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Title: INTAQAM-E-MUHABBAT (Running)
Post by: wajahat on March 14, 2013, 07:19:31 am
Slam 2 all
Aj main apke samne ek non adult story laya hn ye meri pehli kawish hy ek real sabaq amoz kahani hy aur maine buht arsa pehle likh kr zaya krdi thi par aj b mind mein mojod hy socha aj apke samne paish kr hi dn.
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Haan bhai chor no.1 kya hal hain?
Inspector Aqalmand khan ne Arsalan k moun pe pani phenkte huwe kaha.
Arsalan uraf arsal ko aj hawaldar sher Ali pakar laya tha aur is waqt wo kursi pe bandha betha tha.
wo heran tha k huwa kya hy? Q k wo chor to tha par ek mahine se usne kuch ulta kam ni kiya tha.
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Arsal: mujhe q utha laye ho?
Aqalmand khan: putar tm ne buht bra hath mara hy Malik Rauf k ghar se lakhon ka zewar le uray .par kisi ne daikh liya tmko to laye hain.
Arsal: hayen ary maine ek mahine se kuch ni kiya last time jail se riha hone k bad se.
Kaka menu ullu na samj. Kal rat 12 bje kahan tha tu?
Inspector ne karak kr pocha
Arsal sochte huwe bola main kal sari rat chacha ghafoor ki taraf tha.
Oh acha ji tu wahan tha to chori tere humshakal ni ki hogi hy na?
Inpector uske samne aate huwe bola.
Maine koi chori ni ki q hath dho k mere pechay par gaye ho.
Arsal rohansa ho gya tha.
Apna sher kaka le kr aana zra 10 No. Wala chittar isko aj main btata hon k moun kese kholna hy.
Inspector ne ek jalal bharay andaz mein hawaldar ko order lagaya.
Sir ji o chittar nai aa sakta. Hawaldar ne holay se kaha.
Ary q ni aa skta ? Inspector ne istafsaar kiya.
Sir ji o wo beghum sahiba le gai thein aj unko ap pe bra ghusa tha .
Arsal ki hansi nikal gai
Wah ji wah yahan ka hitler ghar ja k pit'ta hy
Arsal kursi pe duhra ho k hans raha tha . Hawaldar b hans raha tha.
Inspector ko taish aa gya usne 2 thapar khataak se arsal k moun pe maray.
Aur hawaldar ko kha jane wali nazron se daikhte huwe garja
Dant nikalna band kar dafa ho aur ja kar mola bakhsh le kar aa aur han tera sar b aiwi ganja ni huwa teri b.v ki jotiyon se huwa hy.
Arsal phr hans para.
Jb k hawaldar kanpta huwa chik utha kr bahar nikal gya.
Chand lamhon bad wo wapis aaya to uske hath mein 6 Ft lamaba ek karak lakri ka danda tha aur sath mein oil ki botel.
Inspector usko daikhte hi khush huwa aur arsal ki rasiyan kholte huwe bola daikh akhari bar poch raha hon tm ne chori ki hy na?
Main kitni dafa btaon maine chori ni ki. Sari rat chacha k pas tha suba apne ghar gya aur andar dakhil b ni huwa tha k hawaldar muje pakar laya.
Arsal phr se rohansa ho gya tha.
Bakwas karna teri purani adat hy aur darama baz tm se bra koi ni ho skta Sher ali kro iski sewa zra.
 inspector ne sard lehjy mein kaha.
Sher ali danday ko tail lgate huwe agay barha aur arsal ko ghareeban se pakar kr ek kamre ki tarf jane laga.
Tbi ek awaz aai rukiye iski zarorat ni hy.
Ek sanwali saloni si ladki darwazay pe khari thi
Hawaldar k qadam ruk gaye thay
Wo agay aai aur inspector se boli hamara chor ye ni hy ghar ka hi ek mulazim hy
Madam Anila ne bheja hy muje . Wo case wapis leti hain aur mulazim se khudi nipat lain ge hum.
Inspector aqalmand ka chehra bujh gya usy mushkil se to chance mila tha arsal pe apne dil ki bharaas nikalne ka.
Sher Ali jane do isko.
Inspector Be dali se bola.
Hawaldar ne arsal ko chor dia. Arsal ne apna huliya durast kiya aur shararat se bola , chachu aqal mand khan ji ap seyane hote to aj muje jane na daite wese aqalmand hote to 8 sal se inspector geeri hi na krte ab tak opar nikal gaye hote.
Dafa ho ja yahan se.
Inspector daharra.
Arsal muskurata huwa inspector k kamre se nikal gya.
Wo ladki itni dair mein ja chuki thi.
Arsal seeti bajata huwa thanay se bahir aaya to wo ladki samne khari thi.
Wo seedhi uske pas aai aur hath agay barhate huwe boli
Hi i am Muzna. Madam Anila ki P.A.
Arsal ne uska hath tham liya wo sanwali saloni si ek pur kashish ladki thi.
Ji mujh se kya kam apko?
Arsal herangi se bola.
Madam ap se sorry karna chahati hain hamare usi mulazim ne chori ki jis ne apka nam btaya k usne apko bhagte daikha tha. Usne apna ilzam apke sar dala. To madam ko afsos hy.to ap plz mere sath chalain.
Muzna ne usko tafseelan sb bta dia.
Ary its ok sorry kya krna ap jayen muje koi shikwa ni.
Arsal khush dili se bola
Ary ni apko sath chalna hoga warna madam naraz hngi plz come with me muzna ne iltija ki.
Ok chalo. Arsal ne han mein sar hilate huwe kaha.
Samne car khari thi jis mein bawardi driver betha tha
Wo 2nu car mein bethe aur car shehar ki sarkon pe bhagne lagi.
Koi 10 minuts bad car ek intahai posh area mein ek aali shan banglow k samne puhanch gai.
Andar dakhil huwe to arsal ne andaza lgaya k 150 marlay se kam ki jga ni thi usne bs nam suna tha Rauf Malik ka. Buht ameer admi par us se zeyada bray insan b thay buht reham dil aur naik.
Muzna usy seedha t.v launge mein le gai wo thora heran huwa k main aesa khas mehman ni k yahan le aai.
Kher muzna ye keh kr chali gai k ap betho madam abi aati hain.
Wo sofa mein dhans gya aj 3 sal bad wo kisi pur sakon jga pe tha
Chand lamhon bad ek awaz t.v launge mein goonji
OEY ARSAL BADMASH
Arsal ko jese 10000 volts ka current lga ho wo uchal kar khara huwa aur samne daikha
Samne jo koi b thi usne chehra chupaya huwa tha
Par ye awaz wo lakhon ki bheer mein b pehchan skta tha
Par wo awaz to 3 sal pehle hamesha k liye gum gai thi to ye kaun hy phr?
Kaun ho ap?
Arsal kapkapate lehjay mein bola
Wo sarapa kuch ni bola
Main pochta hn kaun ho ap?
Sarapay mein halchal hui aur usne apne chehre se dopata hata dia
Aur ankhen opar uthai
Nahiiii
Ye ni ho skta
Ye neeli ankhen ni ni ni noooooo Wo hawas baakhta ho kr pechay hata.
Ye jhot hy
Khawab hy let me out of here.
Wo deewar noch raha tha.
Tb wo sarapa muskurate huwe agay barha aur.......
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Agay kya huwa. Arsal chor q bna tha? Wo sarapa kaun tha? Arsal q dara?
Ye next update mein btaonga.
Muje shidat se apke replies ka intazar rahe ga . Plz meri islah aur hosla afzai zaror kijiye ga.
Title: Re: INTAQAM-E-MUHABBAT
Post by: mahi_star on March 14, 2013, 04:57:09 pm
nice start
waiting for update
Title: Re: INTAQAM-E-MUHABBAT
Post by: wajahat on March 14, 2013, 05:11:09 pm
nice start
waiting for update
Thanx mahi buht buht shukriya. Update jald kronga bs sbki raye milne ka intazar hy
Title: Re: INTAQAM-E-MUHABBAT
Post by: Rogue991 on March 15, 2013, 12:21:12 am
hmmm interesting lagti hai jb free ho ga tu parho ga  :rockon:
Title: Re: INTAQAM-E-MUHABBAT
Post by: wajahat on March 15, 2013, 09:43:42 pm
hmmm interesting lagti hai jb free ho ga tu parho ga  :rockon:
Sure sir g
Title: Re: INTAQAM-E-MUHABBAT
Post by: mahi_star on March 17, 2013, 12:42:33 pm
no update  :hammer: :hammer: :hammer:
Title: Re: INTAQAM-E-MUHABBAT
Post by: wajahat on March 17, 2013, 01:04:48 pm
no update  :hammer: :hammer: :hammer:
Kal tak update kr donga janab . Dnt Worry
Title: Re: INTAQAM-E-MUHABBAT
Post by: wajahat on March 18, 2013, 04:20:26 am
Arsal maa bap ki akloti olad tha. Apni maa ki ankh ka tara tha to bap k dil ka sakoon b tha.
Wo 2 sal ka tha jb uski hum umar ek guria jesi bachi unke ghar aai.
Amber
Uske chacha Zeeshan Ahmad ki beti thi wo log gaon mein hote thay aur arsal ki family shehar mein. Pasand ki shadi ki waja se arsal k bap Zamaan Ahmad ko gaon chorna para tha phr wo kbi palat kr gaon ni gaye par ek hadsay mein bhai aur bhabi 2nu k marne ka sun kar un se raha ni gya aur wo gaon gaye.
Amber b apne parents ki akloti olad thi.
Zamaan sahib se daikha ni gya k bhai ka khon gaon mein rulta rahe na dada na dadi na koi aur qareebi rishtadar tha. Wo amber ko apne sath le aaye thay.
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Amber buht peyari thi khas tor pe uski Ankhen jo Neeli thein Arsal ko wo jeet jagti Guria lagti thi.
Wo kuch hi dino mein uske sath kafi ghul mil gya.
Waqt pankh lga kar ura aur pta b ni chala k kb wo Intermediat k imtehan dy kar pas b ho gaye.
Zamaan Ahmad ne amber ko koi kami ni hone di unhon ne us se ye bat b ni chupai k wo unki olad ni hy

