hai jab k un writer sahab ki urdu font main.
To sirf viewers ki tadad ziyada honay se story ko anjaan rasta se acha nai kaha ja sakta kiu k story to story hoti hai or anjaan rasta koi story to nai na ye to shahkaaaaaaaaaaaaar hai aik mahaaaaaaaaaaaan writer ka.
Ap tension na lia kerain sirf shahkar or  mahan jaisy lafz hi hasad kerny walo ko jala k rakh ker dain gay.
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Again congragulation ab anjaan rasta mazeed acha hota nazar aa raha hai kiu k kafi suspence open honay waly hain
keep it up and chaaaaaaa jaaaooooo puray yum pe ohhhh sorry wo to ap already chaai hui hain.




Hehehehehehehehehehehe

Apki mirch masalay wali khatti mithi batain parh kar buhat hansi ai. Wo kehtay hain na khud ko kesi se compare nahi karna chahye agar ap kesi se khud ko compare karte hain to is ka matlb hai ap apni zaat ko nechay kar rahay hain.

Buhat buhat shukriya NR ap ki achi achi posting ne anjaan rasta ko char chand lagye rakhay hain
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Re: Anjaan rasta (by zaibi)
« Reply #1203 on: September 04, 2012, 04:56:15 PM »
Zaibi i started to type your story in urdu .... check your pm for details.

Thank you so much jnab. Ap ne meri aik request per itna bara kam apne zimey le liya. So nice. Ap urdu main likhte howe adult part na likhye ga. Kyn keh main urdu wali kahani ko non adult forums per post karna chahti hn

Again thanks
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Re: Anjaan rasta (by zaibi)
« Reply #1204 on: September 04, 2012, 08:14:23 PM »
Is moqa per agar S u n y s h a h , a r e u 4 m e ka name na lon to ziyadti ho gi.

Na Chair Qissa E Ulfat Bari Lambi Kahani Hai..
Mein Zindagi Se Nahi Hara Kisi Ki Bat Mani Hai..
Badi Lambi Kahani Hai, Tuhmhey Leikin Sunani Hai..
2 member ee yad aey they.
Humara koi name nai shuro se parte aey hian. Enna lamma lmma intjar keeta hy.
Kis k waste tere waste sangdil..
Tu te sadda dil e tor shadya ey...
Mubarikaan te 99 page te e de chauke aa. 99 page pe me 36 hor me kalla he raha....
Marzi hy zabi g sada te koi zor nai...
Jiewey taddi story da koi tor nai...
MIAN HOON MASHHOR          ESHAQ BAZI ME

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Re: Anjaan rasta (by zaibi)
« Reply #1205 on: September 04, 2012, 08:33:52 PM »
Is moqa per agar S u n y s h a h , a r e u 4 m e ka name na lon to ziyadti ho gi.

Na Chair Qissa E Ulfat Bari Lambi Kahani Hai..
Mein Zindagi Se Nahi Hara Kisi Ki Bat Mani Hai..
Badi Lambi Kahani Hai, Tuhmhey Leikin Sunani Hai..
2 member ee yad aey they.
Humara koi name nai shuro se parte aey hian. Enna lamma lmma intjar keeta hy.
Kis k waste tere waste sangdil..
Tu te sadda dil e tor shadya ey...
Mubarikaan te 99 page te e de chauke aa. 99 page pe me 36 hor me kalla he raha....
Marzi hy zabi g sada te koi zor nai...
Jiewey taddi story da koi tor nai...

Oye ap ghalat na samjho yaar
Ye is lye kaha kyn ke suny bemar hai forum per nahi a raha aur areu4me sir bhi kafi dino se nahi aye is lye unko khasosi yaad kia
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Re: Anjaan rasta (by zaibi)
« Reply #1206 on: September 04, 2012, 10:34:10 PM »
Zaibi ap ki story aj padhi 14 updates..
 jis ki tawaku kar raha wohi parhne ko mila..
Boht khobsort or mudlalil andaz e beyan ha apka..
Mujhe charcter ma arfa or asad maria boht pasnd aye...waqas ki entry khob hoyi saima waly portion main...
Ort pa zulmu sitam or uski izt ki nailami k mozu ko ap ny khob uthaya ha.
Rizwan asifa saith or veena malik ka portion mujhe pasnd nh aya kyun ni aya is ki aik waja ha or shayd tme pta bi ho ..umeed ha k ap mind ni kareingi..
Baki apne khob mehnat ki ha.
Log jub mujhe writer kahte han to hansi nikal jati ha.
Ma to na itni mehnat se likhta hun or na apni updates ko seriously laita hun..
writer to ap log han jo itni mehnat or janafshani se likhty han..
Zaibi tm ne kaha k ma umaira ahmad jaisi bun'na chahti hun to khushi hoyi.
bus isi wajah se tmari story padhi ha aj ma ne..
or itna waqt padh k ma smjhta hun k ma ne wo waqt zaya ni kia..
ap ma ability ha.
thanx for nice sharing.
Hunn Araam aei???

