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Re: Bacha Larka Aadmi
« Reply #12 on: March 15, 2013, 02:48:13 am »
Thankxxxx all of u for reading story.....
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Re: Bacha Larka Aadmi
« Reply #12 on: March 15, 2013, 02:48:13 am »

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Re: Bacha Larka Aadmi
« Reply #13 on: March 15, 2013, 08:31:50 pm »
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Re: Bacha Larka Aadmi
« Reply #13 on: March 15, 2013, 08:31:50 pm »

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Re: Bacha Larka Aadmi
« Reply #14 on: March 15, 2013, 08:35:52 pm »
story king bhai rat apki story ki updates read ki. no words for appriciate. boht acha likha aap ne aik aik seen sach or reality ki gawahi daita hai. aik rydham main le k chal rahay hain aap story ko. boht hi acha written style hai apka. mera ye kehna galat nai hoga k real story is se achay andaz main kam az kam main ne read nai ki.
bachpan k haalat o waqeyat ko jaisy ap ne biyan kia aik aik word samjh main ana phir sab kuch bilkul sach without any mirch masala. superrrbbbb yaar. ab mujhy next update ka shiddat se intezar hai. plz update soon bhai.
this is for u.

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Re: Bacha Larka Aadmi
« Reply #15 on: March 16, 2013, 12:59:32 am »
story king bhai rat apki story ki updates read ki. no words for appriciate. boht acha likha aap ne aik aik seen sach or reality ki gawahi daita hai. aik rydham main le k chal rahay hain aap story ko. boht hi acha written style hai apka. mera ye kehna galat nai hoga k real story is se achay andaz main kam az kam main ne read nai ki.
bachpan k haalat o waqeyat ko jaisy ap ne biyan kia aik aik word samjh main ana phir sab kuch bilkul sach without any mirch masala. superrrbbbb yaar. ab mujhy next update ka shiddat se intezar hai. plz update soon bhai.
this is for u.

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Re: Bacha Larka Aadmi
« Reply #16 on: March 16, 2013, 01:03:10 am »
waaahhhh yaar....... :eek:

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bohot khoob yaar u r very gud writer itni simple story ko bhi kitna achha beyaan kiya hai

tareef ke liye words nahi mil rhe yaar........ isliye taliyo se hi kaam chala lo....

keep posting ..... :rockon: :rockon: :rockon:

waiting for next update..... :devil2: :devil2: :devil2: :devil2:

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Re: Bacha Larka Aadmi
« Reply #17 on: March 16, 2013, 05:12:58 pm »
[Hello dear ...
Un sub members ka bohat shukriya jinhon ne meri story read ki Aur
Tareef bhi ki ...Aur un sub guests ka Jo story perh rahe hain un ka bhi shukriya...

Mje aap logo ki suggestions ki zarurat hai q k story to abhi start hui hai..
Aur abhi to is ka BACHA wala part adha bhi nahin huwa is main abhi bht kuch baki hai
Phir LARKA ka part aye ga Aur us k baad AADMI ..
Main poori poori koshish kr raha hun k koi cheez miss na Ho.
Q k main chahta hun k her update YUM k Aur aap sub k mayar k mutabik ho
Main next update per kaam kr raha hun jald he aap dosto ki khidmat main hazir kr doon ga...

Aap ka dost .....
Story king...
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Re: Bacha Larka Aadmi
« Reply #18 on: March 16, 2013, 05:40:48 pm »
[Hello dear ...
Un sub members ka bohat shukriya jinhon ne meri story read ki Aur
Tareef bhi ki ...Aur un sub guests ka Jo story perh rahe hain un ka bhi shukriya...

Mje aap logo ki suggestions ki zarurat hai q k story to abhi start hui hai..
Aur abhi to is ka BACHA wala part adha bhi nahin huwa is main abhi bht kuch baki hai
Phir LARKA ka part aye ga Aur us k baad AADMI ..
Main poori poori koshish kr raha hun k koi cheez miss na Ho.
Q k main chahta hun k her update YUM k Aur aap sub k mayar k mutabik ho
Main next update per kaam kr raha hun jald he aap dosto ki khidmat main hazir kr doon ga...

Aap ka dost .....
Story king...


