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Sex Stories => Hindi sex stories and Urdu sex Stories => Topic started by: away on March 16, 2016, 03:44:02 am

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Post by: away on March 16, 2016, 03:44:02 am
hi. friends ,

aap logon se apni sex life ka aik waqia share karta hon umeed he ap logon ko pasand aye ga ye waqia aaj se taqreeban 4 saal pehly ka he . us waqat meri shadi ko 2 saal hoye they I was 32 years old and I am from karachi my hight is 6 feets fair in color and good personality .  life main mera kafi sari females se talooq raha he mager ye jo qissa abhi main suna ney ja raha hon ye is liyeh mukhtalif he kyon ke ye kafi had tak khud ba khud hoa or hota chala gia .

main apni wife ke sath aik new flat main shift hoa due to some reasons ye flat hum ney  aarzi tor par rent par lia tha or ye lower middle class ka area tha 2 rooms ka flat tha or hum ney is liyeh lia tha ke hum is ko try kar ke dekhty hen is main aik to money saving thi 2ndly hamari work places se kafi qareeb tha jis main hum ko any jany main kafi asani ho jani thi .

to hum log shift ho gaye or rehny lagy meri wife ki dosti samny waly flat main jo family rehti thi un se ho gai kyon ke ye choty choty flats they to is liyeh in main normally single family . means aik couple or bachey hi rehty they or ye aik corridore type tha jis main tamam flats ke doors open hoty they personally ye mera apna life main pehli dafa flats ya apartments main rehny ka tajurba tha or is main mujh ko hamesha se zahar lagty they is type ke flats main aik hi long corridor hota he or us main sary doors open hoty hen mager abhi kyon ke need thi to hum ney ye chose kar lia or rehney lagey.

time ke sath mujhy pata laga ke samny waly ghar main rehny wali ka naam Anila he or voh apny 4 bachon ke sath wahan rehti he husband us ke Dubai main hoty hen or month main aik dafa milny ke liyeh aaty hen. meri wife ki us se achi dosti ho gai or kyon ke wife akeli hoti thi to din main anila ke sath time guzar leti thi meri wife mujh ko akser us ki kahanian sunati thi ke us ke 4 bachey hen mager bohat hi fit he or lagta nahen he ke us ki 4 bachey hen or us ki age 40' ke qareeb ho gi etc or mujh ko ye sab kahnian sunny main bilkul koi dilchaspi kabhi nahen rahi mager main is liyeh sun lia karta tha kyon ke i know hum dono akele hi rehty he or wife ko bhi kuch na kuch sunay ke liyeh koi na koi chyeah hoa ta he . mazedar bat ye thi ke 3 months hum ko rehty hoye ho gaye they main ney  anila ko nahen dekha tha jab ke meri wife ke baqol us ko us sab kuch pata hota tha ke main kis time jata hon kis time ata or kis time ghar par akela hoa hon . or mujh ko is hi waja se interest paida ho gia tha kyon ke ye sab janny ke bad ke us ko sab kuch pata he or pata hota he jab ke mujh ke main ney us ko dekha bhi nahen kabhi or mazedar bat aik do bar main ney try bhi ki ghar aty jaty ke try karon kab dekh rahi hoti he or kab nahen mager mujh ko bilkul andaza nahen ho sakta is bat ka .

kher finally aik sunday main morning main saman lene nikla kuch to mujh ko voh nazar agai . voh hamary ghar ke samny  jhuk kar kapry sukha rahi thi or un ko pin up kar rahi thi ke kaheen hawa se ur na jaain  ye flat 7th floor par they to is liyeh hawa kafi tez chalti thi yahan par. kher main ney us ko dekhan or aap log yaqeen to nahen karen gey mager ye sach he ke main bilkyl bhi ghatia insan nahen hon kabhi bhi kisi female ke body parts nahen ghoor raha hota mager anila ko jhuky hoey dekh kar mere zahan main jo pehla khyal aya voh tha ke main is ki gaand maron ga . voh aik intehai munais dubli jisaamat ki thi or us ke hips us waqat jhukny ki waja se kafi bahar ko nikley hoey they us ney vese hi jhuky jhuky mujhy salam kia  jis se mujh ko yaqeen ho gia ke ye hi anila he  un dino us ki eyes ka opration hoa tha to is liyeh  sun glasses use kar rahi thi voh or meri wife us ki  cooking main help bhi karti thi or sath hi us ki medical care bhi like Dr ke pass us ke sath jana or medicin and etc care .

kher main is khyal ko soch kar apny aap hi muskuarata hoa agey barh gia or soch raha tha ke kiss qisam ki bat sochi main ney  jab ke koi sir pair nahen he is sab ka or yaqeenan mera or us ka koi bhi talooq is liye munasib nahen tha kyon ke meri wife bhi involve thi or us ke achey relations they. Or  main yaqeenan  fazol  risk lena pasand nahen karta is qisam ke kaam kar ke  meri view main jab dunia bhari pari he to phir kiya zarorat he faltu main pangy lene ki jis main risk ho .

kher  chezen is hi tarah se chalti rahen  or mere khyal main aab ap log bore hony lagey hongey to  asaal qissey ki taraf aty hen  .  chezen is hi tarah se chal rahi thi or aik din mujhy bukhar ho gia   ye sardion ke din   they  hum kyon ke  is apartment main sirf   kuch waqat ke liyeh shift hoye they is liyeh hamary ghar main furniture naheen tha kuch ziyada bass aik bed kuch chairs table or almaarian  that’s all  hum ney kuch chez set nahen kit hi alava aik open kitchen  ke kyon ke us ke bager guzara nahen tha .  to main  bukhaar main tha or meri wife ko jana tha subha job par  to us ney mujh se kaha  ke main anila ko keh jaaon gi voh aap ko tea bana kar de de gi main ney apni wife ko mana kiya ke  voh us ko na kahaye kyon ke  meri wife ke hi baqool voh by nature bohat achi thi mager us ki adaat thi ke her kisi ke kaam to aati thi mager phir ja kar pury mohally main story bhi zaror sunati thi  ke main ney ye ye kar ke dia is ko ….. to is liyeh main ney apni wife ko mana kia ke voh aesa na kary or mera fever utry ga to main khud kisi na kisi tarah se tea bana lon ga .  mager meri wife ney meri naheen suni or chali gai .

subha takreeban 11 bajey hon gey to meri wife se meri bat hoi main ney us ko bataya ke I am feeling better . acha ye bohat ziyada care is liyeh humen karni parti thi kyon ke hum 2 hi they to is liyeh  ager koi bhi problem ho to aik dosry se hum ziada in touch rehty they or khabar rakhty they main bhi or meri wife bhi kher wife se bat kar ke main wapas let gia . 
hamary flat ki aik key hamesha anila ke pass hoti thi  or us ka reason ye hi tha ke kabhi hamari key gir jaye ya koi emergency ho to  keys bahar bhi kahen mojod honk yon ke aik  do dafa aisa hoa tha ke main  apny kaam par tha meri wife job se wapas aai or keys bhool gai khen to phir mujh ko ana para to is liyeh phir hum ney aik key anila ke pass rakhwa di then vese bhi hamary ghar main koi jewelry  naheen thi .
main abhi leta hi tha ke mujh ko flat ka door khulny ki awaz aai or jahan tak mere zahan ney kaam kiya voh anila thi or us ko meri wife ney kaha ho ga phone kar ke , ke mujh ko tea ya kuch breakfast bana kar de de . or mere shetani zahan ney us waqat ye kaam kiya ke ye hi best mooqa he chance lene ka ager try karni he to . fever mujhy kafi tez tha us waqat bhi or sach ye hai ke main galiyan de raha tha ke is waqat fever kyon he kyon ke yaqeenan bukhar ki waja se meri jisaam main taaqat nahen thi ke main us ko force kar sakon  kher main blanket orh kar let gia or wait karny laga ke kaab voh aati he voh kitchen main tea or kuch khany ko bana rahi thi or main  room main let kar us ko khany ki planning bana raha tha  or mera brain us waqat kafi slow kaam kar raha tha but mujh ko ye pata tha ke ye hi best time he ager kuch try karna he to .  kher intezar ka time khatam hoa or voh mere room main agai nashta le kar main sir taak orh kar leta tha or soch raha tha jo tarkeeb main ney sochi he voh kis had tak kamiab hoti he kyon ke ye life main pehla moqa tha jab main aik blind try aik aesi female par karny ja raha tha jis se main ney aaj tak kabhi bat bhi nahen ki thi .
voh shyed bahar khari ye soch rahi thi ke mujh ko kese jagaye  halki awaz main mujhy us ney 2.3 bar awaz  di or main sota hi bana raha finally us ney aker mere face par se blanket haaya or mere shoulder par hath rakh kar mujh ko hila kar awaz di Asaad   main ney  ankhen band kiye kiye us ke hath par hath rakha or is se pehly ke main kuch bolta us ney kaha aap ko to bohat taiz bukhar he ………….
Main ney kaha Nadia( my wifes name)  tum gain ? or us  ankhen band kiye kiyeh us ke hath ko pakar kar apny left shoulder par le aya  jab ke voh right side par thi  or voh taqreeban mere upper agai or main ney us ko galy laga lia ye kehty hoye ke bohat sardi lag rahi he nadia .
Meri ankhen band thi is liyeh mujh ko kuch naheen pata ke us ke face expressions kia tha or kiya karna chah rahi thi voh mager mere khyal main voh is qisam ki nagahani ke liyeh bilkul bhi mentally prepear nahen thi  to is liyeh abhi us ki samjh nahen araha tha ke voh kiya kary or main ab us ko apny upper ghaseet chukka tha or us ki patli kamar ko apny hath main pakar kar us ko apny sath laga lia tha or bawajood is ke  ke meri wife or us ki jisamat main kafi faraq tha voh aik 5 feet 6 inchez ki dubli aurat thi or meri wife us ki nisbat hight main kafi kaam thi mager main is waqat bilkul aesy hi show kar raha tha ke shyed meri wife wapas agai he job se or main us ko galy laga kar betha hon  achi bat ye thi ke mujhy koi resistance nahen mil rahi thi bilkul bhi or is liyeh hi main  bilkul  dil se continue kiye hoye tha apny  plan ko  or apny aap ko safe rakhny ke liyeh plan ye tha ke jese hi resistance miley gi main chonkny ki acting karon ga  or  sory kar longa or koshish ye thi jab tak voh satpatai hoi he main itna kaam nimta lon apna ke aik chezen open ho jain hamari or bhagny ka ya bura many ka chance na rahey  .
Main  ney akhen band kiye kiye hi us ke face ko apny face par lia ur us ke lips apny lips par le aya or chosny laga  yahaan mujh ko  halki si resistance mili  mager voh is liyeh ignore kar de main ney ke with full foce nahen thi or main araam se us ke nichly hont ko apny moon main le kar chose raha tha or ab voh dheli parti mehsos ho rahi thi mujh ko shuroo main jo lips hard they voh aab nisbatan naraam party ja rahey they shyed voh ye soch rahi thi ke jo ho raha he ho lene do ya maybe kuch or .
Mer aik hath us ki back par tha or main us ke naraam hips ko daba raha tha  or is waqat main us ke  lips se ziyada us ki naraam gand ko enjoy kar raha tha or in sab se ziyada mera dehan us ke jisaam ki herkat par tha main us ki kamar se  gand tak sehla raha tha or us ke hont chose raha tha or main ney is  ko make sure kiya tha ke  ye chez jitni lambi khench sakta hon utni lambi khenchon  or ahista ahista voh bhi  shyed enjoy karny lagi thi is liyeh  pehly jab mainney us ko  apni taraf khencha tha to aik tang upper aai thi or aab voh angle change kar ke puri bed par agai thi .
Yahaan shaded bukhar ki waja se bawajood mazey ke mere  lund sirf size main bara hoa tha mager voh bilkul bhi hard nahen tha ke main us ke hath apny lund par rakh sakon or main ye bhi janta tha ke  koi bohat faida nahen hona he kyon ke bukhar or kamzoori shaded thi or main sirf is had tak is ko lejana chah raha tha ke voh or main aik dosry ko jaan len . main musalsal us ko nadia ke name se pukar raha tha  phir us ney sans lene ke liyeh apny lips mere face se se alag kiye or main ney us ko bilkul bhi force nahen kiya  balkey us ka chehra la kar apny face par rakh lia or us ke naram gaal main apny seeny ke bach mehsos kar raha tha or ye mehsos kar k  mujhy apni kamiyabi ka yaqeen ho gia jab us ney apny face ko hila kar apny gallon ko mere seeny se sehlaya . or voh vese hi let gai thori der bad voh aik daam se jhatka kha kar uthi main ney pehli bar ankhen khool kar us ki taraf dekha or us ney nazren nechey kar ke mujh se kaha  “ door open he main band kar ke aati hon” us ke bad voh tezi se chalti hoi bahar nikal gai or mujh ko door kafi tezi se band hony ki awaz aai . mujhy andaza tha ke voh naheen aye gi wapas or meri apni bhi ye hi wish thi ke voh wapas na aye kyon ke bukhar ki waja se main khud  bhi bohat ziyada kuch karny ke qabil nahen tha  mager mere liyeh big achievement ye thi ke meri line mere mutabiq clear ho chuki thi or ab mujhy next planning karni thi .
Din guzra or meri wife agaai main  aab kafi behtar tha or is soch main tha ke next day morning ka kiya kia jaye bemaar hi raha jaye  takey again  kuch chance baney or is soch main bhi tha ke dekhon kiya reaction  bahar haal nadia ney aker mujhy tea wagera bana kar di or medicine bhi mujh se pucha to main ney bata dia sirsiri tor par ke voh  mujy breakfast de kar gai thi and us ko meri taraf se bhi thanks keh dena  . phir nadia ney mujh bataya ke us ney anila se ko thanks kar dia he or kuch bat nahen hoi meri is bar main us din .
Next  morning main taqreeban theek ho chukka tha raat main ney bath lia tha is soch ke sath kuch fresh bhi ho jaon or bukhar bhi utar jaye or next day fresh bhi nazar aaon .  mager main is soch main tha ke nadia aaj anila ko tea ka kehti bhi he ya nahen .
Kher subha nadia ney mujhy bataya ke aaj voh apny parents ke ghar jaye gi work se or aik din stay Karen gi us ney mujh se poucha ke kia anila ko aaj break fast ka boley voh ? to main ney mana kar dia ke munasib naheen he bar bar kehna or ab main behtar feel kar raha hon  vese bhi main ney kuch light hi khana he to main bana lon ga . voh apny work par chali gai or main ney ghar ko ander se lock nahen kiya sirf external lock hi lock rehne dia kyon ke mere khyal main aab jo bhi hona he voh anila ki taraf se hona chyeah he or main intezar kar raha tha ke ab kiya hota he vese main kafi pur yaqeen tha ke  anila aye gi mager ye bhi aik haqiqat he ke female ki  taraf se koi step ki tawaqa rakhna in start himaqat hoti he to main abhi in hi sochon main gum tha .
Kher to cut the long story in to short .  taqreeban din ke 11 hi bajay again door knock hoa or main ney jab ja kar check kiya to anila hi thi mager apny 4 saal ke bachey ke sath  jo school to jata tha mager aaj nahen gia tha . meri samjh nahen araaha tha ke kiya kahani he . ager voh interested nahen he to aai kon he or ager aa hi rahi thi to bachey ko sath lany ki kiya zarorat thi .


Kher main ney us ko muskura kar welcome kiya  or ander aker chair par beth gia us ney mujh se pucha ke kesi tabiyat he aap ki or main ney us ko kaha ke aaj kafi behtar kaal ki nisbat . or us ney muskura kar maani khaiz andaz main kaha haan kaal to aap bohat hi ziyada garam ho gaye they . kyon ke bacha sath tha lehaza main kuch kar nahen sakta tha main ney bhi muskura kar jawab dia ke haan kaal kafi garam  ho gia tha itna ke mere pass sari chezen bhi garam ho gai then . or voh muskura kar  mere liye cooking karny lagi , mujhy itna to confirm ho gia tha ke sceen on he mager still main is tention ka shikar tha ke sab kuch theek ja raha he to phir ye bachey ko sath lany ki kiya need thi bhala yaqeenan is ka maqsad mujh ko rookna hi tha .