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Re: Anjaan rasta (by zaibi)
« Reply #1207 on: September 05, 2012, 07:25:30 AM »
CONGRATULATIONSTO ACHIEVE100 PAGES

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Anjaan rasta (Update 25)
« Reply #1208 on: September 05, 2012, 10:22:58 AM »
Update 25

Arfa aur meri akhiri mulaqat ke bad shyd ab arfa mujh se sharma rahi thi ya koi aur wajha thi. Ab arfa mere samne anay se katrati thi. Arfa university ati aur classes atend karne ke bad university ki bus main hi wapis ho jati. Aqsa aur uske bhai ko bhi jab parhane jata to wo mere samne na ati. Arfa se hoi akhiri mulaqat ne jahan jazbat ko chingari ko hawa de aag lagai thi ab arfa ke youn samne na anay se dil main ajeeb ajeeb waswasy anay lagay thay. Kahen arfa naraz to nahi mujh se? Main ne koi ghalti to nahi kar di? Arfa pehle to samne a jati thi. Laikin ab kyn nahi ati? Dil per kia guzarti hai jab jazbat jag jain to ye ehsas bhi tab howa. Main university jata ya arfa ke ghar mere andar aik hi justajo hoti thi keh kab arfa meri ankhoon ke samne ho gi. Khud bhi hairan tha keh kal tak sinf e mukhalif se dor bhagnay wala kis tarah aik hi mulaqat main aik sharmili aur barhi si chadar orhne wali larki ke sehar main giraftar ho gya.

3 haftay guzar chukay thay laikin meri ankhoon ne abhi tak arfa ka dedar nahi kia tha. Aise hi aik din class lenay ko dil nahi kar raha tha to main apne class fellow ko bta kar keh main class nahi le raha wo meri attendance lagwa de bahir janay laga to wo bhi mere sath bahir janay laga. Yaar tu to class attend kar. Tmhari to pehli hi kafi classes missing hain. Main ne apne dost jibran ko kaha. Usne kafi classes bunk ki then jis ki attendance main ne lagwai thi. Kon si class miss hai mere yaar. Jibran ne meri ankhoon main ankhain dal kar shararat se kaha. Us ka youn dekhne ka maqsad tha keh sari attendance to tum ne lagwai den hain. To aaj meri attendance kon lagwaye ga? Main ne us ki bat ko samjhte howe kaha? Yaar aik din na bhi class li to kon si qiyamat a jaye gi ya sari classes attend karne per tujhe nobel prize mil jaye ga. Chal ab mood kharab na kar aur bahir chal kar kuch husn ke nizaray karen ta keh abhi abhi international relation ke teacher ne jo damgh kushk kia hai wo tar ho jaye. Us ki awaz aur ankhain bta rahi then aaj wo full mood main hai aur mera ab kuch kehna fazool hai.

Abhi hum log classroom ke bahir nikle e thay keh economics ke teacher atay howe dikhai diye. Lo ab in se nipto. Jibran ne economics ke teacher ko door se atay dekh kar kaha. In se tum hi nipto ge main nahi. Jibran ne meri bat sun kar aik nazar meri taraf gusse se dekha utni dair main teacher bhi pass pohanch gaye.

Kidhar ja rahay hain dono shehzaday? teacher ne hmaray pass a kar hamesha ki tarah apne chehre per muskarahat latay howe pocha. Sir wo management department ki taraf se hum cricket team main select howe hain to abhi practice match hai is lye coach sahib ke kehne per hum ko practice ke lye jana hai is lye... Itna keh kar main khamosh ho gya. Ji sir main ne bhi jana hai. Sir ka ishara apni taraf pa kar jibran ne bhi han kar di  Jibran mere safaid jhoot aut itnay confidence se bolay gaye jhoot per mujhe ankhain phar kar dekhne laga. Teacher ke class main janay ke bad, yaar buhat bara gappi hai to....