Amber aur arsalan ek dosaray ko pasand krne lage thay par baqaida izhar ni huwa tha.
Zamaan ahmad aur unki b.v Asiya ko b unki chahat ka ehsas tha. Wo 2nu b khush thay k chalo ghar ki olad ghar mein hi reh jaye gi.
Ab 2nu ka irada university join karne ka tha.
Ek sham Amber chhat pe khari thi. Black suit mein ball khulay choray wo koi book parh rahi thi. Tbi Arsal opar aaya . Amber ko zra b ehsas ni huwa arsalan ne daikha k balon ki ek latt uske haseen surakh o sapeed gal ko cho rahi thi wo ek dam kho sa geya wo khud b kam ni tha mardan wajahat ka shahkar tha goora chita rang, 6 ft ka kasarti jism wo itni si umar mein b buht jawan mard jesa dikhta tha.
Par amber k samne aa kar uske hosh gum gashta hi rehte thay aur is waqt b uski yehi halat thi.
Amber ne apne chehre pe uski nazron ki tapish mehsos kr li usne chehra utha kar uski tarf daikha aur boli, ary tm kb aaye?
Bs abi aaya hon tm kya parh rahi ho? Arsal jese cheenp sa geya tha.
Kuch ni bs ek noval hy ye lo tm b daikho. Ye kehte huwe amber ne book uski tarf barha di.
Wo noval k pages ultanay paltanay laga.
Tum shayd mujh se kuch kehne aaye ho? Amber ne sawal kiya.
Han kuch kehna to hy par samj ni aata kahan se shuro kron. Arsal uljhan bharay lehjay mein bola.
Bat kya hy saf saf btao uljha q rahe ho. Wo herat zada thi
Wo na amber i...i... I love .... You
Will you be mine forever? I... I mean will you marry me?
Wo hijaan bharay andaz mein bolta chala gya.
Amber moun kholay khari thi phr ek dam se agay aa kr usne arsal ki ankhon mein jhanka aur boli budho ho qasam se .
Wo uski neeli ankhon ki jheel mein doobtay huwe anari tairaak ki tra tinkay ka sahara dhoond raha tha.
Kya matlb amber? Wo akhir bola
I love you too. Kb se muntazir thi tmhari pehal ki. And yes i will be yours, i will marry you.
Wo chehak kr boli.
Arsal ko jese qaroon ka khazana mil gya tha
Fart e jazbat se ankhen bheeg gai aur pta ni kb usne amber ko hug kr liya.
Ary ary ye kya kr rahe ho badmash kahin k
Wo hawas bakhta ho gai thi.
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Main b muntazir tha kb tmhen pakar sakon hari mirch kahin ki . Shokhi uske ang ang se tapak pari thi.
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Hunh ho to tm budho hi. Wo khafa hone ki acting krte huwe uske bazuaon mein kasmasa rahi thi.
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Par arsal k iraday khatrnak lag rahe thay jinhen wo mehsos kr chuki thi.
No no way arsal k bachay aesa kiya to main na... Main na...
Wo satpata gai.
Kya na kya na bolo bolo ? Wo usy aur tang kr raha tha
Main cheekh mar dongi . Amber ne dhamki di.
Ahan ok mar k dikhao . Arsal dhitai pe utar aaya tha.
Oey badmash choro muje. Ni to papa ko bulaon gi. Amber ne ek aur dhamki di.
O papa haye meri hari mirch wo to gaye kam se mama b ni hain unko bhej kar hi to aaya hn . Arsal ne ye kehte huwe book phenk di jo abi tk hath mein thi aur apna ghera aur tang kr dia.
Arsal ni na plz pehle din hi han? Amber rohansi si ho gai.
Han pehle din hi pyar ki muhar. Arsal ka lehja saf tha.
Buht buray ho tm but i love you. Amber b shayd wohi chahati thi
Arsal ne jhat apne jaltay hont amber k honton pe rakh diye
Pta ni kitne lamhy guzar gaye unhen hosh tb aaya jb ek billi ne roof pe challang lgai.
Amber ek dam se pechy hui is se pehle k arsal kuch samjta wo neechy ki tarf bhag chuki thi.
Wo peechy lapka magar main gate pe dastak hui to wo ruk gya.
Ja kr gate khola to uski mama thein.
Wo andar aaien to amber ne phir se shakayt lga di jese daily krti thi
Par zra hat k.
Mama ye apke ladalay sapoot ne muje phir hari mirch kaha aur aj to pta kya kiya isne?
Arsal k to hosh urh gaye k kahin bta na dy wo mama k pechay khara tha
Wo amber k agay hath jorne laga pechay se.
Kya kiya aj is badmash ne? Mama ne pyar se amber k sar pe hath phera.
Mama ap b mil gai iske sath?
Arsal ne shikwa kiya
Mama aj isne muje mara. Amber ne roni soorat bna kar kaha.
Kya? Arsal samne aao. Mama ne order dia.
Arsal samne aaya to mama ne uska kan pakar liya
Q mara meri phool si bachi ko?
Ary kb mara maine apki goobhi k phool ko?
Arsal phr b shaitani kr raha tha.
Mama daikhen kya keh raha hy?
Amber ne mama ko luqma dia
Ye goobhi ka phool lagti tmhen? Peechy peechay q phirte ho phr iske?
Mama ne usy jhara.
Arsal chheenp gya aur yahan wahan daikhte huwe bola mara ni hy bs hari mirch kaha aiwi mere kan khinchwane k liye bola hy isne.
Amber ne zuban nikal k chiraya usko.
Mama ne pyar se 2nu k sar pe hath phera. Tm 2nu hi to hamari zindagi ho.
2nu ne mama ko hug kr liya.
Chalo peechy hato 2nu shaitan main khanay ka kuch kr lon ja kr apne forms fill kro aur khabrdar jo ab jhagra kiya.
Dnt worry mama ab jhagra ni hoga main kheyal rakhn ga apki ladali bitiya ka
Arsal k lehjay mein shararat raqs kr rahi thi.
Amber ne sharma kr usy daikha aur andar chali gai room mein.
Arsal b apne room ki tarf barh gya.
Mrs. Zamaan muskura dien wo unke dil parh chuki thein aur khush thein.
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Waqt isi tra guzarta geya. 2nu ki mangni kar di gai thi aur  wo 2nu pyar k jhoolay mein bethe bethe MBA mein puhanch gaye aur wo jb din b aa gya jb 2nu final result ka wait kr rahe thay.
Mr. And mrs zamaan market gaye thay ghar ka saman aur ek choti si party ki tayari k liye cheezen lene. Sbko poora yaqeen tha k 2nu achay marks k sath pass ho jayen ge.
Arsal aur amber bethe t.v daikh rahe thay
K telephone ki ghanti baji
Arsal ne reciever uthaya
Dosaray lamhy hi arsal ko apna ap dagmagata huwa mehsoos huwa............
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Agay kya huwa ? Next update mein pta chalay ga.
Main daikh raha hn k Non Adult stories k portion ko koi khas response ni mila.
Phr b ek jazby k tehat ye story likh raha hn.
Apke replies ka shidat se intazar rahe ga. Plz meri islah zaror kijiye ga.
Title: Re: INTAQAM-E-MUHABBAT (2nd Update)
Post by: mahi_star on March 18, 2013, 10:06:50 pm
very nice update  :clap: :clap: :clap: :clap: :clap: :clap: :clap:
shaam me prr rhi thi k lite off hogae so abhi cmnt krr rhi hun
very very nice
yum pr kaafi talented writers mojood hen keep it up
 :flowers: :flowers: :flowers: :flowers: :flowers: :flowers: :flowers: :flowers: :flowers: :flowers:
Title: Re: INTAQAM-E-MUHABBAT (2nd Update)
Post by: wajahat on March 18, 2013, 11:14:46 pm
very nice update  :clap: :clap: :clap: :clap: :clap: :clap: :clap:
shaam me prr rhi thi k lite off hogae so abhi cmnt krr rhi hun
very very nice
yum pr kaafi talented writers mojood hen keep it up
 :flowers: :flowers: :flowers: :flowers: :flowers: :flowers: :flowers: :flowers: :flowers: :flowers:
Thank u so much mahi.
Buht buht zeyada shukria k ap ne story read ki aur meri hosla afzai b ki.
Bs koshish kr raha hn k ek achi story ap logon ko dy sakon.
Buht thanx itni pasandeedgi ki umeed ni thi muje.
Title: Re: INTAQAM-E-MUHABBAT (2nd Update)
Post by: wajahat on March 30, 2013, 12:52:05 am
Arsal dagmagata huwa deewar k sath ja laga
Aur dharraam se zameen pe gir gya.
Uske girnay ki awaz sun kar Amber ne t.v se nazrain hata kar uski taraf daikha to usy youn table k pas deewar k sath take lagaye tangain pasaray beth kar uske hosh urh gaye.
Wo bhag kar uske pas puhanchi. Arsal ro raha tha.
Arsal kak... Kya... Kya huwa ?
Wo haklatay huwe boli
Amber sb... Sb khatm ho gya... Wo rotay huwe bola.
Ary huwa kya hy? Fail ho gaye kya? Wo heejaan zada lehjay mein boli.
Amber amber wo... Mama papa....???
Arsal bat poori na kr saka aur b zor se ronay laga.
Amber tb tak uske pas beth chuki thi aur wo b rone lag gai
Huwa kya hy please btao btao kya huwa mama papa ko??????????
Btaooo
Wo chilla uthi
Wo nahi rahy...
Arsal ne deewar k sath sar takrate huwe kaha.
What...????
Kya.. Kya bol.. Rahe ho. Hosh mein ho? Ye... Nahi ho... Skta
Wo pagalon ki tra chillai.
Ho geya hy bomb blast huwa hy... Aur...
Arsal phoot phoot kr rone laga aur agay kuch na keh paya.
Amber kuch na bol pai
Bs ghash kha kar arsal ki jholi mein gir gai.
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Mr. And Mrs. Zamaan market gaye thay shoping kr rahe thay ek bakery se cake le kr bahir aaye thay k pas k hotel k samne khari car mein bomb blast ho gya wo kuch door to thay par bomb zeyada taqat war tha ird gird k 150 ft  redious tak jani aur mali nuqsan huwa tha wo 2nu 50 ft door rahe honge.
2nu moqa par hi dam tor gaye thay. Ye shukar tha k chehre damage ni huwe aur bomb blast k bad wahan lage hajoom mein unke muhallay ka admi mojod tha.
Usi ne 2nu ki shanakht ki aur phir arsal ko call b ki.
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Arsal aur amber ki dunia andhair ho gai thi.
Un 2nu ko koi hosh ni tha.
Bhala ho Ghafoor chacha ka jo zamaan sahib k dost thay unhon ne apni beti aur b.v k sath mil kar sb kuch sanbhala aur unke waledain ko sapurd-e-khak b kiya.
Warna wo 2nu is laiq ni rahe thay k kuch b kar patay.
Koi rishtadar b ni tha na koi aur apna. Par Ghafoor chacha ne 2nu ko sanbhala aur unhen hosh ki dunia mein le aaye.
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Arsal aur amber jese pathar k butt ban gaye thay unko kisi bat ka hosh ni tha. Yahan tak k unko tb b koi hosh ni tha jb mr. And mrs. Zamaan ko unki akhari aramgah ki taraf le jaya ja raha tha.
Wo to bs pathrai hui bejan ankhon se sb kuch daikh rahe thay. Pooray 3 din tak na kuch khaya na piya aur na kuch bolay.
Ghafoor chacha ne aur unki family ne bri mehnat ki din rat ek kar dia aur akhir kaar paanchvain din t.v pe usi bomb blast ki news daikhte huwe un 2nu ki khamoshi toot gai
Wo itni zor aur shidat se roye k ghafoor chacha , unki b.v aur beti k dil dehal gaye.
Wo 2nu ki bs ek hi takrar thi k kiyon? Aesa kiyon huwa? Ab to time aaya tha unki khushiyon ka.
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Kash ye bomb blast, firing, sucide attacks, aur dehshat gard ye samj pate k unke kartoot 2,4 afrad ki jan ni lete wo pooray pooray khandano ko barbad kr daite hain.
Kash ye watan dushman, awam dushman be zameer aur taqat k nashay mein choor log samj patay.
Hona kya tha? kuch b ni. 35 afrad ki jan gai thi , 80 k qareeb zakhmi thay par kya farq parta kisi ko. Siwaye unke jinke apne chalay gaye thay ya jinke apne aklotay saharay maut ki kashmakash mein doltay hospitals mein paray thay ya apahij ho kr apno ka gham aur barha gaye thay. Govt. Ne kaghazi karwai poori ki. Na maloom dehshat gardon ka karnama btaya geya aur bs qisa khatm.
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Arsal aur amber ek mah tak kafi sanbhal chuke thay . Ab ghafoor chacha ya unki b.v kbi kbi aa jatay thay. Wo 2nu m.b.a clear kr gaye thay jiski khushi khak mein mil chuki thi.
Wo 2nu ek chat k nechy rehte aur apne dukhon par marham rakhte rehte. Ghar k har konay se apne parents ki yadain aa kar unko rula jati thein. Par kehte hain k waqt buht bara marham hy 2 mah tak wo 2nu ek dam normal ho gaye thay aur apni aane wali zindagi ka soch rahe thay.
Zamaan sahib koi jageerdar ya buht ameer karobari insan to thay nahi. Ek firm k mamoli mulazim thay aur sufaid posh insan thay.
Unki jama poonji aur ghafoor chacha ki madad ne 2 mah tak sath dia tha par ab wo mushkil se kuch din aur guzara kar sakte thay aur uske bad....?
Unke pas ab aur koi chara ni tha siwaye iske k wo jobs dhondte.
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Wo 2nu job dhondne nikal paray. Halan k arsal amber ki job k haq mein ni tha par wo akeli ghar pe kya krti? Aur phr uska dil behlane k liye bahir aana jana acha tha ye sb soch kr arsal man gya tha.
Har jaga rishwat aur sifarish ka daira tha agar ghafoor chacha na hote to shayd unko itni jaldi job na milti.
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Unko ek sath ek achi firm mein job mil gai thi. 2nu ki khushi ka koi thikana ni tha.
Par unki ye khushi b halaat khatm krne pe tulay thay.
Jb insan ka waqt bura ho to uske ghar ka kuta b usy kat khata hy.
Yehi sb unke sath hone ja raha tha.
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Wo 2nu sunday k din apni pehli tankhawa se ki gai shoping ka samaan daikh daikh k khush ho rahe thay k darwazay pe dastak hui.
Arsal chonka
Ary is waqt kaun aa gya? Ghafoor chacha to thori dair pehle gaye hain.
Ary tm ja kar daikho to sahi yahin apne ap se hi sawal jawab bad mein karna.
Amber ne hamesha ki tra naseehat ki.
Wo darwazay ki tarf barha tb tak darwaza aur buri tra se peeta gya.
Ab ki bar amber b chonk uthi aur arsal k chehre pe fikar k saaye lehranay lage.....
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To Be Continued...
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Agay kya huwa?
Ye next update mein.
Ap sbke comments ka shidat se muntazir rahon ga.
Title: Re: INTAQAM-E-MUHABBAT (3rd Update)
Post by: shikra22 on June 03, 2013, 12:06:14 pm
buhat achi aur umda story hay, hear touching
BRAVO
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Title: Re: INTAQAM-E-MUHABBAT (3rd Update)
Post by: wajahat on June 03, 2013, 12:52:47 pm
buhat achi aur umda story hay, hear touching
BRAVO
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Thank u so much bro
And sorry to all readers main itne din guzarne k bad b update ni dy paya.
Try kr raha hn k zra time nikal lon aur apni sb stories ko regularly update kar sakon.
Title: Re: INTAQAM-E-MUHABBAT (3rd Update)
Post by: sonu59 on October 20, 2013, 11:52:11 pm
Good work dear
Title: Re: INTAQAM-E-MUHABBAT (3rd Update)
Post by: wajahat on October 21, 2013, 12:23:37 am
Good work dear
thanx bro
Title: Re: INTAQAM-E-MUHABBAT (3rd Update)
Post by: smoki on October 21, 2013, 12:35:16 am
Oye teri hosla afzai k liye b 10 no ka chiter mangwana pare ga update kar iss ka foran :D
Title: Re: INTAQAM-E-MUHABBAT (3rd Update)
Post by: smoki on October 21, 2013, 12:38:04 am
Oye teri hosla afzai b 10 no k chiter se karoon ga agar update nai ki to bohat fit hai zara hat k muje intezar na karwana warna :D
Title: Re: INTAQAM-E-MUHABBAT (3rd Update)
Post by: wajahat on October 21, 2013, 01:25:30 am
Oye teri hosla afzai b 10 no k chiter se karoon ga agar update nai ki to bohat fit hai zara hat k muje intezar na karwana warna :D
hahahahahaha intazar karwane mein apun hitler hy aho
Title: Re: INTAQAM-E-MUHABBAT (3rd Update)
Post by: wajahat on October 21, 2013, 01:27:53 am
Oye teri hosla afzai k liye b 10 no ka chiter mangwana pare ga update kar iss ka foran :D
yar story likhne ka maza aur acha time tb hota jb mind tension free ho aur main aj kal zra zati life mein uljha hua hon. Dua krna yara k jald time mily muje aur main aram se story likh paon
Title: Re: INTAQAM-E-MUHABBAT (3rd Update)
Post by: DesiGirl on October 25, 2013, 05:13:57 pm
main ny yahan 2 updates parhi hain. zabardasttttttttttttttt maza a raha hy parh ker waqai kafi acha likhty ho aap.. 3rd update b jald sy jald parhoon gi ;-)