Voh mere liye nashta bana rahi thi or main pechy se  us ki gaand ko ghoor raha tha mostly males ki tarah  gand  meri bhi kamzori thi or us ki gand waqai bohat khubusrat or mazedar thi  jo ke bilkul bhi heavy nahen thi  intehai round shape or upper ko uthi hoi kaal main ney us ko daba kar mehsos kiya or dekh nahen sakta tha or aaj main dekh raha tha choo nahen sakta  ye bhi aik mazedar bat thi or us ka beta apny sath lai hoi chezon se khelny main masoof tha .  phir hoa ye ke bacha khelta hoa  bhag kar hamary door se nikal kar apny ghar chala gia dono doors ke between bamushkil  4 feet ka hi faraq tha or jese hi voh apny ghar ke ander gia main ney door apny door band nahen kiya ke kaheen anila hoshiyar na ho jaye or yaqeenan door open chorna alag risk tha mager main ney door ki taraf jany ke bajaey anila ko ja kar pechey se pakar lia us ke path par dono hath rakh kar us ko apni taraf khench lia or pechy se us ki neck par kiss kar ke us ko chatny laga .


voh boli  arry silice jaal jain gey mager mujh ko us waqat slice ki fikar nahen thi anila kit hi . to main ney us ko thora sa or apni taraf pechey khencha or us ke dono breasts  apny hathon main le kar maslny laga mera lund jo pehly  se hi hard tha us ki gand ke darmian daaba dia tha main ney jo ke voh yaqeenan puri tarah se mehsos kar rahi thi main us ki neck ki sides par apni zabaan phair raha tha or apny dono hath us ke breasts par le gia tha us ke dubla hony ki waja se us ke breasts mere liyeh bohat achy size ke they mujh ko bohat bary breasts pasand nahen  or dono breasts mere hathon main mukamal tor par agaye they or main ney un ko shirt or bra ke upper se hi masalna shuroo kar dia or voh apny dono hath mere hathon ke upper le aain mager us ney mujhy rooka nahen or main araam se us ke dono breasts daba or sehla raha tha or sath hi sath us ke kaan ki lo apny moon main le kar chose raha tha jis se voh kafi garam hoti ja rahi thi  or is hi darmian frying pen se aik daam jalny ki tez boo or dhooan nikala shuroo ho gia ………..

voh mujh se apny aap ko churwa kar agey barhi or frying pen ko tab open kar ke us ke nechey kia  takey dhoan khatam ho ye open kitchen tha to is liyeh pury ghar main dhoan bhar jana tha or main foran  palat kar  main door ki taraf barha takey us ko band karon or  us ko band kar ke return hoa to voh  turn ho ker  meri taraf muri main ney bager koi bat kiye anila ko apny arms main le lia or us ke lips par kissing shuroo kar di or or aik hath us ki kamar par rakh kar  grip kiya us ko or dosry hath se us ki gand ko sehlany or dabanay laga is dafa main  slow ke bajaye kafi tez tha or is waqat mera target ye tha ke kisi bhi tarah us ki choot main land dal dena he takey ye qissa mukamal ho or ainda khul kar sex kiya ja sakey main us ke lips ko chosta hoa apna aik hath us ke pechey  se shalwar ke ander dal kar us ki pechy se  us ki choot ko touch karny ki koshish kar raha tha jo ke main jaldi hi kamiyab ho gia or aab us ki sansen bhi tez ho gai then jis se mujh ko andaza tha ke voh aab ready hen  main ney kiss karty karty hi us ki shalwar ko nechey kiya jis main us ney meri help ki or us ki shalwar nechy zameen par agai main ney apna shorts nechey utara or mera lund uchal kar bahar agia mera  lund tareeban 6 inchez ka he or motai bhi munasib hi he . us waqat mera lund utna hi hard tha jitna max lund ho sakta he main ney us ka hath pakar kar apny lund par rakha to us ney kissing chor kar nechey dekha or us ke face expression se mujhy andaza ho gia ke lund dekh kar us ko khushi hoi he . main ney us ko utha kar open kitchen ki  half wall par bithaya or apna lund us ki choot ki opening ke qareeb le gia or again us ko kissing karna shuroo kar den mere dono hath us ke  breasts ko  shirt or bra ke upper se hi masal rahey they or mera lund us ke hath main tha or voh us ko  apni choot ki opening par rargar rahi thi akey lund ka topa lubricate ho jaye  or phir us ney head ko achi tarah se apni choot ke pani se topa ander kar dia or meri back par apny hath se 2,3 bar mara main samjh chukka tha voh aab kiya chahti he main ney apny dono hathon se us ke hips ko pakar kar ahista ahista lund ander kiya ye pehli bar tha is liyeh mujhy us ki choot ka anaza naen tha or is liyeh hi main ahista ahista ander le kar gia us ki choot ander se intehai garaam or geli thi us ki choot ke ander ka lums itna mazedar tha mere lundn par ke mere moon main pani agia  mazey se  .or phir bahar nikaal kar zoor daar jhatky se ander kar dia or us ko  kitchen ki half wall par bitha kar hi zor zoor  se chodny laga.

 Voh mere should par sir rakh kar bethi thi or us ke moon se awazen nikal rahi then jin ko dabany ke liyeh  voh apna moon khool kar mere shoulder par kaat rahi thi ya apna moon udhar daba rahi thi hum dono kisi na kisi tarah se apni awazen control kar rahey they or or main us ko 5 slow and 5 fast ke formula par chood raha tha  main is sex ko bilkul bhi prolong nahen karna chah raha tha kyon ke aaj ka mera target bass itna hi tha voh 3 bar pani nikaal chuki thi  us ki jisaam akrany or jhatkon se mujhy andaza ho gia tha to phir main ney us se poucha  relax ho gain ? or us ney  yes main sirf  hilaya to main bager  farigh hoye hi alag hony laga to us ney mujh se kaha tum bhi to farigh ho mager main alag ho gia or us ko ankh mar kar kaha next time ho len gey or lund bahar nikaal kar us ko galay laga kar us ko kiss ki or voh mujhy kafi hairaat se dekhty hoye apni shalwar utha kar pehanny lagi , main washroom gia  apny lund ko dhoya or shorts pehan kar wapas agia wapas jab lounge main pohncha to anila  nashta bana kar rakh chuki thi or flat ka door na shirf open kar chuki thi  balkey us ka chota beta arsalan bhi mojod tha or nashta kar raha tha .

Voh muskura kar mujh se boli ye nashta start kar  chukhey hen aap bhi jaldi ajaye ga verna ye hi sara nashta kar len gey . main muskura kar beth gia or nashta karny laga .

To Be continue ( if you people like it )
Title: Re: the story
Post by: dexter on March 17, 2016, 01:55:34 am
its a good realistic start keep it up need to be some more erotic maybe else follow regular readers opinion
Title: Re: the story
Post by: away on March 17, 2016, 02:41:07 am
thanks Dexter Sir,

this he start of story real sex scene will come next episode if peoples like.

thanks again
Title: Re: the story
Post by: nadia146 on March 17, 2016, 02:52:20 am
nice one need more update
Title: Re: the story
Post by: away on March 17, 2016, 04:14:33 am
thanks nadia jee
Title: Re: the story
Post by: sara34 on March 18, 2016, 02:07:51 am
good one
Title: Re: the story
Post by: away on March 18, 2016, 02:46:44 am
Anila apny kid ke sath apny ghar chali gai or main ainda kia or kese hona he is bary main sochny laga mere khyal main mujh ko aaj raat hi sex ki need thi or main soch raha tha ke ye kese kiya jaye   is sary case main jo biggest problem thi voh ye thi ke anila go ke aik parhi likhi  auraat thi mager voh mobile phone use nahen karti thi or mostly us ki bari beti jo  14,15 saal kit hi voh hi phone use karti thi or  anila us ke through hi phone use karwati thi .  mera apna andaza ye tha ke main ab ager phone karon ga to anila hi uthaye  gi . kher is hi qisam ki baten sochta hoa washroom gia apny aap ko clean kar ke bath lia or sony let gia main so kar apni max energy fastest way main gain karna chahta tha .


Yahaan ab main aap ko anila ki jisamat or personality thori si explain kar don .  anila jese ke main ney bataya aik  laambey qaad ki intehai dubli patli  jisamaat ki  thi or us ke breasts 34 ke around hon gey jo ke abhi tak main ney nahen dekhey they hips  round shape main upper ko uthey hoye or bahar nikal kar thory se dhalky hoey intehai dubli tangon par ye hips size main kafi bary maloom dete they jin ka asaal size 36 inchez hi ho ga shyed mager  asaal khubsurti un ki banawat or shape thi jo ke mere khyal ke mutabiq hamary region main na hony ke barabar ya phir sirf  bohat  elite class ki girls main paye jaty hen kyon ke voh baqaida is ke liye excersise karti hen  intehai  smoth shiny gori main yellowish skin color .

Us ke nipples  brests feed ki waja se size main kafi had tak bary or dark borwn color ke they or  as being mother us ke paith par wrinkles then .  pait par wrinkles ka hona mere liyeh aik natural fact tha  . yon  keh len voh aik perfect silm woman thi jis ki wahid jis jo khbusurti ke mayaar par puri nahen thi voh they us ke nipples .

Kher sham ko tareeban 7 bajey meri ankh khooli or main ney uth kar khud tea bana kar pi or tv dekhney laga sham ka waqat tha or sardion ke din they to andher ho chukka tha mager bahar se bachon ke khelny ki awazen arahi the .  main ney wife ok phone kiya kher  kheriat li to us ney mujhy bataya ke subha us ki anila se bat hoi thi or anila ney khud offer ki ke voh tea bana kar de di ti to wife ney us ko mana nahen kiya and I agree .  is bat se mujh ko  itmenan ho gia ke sab kuch on the way he  ab mujhy sari excitement raat kit hi mazedar bat ye thi ke meri anila se koi bat nahen hoi thi or main excited bhi tha  or sath main ye bhi soch raha tha ke itna ziyada excited hony ki kiya need ager kuch ha hi naheen to phir ?


Raat ko 9 bajey again door knock hoa mere andazy ke mutabiq anila khana laai ho gi mager voh anila nahen us ki bethi thi mujh ko khana de kar chali gai  . or ab mere pass last 2 chances bachey they  aik ye ke is se pehly ke anila kisi ko khany ke bartan lene bheje main us ko  return karon to shyed mooqa lagey or dosra or last chance ye tha ke main phone karon .  bartaan wapas karna mere liyeh is liyeh ajeeb ho raha tha ke us par mujh ko yaqeen tha ke koi na koi bacha hi door open kary ga ager main ney knock kiya to . kher main ney khana kiya or abhi sochon main hi gum mere eyes ke bilkul samny mere ghar kar  grill ka door tha wooden hum open hi rakhty they hawa ke liyeh .

Samny se mujhy nechy ki taraf anilaa ati hoi nazar aai main us ki tangon se hi use pehchan raha tha or mujh ko nazar bhi sirf tangen hi arahi then .  voh chalti hoi aai apney ghar ke door open kiya or phir mere door ko nock karny lagi to main ney door open kiya or us ko ander any ko kaha mager us ney kaha ke  aap mujhy yaheen bartaan la den . main ney  bhi insist naheen kiya or sharafat se bartan lar kar us ke hath main pakra diye us ney  bartaan hath main lete hoye ahista se kaha . 11 bajey jab lite jaye gi aap foran mere ghar aker sidhy mere bed room chaley jana . 

I was amazed on my luck ke sab kuch hota chala jar aha he or ab mujhy  11 bajey ka intezar tha  excitement ki waja se time pass karna mushkil tha is liyeh main bahar nikal gia ke kuch khany peeny ke liyeh or cigurates ka quota le kar ajaaon .jese tese time guzra or raat ke 11 bajey schedule ke mutabiq power shutdown hoi or main ney apna door open kiya to samny ka door open nazar aya . main   ney  andhery main check kiya usually log  light jany se kuch time pehly hi hawa khori ke liyeh bahar nikaal aty they mager abhi koi nahen tha to main foran apna door band kar ke bager lock kiye anila ke ghar main ghus gia or  bilkul andhera tha main sedha chalta hoa gia or apny andazy ke mutabiq us ke bed room ke ander enter ho gia or door ander se band kar liyeh  ye aik chota sa 2 bed apartment tha ye meri is main first entry thi is liyeh mujh ko  bilkul koi andaza nahen tha ke us ka bedroom kon sa he or bachon ka kon sa he mager apny andazy se jo door open tha main us main hi enter hoa tha . or ander dakhil ho ker main ney door close kar liya  jese main ney door close kya foran hi lite agai . or main  bed par beth kar us ki zahanat ka fan ho gia tha kyon ke I know us ke ghar UPS he mager us ney inverter off kiya hoa tha or jese hi main enter h ogia us ney inverter on kiya tha jis se lite agai thi .


Main bedroom main akela betha tha  samny TV rakha tha mager us ko on karn himaqat thi bahar se kisi ki koi awaz nahen arahi thi biklul khamooshi thi us ke bad mujh ko  anila ki kuch awazen sunai den  jin ko main sun to raha tha mager samjh nahen sakta tha sath main bachon ki bhi or us ke bad door lock honey ki  is tamam time main taqreeban 45 minutes lag gahey they or ab light wapas any ka time tha . or finally  aik khubsurat smile ke sath anila  room main dakhil hoi main ney agey barh kar us ko apny hath main leny ki koshish ki to  us ney kaha itni jaldi kiya he rooken main bath le kar aati hon main ney kaha ke kiya ye bethar nahen tha ke tum mere ghar ajaten or hum wahan ziyada relax hoty to boli sorry aap ko kafi der akele bethna para  actually main ney  sidra or imran ko ammi ke ghar bheja or choton ko phenergan de kar sula kar aai hon takey hum araam se enjoy kar saken aap ruke main zara body wash kar ke aati hon or bathroom main chali gai mainney socha itni der main kiya karon to main ney apni jeans utar di or short ot tshirt main bed se tangen laka kar beth gia or TV on kar dia halki awaz main .  thori hi der main voh washroom se bahar nikli to us ney aik short nighty pehni hoi thi jo exactly us ki hips par end ho rahi thi or bahar nikly hoye hips ke thrugh us ki dubli laambi goori tangon par jhool rahi thi ye black and pink flowers wali  transparent type ki nighty thi or Is ke ander us ney g-string ya thoung  pehna hoa tha. 

Sach ye hai ke main us ko dekhta ka dekhta reh gia us ki jisaam wali  aesy chamak raha tha jese us main light ho or voh khary hoker or ghum kar mujh ko dikha rahi thi or main is  waqat apny aap ko khowab ki dunia main mehsos kar raha tha . phir mere liyeh bardasht se bahar ho raha tha is liyeh main ney uth kar us ko apni bahon main le lia or aik hath us ki back par or aik us ke hips ke nechey rakh kar us ko thora sa upper uthath hoey apny sath zoor se laga lia or  anila ney bhi mujhy bohat zoor se galy laga lia main ney us ke ki   neck ke pass se balon se pakra or us ke lips ko apny moon main chosny laga or sath hi sath us ke ki gand ko dabany laga or is hi tarah aik dosry ke hont chosty hoey voh mere kapry utarny lagi or mujhy pura nanga kar dia phir main ney us khary khary hi us ki necks ki sides or shoulders ko kiss karty ho zabaan phairty hoey us ki nigty alag kar di jis se us ke sakht breasts samny agaye main ney us ke dono  breasts ko apny dono hathon main pakar kar zoor se masla jis se us ke moon se seeeeeeeeeeeeeee ki awaaz nikaal aai aab voh sirf thong main mere sath khari thi oor main us ke shoulders  ko kiss karty or chosta hoa us ke breasts ki taraf barha apni zabaan bahar nikaal kar us ke breasts ke center par phiarta hoa nechy us ki neval tak gia or phir wapas aaker us ke dark brown nipple ko moon main le lia or chosny laga or voh sedhi khari thi mager us se raha naheen jar aha tha main aik hath se us ki choot ko  thong ke upper  se sehla raha tha or or or dosry hath se us ke hips ko acha khasa zoor se daba or noch raha tha  or us ke dono  nipples ko bari bari chose raha tha or us ke moon se musaal saal awazen nikal rahi then mazey se us ki laambi tangent main ney bamushkil  qaboo ki hoi then .


Phir voh khud hi zabardasti uth kar bed par ja kar let gai or tangen khool den yaqeenan voh aik dafa apna pani nikaal chuki thi main us ke pechey pechey bed par pohncha to us ney mujhy apni taraf khench kar apney galy laga lia or mere kaan main aishta se boli . akhir tum ney mujhy apni kuttiya bana hi lia mere liyeh ye bat aik shaded jhatka thi main thora sa alag hoa to us ney muskura kar ankh mari or boli kyon kuttiya  banana na tha na tum ko apni ?  main ney hairat or khushi se kaha haan mager tum ko kese pata ?  kehny lagi mujh ko sab pata he .  or phir apni tangent khool den main us ki tangon ke beach ja kar betha or or us ki thongs ki strings sides se  open kar den or ahista ahista us ki choot par se kapra hataya ye pehla mooqa tha ke main us ki choot ko baghor dekh raha tha  us ki choot subha clean nahen thi mager is waqat bilkul balon se be niaaz or aik daam clean thi  golden white skin main halky dark brown lips ander ki taraf hi daby hoey they or us ki choot ki saab se khas bat us ki clit ( choot ka dana) tha jo ke meri zindagi ka sab se bara size tha aaj se pehly main ney itna bara choot ka dana nahen dekha ha jo ke baqaida ubhar kar bahar ki taraf thora sa laka hoa tha taqreeban half inch se ziyada size ka.

