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Re: Bacha Larka Aadmi
« Reply #24 on: March 19, 2013, 04:58:16 am »
meray aziz bilawajah k alfaaz (tamheed) kam istemaal karo aur repeat wording se avoid karo scene ko wazeh ker k emotion batatay huay sentence banaya karo, aur to phir,kion k, lekin ,balkay is tarah alfaaz bhi sentence ki power kam ker detay hain, ok after it leep it up.
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Agar Kuch Ho bhi jaye to meri first story smj kr ignore kr dijiye ga...
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Re: Bacha Larka Aadmi
« Reply #24 on: March 19, 2013, 04:58:16 am »

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Re: Bacha Larka Aadmi
« Reply #25 on: March 19, 2013, 11:56:45 am »
story king bhai koi shak nai aap waqei king ho ji. itna acha andaz likhnay ka superbb bhai. abhi to story starting k maraahal main hai. agay mere khiyal se boht kuch honay wala hai. meri sirf ap se aik request hai update thora lamba or jaldi kia kerain plz. i know boht mushkil hoti hai likhnay main time nikal k likhna parta hai. laiken kia kerain bhai itni achi story ka wait kerna bhi boht mushkil ho jata hai.
boht achi update thi bhai. vicky ko mojjain bhi khoob kerwa rahay ho or poori story main darra hua bhi sab se ziyada vicky hai. lolzz
update ka boht shiddat se intezar hai story king bhai. aaj update ker daina yar plz.

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Re: Bacha Larka Aadmi
« Reply #25 on: March 19, 2013, 11:56:45 am »

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Re: Bacha Larka Aadmi
« Reply #26 on: March 19, 2013, 05:58:33 pm »
story king bhai koi shak nai aap waqei king ho ji. itna acha andaz likhnay ka superbb bhai. abhi to story starting k maraahal main hai. agay mere khiyal se boht kuch honay wala hai. meri sirf ap se aik request hai update thora lamba or jaldi kia kerain plz. i know boht mushkil hoti hai likhnay main time nikal k likhna parta hai. laiken kia kerain bhai itni achi story ka wait kerna bhi boht mushkil ho jata hai.
boht achi update thi bhai. vicky ko mojjain bhi khoob kerwa rahay ho or poori story main darra hua bhi sab se ziyada vicky hai. lolzz
update ka boht shiddat se intezar hai story king bhai. aaj update ker daina yar plz.

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Re: Bacha Larka Aadmi
« Reply #27 on: March 19, 2013, 06:08:37 pm »
waiting for next update....... :angel:

i hope aap jaldi hi next update ke liye waqt nikalenge......

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Re: Bacha Larka Aadmi
« Reply #28 on: March 20, 2013, 12:39:48 am »
dear please update I am waiting for your story


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Re: Bacha Larka Aadmi
« Reply #29 on: March 20, 2013, 02:23:53 pm »
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Re: Bacha Larka Aadmi
« Reply #30 on: March 20, 2013, 05:05:00 pm »
bohat kammal yaaar maza a gaya plzzzz iss bachpan ka hissay ko aor lamba karo boht maza atta haa isy perh kar