Ab hum dono bahir a gaye thay. Jibran campus se bahir a kar aise show karwa raha tha jaise jail se azad howa ho. Yaar wo dekh kitni kitni khoobsorat hai khuda ki shan dekho. Jibran ne samne se guzrati aik larki ko dekh kar ye keh raha tha. Main ne us larki ki taraf dekh aur laikin wo larki meri towajha ka markz nahi bani us larki ke peche aik bari chadar main mere dil main rachi basi arfa meri ankhoon ko thandak pohancha rahi thi. Yaar us chadar wali ko nahi us ke samne wali ko dekh. Jibran ne meri ankhoon ka taaqub karte howe kaha. Laikin meri ankhain sirf arfa ko hi dekh rahi then. Aaj itnay dino bad arfa samne ai thi buhat hi masom lag rahi thi. Chehre main hamesha ki tarah muskarahat. Jibran ne mujhe youn dekhte howe meri ankhoon ke samne hath hilaya. Jibran ki is harkat se main chonk gia. Usi waqt arfa ki nazar mujh per pari. Wo mujhe dekh kar agay barhne hi wali thi main ne jibran ko wahen chora aur arfa ki taraf barh gya. Arfa ke brabar pohanch kar us ke sath chalne laga. Arfa ne aik nazar mujh per dali aur apni raftar main agar barhne lagi. Kahan ja rahi ho ap? Thora sa sath chalne ke bad main ne pocha. Kahen nahi bas aaj library ja kar time guzane ka mood hai. Aik book bhi leni hai is lye bhi jana hai. Pehle koi book li library se? Nahi, mere pochne per arfa ne aik lafz ka answer dia. Chalain main apki help kar deta hon ap pehli bar jo book le rahi hain. Mere kehne per arfa ne bas asbat main sir hila dia. Ap aise kiyon behave kar rahi hain mere sath. Akhir mere dil ki bat meri zuban per a hi gai. Kaise? Ap mujhe ignore kar rahi hain. Mere samne anay se katrati hain. Kiyon? Main ne apni bat kar ke sawal pocha. Nahi aisi bat nahi hai main ap ko kiyon ignore karon gi. Aur na hi phir strike hoi university main jis ke lye mujhe ap se contact karna parta. Arfa ne aik nazar meri taraf dekh kar kaha aur muskara di. Kash ke phir strike ho jaye. Laikin aisa itfaq kafi mushkil hoga keh strike bhi ho aur barish bhi. Arfa ne meri bat per phir muskra kar kaha. Lazmi to nahi barish hi ho aur bike phisle. Bike waise bhi gir sakti hai. Meri bat ka ishara akhiri howe incident ki taraf tha jis main barish main bike phishli thi aur arfa ne meri jaan bachai thi. Bat to apki theek hai laikin ye bhi lazim nahi keh har bar arfa hi ho apki jaan bachany ko. Kia matlb? Main ne arfa ki bat samjhte howe jaan bhoj kar ye pocha. Arfa aik lamha to khamosh hoi laikin phir bolne ko apne lab kholay. Wo ''khuda ki shan'' wali bhi ho sakti hai. Kon? Main ne pocha. Wohi jis khuda ki shan ko ap aur apke dost dekh kar ankhain phar rahay thay. O i see. Ap ko ghalat fehmi hoi hai usko main nahi mera dost dekh raha tha. Main ne apni safai deni chahi. Laikin wo kehtay hain admi apne dostoon se pehchana jata hai. Arfa ne meray safai denay per kaha. G kehtay to theek hain lakin ye bhi kaha jata hai jo dikhta hai wo hota nahi aur jo hota hai wo dikhta nahi. Ye bat bhi theek hai, arfa ne meri bat ki tasdeeq ki. Phir ye btain jo mujhe dikha waisa tha nahi, right? G right. Main ne arfa ke pochne per right kaha. Phir mujhe wo btain jo hota hai aur mujhe dikha nahi. Ah kafi mushkil main dal dia mujhe apne. Main jis larki ko bari chadar main lipti sada si larki samjh raha tha asal main wo itni bhi sada nahi thi. Buhat smart ho ap arfa. Main arfa ki zahanat ko dad diye beghair na reh saka.