Main mazey or hairaat se us ki choot ko dekh raaha that ha to us ki awaaz aai , kesi lagi meri choti lulli ?  or mujh ko hansi agai main ney us ki taraf hans kar dekha to voh bhi hans rahi thi ye meri chooti lulli he or aaj se tum bhi is ko choti lulli hi kehna  mujhy pata he tum ko sex ke darmiyan gandi baten or gandy words bohat pasand he mager ye meri choti lulli hi he  samjh gaye ? main ney kaha samjh to gia mager ye itni bary size ki kese he ?  Anila  : ye main tum ko bad main bataon gi pehly to aab is ki khidmaat ke liyeh tiyaar ho jao kyon ke is ko piyar kar ke hi tum mujh ko apni kuttiya bana sako gey . main ney kaha haan theek he mager  sex ke beach mera usool he  …… to voh meri bat kaat kar boli  jitni bar bhi discharge hon gi tum ko discharge hony se aik min pehly or discharge hoty waqat bataon gi right ? or main ney  apni hairaat ko chupaty hoey asbaat main sir hila dia . or  phir us ney apny hath se pakar kar kar mere face ko apni choot ki taraf guide kiya or main  us ki choot ki smell le kar us ku choot ke upper ki skin par zabaan phairny laga or phairta hoa  us ke dany par apni zabaan ghumai to voh machaal kar saraak kar nechey agai or or boli choos lo is ko asaad chooso aaaaaaaaaaaaah choosso meri chotti lulli ko  khush kar do is ko kiya kuttia tumhari  chosso zoor se please  aaaaaaaaaah araam se or bamushkil  2 minutes main us ney mera face balloon se pakaar kar  alag gia or haaaaaaaaaaay kary hoye us ki choot ney pani ugaal dia or pani  itna tha ke baqida nazar araha tha us ney mujh ko pakar kar upper ghaseeta or or boli  mazaa agia I love you  laao main aab tumhen tiyaar karti hon or voh  meri taraf apni gand kar ke mere lund ko  zabaan se chatny lagey main us ki khubusraat gand ko  sehla raha tha or  khool kar gand ke hole par finger phairny laga to pechey mur kar boli kesi he ? main ney kaha bohat khubusrat  to boli virgin he or shyed aaj tak tumhary liyeh hi utha kar rakhi hoi thi  . main ney check kiya to mujh ko waqai virgin hi mehsos hoi kyon ke gand ka hole bilkul  band tka  or even us ke atraaf kisi qisaam ke koi wrinkles bhi naheen  bilkul smooth or chikna main thora upper uth kar us ki goori gool gand ko chatny laga or jaga jaga se moon main le kar chosny laga or beach main ruk rukh kar let jata takey mera lund jo voh chose rahi thi us ko mehsos karon or enjoy karon voh  aik tajurba kaar auraat honey ke naaty intehai maharaat ke sath lund ko chose rahi thi janti thi ke kaab lund ke topy par zabaan ko gool gool ghumana he or kaab rukh kar chaatna he . 


main us ke jisaam par hath phair kar us ko garam rakhy hoey tha or apni 2 fingers us ki choot main daal kar ander bahar kar raha tha or us ki choot musalsal pani choor rahi thi  and I am enjoing it life time phir voh  pechy haati or boli chaloo ji aab sultaan  sahib ready hen ,  or main ny us ko pakar lar sedha litaya or dono tangen khol kar apna lund us ki choot par fit kiya us ke upper let kar us ko kissing ki or voh itni garaam thek ke nechey se apni gand uthaa kar pura lund ahista ahista ander le lia main bhi waheen rukh gia or voh nechey se uchaal uchaal kar lund ko ander bahar karny lagi or main us ke dono  breasts ko masal raha tha  phir us ke jisaam ney jhatkay liye or voh farigh ho gai choot ander se puri geeli  ho chuki thi to main ney foran charge liya or teez jhatkon se us ko choodna shurro kar dia  or main apni muakmal speed or taqat ke sath us ko chood raha tha lund adner  bahar kar raha tha or hum dono mazey se pagal ho rahey they  voh mujh se bol rahi thi chodo chodo chdo aasaad or zoor se chodo  phaar dalo  is kuttiya ko  bohat tang karti ye hai kameeni choot  or zoor se chodo aaj tum ney is ko thanda karna he  aaah aah aah main gaaai or voh  voh 2 nd time apna pani nikaal chuki thi or main aab kafi beqaboo ho raha tha is liyeh main ney position change karny ka faisla kiya or us ki aik tang apny shoulder par rakhi or aik bed par rehny di is se us ki choot ki aik side ko ziyada ragaarh milni thi us ki choot is had tak ander se garaam thi  ke main us ki choot ki garmi apny lund par baqiada mehsos kar raha tha or is ka jo maza mujhy arahaa tha voh main  biyaan nahen kar saka main ney is position main la kar jab us ko chodna shuroo kiya to us ka ka mazey se bura haal ho gia or voh itni tezi se panic horny lagi ke mere liyeh  bardasht karna mushkil ho gia or main ney uss se poucha kiya main farigh ho jaaon ?  us ney kaha ke haan ho jaao mager farigh honey ke bad bhi rukhna naheen karty rehna jab tak main na rokon . main ney pucha tumhara pani  kitni bar nikla he to boli pata nahn kitni bar bass aab jaldi karo  or main us ko us hi position main tez tez  chodny laga or  bil akhir us ki choot ke ander hi farigh ho gia mager mager  still andr bahar karta raha or 3,4 hi jhaton ke bad us ney khench kar mujhy apny upper le lia saardi ka mosaam tha mager hum dono ke jisaam paseeny se buri tarah bheegy hoey hey . main us ke upper let kar apni sansen bahaal kar raha tha or voh  mere jisaam ko piyaar se sehla rahi thi .  ghari dekhti to hamari ye chudai 1 ghanta 30 minutes ki thi raat ke 2 bajny waly they abhi hamary pass bohat time baqi tha enjoy karny ke liyeh to main relax ho kar let gia or us ke jisaam ko piyaar se sehlaa raha tha or khud ko bhi relax kar raha tha .


apni pasand or na pasand dono ke liyeh comments zaror karen or ager yahan karna pasand nahen to mere email address par mujhy apny raye zaror batain .
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Post by: away on March 18, 2016, 02:47:25 am
good one

thanks sara34 .  i hope you will like this update as well.
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Post by: nadia146 on March 18, 2016, 05:45:55 am
great so hot update moreee
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Post by: khaleefa on March 19, 2016, 02:21:44 am
Writting style se to story achhi lag rhi hai but Story padhi nahi maine abhi isliye kaisi story likhi hai uss par koi comment nahi kar sakta kal detail se story read karke hi comment kar paunga.  :punk:
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Post by: lover6712 on March 19, 2016, 03:36:41 am
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Post by: away on March 20, 2016, 02:47:04 am
thanks Khaleefa and lover6712
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Post by: khaleefa on March 21, 2016, 02:29:39 am
Awesome start and both update was nice. Your writting style is really good seems like Babar khan.  :devil2:

Waiting for next update :punk:


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Post by: peter on March 21, 2016, 02:13:31 pm
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Title: Re: the story
Post by: away on March 22, 2016, 03:26:13 am
Thanks sir khaleefa and peter :)
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Post by: khaleefa on March 23, 2016, 01:43:07 am
Thanks sir khaleefa and peter :)

Sir :eek:

Oh peter bhai ke liye kaha hoga your welcome bro.  :clown:
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Post by: away on March 24, 2016, 03:26:49 am
Thanks sir khaleefa and peter :)

Sir :eek:

Oh peter bhai ke liye kaha hoga your welcome bro.  :clown:


aap dono ke liyeh hi kaha tha :)
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Post by: khaleefa on March 25, 2016, 12:10:36 am
Thanks sir khaleefa and peter :)

Sir :eek:

Oh peter bhai ke liye kaha hoga your welcome bro.  :clown:


aap dono ke liyeh hi kaha tha :)

Mere liye "khaleefa" bhi kaafi hai bhaijaan.  :punk:
Title: Re: the story
Post by: away on March 25, 2016, 08:29:26 am
Thora relax honey ke bad anila uthi or aik chadaar utha kar nangi hi bahar nikaal gai.  Main ney cigurate  jalaai ,  jo log cigurate peety hen janty hen ke sex ke bad cigurate kiya maza deti he  aik bat to meri achi tarah se samjh agaai thi ke last 2 days se main jo  bhi plannings kar raha tha or apna demagh laga raha tha us main se kuch bhi meri planning or zahanat se nahen ho raha tha . ye sab kuch anila ke plan par hi ho raha tha  or dosri bat jo meri samjh nahen arahi thi voh ye ke aik to ye meharbani mujh par hi kyon or jis type ka lower middle class ye area tha us ke baar akaas anila ki chezen itni chnge kyon then or us ke ghar ke ghar ke ander ki nafasaat or voh us ki khud ki sexual or planning approaches  mere liyeh bohat impressive then jab ke on other hand us ko mobile phone par text msg tak karna nahen ata tha kafi sari chezen aik dosry se takra rahi then mager is waqat main is sab ko bhool kar apny time ko enjoy karna chata tha in hi sochon ke beach  anila apny jisaam ko chadaar de lapee aik tray ke sath room main enter hoi main ney apni us waqat ki sari sochon ko aik side par jhataak diya or anila ki taraf dekhny laga us ney muskura kar meri taraf dekhaty hoye bed par hi tray rakh di or apni chadaar utha kar side par rakh di us ka khubsurat jisaam karmy ki halki roshni main chamak raha tha  voh yaqeenan shakl  ke sath aik bohat khubusrat or maintain jisaam ki maalik thi  main ney us ko hath se pakar kar apni goad main bitha lia or us ke jisaam ko sehlaty hoye us ke mathy par  kiss ki voh mujhy waqai is waqat piyari lag rahi thi hum dono ney waheen apny upper chadar daal kar  khaya pia or aik dosry ke jisaam ko sehlany lagey mera lund again aik daam hard honey laga tha voh thi ji itni garaam ke lund sara waqat hard hi tha or main ney us ko goad main apny upper is tarah se adjust kar lia tha ke us ki tangen meri kamar ke dono taraf or mera lun jo is us ke jisaam ki garmi se mukamaal hard tha us ki naaf or breasts ko touch kar raha tha hum dono again aik dosry ke hont chosny lagey phir main ney us ko bed par hi dono tangen open kar ke khara kiya or khud bed ki back se taik laga kar beth gia or anila ko choot mere face par lany ko kaha us ke chehry ki khushi dekhny ke laaiq thi or voh foran uth kar khari ho gai or apni chamakti hoi choot mere face par le aai or main ney us ki choot ki phankon ke darmiyaan beth kar apni zabaan  upper se nchey or nechey se upper ki taraf phairni shuroo ki . main choot ker dany par aker apni zaban se thora sa gool gool ghumata or phir wapse nechey tak le jata anila ke moon se mazey se awazen nikalni shuroo ho gai then us ney dono hathon se bed ki back ko pakra hoa tha or lamba qaad hony ki waja se thora se tangon ko moor kar apni choot ko mere face par ragar rahi thi us ki gand bahar ko nikli hoi thi or or main us ko us ke chutaroon se pakar kar qaboo  kiye hoe tha verna us ki tangen  taqreeban us ki qaboo main nahen then aik to maza or dosry angel kafi mushkil tha us ke liye khara honey ke liyeh or mujhy is chez ka pata tha ke is qisam ke angles main jo maza hota he voh kafi mukhtalif hota he  specially un logon ke liyeh jo sex experienced  hon .  voh apni choot ko mere face par ragar rahi thi or musal sal awazen nikal rahi thi  khaa jao meri choot ko asaad  kha jaao apni kuttia ki choot ko  ooh I love it   choodo apni kutiya ki choot ko apni zabaan se jaan I love it  or is hi tarah ki baten kar rahi thi or main us ki choot par mukamal dehan ke sat us ko maza de raha tha or or us ki gand ko qaboo kiye hoe tha  or  bohat jaldi us ki tangen boha tezi ke sath thar tharany lagen main samjh gia tha ke ye apni manzil par pohanch rahi he main ney apni face ko thora pechey kiya mager us ney  age barh kar apni choot ko mere chehry par dabaya or us  ki choot ney garaam garaam pani nikaal dia jo ke kafi tezi se aker mere chehry par laga tha  jab tak us ki choot ka pani  nikla voh us hi position main rahi or phir nechey aker mujh se sory karny lagi .
Sorry jaan I am sorry mager main mazey main itna doob gai thi or is mazey ko torna bilkul nahen chahti thi is liyeh tumhary  face par hi discharge ho gai . main ney kaha  is main sorry ki kiya bat he ? hum enjoy kar rahey hen or hum ko her us tareeqy se enjoy karna chyeah he jis main tum ko ya mujh ko maza aye . mager aab ye jo pani mere face par laga he is ko tum saaf karo gi . voh muskura kar boli haan main hi saaf karon gi or jo tum bolo gey main voh karon gi asaad tum ney mujhy samjho khareed liya he aaj main is sex ko aesy enjoy kar rahi hon jese main ney life main pehli bar sex ko enjoy kia tha mager is main mujh ko us se bohat ziyada maza araha tha . tum ney meri choot ko piyaar de kar mujh ko or meri choot ko khareed liya he is ko aaj tak kabhi mere husband ney aesy piyar nahen kia balkey piyar hi naheen kiya
Thank you very much asaad I love you . or  us ki ankhon main mujhy sach or thankfulness nazaar aai . phir voh uth kar washroom gai or main bhi washroom kyon ke face wash karna tha face wash karny se pehly main ney socha ke peshab kar lia jaye vese bhi sex ke bad mujhy need hoti he  anila ney kaha tum bohat besharaam ho  to main ney kaha haan waqaai main sex ke waqat  bilkul sharam pasand nahen karta  to anila ney muskura kar kaha mujhy pata he is liyeh hi itni besharaam banai hon aaj tumhary sath main ney kaha is main besharmi kiya he sex to aesy hi hota he to  boli batati hon  main ney poucha kiya batana he ? anila mere lund ki taraf ishara kar ke boli ke ye jo sahib latky hoey hen in ko khara kar ke dikhati hon tum ko aik sec main main ney kahaa acha voh kese ? to bolti tum commode par beth kar pehly  farigh ho lo main ney kaha  main beth kar nahen khary ho ker ho ho longa to voh hans kar boli voh to mujh ko pata he mager tum betho to main ja kar beth gia or voh aker meri taraf face kar ke mere samny beth gai main ney jese hi urine pass karna shuroo kiya aik daam se mujhy awaaz ke sath us ki garam garam dhaar apny lund par mehsos hoi anila ney apna hath apni choot par rakha hoa tha or voh do unglion se apni choot khool kar  mere lund par peshaab kar rahi thi or mera lund is chez se or us ki choot se nikalny wali awaaz or urine ki dhar se aik daam hard ho gia in result meri dhaar patli ho gai or sedhi us ki choot par nishana banany lagi anila ney hath barha kar mere lund ko pakar kar us ki direction theek ki or mere kaan ko chosty hoey bolti aya maza ?
Ye meri zindagi ka aik bilkul new tajurba tha bawajood gandgi mehsos karny ke main ney is ko bohat enjoy kiya or main bilkul beqaboo sa ho gia tha mera lund choot main jany ke liyeh bilkul bechain ho gia tha main ney anila ko agey kiya or  apna iron hard lund us ki choot main de dia jo ke aik daam us ki choot main ander tak utar gia anila ney upper se jhatky lagana shuroo kar diye main kyon ke toiles seat par tha or us ka angle tareeban aesa tha ke main hil bhi nahen sakta tha to main us ke  jhatkon ko enjoy kar raha tha  phir main ney us ko kamar se pakar kar apny sath mazboti se laga lia or aab anila tangon ke zoor ke bajaye  apni kamar hila hila kar apni choot lund se chudwa rahi thi main jese hi us ki kamar chorta voh foran tangon ki base par start kar deti is liyeh main ney us ko kamar se pakara hoa tha or main us ki kamar ki movment se hony wali chudai ko bohat enjoy kar raha tha us ki choot bohat  jaldi jaldi pani choor rahi thi or us ki  choot ki garmi  jese mujhy pighla rahi thi apny lund par mehsos hony wali us ke choot ka androni  naraam garam or geela pan mujh ko apni puri body main mehsos ho raha tha or aesa lag raha tha jese main pura pighal raha hon  I feel ke main jaldi discharge honey wala hon to main ney is liyeh  foran position change ki anila ko goad main le kar upper utha or us ko goad main liye liye hi table top par bitha dia or or kuch der us ko halky jhatky de kar  speed main chodna shuoo kar dia voh bhi apni gand hila hila kar sath de rahi thi or  hum full speed main dono sync ho ker chudai ka maza le rahey they anila  jhatky kha kha kar pani chor rahi thi or us ki tangen  buri tarah se kaanp rahi then or phir us ki choot ne lawa choor dia or mere liyeh bhi bardasht karny ke qabil nahen raha tha or main ney bhi akhiri do,3  jahtkon ke bad pani us ki choot main chor dia us ki choot se pani baqiada tapak kar nechey girha tor or us ki raanden chamaak rahi thi main ney usy galy laga dia mera lund abhi bhi us ki choot main tha or voh nidhaal ho ker mere upper hi rest kar rahi thi it was so hot  hum dono paseenon se naha gaye they or phir hum dono ney bath lia bath lete hoye mainney us ki gand ko piyar karny laga or mera lund us  ki gand ko dekheny or piyar karny dabany se aik dafa phir hard ho gia tha ki gand waqaai bohat mazedar thi  voh meri taraaf hairaani se dekh kar boli ye phir taiyaar ho ?  main ney  kaha ye cheez hi ini mast he to voh muskra kar boli voh to he or phir main ney us ko ulta kar ke jhukaaya to voh mujh se requesting way main boli please aaj naheen main aaj bohat ziyada thaak gai hon or meri choot kafi dard kar rahi he  main ney bhi us ko choor dia or hum bath le kar wapas aker bed par let gaye aab hum ko sardi  lagny lagi thi to apny upper blanket le lia or relax karny lagey . voh mujh se boli tum ney bura to naheen mana ?  main ney kaha ke mujhy us waqat acha feel nahen hoa tha mager its okie main bhi aab kafi thaak chukka hon or main tumhari mazedar ko shyed mukamaal enjoy nahen kar pata abhi to is liyeh kheer he or hum dono hi is bat par muskura diye  subha ke 5 bajny waly they  sardi ki waja se  raaten laambi then mujhy ab apny ghar jana chyeah tha mager mere zahan main bohat sary sawaal they main ney anila se kaha ke main kuch pouchna chahta hon to us ney  mere seeny par sir rakhy rakhey hi jawab dia ke aabhi ruk jaao  main tum ko tumhary har sawaal ka jawab don gi or mujhy bhi tum se bohat kuch pouchna he  mager abhi main bass relax hona chahti hon meri choot kafi dard kar rahi he or meri tangen vese kaanp rahi he jese  shadi ke shuroo ke dino main sex ke bad kanpa karti then  or us ki tangen waqaai kanp rahi then main ney kaha ke shyed is liyeh ke kafi dino ke bad tum ney sex kiya he to us ney jawab dia kafi dino naheen kafi salon ke bad sex kiya he main ney  mager main khush honk e main ney tum ko chose kiya main ney again sawal kiya ke tum ko mera lund pasand aya ? to voh boli mujh ko lund nahen tum pasand aye ho or sath hi tumhara lund or piyar krny ke tareeqy bhi .  in hi baton ke daar miaan hum dono ko bohat neend any lagi main ney kaha ab mujhy jana chyeah he voh boli haan  tum jaao mager ruko pehly main bahar dekh kar aati hon voh uth kar  kuch kapry pehan kar bahar gai or 10 minues bad wapas aai or boli ajao  mujhy le kar apny flat ke door tak aai or mere hath aik  shopping bad de kar boli ye lo . main ney pucha ye kiya he to haans kar ahista awaz main boli ghar ja kar dekh lena koi boomb nahen dia he tum ko  . main ney back liya or gallery cross kar ke apny apartment main ager door lock kiya or sony let gia .
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Post by: nadia146 on March 30, 2016, 01:30:46 am
nice story but we need update as soon
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Post by: urdu munda on March 30, 2016, 04:30:34 pm
Bohat he aala or mazedaar story. Aap ka waqiyat ko bayan karnay ka andaz bohat he sada or dilnasheen hai. Pl keep it up.... thanks
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Post by: Leokadia_Sarkari on March 30, 2016, 07:28:36 pm
I love hardcore sex
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Post by: away on March 31, 2016, 01:40:49 am
nice story but we need update as soon