Story king bhai aap sahi me story king bante jaa rhe ho.... lolzzz

yaar isme suggestion ki kya bata hai aap achha likh rhe hain isme koi shaq nahi hai

aap aaram se likho hmara vaada hai hum aapka har update read karenge or feedback denge...

take your complete time and story jitni detail me hogi read karne me utna mazaa aayega

so umeed karte hain ki aap apne baki update ki tarah aagey bhi aalaa update dete rahenge...

waiting for next update.... :rockon:

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Re: Bacha Larka Aadmi
« Reply #19 on: March 17, 2013, 03:29:53 am »
cong yo are writing very good with feelings keep writing in the same way thanks

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Re: Bacha Larka Aadmi
« Reply #20 on: March 18, 2013, 04:39:44 am »
New update..

Raat ki tareeki main jb Nazi ka left side ka boob main choosta to karwat k bal meri taraf ghoom kr laitne ki Waja se Nazi ka right boob apne poore wazan k sath meri gaal ko daba kr us k sath chipk raha tha ..
Chipak is liye raha tha k aik to garmi ka mosam tha dusra Nazi boht hot chuki thi jis ki Waja se us k jism per paseena aa gaya tha ...
Aur zyada paseena us ki cleavage k darmyan tha..
Nazi ki siskane ki awaz to aa rahi thi lkn aise thi k Jaise kisi ka boht zyada saans phool gaya ho US se Thori zyada thi..
Nazi ka aik boob bhi mere dono hathon ki grip main poora nahin aa raha tha.
36 k boob Aur wo bhi poore joban per hon to wo to aik jawan aadmi k hath main poore na aain jb k main to 11 saal ka bacha tha...
Nazi musalsal mere balon main kbhi meri back per hath pher rahi thi ..
Q k us waqt wo beshak aik mukamal mard se nahin lkn aik bache se kissing krwa rahi thi lkn wo mazay le rahi thi ...
Aur us ko maza bhi q na aata hum bhi to khayalon main jis k marzi naam ki muth laga laite hain...Aur maza laite hain ...
Ho skta hai wo bhi imagine kr rahi ho kisi jawan aadmi ko q k andhera hone ki Waja se mind main wo Jo marzi la skti thi ...
Bus Kuch he dair baad Ye amal rokna para...
Nazi.: vicky thehro...
Main khamoshi k sath ruk gaya ...
Nazi.: meri shalwar utaro ..
Main.:baji main...( boht slow bolte huwe.)
Nazi .: Haa tm utaro.
Main.:theek hai Baji.
Maine shalwar ko utarna chaha lkn wo na utri q k main smja lastik hai lkn us ne Nala (auzar band ) pehna tha..
Nazi.:Nala kholo..
Maine US k nala per hath rakha Aur gira kholne laga lkn main abhi tatol he raha tha k mere hathon se Nazi ka hath takra gaya Aur us ne khud he jaldi se gira khol di.
Nazi.: AB utaro..
Maine shalwar ko uper se pakra Aur dheeli hone ki Waja se Araam se utar diya lkn mje khud uth kr baithna para..
Main abhi utar kr baitha he tha k Nazi bhi uth gayee ..
Nazi.:vicky daikho main tme AB Jo sikhane ja rahi hun wo kbhi bhi kisi ko na btana nahin to hamare ghar wale hum dono ko boht marain gay..Aur lrae bhi ho jaye gi phir hum aik dusre k ghar nahin aa ja sakain gay ..
Kasam khao nahin btao gay...
Maine Kasam khai to .
Nazi.: bus theek hai AB dhayan se Aur Jaise salma k uper laite the mere uper bhi Waise he laito..
Nazi ne apni tangain pehle he khol Li Aur main asani se un k darmyan main aa kr baith gaya..
Nazi ne mje kamar k uper Aur under ARM k thora neeche se pasliyon se dono hathon se pakar kr apne uper laita liya Aur aik zor ki hug ki ..
Us k nange mummay muje apni chest se uper feel ho rahe the..
Jb main Nazi k uper laita to wo apna aik hath neeche le gayee Aur mere tiny lun ko apne hath main pakar kr khud he adjust krne lagi..
Min smj gaya tha k AB Ye andar dalay gi to main foran he bol para Baji thook to laga Lo ..
Wo hanste huwe boli nahin rehne do.
Itni dair main Nazi ka left hath meri back per aa gaya ..
Us ne apne left hath se mje push krte huwe aagay ko move hone ka kaha ..
Maine apni back ko push kiya to mera lun Araam se Nazi ki phudi main chala gaya ..
Main check krne k liye apna aik hath apne lun per le gaya Aur foran he bol para k Baji chala gaya hai andar.
Maine Nazi ki phudi ka jaiza liya to wo poori Tara wet thi ..
Aur us per chote chote bal bhi the
Main bola Baji aap ne thook laga Li thi to wo boli Haa Aur meri kamar ko dono hatho se pakr kr aagay peeche push krte huwe mje bhi agaay peeche hone ko kaha.
Aur main jb aagay peechay hone laga to Nazi ne mere sir ko pakar kr khud he mere mounh ko apne mamon per rakh liya Aur mje andar bahir krte huwe boobs ko chusne ka kaha..
Nazi ne mera angle apne hathon se aise banya tha k meri body utni he move krti jis se mera tiny lun under he rehta bahir na niklta
Nazi bht ache tareeke se mere lun ko andar bahir krwa rahi thi Aur mazay le rahi thi Aur ahista se mje bhi bol rahi thi aise krte hain aise...
Aur kbhi Ye kehti k vicky zor se chooso  mje jaisa aata tha choos raha tha Aur andar bahar bhi kr raha tha ...
Thori he dair k baad Nazi ki grift meri back per mazboot hui Aur us ne zor zor se mje apni tarf push krna shuru kr diya..