keeeeeeeeeeeeeeeep it up
Title: Re: INTAQAM-E-MUHABBAT (3rd Update)
Post by: wajahat on October 25, 2013, 05:46:07 pm
main ny yahan 2 updates parhi hain. zabardasttttttttttttttt maza a raha hy parh ker waqai kafi acha likhty ho aap.. 3rd update b jald sy jald parhoon gi ;-)

keeeeeeeeeeeeeeeep it up
o wow ji
DG ko meri story pasand aa gai bri bat hy.
Khush qismati meri.
Thank u so much DG for appriciation.
Title: Re: INTAQAM-E-MUHABBAT (3rd Update)
Post by: adnan1 on November 03, 2013, 07:03:31 am
bahut khub ustad G  :rockon:  :rockon: :rockon:  pori read ki hai  :yes: ab intizar nahi hoga  :no: mujko next update ka pls jald sy jald hi update karo


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Title: Re: INTAQAM-E-MUHABBAT (3rd Update)
Post by: wajahat on November 03, 2013, 01:07:37 pm
bahut khub ustad G  :rockon:  :rockon: :rockon:  pori read ki hai  :yes: ab intizar nahi hoga  :no: mujko next update ka pls jald sy jald hi update karo


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 thanx bro
Ni karwata zeyada wait. Jald update kr donga yara.
Title: Re: INTAQAM-E-MUHABBAT (3rd Update)
Post by: adnan1 on November 03, 2013, 01:08:57 pm
bahut khub ustad G  :rockon:  :rockon: :rockon:  pori read ki hai  :yes: ab intizar nahi hoga  :no: mujko next update ka pls jald sy jald hi update karo


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 thanx bro
Ni karwata zeyada wait. Jald update kr donga yara.

ya hoi na ustadon wali baat  :flowers:
Title: Re: INTAQAM-E-MUHABBAT (3rd Update)
Post by: adnan1 on November 05, 2013, 08:42:51 am
2 din ho gay koi update nahi ustaad G  :hammer: :hammer: :hammer: :hammer: :hammer: :hammer: :hammer: :hammer: :hammer: :hammer: :hammer: :hammer: :hammer:
Title: Re: INTAQAM-E-MUHABBAT (3rd Update)
Post by: DesiGirl on November 05, 2013, 12:13:48 pm
update dy doooooooooooooo
Title: Re: INTAQAM-E-MUHABBAT (3rd Update)
Post by: wajahat on November 05, 2013, 12:46:30 pm
 theek hy aj update karta hon.
Abi aa kr betha hon ghar. Suba 8am se ek kam pe gya tha. Update poori ready samjo just final touch daina hy
Title: Re: INTAQAM-E-MUHABBAT (3rd Update)
Post by: adnan1 on November 06, 2013, 12:31:39 am
 theek hy aj update karta hon.
Abi aa kr betha hon ghar. Suba 8am se ek kam pe gya tha. Update poori ready samjo just final touch daina hy