thanks Nadia i will try to update story fast
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Post by: away on March 31, 2016, 01:41:24 am
Bohat he aala or mazedaar story. Aap ka waqiyat ko bayan karnay ka andaz bohat he sada or dilnasheen hai. Pl keep it up.... thanks

Thanks Urdu Munda :)
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Post by: away on March 31, 2016, 01:42:31 am
I love hardcore sex

its just beginning Leokadia  hardcore sex will increase with the story . 
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Post by: dexter on April 19, 2016, 10:07:21 pm
very nice story Mr Away ,

one of the few which feels real and lovely style of writing .
last update me kafi jaldi jaldi likh gye hen aaap.

next update kub den gey ?

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Post by: sara34 on April 21, 2016, 11:40:19 pm
yeh writer b bhag gya
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Post by: dexter on April 23, 2016, 03:10:45 am
yeh writer b bhag gya

is ke bhi dil ko ghaam lag gia ho ga ke na insaafi ho rahi he is ke sath :D jab ke main ney to tareef bhi ki :)

ya to story PM par chal rahi ho gi aab :D
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Post by: fit.kuri on April 23, 2016, 05:30:37 am
yeh writer b bhag gya

is ke bhi dil ko ghaam lag gia ho ga ke na insaafi ho rahi he is ke sath :D jab ke main ney to tareef bhi ki :)

ya to story PM par chal rahi ho gi aab :D

kesi na insufi ?  write to 3 updates de kar hi gayab ho gye
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Post by: devilfrompk on April 23, 2016, 08:12:04 am
cooooooooooooooooool
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Post by: away on May 26, 2016, 08:02:55 am
cooooooooooooooooool

thanks :)
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Post by: ghufi on May 27, 2016, 08:32:01 pm
Update please
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Post by: ghufi on May 27, 2016, 08:32:20 pm
Update please
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Post by: khaleefa on May 28, 2016, 01:20:09 am
Update please
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Post by: Staddle on May 28, 2016, 12:24:17 pm
Update please
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Post by: away on June 17, 2016, 09:50:30 pm
thanks everyone i will update it soon
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Post by: incense on June 19, 2016, 05:55:15 am
You are  GREAT WRITER !!! The story is outstanding !!! bohut dinon baad koi achi hot sexy story parrhney ko mili !!! and this dirty talk was awesome !! i hope k agay aur bhi ziada sexy gandgi aye gi story mei khaas kar uski gand chaatney aur uski khushbbo k baarey mei !!!  give update soon. a
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Post by: enjoywith on June 19, 2016, 12:18:33 pm
thanks everyone i will update it soon

damakedar story hai bhai....bus update nahi aaya toh story par visit hi nahi kiya...kab tak update ka program hai
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Post by: away on July 08, 2016, 04:45:26 am
agla pura hafta bilkul us hi tarah se guzra jese ke kuch bhi na hoa hoa mager aab main kafi had tak  satisfy tha kyon ke maujh ko pata ke anila khud sab kuch manage karti he or bahar haal mere nazdeek voh mujh se bohat ziyada  behtar tareeqy se manage karti thi kyon ke  us ko un sab baton chezon logon even meri wife tak ke schedules ka pata hota tha ke kab kon kahan he .


pura week guzar gia or wed ko meri wife apny parents ke ghar gai hasbe mamool or main intezar main tha ke aab kaab mohtarma mujh ko contat karti hen bohat sary sawalat they jo mere zahan main musalam saal ghoom rahey they or main  un ko sawalon ke jawab naheen nikaal pa raha tha jo kuch bhi ho rahaa tha meri life ke liye kafi ziyada strange is liye tha kyon ke ye zindagi main pehli bar tha ke main mukamal kisi or ki command main tha or aik aesa ajeeb ho gareeb relation develop ho raha tha jis main  aaj ke zamany main hoty hoye bhi koi mobile phone contact nahen tha  main even apni pasand se na dekh sakta tha na bula sakta tha na hi bat kar sakta tha untill and unelss  she want it or she feels right . mere liyeh is qisam ka ye first or ab tak ka last hi exprience tha to kisi na kisi tor par main is ko enjoy kar raha tha kyon ke ye sab se mukhtalif  tha .  or shyed is liyeh hi mere liyeh ziyada interesting hota ja raha tha . or sath main intehai personality mistry alag .


main expect kar raha tha ke  subha main kuch ho ga kyon ke bachey school hoty hen but kuch na hoa  shaam ko main bahar gia or wapas aya to meri expectation ke mutabiq voh mujhy apny bachy ke sath  walk karti hoi nechy mil gai main ney  rasmi tor par salam kiya or jawab main muskura kar salam ka jawab mila  genral bat hoi wife ki kheriat etc or main apny flat par agia or intezar karny laga light ke jany ka. kisi ka kisi tarah  TV dekh kar time guzara or finally light jany ka time hony se 2 minutes pehly hi main apny door par khara ho gia again it was all blank mujhy kuch nazar nahen araha tha samny mager main expect kar raha tha ke voh mujhy dekh rahi ho gi  light gai or is se pehly ke baqi log bhi apny flats se bahar nikalty samny ka door open hoa or  main ghar ke ander enter ho kar sedha us room main pohanch gia jahan mujhy jana ha or door band kar lia .


next 10 minutes tak kuch na hoa or main  us waqat waqai main ye sochny main masroof ho gia ke ahmaaq insaan khaeen tum galat to naheen khus aaye ho us ke ghar main or ye soch kar mujh ko hansi bhi arahi thi or tention bhi ho rahi thi  aap main se jin logon ka tajurba ho ga voh ye janty hon gey is qisam ki chezon main akser demagh ke darwazy band ho jaty hen or mer demagh ke darwazy again us waqat open hoye jab room main light on ho gai khud bad ....... shukar ka aik sans lia ke main galat nahen ghus aya tha kyon ke ager main galat aya hota to ups off na hota or mere ander any ke bad on na hota .



thori der main anila room main enter hoi main ney hath barha kar us ko apni taraf kheenha or apni good main  bitha kar us ke mathy par kiss di us ney apny honth mere honton par rakh dye or or main ney us ka nichla hont apny moon main ley kar choosna shuroo kar dia hum dono ki sansen mix honey lagen or phir us ney apna face aalag kar ke mujhy kaha ke thori der intezar karo mujhy  aik ghanta lagey ga farigh honey or bachon ko sulany main . mere pass muskura kar haan karny ke alava koi chara nahen tha to main ney ye hi kiya or voh bhi samjh gai is bat ko or muskura kar mere balon main hath phiar kar chali gai jaty waqat voh room ko lock kar ke gai thi  ke kaheen koi bacha galati se ander na ajaye .



again next one hour or so mere pass cell phone se khelny ke alava koi rasta naheen tha voh aik gahnta to door ki bat infect 2 hours bad room main wapas aai or in between mere cell phone ke charge bhi end par pounach chuki thi .


apny sath dinner ke liyeh kafi kuch laai thi . i think main pehly bata chuka hon ke she is very good in cooking and my wife use to learn form her too. kehny lagai bohat book lagi he main ney bhi nahen khaaya he khana voh lag raha tha ke bath le kar aai he kyon ke baal bilkul geely they .  main ney kaha madaam aap ke chakkar main mere cell ki battery end ho gai he to muskra kr boli tumhari to naheen hoi he na or ager hoi bhi ho gi to main charge kr don gi dont wory .
sachi bat ye hai ke meri battery to charge hi charge thi infect sirf us ko dekh kar hi lund khara ho raha tha :) hum ney sath khana khya or us ke bad main bed par  taik laga kr let gia or voh bartaan sameet kar bahar chali gai .



wapas aai to main ney us ko apni taraf kheencha us ney blak or ferozi color ka lawn ka suite pehna hoa tha jis main voh bohat khubsuraat lag rahi thi ( keh len mujhy to lagti hi bohat khubsart thi )


voh mere uper aker let gai apni tangen mere dono taraf nikaal kar or mere jeanz ke uper se hi apni choot mere lund par ragar kar mere lund ko mehsos kar ke boli kiya bat he aaj to ye abhi se hi hard he .


main ney kaha tum ney intezar hi itna long karwaya he pura week tum aesy gayab hoti ho jese ho hi naheen or us ke bad yaah gayab ho gati ho us ney piyaar se mere  lips par kiss ki or boli ye sab bohat zarori he verna shaak hony ka daar he aap to new hen yahaan par mager hum log yahaan par us waqat se hen jab yahaan chand hi families then . or is liyeh mere husband ko sab janty bhi hen or sab se dosti bhi he ye aap soch hi sakty hen ke ager kisi ney un ko kuch bhi keh dia to kiya hoga ........


vese main bohat ziyada nahen darti . .... again main ye note kar ke chup ho gia ke voh kyon bohat ziyada nahen darti mager abhi main is par time barbad nahen karna chahta tha to main ney us ko pakar kar apny upr khenhcha or us ke hont chosny laga or voh bhi mera sath dene lagai main hont chosty hoye us ke back ko sehla raha tha or ahisnta ahist mere hath us ki gand tak pouhanh gaye main ney us ki naraam gand ko dabana shuroo kiya ahista aihta main us ke doni chutaron ke darmiyaan wali line par shalwar ke uper se hi   upser se nechy choot tak  sehla raha tha apni 4 fingers beach main rakh kar or us ki sansen tez hoti ja rahi then .  main ney  us ko apny aap se alag kiya or us ney meri shirt utar di or apni shirt bhi. or main ney pechay hath daal kar us ki bra ke huk khool diye jis main se last wala atak gia or voh hansny lagi aap se to ye bhi nahen khulta ...... main ney kaha tumhary bra sachi quality ki naheen he or voh boli ji naheen janab main hamesha CFG ki bra use karti hon jo kafi expencive hoti he .



us ke gory naraam  doodhoo samny nikaal aye main ney jhosh main dono ko pakar kaar kafi ziyada zoor se nichoor dia jis par us ki  kafi zoor daar siskari nikaal gai ye sikari itni ziyada zoor ki thi ke main bhi pareshaan ho gia ke kahen koi sun na le. main ney  kaha ahista to bolo to kehny lagi  itni zoor se dabaty hen kiya zalim ! vese  sirf chota he jo ke so raha he or sun bhi le ga to  us ko andaza nahen ho paye ga kuch or sadaf he . usko main ney aaj rooka he  bachon ko sambhalny ke liyeh


main sadaf ka naam sun kar uchaal gia. sadaf is ke ghar kaam karny wali larki thi jo ke 18.20 saal ki dubli patli or kafi gori sariki speaking larki thi . kafi khush shakal or masoom si thi mager thi kafi taiz baqool meri wife ke kyon ke aik 2 bar us ney kaam karwaya tha is se .


main ney hairaani se kaha ke sadaf sun le gi to ?  to voh muskura kar boli fikar na karo aik number ki haramzadi he voh or us se mujh ko koi khatra naheen he in ki naslen hamary pass kaam karti aai hen is liyeh hi is ko rooka he ke hum disturb na hon .


again mere liyeh shaded jhatka tha ke aik 2 bed ke flat main rehny wali ke pass naslon se kaam karny wali larki he mager again filwaqat ke liyeh main ney khayalat ko jhatka  or aik or sawal apney pass add kar ke main ney us ke breakst ko dabana or chosna shuroo kar dia . voh musalsaal meri jeanz par apni choot ragar rahi thi or ab tak mujhy yaqeen tha ke us ki choot ka pani meri jeanz ko geela kar chuka hoga is liyeh main apni jeanz utarna chahta tha  is se pehly ke nishaan paida hony shuroo ho jain us ke dono nipples main bari bari chose raha tha or kafi bedardi ke sath daba raha tha or us ki siskariyaan or awazen tez hoti ja rahi then dono  breasts  aab mukamaal geely or pink ho chuky they nipples hard ho kar khary ho gaye to jo ke bohat hi khubusurat look de rahey they anila kafi ziyada garam ho chuki thi us ney khud hi apni shalwar utar di or ab voh mere samny puri nangi thi bawajod apni umer or bachon ke she is a class of beauty . apni shalwar utar kar voh meri neck par kiss karti hoi aai or apni zabaan bhar nikaal kar mere seeny ke beach se line khenchti hoi meri belt tak aai or belt open ki and then buttong and zip or  aik sath hi meri jeanz or underwear utarti hoi nechy chali gai kapron ko side par phenk kar voh wapas mere uper aai aaj voh waqai bohat garaam thi  mere uper aty hoey main ney mehsos kia ke voh shyed aik , 2bar  already frigh ho chuki he kyon ke us ki ranon ke andorni hisaab bhi mere jisaam se jahan jahan touch hoa geela tha  mere lund jo jeanz utarny par aik jhatky se khara ho gia to us ko us ney apny aik hath main liya or dosry hath se mere balls ko sehlaty hoye dono balls par apni zabaan phairny lagi or phir zaban phiarti hoi mere lund se hoti hoi mere lund ke topy par aker us par apni zaban gol gol ghumany lagi phir mere lund ko us ney moon main le lia or lund ko apny moon se chodny lagi main ney us ka sir pakar kar apna lund us ke ander bahar karny laga or josh main kabhi kabhi ziyada ander kar deta tha jis se us ko  ubkaai ajati thi . mera lund us ke moon ki garmi pa kar bohat hard ho chuka tha or aab mere liyh controll karna mushkil ho raha tha to main ney us ko sedha litya or tangon ke beach main beth kar apna lund us ki choot ke moon par rakha or  lund ka topa us ki choot ke lips par uper nechey karny laga  kabhi kabhi uper le ja kar us ki choot ke dany par gool gool ghumata mutlab lund ka head or us ki choot ka dana jo ke size main kafi bara tha dono rigarta us ki choot kafi pani chor rahi thi or voh kafi bechain ho rahi thi mager main is ko lamba karna chah raha tha is liyeh  time le raha tha or bil akhir anila ney khud hath barha kar lund ka toba apni choot ke soorakh main ghusa dia main ruk gia.