 Main kamzor sa tha is liye Nazi asaani se mje push kr rahi thi..
Aur sath sath AB apni kamar ko bhi uthane lagi thi bus Thori he dair main US ne aise uchlna Aur mje push krna shuru kr diya k main to ghabra he gaya k kahin Ye mje utha kr phaink he na de Nazi main itni taqt aa gayee thi..
15 se 20 second tk wo bht tarpi Aur uchli.   
Aur aik dum se us ne mje apni tango main aise daboch liya k Jaise meri kamar he tor de gi Maine foran us k boob ko choosna chor diya tha Nazi ne poori taqt se mje neechay se apni tarf dabaya tha..
Aur phir apne hath meri back se hata kr mere back shoulder se mje pakar kr apne Galay se laga liya Nazi k boobs Aur pait paseene se full ter ho chuka tha Aur us k jism se ajeeb c paseene ki badbu aane lagi thi ..
Mera lun Nazi ki choot main he tha Aur wo mje apne uper laita kr taiz taiz saans le rahi thi ...
Jaise us ko skoon mil gaya ho mje us waqt Kya pta k wo kis kadar maza le chuki thi q k mere andar na to us waqt aisi feeling thi Aur na mje is feeling ka idea tha...
Bachpan main Punjabi main sex krne ko phudi phuda kehte the..
Aur main bhi yahi soch kr Ye sub kr raha tha k main phudi phuda kr raha hun...
Jb Nazi ki saans ki taizi kam hui to Shayed wo Ye janti thi k Maine konsa discharge hona hai is liye us ne mje apni left side per ghoom kr neeche utar diya ..mera lun Nazi ki choot se bahir nikal gaya jb us ne mje side per utara..
Nazi uthi Aur bed per baithe baithe he apne kapre dhoondh kr pehn,ne lagi Aur mje bhi ahistaa se kaha vicky kapre pehn lo...
Hum dono ne andhere main he kapre pehn liye ..
Aur wapis apni apni jaga per lait gaye ..Nazi meri tarf mounh kr k mje phir se smjhane lagi Aur main US ki Haa main Haa milate huwe pta nahin Kb so gaya..
Aglay din subha utha to daikha Nazi Aur salma mjh se pehle he uth kr ja chuki thi ...
Maine diwaar per lagay clock ko daikha to 9 baj chuke the ..
Main jaldi se sehan main aya to daikha asmaan per itne kalay baadal Chaye the k Jaise Shaam ho gayee ho ..
Mje zor zor se hasne Aur baatain krne ki awaz sunayee di Jo k sath wale room se aa rahi thi ...
Pta nahin q mera to dil he baith gaya Aur main wahin per preshaan ho kr khara ho gaya ..
Raat wale us wakay ki Waja se main khof ki duniya main fazool se shakook dil main la kr doobta chala ja raha tha Aur ghar k charon tarf nazron ko ghuma raha tha Jaise main koi mujrim hun ..
Achank se Nazi bahir aayee to main Aur ghabra gaya lkn wo bht relax ho kr mjh se poochne lagi k Kb uthe..
Maine kaha abhi to wo boli aajao andar tmhari chachi bhi i hai..
Mera dil Aur taiz ho gaya...
Nazi mere face se andaza lagatay huwe boli Kuch nahin wo to Waise he i thi k salma kal ghar Jo nahin gayee..
Ye kehte he wo mje bazoo se pakar kr room main le gayee jahan per chachi Aur meri khala salma Sonia Aur shaan the andar dakhil hotay he Nazi boli k ...
Main is ko utha kr le i hun janab abhi tk so rahe the
Mera latka huwa chehra daikh kr khala hanste huwe boli mera putar kal da thak gaya way kam kr kr k ..salma Aur vicky ne bara kam keeta a kal ...
Chachi bol pari lo g kisi ghair ka kaam kiya hai apni khala k he ghar ka kaam kiya hai..
Nazi boli ammi Ye dono na atay to aaj bhi kaam mukamal na hota ...
Nazi ki baat k beech main he khala ne kaha Chalo AB wo uth gaya hai tm vicky ka he intzaar kr rahi thi khane k liye AB Khana kha Lo Nazi ne mje mounh hath dhone ka kaha to main uth kr bahir aya to wo boli tme kya huwa Maine kaha Kuch nahin.
To Nazi ne kaha hanso Aur baat bhi kro wo sub Kya sichain gay Aur phir pta hai na .
Maine kaha theek hai Baji..
Hum sub ne mil kr nashta kiya Aur jb hum nashta kr rahe the to barish bhi start ho chuki thi...
Nazi aaj boht he pyar se paish aa rahi thi..
Us ne mere liye meethi lasi banayee thi Jo k mje bht pasand thi..
Nashta khatam ho chuka tha lkn barish abhi bhi ho rahi thi Sonia salma Nazi Aur main bed wale room main bed k uper baith kr nashta kiya jb k chachi khala Aur shaan sath wale room main the..
Nazi ne salma se poocha k salma tm q khamosh ho Kuch Bolo to us k Jawab daine se pehle he Sonia bol pari vicky ne to nahin Kuch kaha
Main ghor se Sonia ka face daikhne laga to Nazi ne Jawab diya..
Nahin wo to Waise he chup hai vicky ne us ko Kya kehna hai..
Tm to janti ho salma boht kam bolty hai..
Sonia phir boli salma ghar se to nahin udaas hui ho..
Salma thora sa muskra kr boli nahin Baji..
To Nazi boli Ye bhi to salma ka he ghar hai..q salma ..
Salma g Baji ..
Gup shup chalti rahi 2 ghantay baad barish bhi ruk gayee...