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Re: Bacha Larka Aadmi
« Reply #31 on: March 20, 2013, 06:19:53 pm »
Nazi taiz qadmon se chalti hui sehan main aa gayee main bhi us k peechay bhagta huwa us k sath ja mila gate khola Aur hum gali se Nazi k ghar ko chal diye.
Nazi k face per room se niklnte he aik muskuraht jari Ho gayee thi Jo k sath sath chaltay huwe meri taraf daikhne per Aur bhi dilkash Ho jati thi ..
Lkn main is ki muskarahat k peeche chupi Nazi ki us khushi Aur ahsaas se bekhabar tha..
Chand minute ki walk k baad hum gaon se nikal kr khaiton main aik kachay rastay per chal rahe the jis k dono taraf haray bharay khait jb k left side wale khaiton se pehle kachay raste k bilkul sath sath aik Pani ka khaal (nehar se niklne wala chashma) chal raha tha Jo k 6 feet chora hai ..
Khaal k kinare per lagi hari bhari ghaas kachay raste ko Aur khoobsurat bana daiti thi khaal main jaga jaga per bhainsain Aur bache naha rahe the Main bhi aksar doston k sath garmi main Sara Sara din khaal main nahata tha...AB us life ko bht miss krta hun kash wo bachpan phir lot aye ..
Nazi aise chal rahi thi k Jaise hawaon main ur rahi Ho chalte chalte Nazi kbhi mje bazoo se pakar laititi kabhi zor se kheenchti Jaise keh rahi Ho vicky tm boht aahista chal rahe Ho...thora agay chal kr aik Aur right side per turn laita huwa kacha rasta aa gaya Jo k Nazi k ghar ki taraf jata tha jald he humare qadmon ne us raste per halki halki dhool urate huwe  aagay bharna shuru kr diya ...is basti main 20 se 25 ghar he the lkn us se pehle bahr khaithon main aik peeple ka bht Bara darkht tha Jo k poorya gaon ki aurton k liye dopehar guzarne Aur ikathay baithne ka thikana tha.hum jaldi se us darkht k neeche se guzar rahe the jaha kafi aurtain Aur bache baithe the Nazi ne chalte chalte he in se haal chal poocha Aur aagay gali main dakhil Ho gayee main thora sa ruk kr doston se baat krne laga magar Nazi na ruki Maine doston se ijazt Li Aur bhaag kr gali main aa gaya daikha to Nazi khadam ki dukaan k bilkul samne khari hai kbhi meri tarf daikh kr smile krti hai to kabhi shop ki tarf Aur mje bula rahi thi k aa jao us k face per US waqt ajeeb he shokhee chalak rahi thi foran he main Nazi k pass aa gaya daikha to khadam shop main khara Ho kr Nazi ko daikhay ja raha tha sath besabron ki tarah us ko andar bula raha tha chun k dopehar hone ki Waja se gali main koi na tha is liye Nazi ne us ko hath k ishare se wapsi ka bata diya khadam ne sir per hath rakh k ajeeb c shakal banatay huwe sir hila diya ijazat miltay he hum dono ghar ki taraf chal diye aik minute se bhi pehle gate k samnay the Nazi ne key pehle he hath main pakri thi jaldi se China ka lock khol kr ghar main dakhil Ho kar mere andar aanay k baad gate ko andar se kundi lagayee us k baad room k bahir se aik Aur China ka lock khola Aur phir kundi Aur room main dakhil Ho gayee foran fan chalaya dupatta side per rakha Aur mje Pani pilane ka kaha main jaldi se pani laya Nazi ne pani liya Aur bed per lait kr saans laine lagi
 Main Nazi k pass he baith gaya Nazi ne mje bhi bazoo se pakar kr sath he laitne ko kaha ..
Maine kaha nahin Baji main Theek hun
Nazi lait jao itni garmi main Aaye Ho main is baar Nazi k sath he lait gaya .
Hum dono ki taangain bed se neechay he latak rahi thi chaplain pehne huwe he..
Nazi.: vicky bht garmi hai bahar to Toba..
Me.: g Baji.
Nazi.: vicky tm boht he achay Ho.
Main sharma k smile krne laga..
Nazi.: vicky tme agar khane k liye koi bhi cheez chahiye Ho to khadam ko mera naam le kr le liya kro lkn jb wo akela Ho to..
Me .:theek hai Baji.
Nazi .: salma se us din k baad baat ki tm ne
Me .:g Baji wo to krta rehta hun..
Nazi.: Aur wo kaam kiya Jo sikhaya tha .( Nazi cherne wali smile se boli.
Me .:nahin Baji us k baad Nani k ghar chala gaya tha na.
Nazi.: acha acha bhoolay to nahin ..
Me .: Kya Baji..? (Mere mind main Kuch na tha..)
Nazi .: bhool gaye raaat ko Jo sikhaya tha..

Me .: nahin Baji yad hai sub Kuch.
Nazi .:abhi check kr laiti hun tme..agar Kuch bhoolay na to phir daikhna...( Nazi ne aik shararti smile k sath kaha.)