voh meri taraf dekh kar boli rukh kyon gaye please aab chodo mujh ko mujh se or bardhast nahen ho raha he ajao mere uper or mere uper charh kar mujh ko chodo . or ye sun kar mujhy bhi josh agia or main ney  aik jhatky main pura lund us ki choot maindala or us ke dono tangon ke beach main se hath guzar kar us ke dono mammon se us ko pakra or puri raftaar se us ko chodny laga beach beach main break de kar main time increase kar raha tha or phir again speed taiz kar ke maza de or le raha tha us ki puri body roll ki hoi thi main ney or us ki choot ki garmi mujhy apny lund par mehsos ho rahi thi  us ki choot musalsal pani choor rahi thi or is liyeh full speed main chudai chal rahi thi sathi hi sath voh mujh se gandi zaban main bat bhi kar rahi thi jo us ko pata tha ke mujh ko bohat pasand he like  choddo mujhy or zoor zoor se chodo phaar do meri choot ko  kutty chood apni kuttiya ko  etc . taqreeban 40 minutes ki chudai ke bad us ney mujh se kaha ke apna pani nikaalo aab  bhaar do meri choot ko or us ki choot jo musal saal mere lund ko girp kar rahi thi  jis ka multab voh disharge ho rahi thi aab or ziyada zoor se mere lund ke cap se thora  neecy  girp kar rahi thi main bhi us waqat taqreeban discharge hony ke qareeb ho gia main ny us ko kah ake main  farigh honey wala hon us ney kaha ho jaao farigh bhaar do meri choot ko apny pani se nikalo apna pani or is hi tarah ki baten us ke moon se sunty hoey main disharge ho gia or discharge ho ker us ke uper hi let gia or voh meri back ko sehlany or  mujhy kisses karny lagi main apni sansen theek kar raha tha or hum dono paseena paseena ho gaye they .......... main ney AC of kiya or uper se hath kar ja kar bath le kar aya or phir anila bhi bath le kar nangi hi  wapas aai or aker mere pass meri goad main beth gai . main ney us ko galy laga lia voh mere kaan mian boli dekho tumhary liye bilkul besharam ban gai hon  aesy hi acha lagta he na tum ko or main ney  haan main sir hila kar us ke honton par aik choti si kiss kar di . main us ke jisaam ko sehlany laga or sohny laga ke aab mujh ko is se voh sawal pouhny chyeah hen jo mere zahan main musalsal ghum rahey they or sach ye tha ke main is hi waja se sex ko bhi 100% enjoy naheen kar pa raha tha .



to main ney finally  decision lia ke aab mujh ko apny sawal karna shroo kar dena chahye hen. although  ye chez mujh ko mehngi bhi par sakti thi kyon ke usually in start of a relation aap zarorat se ziyada ghusna shuroo kren to relation hi khatam ho jata he mager  still main ye risk lene ko tiyar ho gia or main ney kaha Anila mere pass bohat sary sawalat jama ho gaye hen or is waja se mera zahan kafi uljha hoa he us ney muskura kar mujhy dekha or boli mujhy andaza he or yaqeen rakho main tum ko dil se pasand karti hon  or tum se apni koi bhi pichli zindagi ki bat naheen chupaon gi balkey voh haqiqaten bhi bataon gi jo mere bary me mere alava koi nahen janta or mujhy  yaqeen he voh hamesha sirf tum tak hi rahen gi kyon ke tum meri zindagi ke 2nd insaan ho jis ko main ney dil se pasand kiya he pehli dafa main bohat kaam umer thi mager ab mujhy zindagi ka bohat achi tarah se andaza he is liyeh yaqeen he ke is dafa main ney galati naheen ki hogi .  main ney us ko apny galy laga kar us ke mathy ko choma or bola yaqeen rakho ke tumhari koi bat kabhi kisi ko pata nahen lagey gi or main tumhari izaat ki hifazat karon ga or us ney bhi kaha ke haan mujhy yaqeen he .  main ney kaha ke ok phir mujhy batao vese to or bohat sary questions they mager abhi filwaqat mujhy sab se pehly or sab se important sawal jo pouchna he voh ye hai ke ye sadaf ka kiya chakkar he is par tum ko itna bharosa kese he ? mere khyal main ye kafi samjhdaar larki he .
us ney again muskura kar meri taraf dekha or boli us ki fikar na karo main ney tum se kaha na ke voh kuch naheen kary gi ziyada se ziyada hamari chudai dekh rahi ho gi or mujh ko is khayal se hi jhurjuri agai ke  hamari ye sari sex activites kisi ney dekhi hen voh mere face reaction ko  bhamp gai or zoor se hans kar boli bass itni si bat par daar gaye ?  arry naheen dekhi ho ga us ney kuch mere room main koi window nahen he  ager tum ghoor karo or doors se  koi naheen jhank sakta mazaq kar rahi thi mager haan kabhi hum us ko dikhain gey bhi bohat garaam he kamini or hum bhi enjoy karen gey ke koi humen chup kar dekh raha he ankh maar kar boli kiya kehty ho ?


mainey  still  shock main tha or main ney yes main sir to hila dia but still mere zahan ke liyeh baten complicated se complicated hoti ja rahi  or  bahar haal main is fear ka bhi kisi had tak shikaar hony laga tha ke kahen main khud bhi kisi bary chakkar main to nahen phansny wala hon .........
Title: Re: the story
Post by: enjoywith on July 08, 2016, 10:23:22 am
great update bhai....after so long....hope ab update jaldui aayenge
Title: Re: the story
Post by: gonihrk on July 08, 2016, 12:23:21 pm
very very nice........................

update.............................................

dear.......................................................
Title: Re: the story
Post by: away on July 09, 2016, 08:38:11 am
great update bhai....after so long....hope ab update jaldui aayenge

thanks bro :) asul me user idar  comments karna pusand nei karty is liye ye bhi samj nahen araha hota ke story likhi bhi jaye agye ya naheen . hum fazol apny ap ko thaka rahey hen or shyed sab ko bore kar rahy hen mehnat kar ke :)
Title: Re: the story
Post by: away on July 09, 2016, 08:41:14 am
very very nice........................

update.............................................

dear.......................................................


thanks bro :)
Title: Re: the story
Post by: hard.sinner on July 10, 2016, 12:40:01 am
Nice update  lagta hai anila sadaf ko bhi chudwaye gi aur agar story lambi chali tau shaid anila ki beti ka number bhi lag sakta hai, wese agar lag kaye tau kamal ho jaye ga.
Title: Re: the story
Post by: enjoywith on July 10, 2016, 06:47:13 pm
great update bhai....after so long....hope ab update jaldui aayenge

thanks bro :) asul me user idar  comments karna pusand nei karty is liye ye bhi samj nahen araha hota ke story likhi bhi jaye agye ya naheen . hum fazol apny ap ko thaka rahey hen or shyed sab ko bore kar rahy hen mehnat kar ke :)

is iste par kuch gine chune log hi comment karte hain..agar aap comment ke liye likhte ho toh yahan na ummed hi milegi....isliye agar likhana hai toh bina ummed ke liye apne liye likho.....
Title: Re: the story
Post by: away on July 11, 2016, 02:29:09 am
great update bhai....after so long....hope ab update jaldui aayenge

thanks bro :) asul me user idar  comments karna pusand nei karty is liye ye bhi samj nahen araha hota ke story likhi bhi jaye agye ya naheen . hum fazol apny ap ko thaka rahey hen or shyed sab ko bore kar rahy hen mehnat kar ke :)

is iste par kuch gine chune log hi comment karte hain..agar aap comment ke liye likhte ho toh yahan na ummed hi milegi....isliye agar likhana hai toh bina ummed ke liye apne liye likho.....

thik keh rahey hen aap . mager mera maqsad sirf ye kehna tha how to judge that i am writing it good bad or worst :)  anyway i will post :)
Title: Re: the story
Post by: away on July 11, 2016, 02:35:26 am
jesa ke main is se pehly bhi kafi dafa bol chuka hon or shyed ap sun sun kar aab bore h ogaye hon gey ye meri life ka strange tareen case tha jahan main bajay chezon ko oprate karny ke bajaye khud oprate hota aya tha or voh bhi aik kahtoon ke hathon hathon jahan beshak sab kuch meri pasand ka or bohat mazedar tha mager still mere hath kuch nahen tha to main is pury story ki jo mere hi uper chal rahi thi ke bary main janna chahta tha or ye sab sochty hoye main ney us se  pehla sawal jo ke mere khyal main  is point of view se aham tha ke is se kafi sary answers nikaal any they . to main ney puch lia ke ye sadaf ki family  naslon se kese tum logon ki mulaazim he ?

anila ney aik gerhi sans li or boli ..... main janti thi ke tum ye sawal karo gey or mere moon se ye galati se nahen nikla balky is liyeh nikla tha kyon ke main tum ko sab kuch batana chahti thi or aaj tum ko apny pouchy gaye ziyada taar sawalon ke jawab mil jain gey . main tum ko apny bary main batati hon voh haqiqaten jo chand logon ke alava koi nahen janta .

main khamooshi se sun raaha tha us ney pani ke chand ghont piye or bolna shuroo ho gai .

( guys story ka ye portion under age main ata he mager ye underage honey ke alava ho nahen sakta tha or ye undersage sex naheen he sex related baten he jo mere khyal main is qisam ke waqiat underage bachon ke sath hoty hen not exectly but some differnt or ye likha bhi sex ke liyeh nahen balky parda uthany ke liyeh he ye sab bhi hota he to ager site adminstration is ko galat samjhti he to voh portion remove kar den )

mera talooq darasal karachi se naheen lahore se hai or mere father counstrucation ke business karty hen hum log Alama Iqabal town main rehty they or sab se bara mera aik bhai phir hum 2 behnen or phir aik chota bhai tha mere father karachi or lahore dono jaga construction kary hen residencial flats ki .meri sex life ki ibteda is larki sadaf ki maan ney ki thi us waqat main nai nai jawan hoi thi 7th class main parhti thi jab sadaf ki maan rehana ney chand rupes ke lalach main mere sath sex ka khel shuroo kar dia mujhy jab 2nd time mensis hoye to is ko pata lag gia  bachi hony ke naaty mere liye voh hez aik intehai takleef deh amal bhi tha or sath hi sath nai nai jawani ki hadon ko chony se meri choot main ahsaasat ki shuraat thi bara ghar hony ki waja se hum sab ke rooms alag alat or  bilkul private they or ghar main kaam afraat hony ki waja se aik dosry ki itni kher khabar bhi na hoty thi meri maan apny clubs ke groups main masroof hoti then ye rehana rooz mere room main aajati or meri kher khabar leti or ahista ahista ye meri waahid raazdan ban gai jis ko main apni madad samjhti thi aik dafa main mahwari se farigh ho chuki thi or taqreeban 5.6 din ho chuky they rehana mere pass ai or vese hi haal haal pouch kar boli ke kesi tabiat he or kiya haal hen ?


main ney us kobataya ke mujhy bohat takleef hoti he or kamar main bohat dard bhi mager jo cream meri ak dost ney mujhy batai thi us se bahar haal kuch na kuch araam ajata he us ney mujy kaha acha mujhy dikhao or ye bat us ney bilkul aesy kahi jese voh ghar main kaam karny wali nahen Dr ho or main is bat par bohat sharma gai mager us ney mujhy tasali di or kaha  dekho ye sab kisi se to seekhna hi parta he tumhari mummy busy hoti he or shyed us ko to abhi tak pata bhi na ho ke tum jawan ho chuki ho is liye tum mujhy hi dikha do or phir khud hi agey barh kar meri salwar dono side par hath rakh kar nechy kar di meri choot par us waqat halky golden hairs ana shuroo bhi ho gaye to kisi had tak barh bhi gaye they us ney kaha ye kiaa tum ney in balon ko saaf nahen kiya ? or us ke chehry par aesy herangi thi jese main main ney koi bohat bara jurm kar dia ho main ney ghabra kar kaha naheen to kyon ? to kehny lagi ary in ko to har haal main saaf karna chahyeh he verna namaza nahen hoti or jab tum ko  khoon ata hoga to voh to sara in par lag jata ho ga .........


 main ney kaha haan aesa to hota he  voh kehny lagi ruko main tumhary baal saaf karti hon  mujhy us waqat tak hair removing cream ka to pata tha mager main hamesha sajhti thi ke voh haton or paaon ke unwanted hairs ke liyeh hoti hen voh foran hi bhaag kar apny quater gai or  aik ajeeb sa dabba le kar mere room main agai or room ke ander aker us ney lock kar dia or mujh se boli chalen main ap ke hairs utar deti hon  meri samjh main naheen araha tha ke main kiya karon is ki bat manon ya na manon mujh ko sharaam bhi bohat arahi thi or daar bhi bohat lag raha tha ke pata naheen ya kiya karny wali mager voh aik mahir auraat thi mujhy salwar utaar kar washroom main pohanch gai or jo dabba voh laai thi us main se koi power nikaal kar us ok pani main ghool lia ajeeb si badboo pury wahsroom main phel gai mujy daar to lag raha tha mager main chup thi or samjh nahen araha tha us ney mujhy aik stool par bitha dia or voh power se jo paste us ney banay tha us ko meri  choot ke balon ke uper lagany lagi jese hi us ney lagana shuro kia  meri choot par mujh ko halki halki jalaan mehsos hona shuroo ho gai main ney us ko bataya ke mujhy jalaan ho rahi he mager us ney suni un suni karty hoey kaha


 ke  thori der jalaan or takleef ho gi us ko bardast kar len phir theek ho jaye ga ye sab to bohat zarori he etc or ye sab baten karty karty us ney meri choot par jahan jahan bhaal they  voh powerd ka paste laga dia mujh ko aab jalaan bohat teez hony lagi thi or ye jalaan ahista ahista taiz se taiz hoti ja rahi thi 10 minutes main  ye jalan is haad tak barh chuki thi ke meri ankhon se ansoo nikalny shuroo ho gaye or main taqreban us se ro ro kar keh rahi thi ye tum ney kiya kar dia he  mere bohat takleef ho rahi he mager voh mujh ko tasaliyan de rahi thi ke abhi theek h oaye ga aap barasht kar len bas thora or  ,



 thora or kar ke shyed 20 minues or guzar gaye hon gey or mujh ko lag raha tha jese meri nechy choot ki skin par aag lagi ho phir us ney paani se meri choot ko dhona shroo kia main ney shukar ada kiya ke meri jaan chooti  pani parny se kuch thandak ka ahsas to hoa mager jalan abhi bhi apni jaga bohat taiz thi  pani se dho dho kar us ney meri choot se sara powrder utar dia or us ke sath hi meri choot se baal bhi utar gaye mager apni rukty hi meri taleef pehly ki nisbaat kaam to hi mager phir bhi bohat taiz thi main bhaag kar apny room main aai or apni choot par dono hath rakh liye or us ko sehlany ki koshish karny lagi room main AC ki hawa se kuch sakoon to mil raha tha mager rehana ki mojodgi ki waja se main tangen theek se khool bhi naheen paa rahi thi ke hawa hi laga lon , main chah rahi thi ke voh jald az jald chali jaye mager voh jany ko tiyaar nahen ti  bech main apni choot ki skin ko dekha to voh balon se paak kafi gori nikal aai thi mager us  manhoos powder ki waja se  red ho gai thi puri skin or  us main baqiada red red color ke rashes bhi pary hoey they  rehana ney mujh se kaha ke main tangen khool kar us ko dikhaon main ney us se saaf mana kar dia mager ab voh  daarny ki acting kar rahi thi jese ager mummy ko main ney bata dia ro us ki nokri chali jaye gi etc or phir us ney mujhy kafi aitmaad main le kar  meri tangen khulwa hi len or meri chot ko ghor se dekhny lagi boli aik minute main kaarti hon kuch is ka khyaal ye kehty hoye voh apna  moon aik daam se meri choot tak le kar gai or meri choot ki skin ko chatna shuroo kar dia main na na karti rahi or meri samjh bhi nahen araha tha ke ye ho kia raha or  ajeeb sa bhi lag raha tha ke kiya koi kisi ki peshab ki jaga ko bhi chaat sakti hai itni gandi jaga ko or main ye samjh rahi thi ke ye shyed apni galati ko barabar karny ke liyeh aesa kar rahi he or waqaai thori si deer main jab us ke zabaan ney meri choot ko apny thook se geela karna shuroo kiya to mujhy takleef main kuch kaami mehsos hony lagi .