yaar tum hari abhi tak final touch hi nahi howa yaar had hai ustad G :hammer: :hammer: :hammer:
Title: Re: INTAQAM-E-MUHABBAT (3rd Update)
Post by: wajahat on November 06, 2013, 01:24:59 am
Aj update kr k sona hy maine. Dnt worry yar
Title: Re: INTAQAM-E-MUHABBAT (3rd Update)
Post by: sonu59 on November 06, 2013, 09:17:27 am
Oye teri hosla afzai b 10 no k chiter se karoon ga agar update nai ki to bohat fit hai zara hat k muje intezar na karwana warna :D
hahahahahaha intazar karwane mein apun hitler hy aho
100 % saheh ha wajaht
Title: Re: INTAQAM-E-MUHABBAT (3rd Update)
Post by: wajahat on November 06, 2013, 11:56:49 am
Oye teri hosla afzai b 10 no k chiter se karoon ga agar update nai ki to bohat fit hai zara hat k muje intezar na karwana warna :D
hahahahahaha intazar karwane mein apun hitler hy aho
100 % saheh ha wajaht
hahahahahahahahahahahaha
Title: Re: INTAQAM-E-MUHABBAT (3rd Update)
Post by: DesiGirl on November 06, 2013, 01:01:36 pm
Aj update kr k sona hy maine. Dnt worry yar
aap tu lazmi update ker ky he soy ho gy na?? shayd mujhy nazar nai a rai ho gi :hammer:
Title: Re: INTAQAM-E-MUHABBAT (3rd Update)
Post by: smoki on November 06, 2013, 01:36:04 pm
Bohat wait karata hai bahi
Title: Re: INTAQAM-E-MUHABBAT (3rd Update)
Post by: wajahat on November 06, 2013, 01:49:30 pm
Aj update kr k sona hy maine. Dnt worry yar
aap tu lazmi update ker ky he soy ho gy na?? shayd mujhy nazar nai a rai ho gi :hammer:
rat jo huwa tmhare samne hy chit chat se fursat ni mili muje khud bura lag raha is waqt :hang:
Title: Re: INTAQAM-E-MUHABBAT (3rd Update)
Post by: adnan1 on November 06, 2013, 10:58:40 pm
kia yaar ustad G had hai bahi kal ki tu samj ati hai par aj ka pora din kia jag mara jo ik apdate nahi kar pay chado yaar naraz kardita tu si apny nikamy shagird ko
Title: Re: INTAQAM-E-MUHABBAT (3rd Update)
Post by: DesiGirl on November 11, 2013, 10:44:40 am
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Title: Re: INTAQAM-E-MUHABBAT (3rd Update)
Post by: virgonakhan on November 11, 2013, 01:20:35 pm
Soch lo bhai ...agar update nahi ki tho is sey aagey ki kahani mai write karna shuru kar dounga..aur pir khud hi soch lo ke kahani ka kia hashar hoga:oops:
Title: Re: INTAQAM-E-MUHABBAT (3rd Update)
Post by: wajahat on November 11, 2013, 03:07:26 pm
Soch lo bhai ...agar update nahi ki tho is sey aagey ki kahani mai write karna shuru kar dounga..aur pir khud hi soch lo ke kahani ka kia hashar hoga:oops:
 nahiii
Meri story pe alam-e-ghaib ki zuban na bolna
Tm bole to DG ne b shuro ho jana :hang:
Title: Re: INTAQAM-E-MUHABBAT (3rd Update)
Post by: DesiGirl on November 11, 2013, 03:08:03 pm
Soch lo bhai ...agar update nahi ki tho is sey aagey ki kahani mai write karna shuru kar dounga..aur pir khud hi soch lo ke kahani ka kia hashar hoga:oops:
 nahiii
Meri story pe alam-e-ghaib ki zuban na bolna
Tm bole to DG ne b shuro ho jana :hang:
main ny boycott ker dia hoa hy is topic ka wesy h :ban:
Title: Re: INTAQAM-E-MUHABBAT (3rd Update)
Post by: wajahat on November 11, 2013, 03:14:16 pm
Soch lo bhai ...agar update nahi ki tho is sey aagey ki kahani mai write karna shuru kar dounga..aur pir khud hi soch lo ke kahani ka kia hashar hoga:oops:
 nahiii
Meri story pe alam-e-ghaib ki zuban na bolna
Tm bole to DG ne b shuro ho jana :hang:
main ny boycott ker dia hoa hy is topic ka wesy h :ban:
 o meri dushman naraz hy
Chal main update daine laga hon abi k abi.
Title: Re: INTAQAM-E-MUHABBAT (3rd Update)
Post by: DesiGirl on November 11, 2013, 03:20:43 pm
Soch lo bhai ...agar update nahi ki tho is sey aagey ki kahani mai write karna shuru kar dounga..aur pir khud hi soch lo ke kahani ka kia hashar hoga:oops:
 nahiii
Meri story pe alam-e-ghaib ki zuban na bolna
Tm bole to DG ne b shuro ho jana :hang:
main ny boycott ker dia hoa hy is topic ka wesy h :ban:
 o meri dushman naraz hy
Chal main update daine laga hon abi k abi.
\itni aldi ki b ab zarurat nai. araam sy dena mager theek tarah sy likh ker dena update. chawal na maarna koi huh
Title: Re: INTAQAM-E-MUHABBAT (4th Update)
Post by: wajahat on November 11, 2013, 03:57:45 pm
 Salam...
I know
I know
Ap logon ko ghusa aa raha hoga k aa gai yad isko b story update karni ki.
Bs plz mauf kar dijiye ga
Ainda itna late ni honga.
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Arsal ne darwaza khola to samne muhallay k kafi log kharay thay.
Is se pehle k arsal un se kuch pochta ya samj pata.
Ek hata kata banda agay barha aur bola "sun oey kya tamasha lagaya hy tu ne?"
What? Maine kya kiya hy?
Arsal herangi se bola.
Tm ek na-mehram ladki k sath ek hi chhat k neechy reh rahe ho.
Ye theek ni hy.
Wo shakhs dahara.
Qasim ji ye hamara masla hy ap kaun hote ho aesi bat karne wale
Arsal cheekhte huwe bola. Wo usy pehchan gya tha siwaye awara gardi k qasim ka koi kam na tha aur ab wo ghairat ka jhanda pakar k khara tha jo khud dosaron ki izat ko takta rehta tha.
"beta ye ghalat hy muhallay mein log baten bna rahe hain, hum to tmhare bhalay k liye aaye hain tm us ladki se shadi krlo ya koi hal nikalo"
Ek sufaid darhi wale bazurg bole.
Wah wah wah mera bhala?
Tb ap kahan thy jb mere parents chin gaye, jb main bhooka marta raha tb to koi nai aaya k 2 bachy mushkil mein hain to koi sath dain inka. Aj apko bra kheyal aaya hy
Arsal ka lehja sakht tha.
Tb tak amber b gate tak aa gai thi.
Log apni apni baten bole ja rahe thay k ek aur lafanga bola "wo aa gai rakhel iski"
Arsal ne jese hi ye suna wo us pe jhapat para, jb tak logon ne unhen churaya tb tak wo uske naak ki haddi tor chuka tha.
Ek aur admi ne us ladke ko wahan se dhakay dy kr bhaga dia.
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Ap sb yahin ruko agr apne iman k pakay ho to.
Ye kehte huwe arsal palta aur sehmi hui amber ko sath khench kr andar le gya.
Logon ka tola gate pe khara sargoshian karne lag gya.
Arsal ne andar jate hi ghafoor chacha ko call ki wo itfaq se ghar pe thay usne sb kuch unhen btaya aur kaha k foran ek nikah khawaan layen aur hamara nikah karwa dain.
Chacha ne usy hosla dia k koi garam khon wali harkat na karna main aata hon.
20 minuts mein chacha unke ghar pe thay.
Unhon ne muhallay daron ko samjhaya km unki beizti zeyada ki k tmhare apne gharon mein b bete betiyan hain kisi pe ilzam tarashi karne aur shak karne se pehle unka chehra daikh liya kro.
Chacha ne sara intazam kiya aur agly din un donu ka nikah ho gya.
Arsal to chup chap shadi karna chahata tha par ghafoor chacha na mane aur unhon ne theek thak intazam kar dala.
Amber ko wo apne ghar le kr gaye jahan arsal ek choti si barat le kr geya aur amber ko beyah kr apne ghar le aaya.
Jahan wo 2nu ek dojay k ho kr buht khush thay wahin unhen apne parents k na hone ka dukh b tha.
Shayd dunia ki pehli rukhsati thi jis mein dulha b ro raha tha.
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Hujla-e-aroosi mein puhanch kr arsal hawanak bana khara raha k kya kron???
Phr ehmaqana harkat ki aur bahir aa geya. Amber heran reh gai k isy kya huwa hy.
Arsal k ghar pe ghafoor chacha and family b mojod thay unke bolne ki awazen sun kar wo andar amber k pas chala gya.
Wo kafi upset tha usy samj ni aa raha tha k kare to kare kya?
Jb wo budhoo buht dair tak yahan wahan tehalta raha to amber se na raha geya aur wo bol pari
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"agr sari rat yehi karna hy to bta do, main lait jaon, kamar toot gai aese bethe bethe"
Arsal kuch na bola par himmat kr k bed pe ja betha.
Usne kuch pal apne hawas ko jama kiya aur phr amber ka ghoonghat utha dia.
Wo ek lehzay mein apna ap bhool geya, amber haseen to shuro se thi par dulhan ban kar wo ek sarapa-e-qayamat lag rahi thi jo uske dil pe bijliyan gira raha tha.
Arsal ki zuban ko jese tala lag geya tha wo kuch bol na paya. Usne bs dheere se apni pocket mein hath dala aur ek anghoti nikal kr dheere se amber ki ungli mein pehna di.
Amber ne sharmate huwe palken uthayien aur agly hi lamhy arsal ko apna ap ek neelay bhanwar mein doobta mehsoos huwa.
Wo bechain sa ho geya. Is sada se kamre mein jis mein bs ek bed aur almari thi amber ki mojodgi usy jannat ka nazara krwa rahi thi.
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Usne akhir hosla kr k amber ka hath pakra aur bolta chala gya.
"mujhe aj pta ni kya ho gya tha k tmhare pas aane se jhijak raha tha, shayd ye sb socha ni tha, ya pta ni tmhare samne meri sitti gum jati hy, par jo b hy
I am happy , and i love u.
Amber k hont chup rahe par uski ankhen bol rahi thi.
Phr barg-e-gulab mein jumbash hui aur arsal k kano ko unki umeed ka ras mil geya
I love u too, amber ne ye keh kr ankhen jhuka lien.
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Arsal se ab sabar ni ho raha tha usne jhat amber ko apni bahon mein bhar liya.
Wo cheekhti reh gai k mujhe change to karne do par jesa behra ho gya tha.
Phr wo raat sehar hone tak intaha-e-ishq k sahar mein rahi.
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Waqt guzarta gya. Wo dono ab ek dam normal ho gaye thay aur apni nayi zindagi mein buht khush thay.
Wo acha kama rahe thay aur khoob enjoy kar rahay thay.
Unka har din eid tha aur har rat suhag rat jesi thi.
Par wo kehte hain na k waqt ka pta ni chalta kb kya se kya ho jaye?
Ye unko b pta na tha.
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2 mah guzar gaye unki shadi huwe wo behtareen firm mein kam kar rahe thay sath mein acha time guzarta tha.
Par ek masla tha wo ye k unka boss senti tha marriad mulazimo se wo hamesha na-rawa salook karta tha. Pta ni kiyu???
To arsal and amber ne apni shadi ka btaya hi nai kisi ko. Wo wahan bas cousins samjhe jate thay.
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Amber ko kuch dino se apne boss majeed sheikh ka rawiya badla sa lag raha tha ajeeb sa bartao tha uska wo na to isay bura samj skti thi aur na acha.
Majeed sheikh 45 sala marriad banda tha , shehar ka ameer aur behtareen business man mana jata tha.
Amber chah kar b us pe shak na kar payi. Usne arsal ko b kuch na btaya. Aur arsal par bhi majeed sahab kafi meharban thay par arsal ko shak nai huwa usay lagta tha k wo kafi mehanti hai to is waja se boss uski qadar karta hai.
Par ....
Ek aur imtehan unka muntizar tha haftay ka din tha wo dono boht khush thay ek to weekend tha dosara Arsal ki birthday thi wo aj ki raat ko dil se manana chahate thay unhon ne iski khoob tayari ki thi.
Magar boss ko dora para aur usne extra work unke galay dal dia aur arsal ko ek payment daine k liye bhej dia halan k ye uska kam ni tha.
Par jiska kam tha wo aaya nai tha arsal to khushi se payment daine geya k boss ko us pe itna aitbar ho gya hy.
Magar wo nai janta tha k agay kya hone wala hy???
Agr wo janta to kbi na jata
Par wo nikal chuka tha....
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Majeed intaha darjay ka kamina tha uski niyat kharab thi amber pe, moun se beti kehne wala wo insan dil mein shaitan paal kar betha tha usne ek mansobay k tehat sbko bhej dia aur apne ek khas chamchay ,amber aur arsal ko rok liya phr be waqt arsal ko payment k liye bheja aur amber ko apne room mein bulwaya.
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Amber andar gai to majeed buht alag dikh raha tha amber ko thora sa ajeeb laga par wo aram se beth gai.
Majeed ne usy ek project ki details btani shuro ki phr wo utha aur tehalne lag gya.
Amber documents khol k bethi thi majeed sahib uske peechy aaye aur uske kandhon pe hath rakh diye.
Amber ek jhatkay se khari ho gai.
Aur herangi se majeed ko daikhne lagi jiski ankhon mein nachati darandigi usy saf dikh rahi thi.
Is se pehle k wo kuch bolti ya karti
Majeed bola
"tmhara cousin ab tak mere admiyon k qabzay mein hoga, agr tm ne wesa nai kiya jesa main kahon to usy ya to maar dia jaye ga ya phir hath pair tor kar phenk dia jaye ga aur ye bhi ho skta hy k wo usy kuch na kahen par paisy le jayen ge aur main ghaban k ilzam mein usy 7,8 sal k liye jail bhijwa doonga"
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Amber ko apne kano pe yaqeen nai aa raha tha.
Us shaitan ko kuch b kehna bekar tha. Wo darwazay ki taraf bhagi. Magar ye kya darwaza lock tha.
Majeed hansane laga
Phr bola
"shokat bahir pehra dy raha hy ye kamra sound proof hai, aur ab yehi samjho k hum yahan nai hain"
Amber ki jan nikal gai
Par wo kamzor ni thi k ro parti ya minaten karti usne ek guldan utha liya aur majeed ko gusay ki nazron se daikhne lagi.
Usy is waqt khud se zeyada arsal ka kheyal aa raha tha jisko us zaleel insan ne jhooti payment k bahane pta nai kahan bhej dia tha.
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Arsal nikal to para magar usy address samjhne mein masla ho raha tha.
Usne ja kar ek PCO se boss k office ka number milaya.koi utha nai raha tha. Usne phir milaya phr koi jawab nai.
Usne phr se milaya
To kisi ne uthaya magar bola koi b nai wo rakhne laga tha k usy amber ki cheekh sunai di
"kutay peechy hat ja warna maar dalon gi tmhen , meri izat itni sasti ni hy"
Ek lamhay k hazarven hisay mein arsal sb samj chuka tha. Ek lamha zaya kiye bina wo car mein betha aur rukh apne office ki taraf ghuma dia.
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TO BE CONTINUED.....
Title: Re: INTAQAM-E-MUHABBAT (4th Update)
Post by: DesiGirl on November 11, 2013, 04:12:52 pm
chalo aa gai post. ab mein araam sy kal persoon parchoth read kar loon gi.. thanx for uploading :innocent:
Title: Re: INTAQAM-E-MUHABBAT (4th Update)
Post by: smoki on November 11, 2013, 04:31:50 pm
Dair aayed dursat aayed
raat ko paroon ga abi to
boss di aaho :)
Title: Re: INTAQAM-E-MUHABBAT (4th Update)
Post by: wajahat on November 11, 2013, 04:57:09 pm
chalo aa gai post. ab mein araam sy kal persoon parchoth read kar loon gi.. thanx for uploading :innocent:
u r welcome
Title: Re: INTAQAM-E-MUHABBAT (4th Update)
Post by: wajahat on November 11, 2013, 04:57:44 pm
Dair aayed dursat aayed
raat ko paroon ga abi to
boss di aaho :)
sure pa ji
Title: Re: INTAQAM-E-MUHABBAT (4th Update)
Post by: DesiGirl on November 12, 2013, 10:02:43 am
achi update hy.. goooooooood going.

per yaar pata lag ra hy ky aap ny jaldi mein likhi hy or doosari bar parhi b nai hy warna aap boht se lines ko change karty i am sure.

but first attempt mein b likhi hoi main aap ny kafi acha control mein rakha.. gooooood work....