Me..Kaise Baji.
Nazi ne kameez uper uthai main ghor se Nazi k nangay hotay jism ko daikhne laga
Nazi kameez ko uper kr k apni gardan tk le ja chucki thi Aur us k 36 k boobs aik white bra main qaid huwe seedha chat ki tarf Nok kiye huwe the..
Foran he Nazi ne apni bra ko bhi baghair hook kholay uper kiya to us k dono boob bahir nikal aye .
Jaldi se Nazi meri tarf ghoomi Aur mje kaha k Chalo
Main din ki roshni main pehli baar itne baray Aur white mummay daikh raha tha ..
Nazi ne foran mera sir pakar kr apne right boob ko mere mounh se laga diya Maine niple mounh main daal kr choosna start he kiya tha k foran nikal diya Baji is pe to nakam laga hai ..
Garmi main itni zyada walk krne se Nazi poori paseene se bheeg gayee thi is liye Maine paseena ko namak keh diya..
Nazi ne jaldi se side per paray dupattay ko pakara Aur pass he pare jug main US ka aik palu bhigo kr dono boob Achi Tara saaf kiye jb k sath he dusre palu se use khushk kr k jaldi se mere sath lait gayee Aur mje kaha jaldi se doodh piyo Maine hich kachatay huwe uper wlay boob ko mounh main liya Aur doodh peene laga Nazi .: vicky dono hatho se dabana bhool gaye Ho Maine dono hath mounh main liye boob per rakh diye Aur zor zor se choosne laga..
Nazi k hathon ne taizi pakri Aur mere sir k balon se shuru hotay Aur back tk jatay main choos he raha tha tabhi Nazi ne aik hath se apni shalwar khol kr utar di.
Nazi.:vicky Ye Theek hai AB jaldi se apni shalwar utar do.
Maine aik second main shalwar utari to Nazi mere lun ko pakar kr boli haaaa Ye to Nani k ghar ja k Bara Ho gaya hai ..
Main foran lun ko ghor se daikhne laga k Kya wakae Bara Ho gaya hai.itni dair main Nazi ne bed k kinare per apni gaand rakh ker apni tango ko khol diya.
Nazi .:vicky neeche utro bed se..
Main Kuch bole he bed se neeche utar gaya
AB main Nazi ki tango k beech main aa kr khara Ho gaya tha jaha se meri nazar Sirf Nazi k 36 size k white white Aur tanay huwe boobs per thi..
Nazi ne mje pakar kr apni tango k darmyan phudi pe adjust kiya .
Mera dhayan Nazi ki phudi per chala gaya to Maine daikha Nazi ki phudi k lip aapas me jurray huwe the uper baal na honay ki Waja se mje Nazi ki phudi k khado khaal wazeha tor per nazar aa rahe the .
 Nazi ne waqt zaya kiye baghair he mere lun ko apni phudi k hole per rakha Aur mje push krne ka kaha mera lun pehle he jhtke main Sara andar chala gaya.. Ye sub fast forword ki Tara Ho raha tha ...
 Nazi ne tango ko Aur khola Aur mje kaha k aaj khud he andar kro..Maine hath se tiny lun ko pakra Aur Nazi ki phudi k lips per rakh diya.
Mera chota sa lun is waqt full tight tha is liye main jb thora sa zor lagaya to lun lip k darmyan slip Ho kr khud he hole main jaga banata huwa andar chala gaya...Nazi ki phudi k jure huwe lips mera lun andar Jane se alag Ho gaye..main ghor se apne chotay se lun ko Nazi ki phudi main jata huwa daikhne laga jb main lun ko push kr k andar dalta to Nazi ki phudi k lips k androoni kinaray bhi mere lun k sath Nazi ki phudi k hole main dab jatay jb lun bahar aata to lips phir se khul jatay.