I think mere sawal ka jawab dena baqi hai. Arfa ne apni tareef per aik smile detay howe kaha. G jo dikhta nahi hai wo mehsos to hota hai. Main ne bhi arfa ko usi andaz main jawab dia. Maslan kia mehsos hota hai? Arfa ka chehra aise tha jaise kuch maloom na ho lakin ankhain bta rahi then jazbat wahan bhi umad rahen hain. Main wahen khara ho gya. Arfa mujhe rukta dekh kar ruk gai aur sawalia nazroon se mujhe pochne lagi ruk kiyon gaye ho aur ankhoon main jaise iltaja ho mere sath yuon hi umar bhar chaltay raho. Aik nazar idhar udhar dekhne ke bad jab ehsas howa koi pas nahi hai main arfa ke qareeb howa wo wahen but bani khari rahi. Us ki ankhoon main ankhain dal kar '' arfa apki ankhoon main wo dikh bhi raha hai jo main feel kar raha hon'' kia matlb? Arfa ne apni ankhoon ko neche jokatay howe kaha. Matlb wohi hai jis aag main ap se milne ke bad main sulg raha hon waise hi jazbat apki ankhain bta rahen hain. I think hum library janay main dair kar rahay hain. Arfa ne apni ankhoon ko mere say paray hata kar library ki taraf chaltay howe kaha. Ap ne answer nahi dia meri bat ka. Main ne arfa ke youn beghair jawab diye chal dene per dil masos ho kar pocha. Wo bas aik waqiya tha ya ap samjh lain apki help ki thi main e aur kuch nahi. Arfa ke jawab se mere dil ko aik dachka sa laga. Lakin mazeed kuch kehna abhi bekar tha
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''Hammad ap se aik bat kehni hai. Ye bat main aik hafta pehle wahen keh sakti thi jab hum library ja rahay thay laikin akhir aik larki hon ap se nahi keh pai. Ap apne jazbat ka izhar karna chah rahay thay laikin meri wajha se ap keh bhi nahi sakay aur apka dil bhi udas howa. Hammad such pochen mujhe us waqt buhat afsos howa tha apko udas dekh kar.

Hammad mujhe nahi malom ye kia Hai. Main jab bhi tanha hoti hon mujhe ap se hoi wo barish wali molaqat yaad anay lagti hai. Main ne ap se aik jhoot bola tha keh wo just aik incident tha. Laikin hammad main us incident jitna bholna chahti hon utnay hi wo lamhat yaad atay hain. Main to khud ko kai bar samjha chuki hon wo bas chand lamhat thay jo guzar gaye laikin hammad dil kuch aur hi kehta hai. Shayed dil ki is awaz ko hi muhabbat kehtay hain sab log. Hammad main apko kai dino se dekh rahi hon apki ankhoon main udasi si hai wo chamak nahi laikin is khat ke bad shayed ap ki ankhoon main waisi udasi na rahay. Hammad apki ankhoon main rachi basi arfa apko dil main basaye apke sapne dikhti hai. Hammad shayed apko kuch ajeeb ya jaldi lagay lakin hammad I LOVE YOU.''

''Sitare jo damakte hain ..
ksi ke chashm e hairan mein..
Mulakatein jo hoti hain..
jamaal e abr o baran mei
Yeh na-abaad waqton mein
dil e nashaad mein hoge
Mohabaat ab nhe hoge
Yeh kuch din baad mei hogi
Guzar jaein gy jo lmhe
Yeh un ke yaad mein hogi''

Hammad ko ye khat arfa ne jab wo aqsa aur uske bhai ko parha kar janay laga tab dia tha. Hammad ne khat ko ghar a kar parha aur khat per likhi tahreer se hammad ki ankhoon main khushi umadd ai. Hammad pechle aik haftay se jitna udas tha is aik khat ne us ko uski udasi se barh kar khushi di. Ye sham hammad ki zindagi ki behtareen sham thi. Zindagi main pehli bar kesi larki ne khulay lafzoon main khud ko hammad ka kaha tha. Hammad ne janay kitni bar khat ko parha aur har bar hammad ki khushi main izafa hota gya.
 
Aglay din hammad ne apna new dress pehna aur khoob tiyar ho kar university ke lye janay laga to hammad ki mama ne apne betay ko youn saja sanwara dekh khushi se chehktay howe  pocha. ''kia name hai uska?'' kis ka mama? Hammad ko laga jaise uski chori pakri gai ho. Usi ka jis ke lye mera baita udas tha aur kal sham se khush hai. Nahi mama koi bhi nahi hai. Hammad aik bar phir inkari ho gya. Theek hai baita abhi jaldi main hai wapis a jao to phir bta dena. Hammad apni mama ke pur aitmad lehjay per hairan hota howa bahir nikal gya.