ahista ahista meri voh takleef ki kaami mazey main badalna shuroo ho gai ye zindagi ka pehla mooqa tha ke main  sex ka maza utha rahi thi jab ke sachi bat ye thi ke baten vagera to bohat suni then or non xxx movies bhi deki then mager sex kia hota he ye tak pata nahen tha jab mujhy maza ana shuroo hoa to main ney us ko roka ke rehana bass theek he kaafi he itna hi main ney us ka sir hath se alag bhi karny ki koshish ki mager voh aik mahir auraat thi or us ney apna kaam jaari rakha ye keh kar ke bass bibi abhi theek ho jaye ga bilkul voh meri choot ko buri tarah se na sirf chaat rahi thi balky beach main bhi zaban phiar rahi thi or meri choot ke dany ko jab us ki zabaan ney touch kiya to mujhy laga meri peshaab nikaal jaye ga ..........


main ney jahtky se us ko alag karny ki koshish ki mager zahiri si bat he meri itni taqaat nahen thi ke aik 25 , 30 saal ki auraat ko hata paati akhir mere moon se nikaal gia ke  ke rehanaa mera peshab nikalny wala he  mager us ney sir uthaye bager kaha ke nikaal do bibi main pareshaan ho rahi thi ke bed kharab ho jaye ga main ney us ko kafi force se hatany ki koshish ki maza mere liyeh bilkul naya or ajeeb tha mager mujh ko lag raha tha main shyed koi coword herkat na kar don nokrani ke samny like peshaab nikal jana or voh  musal sal meri choot ko chat rahi to phir mujh ko apny aap par qaboo na raha or mera life ka pehla orgasam ho gia mujhy laga ke mera peshab nikaal gia he mager is ka jo mazaa tha voh bohat hi nirala or new tha mere liye mera pani nikalty hi us ney apna moon  meri choot se hatah liya or apny dupatty se meri choot ko saaf karny lagi sach ye hai ke us waqat us ke kapra lagany se bhi maza or takleef ki ajeeb si kafiyat thi  voh apna moon pounch kar boli  aab ho gai puri takleef khatam aap ki ? or phir muskura kar boli or aaj aap saheh se jawaan bhi ho gai he.  meri choot ki takleef se dehan ab gayab ho chuka tha or jo kuch is sary time main hoa tha or o maza mujhy aya tha main us ki soch or sharaam main kho gai thi ......
voh apna kaam kar ke chali gai or jaty waqat door bhi band kar ke hali gai .....


main ney thori der main shalwar pehan li mager takleef abhi bhi baqi thi or jalaan pehly se kafi kaam mager still kafi had tak mojodd thi . bad main mjhy meri mummy se hair removing cream mil gai or mujhy is takleef ko dubara kabhi nahen jhelna para



us ke bad ye silsila chaal nikla or main rehana se apni choot chatwa kar farigh hoti rahi tum ney poucha tha na ke meri choot ka dana itna bara kyon he ?  is ki waja shyed ye hi hai ke bohat kaam umri main us kuttiya ney mujhy is ka addi bana dia tha or us chez se mutarif karwa dia tha jo darasaal mujh ko 20.25 saal ki umer main theek se pata lagti ya shadi ke bad mager darasaal ye ghar par kaam karny wali nokranion ke tareeqy hoty hen mujhy ye sab bohat bad main samjh aya ke us ney ye sab kuch mujh se paisy nikalwany ke liyeh kiya tha or us ke bad har dafa jab voh meri choot chat ti to main us ko kuch na kuch paisy deti or aik zamany main to ye is had tak barh gai thi ke main 2,3 dafa us ko bulati or har dafa paisey deti or is hi lalach main us ney ye sara khail khela tha . is ki beti sadaf ko bhi main ney apny ghr husband ke bahaar jany ke bad bula kar rakha ke aik to bachon ki dekh bhaal kar leti he or dosry meri sex ki need ke waqat ye mera ye kaam bhi kar ke deti he jis ki adaat is ki maan ney mujhy dali thi .


ye sari bat karty karty us ki nazar mere lund par gai us ney us ko hath main lia or or boli

vese tum mard sari intehai kameeny hoty hen main tum ko tum ko apni sath hoi aik galat bat ka bata rahi hon or tum ye sab mazey le kar sun rahy ?  main ney kaha naheen aesa nahen he main maza nahen le raha tha balkey main to intehai ghoor se tumhari bat sun raha tha or soch raha tha ke kese kese log hen is dunia main  or mujhy afsos ho raha tha ......


to voh hans kar boli haan or jab tumhen afsos hota he to tumhara lund khara ho jata he na ???  or ye sun kar mere pass bhi hansny ke alava koi rasta nahen tha  kyon ke lund to waqai hard ho raha tha to main ney kaha voh tum samny nangi bethi ho or lund khara na ho to bhi to tum hi bura maan jaten ke men nangi bethi hon or lund khara nahen ho raha he .


ye keh kar main ney us ko apny galy laga lia mere khyal main us ki story kaafi laambi or kafi sari baqi thi mager aab mujh ko sari raat beth kar story hi to nahen sunni thi to main ney us ko galy laga kar us ki back par hath phiarna shuroo kr dia or mera lund jo pehly se khara tha us ke jisaam ke nehey dabnly laga  voh boli aik minute ruko uper uthi mere lund par apna thook lagaya or aik hi jhatky main pura lund apni choot ke ander le kar mere uper beth gai . mujhy andaza hoa ke waqaai voh kafi seriously ye sari bat bata rahi thi kyon ke lund us ki choot dry hony wala se kafi phans pans kar ander gia or abhi 100% hard bhi naheen tha mager choot ke ander jany ke bad hard honey laga .


main ney again us ke hont chosny shuroo kiye or us ney apni kamar hilaa kar lund ander bahar karna shuroo kar dia position ye thi ke main bed se taik laga kar betha hoa tha or voh mere  dono taraf apni tangen nikal kar apni kamar ko hila kar lund ko ander bahar kar rahi thi kind of agey pehey ho ker . or main us ki lips ke bad us ki neck ko chosta hoa us ke shoulder par agia hr or shoulders ko chose or chaat raha or or voh ahista ahista josh main aati ja rahi thi or us ki speed barthi ja rahi thi us ki choot pani choor rahi thi or phir us ke jisaam ney aik jhurjhiri li jis ka multab tha voh aik dafa farigh ho gai he us ki sansen bohat taiz ho gai thi or voh rukny lagi main janta tha voh thaak chuki he to is iyeh main ney nehey se jhatky de kar  chudai ko continue karny ki koshish ki jis possition main ,


 main betha tha us position main nehey se uper ki taraf koi bohat zor daar jhatky to na mumkin hi they at least for me  mager spring matters hony ki waja se main phir bhi kamiyaab tha kuch na kuch stroke lagany ke liyeh  main ney jhatky continue raky or us ko kaha ke aik to tum discharge hony se pehly ro hoty hoty hoye batati nahen ho is liyeh maza nahen ata us ney kaha acha main aab bataaon gi promiss darasal main itni garam hoti hon us waqat ke is taraf dehaan hi nahen rehta main ney us ki  gand par zoor ka slap lagaya  jis ki awaz puri karmy main goonj gai or sath hi us ki  aaaaaaaaaaaah ki awaaz bhi . voh abhi tak mere uper hi thi main ney us ko kaha ke aab dogy possition main ajao voh mere uper se uthi or meri ankhon main dekhty hoye hi jhukki or apni choot se abhi abhi nikla hoa lund apny mooon main le kar choosny lagi mere liye ye bhi new tha kyon ke gorion main ye to ye chez common hoti he mager pakistani auraat ye kary its ne for  me or josh se mera lund bohat ziyada hard ho gia  voh bhi mere lund ki extra hardness ko feel karty hoye boli mujhy apni choot ka taste pasnd he and i like to lick it .


main us ki gardan pakar kar us ke mon main jhatky laga raha tha or mere ander itni garmi charny lagi thi ke mujhy laga kahen discharge hi na ho jaaon is iyeh main ney us ki face ko pakar kar alag kiya or us ko doggy style main any ko kaha voh foran hi intehai sexy style main apni kamaar ko nechey jhuka kar or apni gool gori naraam gand ko  bahar ki taraf nikaal kar dogy style main agai or boli lo ban gai tumhari kuttiya aab chood do apni kuttiya ko  mere kutty .

main pechey gia or us ki dono tangon ke beach beth kar apna lund ka topa us ki choot ke soorakh par set kiya jo us ney intehai maharaat se bahar nikali hoi thi or us ke dono chootar par kar aik zoor daar jhatky ke sath apna lund us ki chooot main gussa dia us ki aik zoor daar aaaaaaaaaaaaaaah nikli maar dala zaalim  or voh bed ke sirhany se takraty takraty bachi main ney us ko us ki dono hips se pakar rakha tha or us ki naraam goori gand mere hath main thi  and this is the beauti aap log sochty hongy kiya bakwas karta hon mager yaqeenan us ki gand itni khubusraat thi ke pakistan shyed mushkil se hi dosri miley  main us ki gand ko dekh kar josh main agia or full speed se us ko chodny laga .  mera lund is waqat  lohy ki tarah hard ho gia tha or  main  apny uper controll khoty hoye us ko intehai tez speed ke jhatkon se chodny laga  withink 2 minutes us ki awaazen tez hony lagi or voh boli mera any wala he mera any wala he  or tez main gai main gai aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah main gai or us ke sath ji us ki choot ney mere lund ko  nichorny ki koshish shuro kar di


or ye hi waqat tha ke jab main ney apny aap ko controll kiya again verna main disharge ho jata main rook gia or us ki choot mere lund ko pakar pakar kar choor rahi thi voh apna pani nikaal rahi thi  main ney in between us ke chootaron ko khool kar us ki gand ke soorakh ko dekhny laga gori gand ke beach pink brown bohat hi chota sa hole main ny us par thooka or us ki gand ke hole par aik finger se gol gool sehlany laga or us ki choot ney is beach mere lund ko grip karna chor dia tha jis se mujhy andaza ho gia tha main ny us se pucha  haan ji maza aya aya or us ney apna sir meri taraf ghuma kar kaha bohat maza aya tumhara ye lund meri choot ko pagal kar deta he main ney pucha or is main maza araha he ? ye kehty hoye main ney  un ki gand ke hole ko  sehlaya  voh boli haan bohat i love it mager abhi tum sirf is ko mazaa do gaand main jab tum ko bolon gi taab marni he samjhy ?


main ney yes main sir hila dia to voh muskura kar boli ye tumhari hi hai or tum hi is ka mazaa lo gey fikar na karo main ye bat 50 baar sun chuka tha or mere expressions se us ko bhi samjh agai thi or voh hans kar boli bohat qeemti he janaab main ney kaha acha  je or wapas se us ke gand ke hole par or thook laga kar us  ka massage karny laga or ahista ahista choot main lund ander bahar karna shuroo kar dia kyon ke choot dry ho jati to phir maza nahen ata  or phir ahista ahista meri speed parhti gai or main ney josh main aker  thora or thook dal kar gand ka hole jo itni der massage se kafi naraam ho chuki tha us main apna left hand ka angootha ghusa dia or angotha ander jaty ke sath hi us ki aik  aik zoor ki aaaaaaaaaaah nikli main angootha daal kar us ko gand ke mazea feel karwana chaah raha tha kyon ke mere khyal main voh is se shyed daar rahi tih or phir main ney anoothy se us ki gand or lund se choot ki chudaai start kari di  main kafi zoor se chood raha tha or ye doggy possition bhi aesi hoti he jis main full speed se chodna intehai asaan hota he or kamra us ki hips par mere takrany ki thaap thaap ki awazon se goonj raha tha or main us ki gand or choot dono ka maza aik sath de raha tha . us ki choot beach beach main pump up ho ker aik leak bhi kar rahi thi jo ke bilkul gand se gas nikalny par sounds hoti hen or jab voh karti to main us ki gand par aik thapaar lagata ye kiya he or voh hans kar bolti ke choot se he pagaal or mujh ko pata tha but just for fun i do it .



taqreeban 30 minutes is hi tarah se chodty chodty main farigh hony ke qareeb agia tha is beach voh 3 baar awazon ke sath farigh ho chuki thi or mere liyeh ab us ki garaam choot ki garmi bardasht karna na mumkin ho raha tha  main ney us se pucha discharge ho jaaon ? voh boli ho jao disharge mager  discharge ho kar bhi rukna nahen mujhy chodty rehna or main ney again speed ke sath chudai continue kar di or finall main discharge par agia ....... aesa lag raha tha jese baqiada mere tatton main se maani nikalkti ho mere lund ke rasty bahar ja rahi ho or or bass niaklti ho chali ja rahi ho mere lliya is condition main ander bahar karna mumkin nahen tha mager meri garaam garaam maani se us ki jhoot jesi hi bhaari voh bhi discharge ho gai  or us ki choot meri lund ko grip karny lagi huum dono ki sansen kharaab then or main us ke uper gia gia or mera wazaan na sambhalty hoye voh bhi ulti hi bed par gir gai or main apna lund jo abhi bhi hard thaus ki hips ke beach set kar ke relax karny laga AC chalny ke bawajood mere sir tak se paseena nikal raha tha or phir kuch der ke bad main uske uper se hata or side par aker let gia .....
Title: Re: the story
Post by: enjoywith on July 11, 2016, 10:46:33 am
bahi aap bahut accha likh rahe ho...mast......chal rahi hai story....please keep posting.....
Title: Re: the story
Post by: raangbaaz on July 12, 2016, 10:44:20 am
update kro...................
Title: Re: the story
Post by: away on July 16, 2016, 12:38:56 am
bahi aap bahut accha likh rahe ho...mast......chal rahi hai story....please keep posting.....

Thanks bro :)
Title: Re: the story
Post by: away on July 16, 2016, 12:39:39 am
update kro...................

Ji karta hon update :) Apny jitni likhi he utni parh li he ? :)
Title: Re: the story
Post by: raangbaaz on July 17, 2016, 03:06:30 pm
update kro...................

Ji karta hon update :) Apny jitni likhi he utni parh li he ? :)
G path li tb e update demand ki ha
Title: Re: the story
Post by: enjoywith on July 17, 2016, 03:54:00 pm
update karo bhai...iksa
Title: Re: the story
Post by: away on July 20, 2016, 03:51:14 am
likh raha hon weekend tak update post karon ga agur kal time na mila to :)  gussa kyon hoty hen
Title: Re: the story
Post by: urdu munda on July 20, 2016, 07:58:31 am
Aapka likhnay ka andaz bohat he umda or dilchasp hai. Bilkul ye nahi lagta k ye story parh rahay hain. Balkay aisa lagta hai k hamari aankhon k samnay ye scene chal raha hai. Or mere khayal main ye kisi b writer ke miraj hai. Story ka plot b bohat acha hai or sex scene b akheer hain. Sab se bari bat ye k story main bayan kiye gaye waqyat logical lagtay hain, gapain nahi hanki gaye. Thank you so much bhai AWAY for such a wonderful story.
Title: Re: the story
Post by: away on July 25, 2016, 06:09:51 am
thori der rest kiya to voh uth kar washroom gai or wapsi par muskurati hoi bahar aai  aesa lag raha he jese tum ney maheenon bad kisi ko chouda ho ...... main ney hairaani se pucha voh kyon ?  kehny lagi itna maal nikala he ye kehty hoye apni gori gulabi choot ki taraf ishara kiya or main bhi muskura dia  us ke bad hum dono apny pasandida style yani voh mere uper beth gai or or main leta hoa tha or mere lund ko aesy hi mazey se hilany lagi :) or main us ko piyar bhari nazron se dekh raha tha raat ke 3 baj gaye they mager sardion ke din hony ki waja se abhi bhi bohat time tha hamary pass us ke hillany or khubusuraat sexy jisaam ki waja se mera lund phir se baidaar hony laga tha but mager i feel ke i need rest kyon ke abhi kafi lambi chudai kar ke chuky they or lund ki topi  chot ke androoni hissy se takra takra kar aab kuch dard karny lagi thi to main ney apni jankari or baton ka sisla shuroo kiya main ney us se sawal kia han to tum sadaf ka bata rahi thi or  hasbe adaat us ney intehai kameeny paan se  jawab dia main naheen bata rahi thi mager tum pouhna chah rahey ho sadaf ke bary main . mere zahan main us waqat waqai sadaf nahen thi kyon ke anila khud itni khubsurat or zaheen sex partner thi ke mera dehan is taraf gia bhi naheen tha mager aab us ke dehan dilany se gia tha or ye hi bat main ney us se bhi kahi or agey pucha ke ye sadaf ko tum ko akser raat ko bulati ho ?