Maine in out start kr diya mere halkay halkay jhatkay se Nazi k mummay uper neeche move krne lagay Jaise he mje Ye andaza Ho gaya k mere jhatkay ki Waja se Nazi k mummay ooper neechay Ho rahe hain to main jaan boojh kr zor se jhatka maar kr Nazi k 36 size Mummon ko jhatkay laitay daikh kr khush hota Ye nazara mje bht acha laga isi bekhayali main mera lun bahir nikal gaya to Maine khud us ko dobara hath rakhay baghair Nazi ki phudi per rakh kr push kr diya lun phir andar chala gaya Maine apne is karnamay per shabash laine k liye Nazi ko daikha to wo pta nhn ankhain band kr k kis duniya main khoyee thi ..
Aur us k face ko daikhte daikhte mera lun phir Nazi ki choot se slip Ho kr bahar aa gaya Nazi ne ankhain khol Li Maine jaldi se phudi ko Target kr k push kiya
Mera lun us ki narmo nazak phudi k lip khol kr andar chala gaya Nazi ka aik dum se moun khula us ne gardan peechay ki taraf utha di.
Main AB baray dhayan se lun ko in out kr raha tha kbhi Nazi k face ko daikhta to kabhi lun ko phudi main in out hotay .mje in out krte 2 minute he huwe hon gay usi waqt Nazi apne hath mere shoulder per le i Aur boli vicky doodh bhi piyo us ki awaz aise nikal rahi thi Jaise wo bemaar Ho ...
Apne dono hath se Nazi k boob ko pakra aik ko monh main le kr choosne laga Nazi k uper laitne se lun poora bahar nhn aa raha tha lkn ja Sara he raha tha Nazi AB Pagal Ho gayee thi Aur tarp tarp kr kehne lagi vicky zor se Aur zor se ...
Main bhi zor zor se jhatkay mar raha tha sath Nazi k boobs ko choos raha tha.jb k Nazi mere sir ko pakar kr zor zor se mje apni taraf daba rahi thi..
Chand lamhon main Nazi ka last stop aa gaya Aur us ne itni taqt se mje apne mummay per dabana shuru kr diya k mera to saans band hone laga...
Dusri taraf Nazi ne mere kaan k pass aa kr kaha vicky taiz taiz andar bahar kro ...
Maine hukam ki tameel ki AB mera nashan aisa set Ho gaya tha k Nazi ki phudi ko daikhay baghair he main lun ko andar daal laita ...
 Akhri dafa lun bahir Niklne per Nazi ne mje apne hathon se azaad krte huwe khul kr chodne ko kaha
Vickyyyyy zor se jhatkay maro ....
main taizi se in out krne laga naazi full josh main aa gayee Aur apne hathon se boob dabatay huwe sir ko hilane lagi chand lamhon main Nazi  ne  apni hip ko uper neechay krna shuru kr diya jb k apne neeche wale lip ko danton se dabane lagi .aglay he lamhay Nazi ne mje zor se kas k apne Gale se lagaya jb k hip ko uchal uchal kr lun ko apni phudi main andar bahar krne lagi bus chand second main Nazi ne apni choot ko apne pani se tar kr diya Aur akhri chand jhatkay le kr hathyar daal diye jb k mera tiny lun apni choot k andar he rehne diya
AB wo pur skoon Ho chuki thi
us ki poori body paseenay main doob chuki thi..
Chand lamhe baad Nazi ne mje apne bazoo ki grift se azaad krte huwe uthne ka kaha.
Maine paon farash per seedhay kiye Aur hathon k zor se bed per wazan daal kr khara Ho gaya..