Us k baad chachi humain ghar le kar aa gayee...
Waqt guzrta raha q k khala k ghar se anay k baad dusre din he main meri ammi Aur chotay bhai Nani ghar chalay gaye q k garmiyon ki chtiyan 1 month ki reh gayee thi is liye ammi ne kaha k aik hafta udher reh kr aa jatay hai...
Nani k ghar main Nana Nani Aur mere 2 mammoon Rehte the ..
Bara mamoo meri ammi Aur khala se Bara tha jis ka naam jameel tha Aur chota mamoo us ka naam khalil tha Jo k ammi se chota tha mamoo jamil ki wife ka naam sameena tha us ka aik beta Aur aik he beti thi baitay ka naam kashif Aur baiti ka naam
 Nabeela tha
Nabeela ki age 16 saal thi jb k kashif 13 saal ka tha..nabeela bht he fair Aur smart thi lkn us k boob boht he normal ya us se bhi chotay the us ne middle k baad study chor di thi jb k kashif abhi parh raha tha ..us k baad chota mamoo us k 2 baitay he the aik 2 saal Aur dusra 4 saal ka..
Chotay mamoo ki bv uzma parhi likhi thi Aur bht he khoobsurat thi..
Wo ghar main uper walay portion per Rehte the..
Khair yahan per aik week guzarne k baad hum ghar aa gaye Shaam ko khala ko hamare ghar aanay ki itla hui to khala Sonia Aur Nazi ko sath le kr hamare ghar aa gayee Aur Nani k ghar main sub k baray main poochane lagi q k hmari Nani k ghar k safar us dor main 8 se 9 ghantay ka tha is liye kbhi kbhi hum jatay thay..
Ammi ne Btaya Baji sub theek hain..aap k pooch rahe the sub k aap bhi aa jatay hamare sath...
Khala ne kaha k next time ikathay chalain gay ammi ne kaha theek hai..
Ye batain mje bore krne lagi to main bahir sehan main aa gaya jaha chachi Aur Nazi baith kr batain kr rahi thi Aur bht Hans rahi thi..
Nazi Aur chachi ki apas main boht banti thi..
Jb main un k pass gaya to chachi phir usi andaaz main aa gaya mera sohna..
Main Hans para Aur un k pass khara ho kr batain krne laga ..Nazi ne mje 2 dafa baithne ka kaha lkn Maine kaha theek hun koi baat nahin..
Thori dair baad Chacha ki ghar main entry hui Aur wo seedhe he hamari tarf aa gaye ..
Aatay he mje Galay laga kr pyar kiya Aur poocha kidon aya mera putar..
Maine kaha 5 baje to wo bolay kahan hain sub Maine room ka kaha to chachi bhi uth gayee Aur Chacha ko khanay ka poochte huwe kamron ki taraf chali gayee ...
Main Nazi k pass he baith gaya...
AB thora thora andhera ho chuka tha Aur main Aur Nazi akele baithe the ..
Us k chehre per ajeeb c muskraht thi ..
Jb bhi hum dono ki nazar milti to Nazi muskura daiti..
Nazi.: Nani k ghar ja kr baith he gaye the akele he chalay gaye the mje bhi le jatay sath..
Main muskurate huwe bola to aap jati sath Baji..
Nazi tm le kar he nahin gaye.
Main.: aap ne kaha he nahin Baji...
Nazi Kuch dair khamosh rahi Aur phir boli..
Nazi .: meri yaad i..
Main.. hmmmmm