Ap ko kaise pata mujhe biryani pasnd hai? Jo mujhe beghair btaye yahan le aye. Hammad aur arfa is waqt biryani house main bethay thay. University ki classes khatam hone ke bad hammad ne arfa ko apne sath bike per chalne ko kaha. Rastay main hammad ne arfa se lunch ka pocha to arfa ne bila jijak lunch ki farmaish kar di. Hammad arfa ke sath biryani khanay biryani house a gya. Wahen beth kar arfa ne hammad se apni pasnd ke baray main sawal kia. Jis ke mutaliq din rat socha jaye us ki pasnd aur na pasnd ka to khiyal rakhna hi parta hai. Mujhe ye bat malom hai apko biryani buhat pasnd hai. Hammad ne arfa ko taktay howe kaha. Ap ki ankhen jheel jaisi buhat gehri hain. Hammad ne apni bat ko continue rakha. Arfa apni tareef sun kar sharma gai. How sweet couple... Arfa ke kanon main pas se aik lady ki awaz sunai di jis ne arfa ko you sharmatay dekh kar kaha. Hammad bhi muskara dia aur arfa ne nazrain juka len.

Waise main dosti aur piyar main  formalities ke haq main nahi is lye ap ke diye howe khat per apko thank you nahi keh raha. Laikin ap ke us khat ne aik udas dil main khushiyan bhar den. Arfa nazrain samne table per rakhe apne shoulder bag per jamaye hammad ki batain sun rahi thi. Hammad ne arfa ki taraf piyar bhari nazroon se dekhte howe apna aik hath arfa ke hath ki janib barhaya.''I love you too arfa'' hammad ne apna hath arfa ke hath per rakhte howe kaha. Hammad ke hath ka lams hi arfa ke andr current laga raha tha aur hammad ki zubani i love you too sun kar arfa ko samjh nahi ai kia karay. Arfa ne aik nazar hammad ke chehre ki janib dekha aur hammad ki ankhoon ki tapash bardashat na karte howe apni ankhain jhuka len.

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All readers, ap sab ko ye update shayd small lagay. Pehle main apne laptop per likhti thi jis main word file ke almost 7 se 8 page ki update likhti thi. Laikin kuch reasons ki wajha se ye update mobile se type ki hai. Mujhe update ke length ka andaza nahi. Is lye agar update choti lagay to sorry. Lakin i think na hone kuch kuch hona behtar hai
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« Reply #1209 on: September 05, 2012, 11:00:45 AM »
proxysite k through next link b open ni hota na he start waly link show hotay hain ,
han bilkul yeh hi problm ha.

PG apko mobile se site open ka problem hai aur proxy site se is ko open karte hain. Mujhe ahi malom ap kon si proxy site se yumstories ko browse karte hain jis ki wajha se anjaan rasta ke link open karne per apko error ata hai.

Main ne aaj aik proxy site se yumstories ko open kia us se site bhi ho gai aur anjaan rasta ke link bhi open ho rahay hain aur show bhi ho rahay. Is lye socha ap se us proxy site ka link share kar don ta keh apko asani rahay. Uc web ke through is site se yum ko open karen.

Click here to visit proxy site.

I think ab apko problem nahi rahay gi.

Thanks for pointing out a problem,
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« Reply #1210 on: September 05, 2012, 11:07:25 AM »
Zaibi ap ki story aj padhi 14 updates..
 jis ki tawaku kar raha wohi parhne ko mila..
Boht khobsort or mudlalil andaz e beyan ha apka..
Mujhe charcter ma arfa or asad maria boht pasnd aye...waqas ki entry khob hoyi saima waly portion main...
Ort pa zulmu sitam or uski izt ki nailami k mozu ko ap ny khob uthaya ha.
Rizwan asifa saith or veena malik ka portion mujhe pasnd nh aya kyun ni aya is ki aik waja ha or shayd tme pta bi ho ..umeed ha k ap mind ni kareingi..
Baki apne khob mehnat ki ha.
Log jub mujhe writer kahte han to hansi nikal jati ha.
Ma to na itni mehnat se likhta hun or na apni updates ko seriously laita hun..
writer to ap log han jo itni mehnat or janafshani se likhty han..
Zaibi tm ne kaha k ma umaira ahmad jaisi bun'na chahti hun to khushi hoyi.
bus isi wajah se tmari story padhi ha aj ma ne..
or itna waqt padh k ma smjhta hun k ma ne wo waqt zaya ni kia..
ap ma ability ha.
thanx for nice sharing.

PG mujhe to ye umeed thi ap ka comment story khatam hone per hi aye ga lakin ap ne us se pehle hi itna encouraging comment de kar mujhe buhat hosla afzai di hai. Ap ko jo character achay lage hain wo hain hi buhat achay aur jin characters ko ap ne na pasnd kiya hai unka anjaan rasta main koi khas role nahi hai wo ap samjh lain hot item ke lye hire kiye thay characters. Ap jaise achay writer ki sabhi tareef karte hain apki stories mujhe bhi buhat pasnd hain aur apne meri story pe mujhe encourage kia us ke lye thanks
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« Reply #1211 on: September 05, 2012, 11:09:54 AM »
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