Jaise he khara huwa to mera dhayan lun per he tha lun k bahir niklte he Maine ghor se daikha Nazi ki choot se aik lais daar dhaar nikal kr mere lun k sath chipak kr Thori c lambi Ho kr Tooti Aur Nazi ki phudi se neechay chali gayee main heraan Ho kr daikh raha tha Ye Kya hai to Nazi ne aik kapre se apni phudi saaf krte huwe poocha k vicky Kya daikh rahe Ho..
Maine kaha Baji aaj to thook bhi nhn lagayee aap ne to Ye kaha se aa gayee Nazi ne choot ko Achi tarah se saaf krne k baad jaldi se shalwar pehntay huwe kehne lagi baad main btaon gi abhi jaldi se niklo Nazi ne bra main mere samne he mummay daal kr set kiye kameez neechay ki Aur khari Ho kr kapre Theek krte huwe aagay peechay Hath laga kar khud ko tatola bed sheet Theek ki Aur kapron wala bag utha kr mje kaha Chalo vicky
Hum dono ko room main enter honay se le kr AB janay tak 5/6 minutes he lagay the
Nazi ne room ko lock lagaya main US se pehle he gali wala gate khol kr bahar khara tha nazi dorti hui bahar i main gate ko bahar se lock kiya ...jaldi se muri mje sath le kr chalne lagi khadam ki dukaan se guzrte huwe us ne daikha waha aik larka khara tha Nazi ne nazrain ghuma kr gali ki taraf kr Li khadam aik jhatke se utha magar hum dono itni dair main aagay nikal chukay the ...
 Wapsi per phir peepal k darkht k neechay se guzare jahan per abhi bhi aurtain Aur bache baithay the Nazi in se batain krte huwe jaldi se kachay rastay per pohanch gayee..
Nazi.: vicky aaj tm ne sub seekh liya hai ( boht fresh mode main) daikho AB hum dost hain mje pta hai tm boht achay Ho Aur kisi ko nahin btao gay main bhi AB kisi se Kuch nahin kahun gi Theek hai.
Me .: Theek hai Baji.
Nazi .: jb koi bhi nahin Ho ga Aur hum akele hon gay to hum aise he krain gay.
Jaise tm kaho gay tme paise chahiye hon to mjh se maang laina Jo cheez chahiye main tm ko la kar doon gi Theek hai..
Me.: Theek hai Baji.
Nazi.: vicky tm ne kaha tha k tmhare dost k pass movie hai kisi din us se wo movie Lana hum vcr karaye (rent ) per la kr daikhain gay..
Me .: Haa Baji farook se main le aaon ga kb laon .
Nazi .:jb tme kahun gi tb ..us ko kehna tm ne khud daikhni hai mera naam na laina Raat ko jb sub so Jain gay tb daikhain gay..
Me .: Theek hai.
Nazi .: phir Jaise movie main Ho ga Waise he hum krain gay.
Me..Theek hai Baji
Itni dair main hum khaal k sath wala adha rasta cross kr chukay the.
Aaj Nazi k chehre per muskrahat Aur shokhee hamare ghar se niklne se le kr abhi tk bar qarar thi.
Nazi aaj aik ajeeb andaz se mere sath laad Aur athkaliyan kr rahi thi..
Nazi .: vicky tm meri khala k sub baito se ache Aur pyare Ho Ye bol kr Nazi ne mere aik cheek per chutki kaat di main Nazi ka hath apne hath se pakar kr apni gaal ko azaad krte huwe side per Ho gaya..
Nazi.: vicky hum ne zyada dair to nahin ki na. Nazi dil main weham sa latay huwe boli.