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ab agli update ka kab tak wait karn aparhy ga? :dots::dots::dots:
Title: Re: INTAQAM-E-MUHABBAT (4th Update)
Post by: wajahat on November 12, 2013, 11:38:19 am
achi update hy.. goooooooood going.

per yaar pata lag ra hy ky aap ny jaldi mein likhi hy or doosari bar parhi b nai hy warna aap boht se lines ko change karty i am sure.

but first attempt mein b likhi hoi main aap ny kafi acha control mein rakha.. gooooood work....

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ab agli update ka kab tak wait karn aparhy ga? :dots::dots::dots:
 han last part jaldi mein likha tha.
Thanx dear for appriciation
Han next update k liye kuch wait to karna paray ga
Title: Re: INTAQAM-E-MUHABBAT (4th Update)
Post by: virgonakhan on November 12, 2013, 01:40:40 pm
 :clap: :clap: :clap: :clap: :clap: :clap: Zabardast update wajahath bhai :rockon: :rockon:..aur yaad rakhna bhai agar next update ziada late howi tho.....mai ney likhna shuru kar deni hai story.hahahaha :yes:
Title: Re: INTAQAM-E-MUHABBAT (4th Update)
Post by: wajahat on November 12, 2013, 01:55:02 pm
:clap: :clap: :clap: :clap: :clap: :clap: Zabardast update wajahath bhai :rockon: :rockon:..aur yaad rakhna bhai agar next update ziada late howi tho.....mai ney likhna shuru kar deni hai story.hahahaha :yes:
 thank u so much bro
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Nai hota late muje pta hy :punk:
Title: Re: INTAQAM-E-MUHABBAT (4th Update)
Post by: adnan1 on November 15, 2013, 02:54:14 pm
good update ustad G  :rockon: :rockon: :rockon:

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Title: Re: INTAQAM-E-MUHABBAT (4th Update)
Post by: wajahat on November 15, 2013, 03:36:33 pm
good update ustad G  :rockon: :rockon: :rockon:

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thank u so much
Title: Re: INTAQAM-E-MUHABBAT (4th Update)
Post by: shumaila_waseem on November 15, 2013, 03:48:38 pm
nice
Title: Re: INTAQAM-E-MUHABBAT (4th Update)
Post by: wajahat on November 15, 2013, 04:33:35 pm
nice
thanx
Welcome to yum
Title: Re: INTAQAM-E-MUHABBAT (4th Update)
Post by: virgonakhan on November 15, 2013, 05:06:50 pm
Wajahat bhai is story mai tho aisa kuch bhi nahi jis ki wajha sey aap ney muharram mai break laga di hay..update yaar :yes:
Title: Re: INTAQAM-E-MUHABBAT (4th Update)
Post by: wajahat on November 15, 2013, 09:32:39 pm
Wajahat bhai is story mai tho aisa kuch bhi nahi jis ki wajha sey aap ney muharram mai break laga di hay..update yaar :yes:
kehte to theek ho yar
Hmm
Chalo karta hon update
Title: Re: INTAQAM-E-MUHABBAT (4th Update)
Post by: wajahat on December 06, 2013, 04:06:24 am
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Title: Re: INTAQAM-E-MUHABBAT (5th Update on Feb 26 2014)
Post by: wajahat on February 26, 2014, 06:10:53 am
 Majeed Sheikh agay barha aur amber pe jhapta magar wo side pe ho gai. Wo palat kar agay huwa aur amber ko phr dhamki di.
"maan ja ladki warna tera hashar b bura hoga aur arsalan ka b"
Magar amber pe uski dhamki ka asar na huwa
"tu jo kar sakta hai kar beghairat insan, tere jese to apni beti ko b na chorain"
Majeed ye sun kar aag bagola ho gya aur usne amber pe chalang laga di.
Par amber taiz nikli usne guldan agay kar dia.
Majeed ka sar zor se guldan mein laga wo gir gya tha. Uska sar phat chuka tha.
Wo jaldi se utha, amber peechy iss chakar mein uska pair ek kursi mein ulajh geya wo jb tak us se azad hui majeed tb tak uske sar pe puhanch chuka tha.
Usne ek zor daar thapar amber k moun pe mara wo palat kar peechy giri uska sar zor se table pe laga wo chakra kar reh gai.
Is se pehle k wo sanbhalti, majeed ne usko gardan se pakar kar 2,3 dafa table pe mara,
Amber neem behosh si ho kr farsh pe gir gai.
Majeed khoon se bhara apna matha saf karte huwe, shetani muskurahat k sath agay barha.
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Arsal andhi ki trah car urata huwa office wapis puhancha.
Ghusay se uski ankhon se lahu tapak raha tha.
Lift tak puhanchne mein usay chand lamhy lage aur 2 minuts bad wo apne office floor pe tha.
Poora floor khali tha wo bhagta huwa majeed k room tak puhancha jahan pe shokat kisi santari ki tarah khara tha.
"amber kahan hy? Tum yahan kya kar rahe ho?"
Arsal ne jatay hi sawal dagha.
Arsal ko daikh kar shokat k chehre pe hawaiyan urh rahi thein.
Mujhe kya pta kahan hy?
Shokat ne dhatai se jawab dia.
Arsal ne usko peechay dhakel kar darwaza kholna chaha par wo locked tha.
"keys kahan hain?"
Arsal ne ghusay se poocha.
Shokat chup raha aur peechy hatne laga.
Arsal ko sb samj aa raha tha wo us pe jhapat para.
Shokat ek hath ki maar sabit huwa wo adh muwa farsh pe para tha aur arsal uski jaib se keys nikal chuka tha.
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Majeed sheikh apni fatah pe khush tha ek bebas ladki ko neem behosh kar k,
Ab wo apna shetani mansooba poora karna chahata tha.
Usne apna coat utara , tie se amber k hath bandh diye
Aur phr pani pi kar amber pe jhukne laga tha
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Office ka darwaza ek jhatky se khula
Samne arsal khara tha.
Jiski ankhon se lahu tapak raha tha, majeed sheikh ka chehra bujh geya, uske hathon k totay urh gaye.
Arsal ne aao daikha na taao usne agay barh kar zor dar laat mari jo majeed k jabrray pe lagi wo dakrata huwa peechy ko ulat geya
Arsal ne usko galay se pakar kar uthaya aur poori taqat se muka uske pait pe dy mara aur phr wo us pe toot para
Kai latain, mukay marne k bad arsal ne usy utha kar sheeshy k table pe dy mara
Majeed table pe gira sheesha toot geya aur ek tukra uske pehloo mein utar geya
Wo dard se chilaya magar usi waqt arsal ne zor dar muka uski gardan pe mar dia
Wo neem behosh ho geya
Is se pehle k arsal aur kuch karta usy amber k karahne ki awaz aai usne amber ki taraf daikha uske sar se thora khoon nikla huwa tha
Arsal ko phr ghusa aaya usne poori jan se majeed ki tangon k beech laat raseed kardi
Us shetan k moun se ek falak shigaf cheekh nikli aur phr wo khamosh ho geya
Shayd mar geya tha
Par arsal ko parwah kb thi.
Usy to bs fikar thi to apni amber ki, apni izat ki, apni muhabbat ki.
Amber hosh mein thi aur phati phati ankhon se sb daikh rahi thi.
Arsal ne agay barh kr usy uthaya aur uske hath kholay.
Amber uske galay lag gai aur phoot phoot kar rone lagi.
Arsal ne usay tassali di aur pani pilaya.
Arsal kya ye mar geya hy?
Amber ne sawal kiya.
Acha hoga agar mar geya hy to dharti ka seena khush ho geya boojh kam hone pe
Arsal ne safak lehjay mein jawab dia.
Ab kya hoga?
Police aaye gi?
Amber ka lehja sehma huwa tha.
Kuch ni hota. Aane do jo b aata hy hum ne kuch ghalat ni kiya.
Chalo chalen yahan se.
Par arsal daikho to ye zinda hy ya ni?
Amber ki bat pe usne agay barh kar majeed ki nabz check ki.
Zinda hy haramzada
Dil to karta hy khatam kar doon yahin pe.
Arsal leave him plz
Lets go
Ok theek hy chalo apna huliya darust karo hum chalte hain
Wo donu apne kapre set kar k, hath moun saf kar k office se nikal aaye.
Unhon ne elevator ki taraf qadam barha diye aur ye na daikha k shokat ghaib tha.
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Wo ground floor pe puhanch kr bahir nikle hi thay k police van aa kar ruki aur us mein se 4,5 police wale utray jinke sath shokat b tha
Wo dono thoray hat kar thay magar shokat ne daikh liya
Wo rahe dono
Wohi hain jo boss ka 50 lakh kha gaye hain aur opar boss ka qatal kar aaye hain.
Shokat ne kamal darjay ki fankari k sath uchalte huwe chila kar jhoot bola.
Arsal aur amber k ye sun kar hosh urh gaye.
Police wale unki taraf bhagay
Arsal ko aane wali qayamat dikhne lagi usne amber ka hath pakra aur sarpat bhagne laga
Bhagte bhagte wo kafi door aa gaye par police wale peechy hi thay akhir thak kar police walon ne hawai fire kiya
Wo dono dar gaye magar phr b arsal amber ko le kar ek jaga chup geya.
Wo ek park k pas thay jahan pe ek purana ghar tha jiske pas masjid thi aur wahan pe bargad ka purana darakhat tha ek dam masjid k sath, wo kafi bara tha aur masjid ki deewar ki taraf se khokhla tha uska tana wo wahan pe kharay ho kar chup gaye.
Magar wo zeyada dair wahan ni ruk sakte thay
Amber sehmi hui si arsal k seene se lagi hui thi.
Ae my life
Tmhen yahan se jana hoga.
Arsal ne sargoshi ki.
Kiyu? Never
Amber ne sawal mein jawab dy dia.
Pagal ladki
Hum pe 50 lakh ki chori ka ilzam hy aur majeed adh muwa para tha janti ho pakray gaye to jail jayen ge aur main tmhen zaleel hote ni daikh sakta.
Janti hoon par main tmhen chor kr to ni jane wali.
Amber ne sapat lehjay mein kaha.
Arsal ne uska chehra apne hathon mein liya
Meri jan tmhen jana hoga main police ko dosari taraf le jata hon tm wo samne wali galli mein jao wo tang b hy aur andhere mein hy tm main road pe puhancho gi agay se left ko jana pehli gali mein ok aur phr left aur chalti jana tum hamare area mein puhanch jao gi.
Arsal aur bolne laga
Magar amber ne phir inkar kar dia
Plz amber tmhen meri qasam. Jao aur seedhi ghafoor chacha k pas jana plz go.
Arsal ne iltija ki
Amber ne bebasi se uski taraf daikha. Arsal ne apne hont uske honton pe rakh diye.
Itne mein police walon ki awazen sunai di to wo alag ho gaye arsal ne usy ishara kiya wo dubdubai ankhon se usy daikhti hui palti aur bhagti chali gai.
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Arsal ne uski ulat simat mein dorr laga di.
Wo ja rahe hain pakro
Ek police wala chilaya
Andhere mein wo ye na daikh paya k arsal akela hy.
Wo andha dhundh bhagta raha phir ek fire huwa goli uski taang mein lagi aur wo uchal kar foot path se takraya uski ankhon k agay andhera chaa geya.
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Ankh khuli to wo hospital mein tha. Uski taang aur sar pe patti bandhi thi. Usay sb yad aa raha tha aur wo aane wale waqat k liye tayar tha.
Parinday chehchaha rahe thay bahir, matlab wo poori rat behosh raha tha.
Wo sooni ankhon se opar daikh raha tha.
Kafi waqt guzar geya phr ek nurse aai usy hosh mein daikh kar agay aai uska hal chal poocha phr wapis palat gai.
Thori dair bad ek inspector andar aaya.
Mr arsalan hosh mein aa hi gaye tm. Jail jane k liye
Arsal chup raha.
U know arsal
Tm ne apna ap barbad kar liya. Buht bura kiya tm ne.
Inspector zara sakht lehjay mein bola.
Is dafa arsal ne usy ankh bhar kr daikha wo usi ki age ka tha.
Main begunah hoon maine kuch ghalat ni kiya.
Tm begunah ho? Tm pe 50 lakh k ghaban ka ilzam hy, tm ne apne boss ko maar maar kar adh muwa kar dia. Uska ek hath, 2 pasliyan toot chuki hain , pehlo mein sheeshay ka tukra utar dia ,aur to aur tum ne to shayd usy namard b bana dia hy.
Inspector gusay se bola.
Acha huwa namard ban geya hy to wo behan ka taka meri izat...
Aur phr arsal sb bolta chala geya.
I am sorry arsalan par tm kuch sabit ni kar sakte
Tmhara wahid sahara baqol tmhare, tmhari wife thi
But she is not any more.
Inspector ne thanday lehjay mein jawab dia.
What? Kya kaha? Where is amber? Tm logon ne kya kiya uske sath?
Arsal ghuraya
Hum ne kuch ni kiya. Tm ne usay bhag dia tha na. Wo bhagte huwe truck k neechy aa gai aur moka par hi dam tor gai
I am so sorry
Arsal ko apna ap bikharta huwa mehsos huwa
Usne halak phaar kar chilana shuro kar dia
Aur kuch seconds bad wo phr behosh ho chuka tha.
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Inpector ne jo btaya wo theek tha amber na to chacha ghafoor k han puhanchi aur na hi apne ghar.
Uski kuchli hui si lash mili jiski shanakhat uske kapron se hui.
Arsal neem pagal ho chuka tha. Chacha ghafoor ko b ye sadma le betha unhen heart attack huwa wo b hospital puhanch gaye.
Arsal ko bs itna hosh tha k amber ko dafan kiya ja raha hy.
Uske andar jese jeene ki umang khatam ho gai thi
Wo kisi robot ki tarah zinda tha.
Uska case adalat mein puhancha ghafoor chacha ne sar torr koshish ki magar arsal k moun se ek word na nikla.
Bina uske bolay koi b wakeel kuch ni kar sakta tha.
Inspector talha arsal se mutasir tha usy b arsal sacha laga magar bina saboot k uske hath b bandhay huwe thay.
Aur jo saboot thay wo sb arsal k khilaf thay aur khud wo kuch bolne ko tayar ni tha.
Hona kya tha ek sal case chalta raha arsal ki halat to behtar ho gai wo bolne b laga magar case k hawalay se ek lafz b bolne pe razi na huwa usne ghafoor chacha aur talha waghera ko ek hi jawab dia
"main apni pakeeza muhabbat ko is gandgi mein ni ghaseet sakta, wo chali gai hy bs sb khatam"
aur phr arsal ko iqdam e qatal aur ghaban k ilzam mein 6 sal ki saza ho gai.
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Wo to bhala ho talha ka aur uske jigri yar yasir ka jo buht pehle america chala geya tha
Un dono ne arsal ka case phr se khulwa dia.
Yasir 7 sal bad jb wapis pakistan aaya to arsal se milne puhancha magar wahan usy dardnak kahani mili wo tarap kar reh geya.
Wo jail mein arsal se milne aaya aur arsal ko manane laga k main tmhen nikalon ga muje sach btao.
Magar arsal ne is baray mein bat karne se inkar kar dia.
Yasir ko talha ne sb bta dia tha magar wo arsal se sun'na chahata tha aur wo kuch btane pe razi nai tha.
Magar yasir b apni dhun ka paka tha. Wo har haftay aata aur arsal ko manata.
Akhir arsal ki khamoshi tooti aur usne sb kuch usy bta dia.
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Yasir ka khoon khol geya. Wo ab itna ameer tha k majeed jese ko kharay kharay khareed le. Wese b yasir ek tez ladka tha.
Wo badmashi b karta raha tha aur college k dino mein wo apne college ka don tha.
Usne majeed aur uske chamchay shokat dono ko uthwa liya.
Wo 2 pal b uski maar na seh paye. Aur sb kuch qabool kar liya.
Usne wo sb record kr liya aur phr inspector talha ki help se case reopen karwaya.
Is dafa majeed sheikh ki ek na chali yasir k paisy aur taqat ne usy dhool chata di.
Arsal ko ba izat bari kar dia aur majee, shokat ko jail jana para jal sazi , iqdam e asmat dari k cases mein.
Arsal riha ho geya magar amber ki yadon ki qaid se na nikal paya 3 sal guzar chuke thay magar wo wahin khara tha.
Yasir ne usy apne sath le jana chaha magar wo na mana,
Ghafoor chacha ne job le kr di magar wo na kar paya.
Ab wo bs badmashi karta tha aur ameer logon k maal pe hath saf karta tha.
Magar
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Ye kya???
3 sal 4 maah bad wo neeli ankhen uske samne thein
Ye awaz?
Jisy usne dafan hote daikha tha.
Ye chehra to kho geya tha.
Arsal pagalon ki tarah chila raha tha apne bal noch raha tha
Aur wo neeli ankhen pas aati ja rahi thein.....
Title: Re: INTAQAM-E-MUHABBAT (5th Update on Feb 26 2014)
Post by: Jutt Sabh on May 14, 2014, 12:11:48 am
yar jal uppdate karo :yes:
Title: Re: INTAQAM-E-MUHABBAT (5th Update on Feb 26 2014)
Post by: wajahat on May 14, 2014, 09:59:06 am
yar jal uppdate karo :yes:
 bs bhai apne pangon mein aesa uljha hon na k time hi nai mil pata mind free nai hota.
Ab kher poori try kronga likhne ki
Title: Re: INTAQAM-E-MUHABBAT (5th Update on Feb 26 2014)
Post by: wajahat on January 19, 2016, 04:28:32 pm
soch raha hoon isay poora kar doon. Agar koi read karny wala hai to.
Title: Re: INTAQAM-E-MUHABBAT (5th Update on Feb 26 2014)
Post by: Story Maker on January 19, 2016, 07:17:07 pm
soch raha hoon isay poora kar doon. Agar koi read karny wala hai to.
March 14, 2013, ko start hone wali yeh kahani mujhey yahan lai thi, aur aap... khaier... aap ki marzi
Title: Re: INTAQAM-E-MUHABBAT (5th Update on Feb 26 2014)
Post by: wajahat on January 19, 2016, 08:48:31 pm
soch raha hoon isay poora kar doon. Agar koi read karny wala hai to.
March 14, 2013, ko start hone wali yeh kahani mujhey yahan lai thi, aur aap... khaier... aap ki marzi
i am going to finish it.
Title: Re: INTAQAM-E-MUHABBAT (5th Update on Feb 26 2014)
Post by: Story Maker on January 19, 2016, 10:00:46 pm