to anila ney kaha naheen main in kajnrion ko raat main kabhi apny ghar na ghusny don  ye to main ney aaj tumhari waja se is ko raat ko roka he verna tum janty ho meri apni bhi beti he or main in logon ke hath us ko charhny nahen de sakti is liye main is ko subha bulati hon or bachon ke school any ke 1,2 ghanta main ke ye lunch ke bartan dho kar chali jaye bass itna time ghar main rakhti hon . or subha main jab sary bachey school hoty hen tab hi is se ana kaam bhi le leti hon . main ney next vohi ghatia or fazool kiya jo normally maard karty hen ke acha to ye acha chat ti he kia ? to jawab main voh muskura kar boli naheen jo bad tumhari he voh kisi ki nahen ye to sirf kaam chalany or aik tareeqa se badla lene liyeh he he . vese tum ko kesi lagti he ?  is achanak sawal par main double minded ho gia ke mujh ko kiya kehna chyeah he is ke jawab main ? to phir voh khud hi boli chalo is ko to baad main dekhen gey  pehly tumhen mera aik kaam or kar ke dena he . main ney foran achy or farmabardar ashiq ki tarah jawab dia ke jo tum kaho gi ho jaye ga fikar na karo vese dil main soch raha tha voh kon sa kaam he jo is ko mujh se karwana he jab ke ye to khud her kaam khud karny ki maahir he bat yahaan par stop hoi to main ney agla sawal jaraa ke tum karachi kese again jab tumhari family puri lahore main he ?


asaal main itna to mujh ko apni wife ke zarye se bhi pata tha ke  anila ke apni family se or suraal se dono se bohat achy talooqat nahen tha baqol meri wife ke.


is ke jawab main anilaa ney lamba sans liya or boli to tum sab kuch aaj jaan kar hi choro gey ?  main ney kaha sab kuch na saheh mager jitna jaan sakta hon utna bata do . to us ney kehna start kia ke ab jo baten main tum ko batany ja rahi hon asaad yaad rakhna ke ye raaz marty daam tak kabhi kisi par open nahen karo gey ye bat aaj se pehly  meri family ke kuch log jo sab lahore main hen ab  aik qaseem sahab ( qaseem sahab mere landlord )janty hen voh sirf utna jitna zarori tha or aaj main ye raaz tum par kholney ja rahi hon ,



main lahore main acha bhala apni family ke sath reh rahi thi mager meri bad qismaati mujhy karachi khench laai  hoa ye ke meri stuides main exams ke bad gap aya tha or  papa karachi arahey they to main un se zid kr ke karachi agai us waqat meri age 19 years thi or tum samjh sakty ho ke main kitni khubsuraat rahi hon gi ye mera body figure main ney bohat excersies kar ke banaya he or jis waqat ki ye bat he us waqat ye apni best form main tha ye flat jis main abhi hum log reh rahey hen mere father is ko construction kar rahey they  ye jo brdige ban gia is area main in ki waja se in flats ki value down ho gai he verna us waqat ke ye intehai modren flats they with lift.



main apny father ke sath khi aai or yahaan meri mulaqaat hamid ( anila ka husband ) se ho gai  or bohat jald hi me apny father ke aik choty se clerk type ke emplye ki mohabat main giraftar ho gai ho  kaam umri thi to chezon baton or haqiqaton ka andaza nahen tha or main hamid ki mohabat main agey barhti chali gai  meri family ney mujh ko bohat samjhaya ke na to ye saheh admi he or na hi hamary standard ka or main ksi tarah na maan kar di or akhir kaar meri family ney mujh ko hamesha ke liyeh apny aap se alag kar dia .......... or meri shadi hamid ke sath kahmoshi se karachi main karwa di father ney mere mujhy apni jaidad se aaq kar dia mager maan to maan hoti he or voh her chez ko samjh sakti hoti any waly waqat ke liye door andesh hoti he to us ney kisi na kisi tarah se mere papa ko mana kar in flats ka ye floor jis main abhi hum log reh rahey hen pura mere naam karwa dia mager mujh ko naheen bataya ye bat mujhy khud shadi ke 2 saal bad pata lagi voh bhi aesy ke Hamid ko bahar jany ka junon charha is ney mera ziyada taar zewar baich kar America jany ka apna intezaam kar lia hum log us waqat kisi or building main rehty they  Meri beti us waqat sawa saal ki hoi thi jab hamid mujh ko bilkul akela chor kar 4 saal ke liye America chala gia or us waqat meri family ney Qaseem sahab ke zarye mujhy is building ka bataya ke is par ye pura floor mera he Qaseem sahab mere father ke  40 saal purany mulazim hen or is liyeh meri taraf se voh hi sab kuch dekhty hen  aab un ki bhi umer itni naheen rahi he ke voh kaheen job kar saken to main un ko paisy deti hon or voh meri taraf se sab se kiraya wasool karty hen .


kyon ke jab hamid 4 saal ke liyeh gayab hoa tha us waqat main bilkul tot gai thi voh insan jis par bharosa kar ke main ney apna ghar baar family sab se naata tora voh mujh ko 2 saal main chor kar bahar chala gia or us waqat meri maan hi kaam aai or is hi liye mujh ko hamid se nafraat start ho gai thi 4 saal bad ye wapas aya to mujhy pata laga ke is ney wahan par kisi gori se shadi bhi ki thi jo ke nakaam ho gai or akhir main is ko wahan se depot hota para or ye sab janny ke bad mera bilkul dil hi naheen raha hamid ke sath aab main bass apni zindagi guzar rahi hon apny bachon ke liyeh or main ye bhi janti hon ke aabi bhi UAE main ye shaks aurton ke sath hota he hamesha  or us ke bad hi main ney faisala kiya tha ager zindagi main mujhy ko koi aesa laga ke jo mera sath de sakty ga to main bhi apni khushiyan zaror wasool karon gi.



ye flat ager tum ghor karo to meri maan he speically mere papa se keh kar design karwaya tha or ye aesi location par he ke main na sirf apny floor ki sari sides ko nazar main rakh sakti hon balky sath main nechey wali manzilon par bhi nazar rakh sakti hon.


bahar haal main ney flat main ye to check nahen kiya tha ke us ne kon kon si jaga bana rakhi then mager itna main khud bhi dekh sakta tha ke ye flat waqai center location par tha jo ke charon taraf cover karta tha or yon mere uper ye chez bhi clear ho gai ke voh kese nazar rakh leti thi mujh par or dosron par mager abhi bhi main mukamal janna chahta tha ke akhir kis limit tak ye nazar rakh leti he kyon ke sach ye tha ke mujhy to ab se pehly bhi ye tak feel hota tha ke ye gharon ke ander tak nazar rakh leti thi jese koi camrea lagy hon mager us ka aik major reson ye bhi tha ke hamary flats bilkul amny samny they . 


ye sari kahani sunaty waqat voh kafi afsurda ho gai thi to main ney us ko wapas apny pass le liya or us ko piyar se sehlana shuroo kar dia takey voh kuch relax ho . main ney us ko samjhya or yaqeen dilaya ke main us ko dhoka nahen don ga meri wife he or ye bat voh bhi janti thi mager still i will keep her on her place .  baton baton main mujh ko yaad aya ke i bring a ring for her . main foran utha or ja kar jeans ki pocket main se ring nikaal kar laya or us ke samny khool kar us ke finger main pehna di kafi lose thi mager us ko pehan kar us ki ankhon or chehry par voh chamaak aai jo main dekhana chahta tha . yahana main  tamam reders ko ye bat apny tajurby par bata don ke jab bhi kisi female se koi relation hon to us ko  jewlery gift zaror karen is ka talooq lalach se nahen he mager keh len ye  females ki nature he ke voh gift main jewlery le kar bohat khush hoti hen chahy choti se choti hi kyon na ho .


or ager aap gift nahen dengy to aap ke relation main darar zaror aye gi dubara bata don ke ye darar bhi is waja se nahen aati ke ke ap ney gift nahen dia mager bass gift deney se relation bohat mazboot or acha ho jata he kher  story ki taraf wapas aaty hen .

ring pehanny ke liyeh us anila ko us main paper phansana para mager main or voh dono ye hi chahty they ke voh ring pehny or us ki finger main ring lag bhi bohat khubsurat rahi thi to main ney sab se pehly kiss us ki finger par ki or us ke bad finger ko lick kiya or pura geela kar dia  main kiss karta hoa us ke hands or phir dono breast pakar kar bari bari chusny laga aaj main ney aik naya tareeqa ye use kiya ke us ke breasts par apny zbaan se extnal side se ring banata hoa  us ke nipples tak ata or us ke nipples mujh ko hard milty voh enjoy kar rahi thi is ko or main us ko garam kar raha tha niples se ko achi tarah se chose kar main nechey gia or ja kar us ki  choot ko apny hath se rub karna shuroo kar dia main us ki choot ki dono gulabi lips khool kar  un ko dekh raha tha jo ke abhi bhi bohat khubsurat thi or  or kabhi us ko  karwat dila kar us ki  gool garam gand ke beach us ki gulabi choo ko dekh raha tha jo ke bohat khusrat lag rahi thi or voh bechain ho rahi ke main kuch kar kyon nahen raha hon  phir main ney us ki choot ke dono lips ko aik dosry se raghra to us ki aah nikaali aaaaaaaaaaaaah asaad kiya kar rahy ho ?  main ney us ko again seedha kiya  or khud khar aho ker us ko ghutnon ke bul bitha kar lund us ke moon man de dia  or us ko kaha ke is ko hath nahen lagana he tum ney or us ke moon main apna lund ander bahar karny laga  moon main lund daal kar us ke moon ko maon ney choudna shuroo kar dia or main kafi deep taak le kar jata tha jis se us ke halaaq se  awaazen aney lagti then or thook us ke moon se bahar nikalny laga tha  mager  main bohat ziyada enjoy kar raha tha is situation ko  kafi der bad main ney us ko permission thi ke voh hath laga sakti he to phir us ney kuh sakoon ka sans lia us ka face red ho chuka tha is beach or phir us ney hath se mere lund ko uper nechey sehalna shuro kar dia .   voh  mere lund ko  chat ti bhi ja rahi thi sath sath or mere lund ki tareefen kar rahi ke   like i love it asaad    bohat mazedaar lund he tumhara sach maza ajata he  is se is liyeh hi is ki itni khidmaat bhi kari hon or mere lun ko chat ti hoi nehey tak aaj or mere tatton ko bhi chat ti jis se mera lund or bhi garam ho jata or lagtake mani nikal kar bahar ajaye gi  pr main ney us us ko   zameen par hi doggy style main  kar dia or us  ki choot par bhoat sara thook laga kar apny lund ka cap pely us par set kia or thora uper nechey ka rke jaga banai or phir puri speed se us ko chodna shuroo kar dia voh bhi mera sath de rahi thi  or musal saal bol rahi hi  chodo mujhy  or zoor se chodo dogy style main ye hi asani ke full speed se  long timings ke sath choda ja sakta he is liyeh main bhi us ki naram or gool chootar pakar kar us ko chood raha tha us ke ke hips itny naraam they ke main ney  apni muthi main grip kiye hoey they or full speed main us ko chood raha tha   or us ke moon se nikalny wali awazen  or gandi baten mujhy or josh dila rahi thi  chodoo asaad chodo phaar dalo is randi choot ko meri ye choot kisi randi ki lagai hoi he bohat taang karti he  kameeni nikaal do is ka sara pani  aaaaaaaaaaaa aaaaaaaah main gai main gai mera pani nikalny wala ye or us ke sath hi us ki choot ney pani choor dia  or us ki tangen kanpny lagen  main foran us ko utha kar  bed par le kar gia or bed par  doggy style main kar dia  or khud khary ho ker  lund us ki choot main daal dia or pury joosh se us ki choot marni continue kiya  auraat jab aik dafa farigh ho to us ko time dijye bager  chudai continue karni chyeah he verna us ke thanda honey ka dar hota he or  ager continue kiya jaye to kabhi kabhi aik minute main 3 dafa bhi pani chor deti he main bhi is waqat is hi koshish main tha or lund ki postion ko thora sa change kar ke   apny aap ko stright us ke pechey rakhney ke thora sa left or right side  par ho kar us ki choot main lund ander bhar kar raha tha takey  us ki choot ki sidon par ragaar lagey  or main is tarah se us ko ragarh kar chod raha tha or  us ki choot jo is waqat fairgh ho kar chuki thi bilul geli thi to is main bohat maza a raha tha mujh ko or us ko bhi us ki choot ander se bohat hi garam hoti thi jo ke  bohat hi mazedar feelings then or beach beach main us ki naraam  chotarron par main thapad bhi marta tha jis se us ki awaaz nikala jati mager us ke gulabi hips hi mujh ko josh dila rahi they jo pehly dabany or bad main thapadon se pink color ke ho gayey they voh bhi musal saal bol rahi thi fuck me  fuck me chodo asaad or zoor zoor se chodo bohat maza araha he  rukna naheen  rukhna naheen main fairgh hony wali hon   main us ka gala pakar kar us ko full speed main chodny laga us ki garam awazen sun kar  kabhi us ke baal pakar kar apni taraf us ka face apni taraf khenhta  or kabhi  dono shoulders pakar kar us ko chodta us ke moon se nikalny wali ahoon siskiyon or garaam baton se main bohat garam ho gia tha or farigh honey ke qareeb tha mager kisi na kisi tarah se apny aap ko controll kar raha tha phir main ney apni taraf se jhatky maarny slow kar diye takey apni timings ko control kar sakon to us ke apni gand pechey kar ke khud lund ko chodna shuroo kar dia jis se pata lag raha tha ke voh bhi farigh honey ke qareeb he main ney 1,2 minutes controll kar ke again us ko teez choudna shuroo kar dia o rphir us ki awazen tez hoti gain  aaaaaah asaad choddo mujhy choddo zoor zor se chodo mera apni aney wala he   karo teiz teiz karo   aaaaaaaaaaaaa aaaaaaaa  aaaaaaaaaaaaaaa main gai mera paaaaaaaaaaaaaaani or us ke sath hi us ki choot ney pani choor dia jese hi us ki choot ney pani chora main ney kaha main bhi farigh hney wala hon ho jaaon ?


us ney nay kaha haan ho jaao mager rukhna naheen chodty rehna chodoo mujhy chodo chodo or mera pani nikaal gia  or jese hi mera pani nikla us ki choot ney mere lund ko bohaat zoor se girp main liya or dabany lagi mere lund ke tope ko or aaaaaaaaaaaaaah ke awaz ke sath us ney aik dafa o rpani choor dia ........... or is ke sath hi voh  bed par nechey gir gai or main bhi us ke barabar main let kar  apni sansen  controll karny laga jo kafi ziyada  taiz ho gai then ....
Title: Re: the story
Post by: gonihrk on July 25, 2016, 06:23:33 pm
very very nice..............

super update...........................

waiting for next update dear.................
Title: Re: the story
Post by: zahid_iqbal22@yahoo.com on July 26, 2016, 12:53:14 am
Very nice n very very hot story
Pls update regular


Thnx
Title: Re: the story
Post by: rabiarabia338 on October 09, 2016, 02:12:36 pm
nice g
Title: Re: the story
Post by: sara34 on October 09, 2016, 03:09:33 pm
Update
Title: Re: the story
Post by: Seema Naaz on December 10, 2016, 05:58:43 am
Time nikal ke parhongi zaroor
Title: Re: the story
Post by: engrdanial on May 06, 2018, 03:00:47 am
Wow.....
لوگ کہتے ھیین کہ اچھی کہانیاں یہاں اب نہین لکھی جاتین
کیوں لکھے کوئی  جب ایسے ماسٹر پیس کا اس طرح سے عد توجہی کے ذریعے خود قارئین ھی گلہ گھوونٹ دیں
سچ ھے ایسے قارئین اس قابل ھی نہیں کہ  انکو کوئی انٹرٹین کرے اہنا وقت اور توانائی لگا کر
جو لوگ بس مزہ لے کر مٹھ مار کر انگلیاں کر کے کہانی پڑھیں اور دو لفظوں میں اہبی اچھی یا بری رائے بھی نہ دیں جیسے انکے کچھ لکھنے سے خفیہ ایجنسیاں انکو پکڑ لیں گی‫


Away
آج بھی آ away
ھوتے تو شاید میں بھی اس کہانی کو پڑھنے سے محروم رھتا
دراصلل اب چٹ چیٹ مین وقت صرف ھووتا تھا تو صرف تجویز کردہ یا کسی دوست کی تاکید کردہ کہانی ھی پڑھتا ھون
آج آکا کمنٹ پڑھ کر فلہش بیک مین آپکے دلچسپ ٹاپکس سکرول کرتا اس کہانی رو پہنچا اور ایک ھی نشست مین تمام پڑھ ڈالے جو کہ شاید بہت کم کرتا ھوں
افسوس بھی ھو رھا ھے کہ آپ جیسے ریگولر اور نفیس انسان کو ھم لوگ بے قدری کی وجہ سے مائل نہ کر سکے مزید کچھ شاہکار اپ ڈیٹس پر
لیکن جتنا آپ ے لکھا کمال کر گئے
کہیں کہیں محسوس ھووا کہ شاید ایک آدھ اپڈیٹ  کہیں کھو گیا ھے
شاید میرا وھم ھو مگر کچھ جگھہ تسلسل نہ ملا
مگر چاشنی کم نہ ہوئی
روایتی  سپرمین ریلکار انداز چدائی ادھر بھی دکھائی  دی مگر شاید مجبوری ھے
کہ ادھر یہی بکتا ھے
لیکن  اچھوتا انداز فطری ماحول اور منظر کشی نے مجبور کر دیا کہ آپکے لئے کچھ کہوں