Me .:  Baji nahin hum to itni taiz taiz chal rahe hain..
Nazi .:( itminaan krte huwe boli ) haan vicky .
me .: vcr kb Lana hai hum sari Raat filmain daikhay gay.
Nazi .: theek hai meri jaan jitni marzi filmain daikhna lkn apne dost se wo wali film zarur lana Aur salma Sonia main se kisi ko na btana wo sub ko bta dain gi.
maine kaha nahin batata Baji.
Itni dair main hamari gali aa gayee Nazi ne shoping bag right hand se left main kiya right hand se darwaze ko khol kr andar dakhil Ho gayee main bhi us k peeche he andar aa gaya podon k pass se guzrte huwe Nazi ne qadam podon ki tarf he mor liye gardan ghuma kr neem k darkht k neeche daikhne lagi main bhi peeche he chala gaya to daikha neem k darkht k neeche charpayee per salma Aur Sonia aik dusre k mounh se mounh jor kr baithi batain kr rahi hain Nazi aik gehri nazar salma per jamaye chotay podon ko cheerte huwe seedhi in dono k pass chali gayee main bhi us k sath he udher aa gaya.
Nazi.: Bara jur k baithiyan j Khair te hai.
Sonia .:kush nae Waise he baithi hain
Nazi ne ghor se salma ko daikha to us ne nazrain neeche kr Li.
Lkn Sonia ghuse se bol pari kush nahin tainu ki a aiwain lagi ain.
Nazi .: mere naal Zara tameez naal smj I.
Sonia .: sir dusri taraf ghumatay huwe  hnnn tameez naal.
Nazi ne ghoorte huwe dono ko daikha Aur mje kaha Chalo vicky.
Nazi ko shak sa Ho gaya tha kahin salma ne Sonia ko Kuch bta to nahin diya.
Jb hum podon se bahir aye to Nazi ne foran mje kaha vicky salma ne kahin Sonia ko bta na diya Ho main to pehle he boht bahadar tha foran Jawab diya AB Kya Ho ga Baji.
Nazi .: Kuch nahin aik to tm boht jaldi Dar jatay Ho ..main salma ki khabar laiti hun kapre dikha loon.
Hum kamre main enter huwe to wahan per Sirf khala ammi Aur chachi thi jb k mere chotay bhai uzma Aur shaan room se bahar bramday main khail rahe the .
Khala foran boli itny dair to Nazi ne kaha bahir ja kr daikho kitni garmi hai.Aur dair kitni lagi hai foran bag uthaya saans bhi nahin liya Aur paglon ki tarah wapis dor laga di Nazi ko pehle he Sonia Aur salma ko le kr ghusa tha uper se khala ki baat ne Aur bharka diya..
Khair gusse se laal hotay huwe Nazi ne bag khol kr suit Aur dupatay nikal kr apni ammi k samne rakh diye wo sub kapre daikhne lagay itne main Sonia Aur salma bhi aa gayee sub log kapre daikhne main masroof Ho gaye jb k Nazi kha Jane wali nazron se kabhi salma Aur kbhi Sonia ko daikhti.
Salma ka to Jaise rang he urr gaya Ho wo Nazi se ghabra kr nazrain nahin mila pa rahi thi...
Ye sub chalta raha Nazi isi takub main thi k salma se akele main baat kr le ta k us k dil ko skoon aa jaye isi intzaar main 4 baj gaye.
Lkn salma ko Nazi k chehre k tasuraat se us k ghusay ka andaza Ho gaya tha is liye wo darti wahin per baithi rahi.
Khala ne clock ki tarf daikha to jaldi se boli Nazi 4 baj gaye hain Chalo utho ghar ko chalain 6 baje tmhare abu ne aa jana hai un k liye khana nahin banana ..Chalo Chalo..
Ammi bol pari Baji baith jao na itni garmi main jao gi yahan per he sub Kuch mangwa Lo Aur idhar se he paka kr le jana.
Nazi ne kaha Haa ammi khala Theek key rahi hain bht garmi hai bahar Aur hum pehle bhi to idhar se he khana paka kr kayee dafa le kar gaye hain to aaj paka lain gay to Kon c bari baat Ho jaye gi.
Khala udher he baith gayee Aur..kaha Chalo mangwa Lo sabzi...
Maine sabzi la kr di to Nazi ne sabzi pakri Aur bahar sehan main aa gayee neem k darkht k neeche charpayee pe sabzi katne lagi.
Main nahane chala gaya jb naha kr bahar aya