Nazi.: hummmmmm Kya meri yad nahin i..
Maine kaha i thi Baji ..
Nazi .: pta hai Maine,kitna tmhara intzaar kiya ...Ye bol kr Nazi khamosh ho gayee...
Thori dair baad boli kal hamare ghar aao ge ...
Maine kaha haaaa aaon ga..
Nazi .:tme aik baat btani hai.
Maine poocha Kya Baji..
To Nazi ne kaha jb aao gay tb bta doon gi..
Maine kaha theek hai..
Nazi boli phir se..
Nazi.: vicky tm na aana kal main khud aaon gi dopehar ko Sonia Aur ammi k sath phir tme btaon gi Kya baat hai..
Theek hai..
Maine kaha theek hai Baji...
Us k baad hum Kuch dair baithay to khala ki awaz i naziiiiiii.
Nazi.: g ammi.
Aur wo uth kr chali gayee ..
Next day khala Sonia aur Nazi 11 baje k Kareeb hamare ghar aa gaye un k hath main aik bag tha jis main kapre the...
Khala ne ammi Aur chachi ko kapre dikhaye Aur achank poocha wo kala suit kaha hai Aur in k dupattay to..
Nazi boli ammi wo to dusre room main Maine katne k liye rakhe hain..
Khala.: tme kaha bhi tha k tmhari khala ko sare kapre dikhanay hain..
AB Kya krain..
Nazi ammi mje pta hai wo kaha hain main abhi kisi k sath ja kr le aati hun ..
Khala.: kis k sath jao gi...
Nazi boli vicky ko bhaij dain sath main abhi le kr i..
Khala Chalo jaldi jao Aur le kr aao..
Main pass he baitha tha..
Nazi ne mje chalne ka kaha Aur main US k sath chal diya..........
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Re: Bacha Larka Aadmi
« Reply #21 on: March 18, 2013, 05:54:33 pm »
great yaar !!!!!!! :rockon: :rockon: :rockon: :rockon: :rockon: :rockon: :rockon: :rockon:

story running rocking.......... :gun_bandana: :gun_bandana: :gun_bandana: :gun_bandana:

waiting for next update...... :punk:

plz update soon...... :devil2:

for this update....   :clap: :clap: :clap: :clap: :clap: :clap: :clap: :clap: :clap: :clap: :clap: :clap:
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Re: Bacha Larka Aadmi
« Reply #22 on: March 18, 2013, 06:07:21 pm »
nice and lovely updates... :clap: :clap: :clap:
natural style of writing.... :2guns: :2guns: :2guns:
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Re: Bacha Larka Aadmi
« Reply #23 on: March 19, 2013, 03:56:32 am »
meray aziz bilawajah k alfaaz (tamheed) kam istemaal karo aur repeat wording se avoid karo scene ko wazeh ker k emotion batatay huay sentence banaya karo, aur to phir,kion k, lekin ,balkay is tarah alfaaz bhi sentence ki power kam ker detay hain, ok after it leep it up.
hi friends ,
congratulations to u all for read my special stories which based on reality of our social life many of us face it in there childhood but shy to share the expiriences but i openly wrote here sexual practice usually happened in south asia regon, hope you all agree with me.