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Title: Re: INTAQAM-E-MUHABBAT (5th Update on Feb 26 2014)
Post by: Dastan Go on April 15, 2016, 04:27:21 pm
achi story hai ho sake to complete karo bro
Title: Re: INTAQAM-E-MUHABBAT (5th Update on Feb 26 2014)
Post by: wajahat on May 27, 2016, 12:32:05 am
Next update ka kuch part abhi likha hai mainy kal tak umeed hai k post kar paon ga
Title: Re: INTAQAM-E-MUHABBAT (5th Update on Feb 26 2014)
Post by: Story Maker on May 27, 2016, 06:01:28 pm
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Title: Re: INTAQAM-E-MUHABBAT (5th Update on Feb 26 2014)
Post by: Dastan Go on May 27, 2016, 11:59:30 pm
waiting for the the update and thanks wajahat bhai restart karne k lia
Title: Re: INTAQAM-E-MUHABBAT (5th Update on Feb 26 2014)
Post by: wajahat on May 28, 2016, 04:08:51 pm
Amber ny arsal ka ishara pa kar ulti simat mein daud laga di.
Us ny ek do dafa peechay palat kar dekha usay bas police walon ka shor hi sunayi diya ya ird gird k kuch log dikhayi diye par na arsal dikha na koi police wala.
Woh sarpat bhagty huwe ek link road par se ho kar main road cross kar gayi samny zara kam abad area tha aur us se agay chacha ghafoor ka ghar.
Tabhi ek tarf se koi dahara ruk haramzadi. Amber ny apni left side py dekha to do log bike py sawar uski taraf aa rahy thay.
Amber shayd na darti par unke hathon mein revolver aur guns dekh kar woh us area ki ek link road par bhag uthi.
Jab bike walon ny dekha k woh ulti tarf bhag nikli hai to unho ny firing shuro kardi.
3 bullets amber ko apny paas se guzarti feel hui.
Woh thak chuki thi aur buri tarah dar gayi thi Mr. Zaman ny usko bohat naaz nakhron k sath paala tha usko kabhi needle bhi chubh jati thi to woh bohat preshan hoty thay.
Aur usko kam karny se hi rok detay thay. Ab wohi amber bechari police walon se chupti hui do ghunda type mardon k agay bhag rahi thi.
Par jan bari pyari cheez hai aur agar sath izat ka bhi khoof ho to insan kafi himmat kar jata hai yehi hal us time amber ka tha.
Us ny soch liya tha k woh ya to inky hath nahi aaye gi ya jan de gi. Par zinda inke hath nahi aaye gi.
Andhera kafi phel chuka tha aur bike ki head light thi hi nahi.
Tabhi amber ek under construction building mein ghus gayi
Bike waly ab bike se utar kar uske peechy lapkay aur ek dafa phir galiyan bakty huwe usko rukny ka kaha unho ny par amber to gum ho chuki thi.
Woh ghusay se cheekhny chilany lagy aur ek do hawai fire bhi kardiye unho ny..