اگر کای اور جگھہ اسکو آگے بڑھایا یا لکھا ھے تو بتا دیجئے
اور نہیں  تو
اب اس ناچیز کی ادنیٰ سی فرمائش پر کچھ لکھ ڈالئے
تاخیر سے آمد پر افسوس ھے
حالانکہ  سب سے پہلا اور سب سے آخری کمنٹ یم کی ان عظیم ھستیوں کا تھا جنکا ھر لفظ یم پر آنا اور پڑھنا باعث عقیدت و فرض سمجھتا ھوں پھر بھی جانے کیسے یہ بھول ھو گئی
شرمندہ ھوں


دست بستہ التجا ھے
اپنے جوھر کا اظہار کریں
آکے چٹ چیٹ کے فین تو ھم تھے ھی
آپکی ذھانت اور بے ساختگی کے قدردان بھی تھے
آج آپنے کہانی کا گرویدہ بھی بنا لیا‫
بہت شکریہ ایسا شاھکار متعارف کروانے کا‫

Title: Re: the story
Post by: nabilakosar on May 06, 2018, 03:44:50 am
بہت اچھی کہانی ھے
صفحہ نمبر ایک پڑھ چکی ہوں
Title: Re: the story
Post by: eme on May 06, 2018, 05:13:30 am
بہت اچھی کہانی ھے
صفحہ نمبر ایک پڑھ چکی ہوں
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away
 کی انیلہ والی کہا نی پڑھتے ہوئے اس سے ملتی جلتی حالت ہماری ہو گی تھیاب سکوں ھے نیند ا رہی ھے
Title: Re: the story
Post by: eme on May 06, 2018, 05:13:57 am
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away کی عنیلہ والی کہا نی پڑھتے ہوئے اس سے ملتی جلتی حالت ہماری ہو گی تھیاب سکوں ھے نیند ا رہی ھے
Title: Re: the story
Post by: Maria Mahi on May 08, 2018, 12:51:01 am
Update plzz.one of the best storyyy

Title: Re: the story
Post by: engrdanial on May 08, 2018, 01:23:52 am
Update plzz.one of the best storyyy
کی بعد مرے قتل اس نے جفا سسے توبہ‫


کاش یہ لفظ اپڈیٹ کی درخواست کے ساتھ کچھ بارے تحریر بھی ھوتے
شاہد
Away
کو
Near
کر دیتے

Title: Re: the story
Post by: engrdanial on May 08, 2018, 01:26:58 am
بہت اچھی کہانی ھے
صفحہ نمبر ایک پڑھ چکی ہوں
پڑھتی جاؤ
لکھتی جاؤ
اپنے جوش و جنون کے پانی مین انگلیاں  ڈبو کر
آپکی بہکتی انگلیاں
چپو کی طرح ندیا مین جتنا زیادہ چلتی ھیں
صاحب تحریر کو اپنی تحریر کی پختگی اور زور قلم پر اتنا مان اور یقین بڑھے گا
آپکا جوش و جنون محبت و ھوس
اوے کو نزدیک لائے گا
ایک نئے ولوے کے ساتھ
باقی ماانندہ واقعات و حالات کو
ضبط تحریر میں  لانے پر
مجبور ھو جائے  گا مصنف
اگر قاری کی لگن ھو

Title: Re: the story
Post by: away on May 22, 2018, 10:57:35 pm
Wow.....
لوگ کہتے ھیین کہ اچھی کہانیاں یہاں اب نہین لکھی جاتین
کیوں لکھے کوئی  جب ایسے ماسٹر پیس کا اس طرح سے عد توجہی کے ذریعے خود قارئین ھی گلہ گھوونٹ دیں
سچ ھے ایسے قارئین اس قابل ھی نہیں کہ  انکو کوئی انٹرٹین کرے اہنا وقت اور توانائی لگا کر
جو لوگ بس مزہ لے کر مٹھ مار کر انگلیاں کر کے کہانی پڑھیں اور دو لفظوں میں اہبی اچھی یا بری رائے بھی نہ دیں جیسے انکے کچھ لکھنے سے خفیہ ایجنسیاں انکو پکڑ لیں گی‫


Away
آج بھی آ away
ھوتے تو شاید میں بھی اس کہانی کو پڑھنے سے محروم رھتا
دراصلل اب چٹ چیٹ مین وقت صرف ھووتا تھا تو صرف تجویز کردہ یا کسی دوست کی تاکید کردہ کہانی ھی پڑھتا ھون
آج آکا کمنٹ پڑھ کر فلہش بیک مین آپکے دلچسپ ٹاپکس سکرول کرتا اس کہانی رو پہنچا اور ایک ھی نشست مین تمام پڑھ ڈالے جو کہ شاید بہت کم کرتا ھوں
افسوس بھی ھو رھا ھے کہ آپ جیسے ریگولر اور نفیس انسان کو ھم لوگ بے قدری کی وجہ سے مائل نہ کر سکے مزید کچھ شاہکار اپ ڈیٹس پر
لیکن جتنا آپ ے لکھا کمال کر گئے
کہیں کہیں محسوس ھووا کہ شاید ایک آدھ اپڈیٹ  کہیں کھو گیا ھے
شاید میرا وھم ھو مگر کچھ جگھہ تسلسل نہ ملا
مگر چاشنی کم نہ ہوئی
روایتی  سپرمین ریلکار انداز چدائی ادھر بھی دکھائی  دی مگر شاید مجبوری ھے
کہ ادھر یہی بکتا ھے
لیکن  اچھوتا انداز فطری ماحول اور منظر کشی نے مجبور کر دیا کہ آپکے لئے کچھ کہوں


اگر کای اور جگھہ اسکو آگے بڑھایا یا لکھا ھے تو بتا دیجئے
اور نہیں  تو
اب اس ناچیز کی ادنیٰ سی فرمائش پر کچھ لکھ ڈالئے
تاخیر سے آمد پر افسوس ھے
حالانکہ  سب سے پہلا اور سب سے آخری کمنٹ یم کی ان عظیم ھستیوں کا تھا جنکا ھر لفظ یم پر آنا اور پڑھنا باعث عقیدت و فرض سمجھتا ھوں پھر بھی جانے کیسے یہ بھول ھو گئی
شرمندہ ھوں


دست بستہ التجا ھے
اپنے جوھر کا اظہار کریں
آکے چٹ چیٹ کے فین تو ھم تھے ھی
آپکی ذھانت اور بے ساختگی کے قدردان بھی تھے
آج آپنے کہانی کا گرویدہ بھی بنا لیا‫
بہت شکریہ ایسا شاھکار متعارف کروانے کا‫



thanks sir

bohat khshi hui comments par ke itne din bat kahen to salon bad aesy comments purh kar dil chahny laga ke update karo story.
men khud bhi bhul chuka tha is ko to ab sachi bat yad bi nai kaha tak likhi thi or kia likha tha .

alfaz nahen mil rahey jo khushi ap ke comments se mili.

koshish karonga ke after ramzan likhon.

na likhi to bhi aap ke coments dil men rahen gey humesha aesa laga pehli bar kisi ney is ko purha.

shurkiya time dene ka or apny itny achey coments se nawazny ka


Title: Re: the story
Post by: away on May 22, 2018, 10:58:32 pm
بہت اچھی کہانی ھے
صفحہ نمبر ایک پڑھ چکی ہوں

thanks,  ager kabi puri parhen to apni raye se zaror agah karye ga
Title: Re: the story
Post by: away on May 22, 2018, 11:05:32 pm
Update plzz.one of the best storyyy



thanks i will try ,
Title: Re: the story
Post by: incense on May 23, 2018, 12:25:19 pm
You are a brilliant writer brother !
Merey paas alfaz nahi hain tareef k. Aapka style natural aur be saakhta hai !
Please apnay talent se  human mehroom na karain
Please continue with this awesome story
Regards
Title: Re: the story
Post by: Ayaan Khan on May 23, 2018, 03:07:12 pm
Awesome Story...



Jis writer nay ye story likhi hai... Unko mera salaam....


Main iss forum per bohat kam stories parrhta hun.... Aap ki ye story updated topic me dekhi tou pehlay story ka naam dekh kar socha kay


"chorro yaar... Naam aisa hai tou story bhi kuch khaas nahi hogi"


Lekin


Jab story start ki tou aik hi baar me saari story parrh li.... Jab last me story ko adhoora dekha tou yaqeen karen..  Mera dil kar raha tha kay apna mobile torr dun kay itni zabardast kahani adhoori kyun reh gayi.......


Bhai aap ki kahani parrhtay huay aisa lag raha tha jese mere saamnay koi film chal rahi ho....


Aneela kay past kay baray me jaan'nay kay liye bohat shiddat se intizaar rahay ga....


Afsos hai kay hum aap ki kahani time per nahi parrh sakay... Warna update update kay comment kar kay hum nay aap ko bhaagnay nahi dena tha....



Writer se request hai kay agar aap abhi iss forum per hain tou plz plz plz.... Ye story continue karen....


Update ka intizaar rahay ga writer g.....
Title: Re: the story
Post by: away on May 23, 2018, 10:39:37 pm
Awesome Story...



Jis writer nay ye story likhi hai... Unko mera salaam....


Main iss forum per bohat kam stories parrhta hun.... Aap ki ye story updated topic me dekhi tou pehlay story ka naam dekh kar socha kay


"chorro yaar... Naam aisa hai tou story bhi kuch khaas nahi hogi"


Lekin


Jab story start ki tou aik hi baar me saari story parrh li.... Jab last me story ko adhoora dekha tou yaqeen karen..  Mera dil kar raha tha kay apna mobile torr dun kay itni zabardast kahani adhoori kyun reh gayi.......


Bhai aap ki kahani parrhtay huay aisa lag raha tha jese mere saamnay koi film chal rahi ho....


Aneela kay past kay baray me jaan'nay kay liye bohat shiddat se intizaar rahay ga....


Afsos hai kay hum aap ki kahani time per nahi parrh sakay... Warna update update kay comment kar kay hum nay aap ko bhaagnay nahi dena tha....



Writer se request hai kay agar aap abhi iss forum per hain tou plz plz plz.... Ye story continue karen....


Update ka intizaar rahay ga writer g.....

bohat shokria ayan bro your words means a lot to me .

puta nahen aap logon ko ye 2016 ki story kahan se nazar agai :)  kher mere liye ye bari bat he senior writer meri kavish ki tareef kar rahey hen ,

main Ramadan ke bad koshish karon ga ke apni yadaston  ko dubara jama kar ke phir se continue karon

bohat bohat shukria aap ki hosla afazai ka.
Title: Re: the story
Post by: away on May 23, 2018, 10:42:13 pm
You are a brilliant writer brother !
Merey paas alfaz nahi hain tareef k. Aapka style natural aur be saakhta hai !
Please apnay talent se  human mehroom na karain
Please continue with this awesome story
Regards

thanks a lot of great words

really they mean a lot to me

i will try to continue it after ramadan
Title: Re: the story
Post by: Ayaan Khan on May 23, 2018, 11:47:42 pm
Awesome Story...



Jis writer nay ye story likhi hai... Unko mera salaam....


Main iss forum per bohat kam stories parrhta hun.... Aap ki ye story updated topic me dekhi tou pehlay story ka naam dekh kar socha kay


"chorro yaar... Naam aisa hai tou story bhi kuch khaas nahi hogi"


Lekin


Jab story start ki tou aik hi baar me saari story parrh li.... Jab last me story ko adhoora dekha tou yaqeen karen..  Mera dil kar raha tha kay apna mobile torr dun kay itni zabardast kahani adhoori kyun reh gayi.......


Bhai aap ki kahani parrhtay huay aisa lag raha tha jese mere saamnay koi film chal rahi ho....


Aneela kay past kay baray me jaan'nay kay liye bohat shiddat se intizaar rahay ga....


Afsos hai kay hum aap ki kahani time per nahi parrh sakay... Warna update update kay comment kar kay hum nay aap ko bhaagnay nahi dena tha....



Writer se request hai kay agar aap abhi iss forum per hain tou plz plz plz.... Ye story continue karen....


Update ka intizaar rahay ga writer g.....

bohat shokria ayan bro your words means a lot to me .

puta nahen aap logon ko ye 2016 ki story kahan se nazar agai :)  kher mere liye ye bari bat he senior writer meri kavish ki tareef kar rahey hen ,

main Ramadan ke bad koshish karon ga ke apni yadaston  ko dubara jama kar ke phir se continue karon

bohat bohat shukria aap ki hosla afazai ka.






Bilkul Bro.... Hum shiddat se wait karen gay.....
Title: Re: the story
Post by: Lovelymale on May 25, 2018, 02:04:05 pm
Umeed to nahin magar writer se request hai keh story ko agay chalaye, boht zabardast story hai. isay zaroor agay chalna chahye.
Title: Re: the story
Post by: jutt mastana on May 27, 2018, 09:21:01 pm
Waiting For next update broo
Title: Re: the story
Post by: rabiarabia338 on May 29, 2018, 07:40:14 pm
ghyab
Title: Re: the story
Post by: away on May 30, 2018, 12:33:17 am
gayab naheen doston .  Ramadan ke bad continue karon ga .

gayab to 2 saal raha jab story ko koi lift nai kara ra tha pir aik dam se ap logon ke achey achey comments agaye or aesy logo ke agaye ke i feel really good to ke len again josh agia.

ab 2 sal pehly kaha tak likha tha kia likha tha ye ramadan ke bad again is ko par kar start karo ga.

2 saal main ne wait kar lia ab aap log kar len 15,20 din ka
Title: Re: the story
Post by: jutt mastana on May 30, 2018, 12:47:22 am
gayab naheen doston .  Ramadan ke bad continue karon ga .

gayab to 2 saal raha jab story ko koi lift nai kara ra tha pir aik dam se ap logon ke achey achey comments agaye or aesy logo ke agaye ke i feel really good to ke len again josh agia.

ab 2 sal pehly kaha tak likha tha kia likha tha ye ramadan ke bad again is ko par kar start karo ga.

2 saal main ne wait kar lia ab aap log kar len 15,20 din ka






Take your time bro 😀








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Title: Re: the story
Post by: Khanzadakhan on May 30, 2018, 02:50:31 am
بہت اچھے طریقے سے یہ کہانی لکھی گئی ہے امید ہے رمضان کے بعد اپڈیٹ پڑھنے کو ملے گا 😘
Title: Re: the story
Post by: NaziaNoor on June 19, 2018, 05:41:17 pm
gayab naheen doston .  Ramadan ke bad continue karon ga .

gayab to 2 saal raha jab story ko koi lift nai kara ra tha pir aik dam se ap logon ke achey achey comments agaye or aesy logo ke agaye ke i feel really good to ke len again josh agia.

ab 2 sal pehly kaha tak likha tha kia likha tha ye ramadan ke bad again is ko par kar start karo ga.

2 saal main ne wait kar lia ab aap log kar len 15,20 din ka
wiating...
Title: Re: the story
Post by: Arsi love on January 08, 2019, 04:38:43 am
Just wow 😍😍😍 this story is really Awesome 😍❤❤🔥🔥👌👌
Bro y aren't u writing next ? Plz write yr .. ap ka story telling style bht acha he r us me scenes b well described r bht hi kamal hen .. plz update kr do u r really great yr ❤👌👌 ap site pe to ate ho bt story nhi update kr rhe... really waiting for it bro
Title: Re: the story
Post by: dexter on January 10, 2019, 07:25:47 pm
away or warda khan dono nipaali hen :D 

story likhty likhty ye dono maar jaty hen
in ki mout waqia ho jati he he.

or phir aik din zinda ho kar wapas ajaty hen :D

Title: Re: the story
Post by: Ayaan Khan on January 15, 2019, 11:07:33 pm
away or warda khan dono nipaali hen :D 

story likhty likhty ye dono maar jaty hen
in ki mout waqia ho jati he he.

or phir aik din zinda ho kar wapas ajaty hen :D








Chachu........ Inna ghussa :eek: :eek:
Title: Re: the story
Post by: dexter on January 16, 2019, 09:07:37 pm
away or warda khan dono nipaali hen :D 

story likhty likhty ye dono maar jaty hen
in ki mout waqia ho jati he he.

or phir aik din zinda ho kar wapas ajaty hen :D








Chachu........ Inna ghussa :eek: :eek:

it was funny if you knwo the story of nipali :)