 To Nazi ne mje daikhte he salma ko awaz lagana shuru kr di main chaltay huwe us k pass gaya g Baji.
Nazi ne mje ishare se samjhaya k salma ko bhijo  Nazi is waqt charpayee per akeli thi main smj gaya k Kya baat hai main seedha apne room main gaya waha per khala ammi Aur Sonia baithi batain kr rahi main smj gaya k salma apne room main chachi k pass Ho gi main foran he in k room main chala gaya salma bed per apna chutiyon ka kaam kr rahi thi Aur chachi shaan ko feed kra rahi thi ..Maine salma ko kaha salma Baji Nazi tme bahar bula rahi hai.
Salma k to chehre se rang he urr gaya wo herangi se mje daikhne lagi
Chachi ne poocha Kya kehna hai aik halki si smile k sath.
Main bola wo sabzi bana rahi hain is liye bulaya hai.
Chachi jao Baji k sath abhi kaam krwa do Ye baad main kr laina.
Salma utre huwe chehre Aur urre huwe rang k sath bed se utar kr sehan ki taraf chal di main bhi towel ko apne room main rakh kr un k peechay he aa gaya ..
Jb main pass aya to Nazi keh rahi thi salma sach sach btao Kya batain kr rahi thi..
Salma apni ammi Aur bari bari kasmain khane lagi Baji Maine Kuch nahin btaya
Main sach keh rahi hun main Kuch nahin btaya .
Nazi agar tm ne nahin Kuch bataya to phir tm mje daikh kr khamosh q Ho gayee thi.
Salma ki ankhain bhar i Aur wo baithi hui awaz main apni safayan daine lagi..k Maine Sonia ko Kuch nahin bataya ..
Nazi ne khud ko control kiya Aur pyar se us ko kaha k daikho salma agar tm ne Kuch bhi kaha to main bhi sub Kuch bta dun gi..
Salma AB hichkiyan bhar k ronay lagi to Nazi ne us ko Galay laga kr boli salma tu meri choti behan hai main to Waise he tm se pooch rahi thi ...chup kr tu to itni pyari Aur Achi bachi hai.AB rona nahin ..salma mounh saaf krne k baad thora relax Ho gayee..
Nazi US ko pyar se tasali de kr use relax krne lagi..
Thori dair main he sub normal Ho gaye...
Nazi .: salma Maine Aur vicky ne vcr kraye per lane ka program banya hai hmare ghar tm ne Kon c film daikhni hai bta daina ..
Baji Jo aap ko Achi lagay
Nazi .:nahin Jo meri choty behan kahe gi wohi..
Salma muskara kr boli Baji koi bhi .
Nazi Theek hai ...
Nazi ne blue film ka zikar na kiya Aur ishare se mje bhi khamosh rehne ka bol diya...
Salma Aur Nazi ko batain krte chor kr main room main aa gaya ..
Nazi ne khana pakaya Aur wo log apne ghar chalay gaye
Kuch din main khala k ghar jata raha lkn khala Aur Sonia k ghar per hone ki Waja se Kuch na Ho saka
In dono main Maine khud se Nazi ko Kuch na kaha lkn jb bhi moka milta baat krne ka to Nazi yahi kehti vicky jb hum dono akele hon gay to phir abhi chup chap baithe raha kro main tme khud he bta doon gi...
Maine vcr ka poocha to Nazi ne kaha krte hain Kuch.
Din aik aik kr k guzrte rahe..
Aik din chachi ka bhai Aur ammi aye
Chachi ne un k liye cold drinks mangwayee Aur sath he khane ka bhi arrange krne lagi.
Chachi ki ammi ne btaya k gudu ki mangni hai teen din baad .
Chachi foran boli Kya mamoo maan gaye
Chachi ki ammi haaa maan gaye Aur unhon ne fori tor per mangni krne ka kaha hai Aur 5 mah k baad shadi ka bhi...
Chachi ne khushgawar Ho kr apni ammi ko mubarkbaad di Aur apne chotay bhai ko pyar se gaal se kiss ki.
Chachi.: to AB ammi Kya krna hai.
Ammi.: krna Kya hai 3 din baad mangni hai Aur tm sub log aana main tm sub ko dawat daine he I thi poori family aana 4 baje tk pohanch jana
Chachi .: ammi us din to mangal ka din hai Aur shaan k abu to 6 baje ayen gay kaam se wo Kaise Jain gay aap jumay ka din rakh laiti ..
Chachi ki ammi..: beti tme tmhare mammoo ka to pta hai na wo kaha kisi ki sunte hain...
Chachi .: Theek hai ammi main un ko smjha loon gi ..
Chachi ki ammi Aur bhai ne khana khaya us k baad mere ammi abu Aur phir khala ko mangni ka keh kr chalay gaye...
 Chachi ne Raat ko shaan k abu se baat ki to wo ghuse se bolne lagay..
In ko yahi din mila tha chuti ka din nahin rakh sakte the
Aik itni mushkil se Ye kaam mila hai..mje nahin pta chachi Aur chach ka shor sun kr abu bhi aa gaye abu ne Chacha ko samjhaya to Chacha ne kaha bhai jaan agar chuti mil gayee to chala jaon ga ya phir adhi chuti le kr seedha udher he aa jaon ga.
Ye baat yahi khatam hui Aur do din guzar gaye ..
Main Jaise he subha utha