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Malik Rauf apni car mein betha cigar k kash laga raha tha driver drive kar raha tha. Mosam theek tha aur andhera phel gya tha woh apni sochon mein gum tha k achanak breaks lagny ki awaz aayi aur car lehrati hui agay ja kar ruk gayi.
Kya huwa Sagheer?
Malik rauf ny driver se sawal kiya.
Saab ji koi takray hai car se.
Kya keh rahy ho? Dikhta nahi tumhen?
Malik sahib zara ghusay se bolay.
Saab ji khud hi bhagty huwe aa takrayi woh. Main kya karta?
Driver ny safai pesh ki.
"Takrayi"
Kya woh koi aurat hai?
Unho ne phir se sawal dagha.
Aur apna seat ballet kholny lagy.
Ji ji saab ji pakka koi aurat hai woh wahan baayen tarf darakhton mein ja kar giri hai.
Driver jaldi se bola.
Ok ok chalo aao dekhty hain kon hai bechari.
Yeh kehty huwe malik sahib neechy utar paray.
Driver bhi unke sath hi utra aur unke peechy ho liya.
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Tabhi bike waly aa puhanchy
O tum logon ny kisi ladki ko dekha hai?
Jaldi batao
Un mein se ek takreeban gala phaar kar bola.
Tameez se bat karo. Kon ho tum log aur ek ladki ko kis liye dhoond rahy ho?
Malik sahib thehray huwe lehjay mein bolay.
O ji ap kon ho?
Yeh kehty huwe bike walon mein se ek ny torch ki roshni malik rauf aur sagheer py dali.
Aray malik sahib ap? Sarkar ap yahan kesy?
Main ji Chaudhary Shabeer ka mulazim Anwar hoon.
Un mein se ek lajajat bharay andaz mein bolta chala gya.
O acha acha ch k gaon k ho? Kher to hai yahan kya kar rahy ho rat k waqt aur yeh ladki ka kya chakar hai?
Sarkar gaon ki ek ladki ghar se bhag gayi hai apny aashna k sath usi ko talash kar rahy hain woh isi tarf aayi thi.
Anwar ny sari bat batayi.
Acha to yeh bat hai. Ladki to dekhi hum ny usi ko bachany k chakar mein car roki thi sagheer ny. Par woh ruki nahi lagta samny ki tarf bhag gayi hai.
Malik rauf ny daayen taraf ishara karty huwe sufaid jhoot bola.
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Takleef k liye maafi chahta hoon sarkar ap jao hum agay ja kar dekhty hain.
Anwar phir se bola. Jab k uska sathi is dafa bhi bike py statue ban kar betha raha usky moun mein shayd zuban nahi thi.
Theek hai anwar. Meri kisi madad ki zaroorat ho to batana aur chaudhary ji ko mera salam kehna.
Malik rauf ny cigar ka ek lamba kash lete huwe anwar ko hukam diya.
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Bike waly dono bike py beth kar chal diye.
Saab ji yeh kya kiya ap ny?
Sagheer bola.
Kya kiya hai mainy?
Gustaakhi maaf saab ji ap ny un logon se jhoot bola. Woh ladki to samny hi darakhon mein ja kar giri hai.
Driver dara dara sa bolta gya.
Aray tum bhi na sagheer.....
Yeh Chaudhary Shabeer k karinday thay yeh log apne riwajon mein bohat sakht hain yeh ladki inky hath lag jati to inho ny maar dena tha isko. Inke gaaon mein ghar se bhagny ki yehi saza hai. Inke han apni pasand ki shadi ya pyar ka koi lena dena nahi.
Mainy to bas is ladki ki jan bachayi hai agar tum ny usay na mara huwa to.
Rauf bolta chala gya.
Han saab ji usko dekhty hain
Han tum zara torch uthao cabinet se.
Malik sahib ny sagheer ko hukam diya.
Sagheer ny jaldi se darwaza khola aur car mein se ek torch nikal li.
Woh dono darakhton ki tarf barhy paas ja kar dekha to ek ladki aarhi tirchi si parhi thi wahan jis k sar py shadeed kisi ka zakham dikh raha tha ek side py.
Malik sahib ny agay barh kar ladki ka chehra seedha kiya to herat se unki aankhen phel gayi.

Title: Re: INTAQAM-E-MUHABBAT (5th Update on Feb 26 2014)
Post by: wajahat on May 28, 2016, 11:49:31 pm
Amber thakan aur khof se nidhaal ho chuki thi.
Usay reh reh kar yeh soch aa rahi thi k police ko to woh chakma de aayi ab yeh bike py sawar kon log hain jo usky peechy hain?
Ab 23,24 saal ki amber ko kya samjh aesy halaat ki. Usay yehi laga k yeh Majeed k hi admi hain.
Andhere ka faida utha kar woh ek building mein ghus gayi aur bijaye usko cross karny k woh window lagane ki khatir chori hui open space se guzar kar sath wali building mein chali gayi
Bike waly dhoka kha gaye aur woh agay waly road py ja niklay.
Amber ki saans phool chuki thi par woh ruki nahi. Usay pata tha k rukny ka matlab zilat aur ruswayi hai.
Usay reh reh kar arsal ka kheyal aa raha tha aur uski shafaaf neeli ankhen sawan bhaadon ko sharminda kar rahi thien.
Amber ny andaza lagaya aur mashrik ki taraf ek choti si under construction deewar k opar se hoti road py aa gayi.
Uska andaza sahi tha ab usay isi road se agay ja kar left mein jana tha
Magar woh jese hi left ko turn hui samny se aati car se takra gayi
Car k bonnet ki right side se takra kar woh car k opar se hoti hui doosari taraf ja giri
Us ka sar buri tarah kisi cheez se takraya.
Tareeki mein doobny se pehly usay itna hi sunayi diya k car k breaks cheekhy hain.
Woh behosh ho gayi usay ab dunia ki koi fikar tang nahi kar sakti thi...
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Title: Re: INTAQAM-E-MUHABBAT (5th Update on Feb 26 2014)
Post by: wajahat on May 29, 2016, 12:07:25 am
Rauf sahib heranagi se ladki ka chehra dekh rahy thay unhen yakeen nahi ho raha tha.
Kya huwa saab ji?
Yeh zinda hai na?
Sagheer k sawalon ny rauf sahib ko hosh ki dunia mein khench liya aur unho ny bina koi jawab diye ladki ki nabz tatoli.
Han zinda hai magar zakhmi hai kafi.
Rauf sahib ranjeeda si awaz mein bolay.
Chalo sagheer isko le chalen.
Ji saab ji
Iske sath hi sagheer ny agay barh kar rauf sahib ka sath diya aur unho ny us nazuk se wajood ko utha kar car ki bake seat perakh liya.
Rauf sahib ny ladki ka sar apny hathon se tham liya.
Sagheer heran huwa aur us ny pehli dafa dheyan se ladki ka chehra dekha.
Aur
Uski bhi ankhen phel gayi.
Par woh bola kuch nahi
Jaldi karo sagheer is bachi ka bachna bohat zaroori hai.
Rauf sahib ki awaz mein koi ajeeb sa jazba tha.
Sagheer jaldi se betha
Us ny driving seat sanbhali aur car sadak py faratay bharny lagi...
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Amber ki ankh khuli to us ny khud ko aram deh bed py paya uske sar aur ek tang py pattiyan bandhi thi.
Pas mein hi ek nurse injection tayar kar rahi thi.
Us ny amber ko hosh mein aatay dekha to uske pas aa gayi.
Us ny amber se kayi sawal kiye magar amber khali nazron se usay dekhti rahi
Nurse ja kar doctor ko bula layi.
Doctor k peechay peechy Malik rauf bhi thay.
Beta kesi tabiat hai ab apki?
Rauf sahib ny poocha.
Amber ny koi jawab nahi diya.
Apka accident huwa tha ap zakhmi ho gayi thi.
Ab ap hospital mein ho.
Doctor bola.
Ab ki baar amber ny bolny ki try ki par bola na gya.
Rauf sahib ny agay barh kar uska hath thamna chaha to us ny khofzada nazron se unki tarf dekha aur apna hath peechy kar liya.
Rauf sahib thathak kar ruk gaye
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Apka nam kya hai?
Doctor ne sawal kiya.
Mera.... naa...naam...meraa naaam... kya naam hai mera?
Mm...main..kon hoon?
Amber atak atak kar bolti chali gayi.
Rauf sahib preshan ho gaye is sawal py.
Doctor ny sab ko room se jany k liye bol diya kiyon k is doran sagheer apni biwi k sath andar aa chuka tha.
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Kuch dair k bad doctor room se bahir aaya aur bola: Malik sahib inki yad-daasht py asar para hai mareeza ko kuch bhi yad nahi k woh kon hai aur yahan tak kese puhanchi?
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Malik rauf ki ankhon mein aansoo dubdubany lagy.
Hosla rakhiye malik sahib yeh koi bara masla nahi hai
Par doctor khan ap ko sab pata hai na to agar iski yad-daasht wapis na aayi to?
Rauf sahib mayoosi ki intaha ko chootay nazar aa rahy thay.
Tab ki tab dekhen gy baki befikar rahen apka raaz raaz hi rahy ga
Doctor ny unko ek smile k sath tasali di.
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Title: Re: INTAQAM-E-MUHABBAT (5th Update on Feb 26 2014)
Post by: Dastan Go on May 29, 2016, 12:58:40 am
nice update . will be waiting for next
Title: Re: INTAQAM-E-MUHABBAT (5th Update on Feb 26 2014)
Post by: khaleefa on May 29, 2016, 01:21:46 am
Awesome update.... Wajahat bhaijaan aapka writting style bohot shandaar hai... :yes:

Abhi start se padhna shuru kiya hai to 2-3 din baad complete comment karunga... over all nice start and superb story... :devil2:




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Title: Re: INTAQAM-E-MUHABBAT (5th Update on Feb 26 2014)
Post by: wajahat on May 29, 2016, 01:29:29 am
Awesome update.... Wajahat bhaijaan aapka writting style bohot shandaar hai... :yes:

Abhi start se padhna shuru kiya hai to 2-3 din baad complete comment karunga... over all nice start and superb story... :devil2:




 :rockon: :rockon: :rockon: :rockon: :rockon: :rockon: :rockon: :rockon: :rockon: :rockon: :rockon: :rockon: :rockon: :rockon: :rockon:

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Thanks bhai jan.
Tumhen story pasand aayi yehi bohat hai mere liye.
Ab main isay regularly update karta rahoon ga.
Title: Re: INTAQAM-E-MUHABBAT (5th Update on Feb 26 2014)
Post by: khaleefa on May 29, 2016, 01:31:09 am
Awesome update.... Wajahat bhaijaan aapka writting style bohot shandaar hai... :yes:

Abhi start se padhna shuru kiya hai to 2-3 din baad complete comment karunga... over all nice start and superb story... :devil2:




 :rockon: :rockon: :rockon: :rockon: :rockon: :rockon: :rockon: :rockon: :rockon: :rockon: :rockon: :rockon: :rockon: :rockon: :rockon:

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Thanks bhai jan.
Tumhen story pasand aayi yehi bohat hai mere liye.
Ab main isay regularly update karta rahoon ga.
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Title: Re: INTAQAM-E-MUHABBAT (5th Update on Feb 26 2014)
Post by: wajahat on May 29, 2016, 01:31:29 am
nice update . will be waiting for next
Thanks bro.
Ab main isko regularly update karta rahoon ga
Title: Re: INTAQAM-E-MUHABBAT (Running)
Post by: Story Maker on May 29, 2016, 08:08:52 am
Wajahat bahi... name change kar diya hai check kar lain...
Title: Re: INTAQAM-E-MUHABBAT (Running)
Post by: wajahat on May 29, 2016, 10:15:24 am
Wajahat bahi... name change kar diya hai check kar lain...
Thanks bro
Title: Re: INTAQAM-E-MUHABBAT (Running)
Post by: wajahat on June 01, 2016, 11:42:14 pm
Arsal cheekhte cheekhte shayd hosh hi kho deta k amber ne agay barh kar uska hath tham liya.
Usko jese hosh aa gya bhala is hath k ehsas ko woh kesy bhool sakta tha?
Wohi naram-o-nazuk sa garm sa gudaz bhara hath jisay pakar kar woh hamesha khud ko ameeron ka bhi sardar samjhta tha.
Arsal ajeeb nazron se amber ko dekh raha tha usay yakeen hi nahi ho raha tha
Neeli ankhon mein aansuaon ki jhilmil mein usay apna aks saf dikh raha tha.
Amber ka jism kanp raha tha uske hath ki garmi arsal ko ehsas dil rahi thi k han WOH ZINDA HAI
Uski Muhabbat zinda hai abhi uska pyar baki hai opar waly ne uska koi imtehan liya tha us ka yar abhi baki hai kisi ghalti ki saza mili thi usay ya usay azmaya gya tha.
Ab uski saza khatam ho gayi hai. Uski zindagi wapis aa gayi hai
Han woh amber hi thi wohi kalay lambay nagin se baal wohi kitabi chehra jo thora murjhaya huwa tha wohi neeli ankhen jin mein doob kar woh apne dil ki dhadkan bhi bhool jaya karta tha jin ki yad ab bhi usay saari saari raat jagati thi.
Wohi amber jis ko bahon mein bhar kar woh poori dunia ko thokar marny ko tayar tha.
Han WOH ZINDA THI aur uske samne thi.
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Amber ki halat bhi alag na thi. Arsal zinda salamat uske samne khara tha uska hath thamay huwe par yeh arsal kuch badal gya tha shadabi rang chehra sanwla geya tha. Ankhon ki chamak kam ho gayi thi.
Naram hath sakht ho gaye thay.
Wohi arsal jis ki ek nazar py woh sab kuch waar deny ko tayar thi jis ki chahat uska iman thi.
Jis ka pyar hi uska sab kuch tha jis ki zuban se nikly chand bol hi usay heeron se zyada qeemti lagty thay.
Han wohi arsal kuch badla badla sa uske samny khara tha.
Ab hosla kahan tha?
Wakt bhi peechy hat gya aur hath band kar dekhny laga. Zabt k sabhi baandh toot gaye. Murjhaye dilon ki jheel mein halchal hui. Ek shor utha aur do jism ek doojay mein sama gaye.
Na koi awaz na koi faryad. Na koi shikwa na koi shakayt. Na koi lafz na koi ishara.
Kuch bhi na tha siwaye namkeen pani k tofan k aur ankhon ki boli k.
Aur kuch aur tha to ulti simaton mein hoty huwe bhi do DIL ek doosaray ko sunn rahy thay.
Phir .....
Phir sab bhool gya dono ko k woh kis azab se guzre woh kahan kharay hain....
Do bechain dilon ki awaz ny 4 labon ko lachaar kardiya k woh ek ho jayen......
Koi tarsa huwa pyasa hi janta hai k aesy jab serab huwa jata hai to kesa nasha charhta hai?.
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Pata nahi kab tak woh dono ek doosaray mein gum rahy.
Hosh aaya to dono ki halat aesi thi k woh kisi k samny nahi ja sakty thay.
Bikhray bal aur kapron ki shiknen sari kahani suna rahy thay.
Aur aasuaon se dhul kar dono k chehray nikhar gaye thay.
Han judai k badil hat gaye thay.
Sabhi faslay mit gaye thay. Dono ko itni khushi thi k woh kuch bol nahi pa rahy thay....
Bas ek doosaray ko dekhy ja rahy thay unke hath ab bhi ek doosaray k hathon mein thay.
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Wakt ko shayd ab masla hony laga tha woh jis ny unko 3 sal se zyada ki saza di woh kuch lamhon mein hi ghabra gya aur us ne help bula li k main ab aur dair nahi ruk sakta...
Lounge mein intercom ki ghanti baj uthi..............................
Title: Re: INTAQAM-E-MUHABBAT (Running)
Post by: wajahat on June 01, 2016, 11:45:40 pm
zyada long updates nahi de pa raha is liye choti choti updates de kar isay running mein rakhon ga
Title: Re: INTAQAM-E-MUHABBAT (Running)
Post by: Jatt on September 17, 2016, 05:39:56 pm
Runing to ni stop kr di ap ny
Title: Re: INTAQAM-E-MUHABBAT (Running)
Post by: Jatt on September 17, 2016, 05:43:06 pm
Ap story achi likhty ho 2,3 story ap ki parhin ma member ni tha yum ka is liye kbi cmnt etc ni kiya ap k pass story k liye lafz hain jo story ko 4 chand lga dety hain lekin ap ki koi story mukamal ni hy kya wja hy is ki kyn story shuru kr k chor dety ho
Title: Re: INTAQAM-E-MUHABBAT (Running)
Post by: wajahat on December 08, 2017, 02:21:58 am
  Anila...... Ek zaheen, khoobsurat aur khush qismat tareen ladki thi
Khush qismat aese k usay Malik Rauf jesa bap aur Nabeela Rauf jesi maa mili thi aur phir rauf sahib ek ameer insan thay to anila ko kisi cheez ki kami na thi yeh kehna ghalat nahi hoga k woh mounh mein sonay ka chamach le kar peda hui thi. Lekan itna paisa aur azadi k bawajod woh ek suljhi hui aur naik dil ladki thi. Aur yeh sab uske maa bap ki tarbiyat ka asar tha jo itnr ameer hone k bawajod buhat hi shareef aur aajazi pasand thay.
Malik Rauf k pas jitna paisa tha utna hi bara dil bhi tha. Jane kitne hi be sahara logon k gharon k choolhay unke damm se chalty thay har maah kayi kayi millions ki woh kheraat kar dete thay. Aur phir unka ikhlaq aesa tha k har koi unka deewana ho jata tha. Malik sahib ki aur koi olad na hui Anila unki akloti olad thi aur malik sahib ko is bat ka koi afsos nahi tha.
Na unho ne doosari shadi ka socha aur na hi unko is bat ne kabhi preshan kiya.
Woh apni dunia mein buhat khush thay. Lekan
Waqt kabhi ek sa nahi rehta badal jata hai unke liye bhi badal gya jab unho ne Anila ki shadi ki. Kamran ek acha ladka tha anila usay pasand karti thi. Rauf sahib ne beti ki pasand pe koi aitraz nahi kiya. Aitraz ki koi wajah thi bhi nahi kamran ek kamyab businessman tha aur real estate aur construction mein uska ek nam tha. Kamran ka bas ek bhai hi tha jo k doctor tha aur bhabhi. Maa bap uske buhat pehle dunia se ja chuke thay.
Rauf sahib ne buhat dhoom dham se beti ki shadi ki. Apna har shoq poora kiya.
Ahadi k ek sal bad anila k han ek pyari si beti peda hui. Rauf sahib goya khushi se pagal huwe ja rahe thay us din unho ne dil khol kar kherat ki. Aur aese khushiyan manayi k sara shehar heran tha k log beton k peda hone pe bhi aesa nahi karte aur yeh nawasi k peda hone pe itne khush hain. Rauf sahib ko jese sab kuch mil gya tha unke liye zindagi ka maqsad poora ho gya tha. Unho ne apna karobar anila aur kamran k hawale kiya aur khud ghar beth gaye . Unko bas ek hi kam tha har waqt Apni nawasi anam k sath bachon ki tarah khelna . 3 sal aur guzar gaye har taraf sakoon tha khushiyan thi.
Lekan
Unki khushiyon ko kisi ki nazar lag gai kamran aur anila ek din doosaray shehar ja rahe thay k rastay mein unki car ko haadsa pesh aaya aur dono ne moqa par hi damm torr diya. Anam bhi sath thi woh bach to gayi lekan us haadsay ne uske damagh pe buhat bura asar dala woh taqreeban paghal ho gai woh har waqt ya ro apni maa ko awazen deti ya chilana shuro kar deti.
Rauf sahib ki dunia andher ho gai thi unki beghum to bistar se lag gai thi. Aese mein kamran k bhai Ehsan aur unke dost doctor khan ne unko sanbhala aur unko samjhaya k unhen anam ki khatir sab bardasht karna hoga warna anam theek nahi hogi.
Rauf sahib bhi kya karte anam ki zimadari k ilawa unka karobar aur saray ghareeb ghurba ki dekh bhaal k liye jo falaahi kaam shuro kar rakhay thay woh sab unki raah tak rahe thay. Unho ne khud ko sanbhala aur yeh soch k dil pe pathar rakh liya k anila na sahi uski nishani hi sahi. Anam k liye ab jeena hoga. Lekan anam ko kaun samjhata k us pe jaan chirakne wali maa ab wapis nahi aa sakti aur usay uske bina hi jeena hoga. Uska bap bhi door ja chuka hai usay ab woh goad naseeb nahi hogi.
Ehsan aur bivi ne anam ko apne han le jana chaha k unke han unki beti k sath anam ka dil behal jaye ga lekan anam jane pe razi hi na hui. 3 sal ki choti si bachi ka dard un mein se koi bhi seh nahi pa raha tha.
Waqt guzarta chala gya 6 maah beet gaye baki sab to sanbhal gaye lekan anam ki halat na sanbhali woh pehle se bhi zyada zidi aur bemar ho gai.
Ghar mein har waqt ek doctor aur nurse uske pas rehte. Lekan koi farq nahi para.
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Rauf sahib ne sab kuch kiya jo woh kar sakte thay bahir se doctors bulaye. Darbaron pe gaye mazaron pe gaye sadqa kherat ki lekan unka imtehan khatam na huwa. Ab to halat yeh thi ki anam goya akhari din gin rahi thi. Khana peena band tha aur har waqt tiktikay baandhay khalaaon ko ghoorti rehti thi.
Malik sahib ka dil doob doob jata tha woh sab k samne to khud ko sanbhal hi ketay thay lekan tanhai mein rotay thay un se anam ki halat nahi dekhi jati thi. Us din bhi woh ek yateem khanay ka iftitaah karne k bad opar wale se ro ro kar duain mang kar aa rahe thay jab amber unki car se takrayi thi.......
Title: Re: INTAQAM-E-MUHABBAT (Running)
Post by: wajahat on December 08, 2017, 02:38:11 am
  Ambar ka chehra dekh kar goya rauf sahib ko nayi zindagi mil gai thi
Kiyon k herat angez tor pe Ambar ki shakal Anila se milti thi. Rauf sahib andar hi andar buhat khush ho rahe thay jab woh ambar ko hospital le ja rahe thay woh thoray preshan bhi thay kiyon k ambar zakhmi thi.
Lekan hospital puhanchne k bad jab doctor khan ne unko tasali di k mareeza ki jan ko koi khatra nahi hai to unko goya buhat azeem khazana mil gya tha.
Dr. Khan bhi heran tha k ambar ki shakal anila k sath kitni milti hai lekan woh dekh chuka tha k ambar ki ankhen neeli hain jab k anila ki brown thi. Lekan yeh koi zyada eham bat nahi thi. Is liye us ne malik sahib se koi zikar nahi kiya.
Malik sahib buhat khush thay unho ne raat hospital mein hi guzarne ka faisla kiya woh ek pal k liye bhi ambar se door nahi jana chahtay thay.
Woh pehle hi soch rahe thay k agar woh chaudhary k ghundoon se jhoot na bolte to kya hota?
Unki ankhon k samne unki anam ki akhari umeed khatam ho jati aur kitna pachtawa hota unko.
Unho ne ro ro kar Rab ka shukar ada kiya k jis ne unki sun li thi.
Malik sahib ka irada tha k hosh mein aane k bad jese hi is ladki ki tabiat sanbhalay gi woh uske samne jholi phelain ge k woh kuch arsa k liye anam ki maa ban kar unke sath chalay ta k anam zindagi ki taraf wapis aa jaye aur iske liye unhen chahy saari dolat deni par jaye woh de dain ge.
Lekan
Kehte hain na k saman to 100 baras ka hai pal ki khabar nahi aur insan sochta to buhat kuch hai lekan hota wohi hai jo opar wala chahta ho.
Title: Re: INTAQAM-E-MUHABBAT (Running)
Post by: story_lover on December 02, 2018, 02:33:20 pm
Is novel ka naam kiya hn agr kisi ko pta hn to plz bta dn
Title: Re: INTAQAM-E-MUHABBAT (Running)
Post by: wajahat on December 14, 2018, 02:27:50 pm
iska yehi nam hai jo likha huwa hai