 
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Re: Bacha Larka Aadmi
« Reply #32 on: March 21, 2013, 02:20:46 am »

keep it up nice story and waiting for  next update..........................................
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« Reply #33 on: March 21, 2013, 02:28:05 am »
keep it up nice story and waiting for  next update..........................................
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Re: Bacha Larka Aadmi
« Reply #34 on: March 21, 2013, 02:40:05 am »
waaaahhhh nazi waaahhhhhh :alucard:

karta munda kharab....hahahahahaha

really nice update yaar..... :rockon: :rockon: :rockon: :rockon: :rockon: :rockon:


bohot aala update tha yaar..... :clap:


waiting for next update :devil2:

keep update soon.... :taz:

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Re: Bacha Larka Aadmi
« Reply #35 on: March 21, 2013, 03:36:21 am »
Mere kano ko aik shor sunayee diya main jaldi se bramday se bahir sehan main aa gaya
Chacha buland awaz main chachi per cheekh rahe the jb k chachi sir jhukaye roye ja rahi thi..
Ammi chachi k shoulder per hath rakh kr us ko chup kra rahi thi Aur sath Ye keh rahi thi k tere bhai jaan Abi naha kr bahar aa jatay hain Aur wo shaan k abu se krte hain baat main aram se pass ja kr khara Ho kr sari soorte hall ko daikhne laga..
Kuch dair baad abu bahar aa gaye naha kr unhon ne Chacha ko khamosh hone ka kaha Chacha abu ka boht ahtraam krte hain is liye wo foran khamosh Ho gaye..
Chachi bhai jaan agar kal Ye mangni per na gaye to main sub mehmano ko Kya Jawab dun gi log Kya kahain gay k iklota damaad q nahin aya bus Ye baat Maine ki hai Aur Ye mje galian daine lagay hain
Abu .: aslam Pagal Ho gaye Ho subha subha muhalay walon ko tamasha dikha rahe Ho..
Kuch sharam kro..
Chacha .: bhai jaan aap ko to pta hai k kitni mushkil se mje job mili hai kaam zyada hone ki Waja se main her roz over time laga raha hun Maine azra ko kaha bhi tha Raat ko k main 3 baje chuti le kr seedha udher he aa jaon ga lkn Ye maan he nahin rahi bus aik he zid hai k kal chuti kr Lo...is ko baat smj he nahin aati AB Ye akaili jaye Maine nahin jana sath..
Abu ne chachi ko kaha azra tm preshan na Ho kal aslam jaye ga tmhare sath.
Chacha .: bhai jaan Maine kaha bhi hai k tm chali jana bachon ko le kr main kaam se seedha tmhare peeche aa jaon ga ...
Abu .: azra jb wo keh raha hai aa jaye ga to tm bhi baat ko smjho Aur khatam kro subha subha Ye lrae..
Kuch dair baad sub khamosh Ho gaye
Chacha abu se kal kaam se seedha udher janay ka keh kr kaam per chalay gaye .
Thori dair baad abu bhi chalay gaye .
Ghar main sub normal chalne laga ..
Next day 12 baje sub tayari main lag gaye decide Ye huwa k chachi ki sari family Aur hamare ghar se ammi abu Aur mere do sub se chotay bhai mangni per jayen gay khala k ghar se sirf khala ja rahi thi jb k Chacha kaam se seedhay jayen gay..
Jb sub tayar Ho kr niklne lagay to mere chotay bhai zeshaan ne rona shuru kr diya k mje bhi sath le kr jao..
Abu ne us ki thukayee bhi ki lkn us k chup na krne per ammi ne jaldi se us ko tayar kiya ..mje Ye kaha k ghar ko lock kr k tm khala k ghar chalay jao ..
Gate ko lock kr k sub ghar wale khala k ghar ki taraf paidal he chal diye main bhi sath he tha khala k ghar pohanch kr un ko bhi sath liya jb k Nazi ko kaha k vicky k sath Sonia ya Nazi main se koi chali jaye q k ghar per lock laga hai Aur hum sub Ho sakta hai late Ho jayen is liye ghar main reh kr hamara wait krain..
Sub log chalay gaye Nazi jaldi jaldi khana ki tayari main lag gayee 5 baje tk Nazi ne khana tayar kr liya Sonia Nazi Aur Maine mil kr khana khaya ..
Khana khatay he Sonia uthi Aur naighbour main apni sahaili sana k ghar chali gayee ...
 gate k band hone ki awaz sun kr Nazi uthi Aur bahar daikh kr mere pass aa gayee ..
Main bed per baitha tha Nazi mere pass he aa kr baith gayee Nazi mere shoulder per hath rakha kr mje apne seenay se lagaya Aur mere sath Kuch aise mastian krne lagi Jaise koi kushti chal rahi Ho ..
Main bhi us k sath Waise he shuru Ho gaya achank Nazi ne meri shalwar k uper se he mere lun ko pakar liya..
Main bhi us ko gardan se kbhi us ko chest pe hath rakh kr dhakay daine laga hamari mastiyan jari he thi k Nazi ne mje kaha k doodh piyo gay vicky main khamosh he raha to Nazi ne jaldi se kameez uper ki Aur bra se aik mumma nikal liya dusre he lamhay wo bed se uter kr kamre k darwazay per chali gayee darwazay k sath aise khari Ho gayee k us ki gardan sehan main daikh rahi thi jb k us ki body darwazay pe lagay perday k peechay thi Nazi ka right boob nanga he tha ..Nazi ne jaldi se mje apne pass bulaya mere pass jatay he Nazi ne apna boob hath se pakar kr mere mounh main daal diya Maine foran he US ko suck krna shuru kr diya Nazi mere sir ko pakar kr apne boob pe daba rahi thi sath sehan main nazar rakhay thi..
Thori dair baad Nazi ne apna nala thora sa dheela kiya Aur mera aik hath apni phudi per rakh liya Maine Nazi ki phudi per hath phera us per thoray thoray baal Aaye the phudi uper se to dry thi lkn jb main lip k darmyan apni aik ungli Thori deep ki to wo mje andar se wet feel hui 3 char dafa lip k darmyan ungli chalanay k baad wo Nazi ki phudi k hole main jaga banany lagi ..
Aur akhir kaar meri ungli Nazi ki phudi k sorakh main insert Ho gayee Aur Maine poori ungli he Nazi ki phudi main daal di mere hont Nazi k niple ko choos rahe the lkn jb Nazi apne hath se mere sir ko dabati to main Aur daba kr choosne lag jata ..
2 minute aise krne k baad Nazi ne khare khare he shalwar neeche kr k hath main pakar Li Aur mje jaldi jaldi shalwar neechay krne ko kaha Maine foran shalwar neechay kr di Nazi ne mje kreeb kr k apni phudi ko mere lun se laganay ki koshish krne lagi choon k meri height Nazi se kam hone ki Waja se mera lun Nazi ki phudi tk nhn pohanch raha tha ..
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