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Re: Bacha Larka Aadmi
« Reply #48 on: March 22, 2013, 03:30:38 am »
Going very good

Nazi aur chachu ka suspense jaldi khatam kar do
Hello zaibi g..
Mje to yaqeen nahin aa raha k aap
Jaisi bari writer meri is story per coment kr rahi hain
Zaibi g AB to boht soch smj kr new update ko post krna Ho ga k
Kahin koi ghalti na Ho jaye..
Thanxxxxx for appreciation in first comment..
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Re: Bacha Larka Aadmi
« Reply #48 on: March 22, 2013, 03:30:38 am »

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Re: Bacha Larka Aadmi
« Reply #49 on: March 22, 2013, 03:45:34 am »
very nice. boht alaa story king bhai. kia manzar kashi kertay ho aap. pind ki gali gali kona kona ghuma dia ap ne. maza aa gaya yaar.
ziyada detail se comnt nai keru ga kiu tareefi kalmat nai hain mere pass. bas ap aaj jaldi se story ka update ker dain. shiddat se wait hai bhai. maza aa raha hai har update k sath story mazeed intersting hoti ja rahi hai.
waiting for update bhai ji.

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NR bhai boht boht thanxxxxx
Paa g aap to top Ho......
YUM per sub ko active rakhne ki aap he hope Ho...
Actually aap khud boht achay insaan Ho..
Maine aap k comments ki boht c post ko parha hai kya cool hain aap janab ...
Aap ki achai Aur khush ikhlaki se kayee logo ko is forum per sharminda hotay daikha
Jo k aap per pathar barsa rahe the Aur aap hain k UN per apne husne ikhlaaq ki pattiyan
Nichawar kiye ja rahe the...
Amazing...
M imprressed bro...
Take care

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Re: Bacha Larka Aadmi
« Reply #49 on: March 22, 2013, 03:45:34 am »

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Re: Bacha Larka Aadmi
« Reply #50 on: March 22, 2013, 03:56:54 am »
waah yaar classi and sexxi update

kya writing style hai bohot alaa yaar....

tareef ke liye words nahi hai yaar

bas issi se kaam chalao clap with standing...

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plz jaldi update kar dena bohot achha intrest bna hua hai story me..... :devil2:

waiting for next update  :punk: :punk: :punk: :punk:

story running rocking yaar...... :rockon:
Dear bro thanxxxxxxx...
Mje idea he nahin tha k meri story ka itna acha response aye ga
Nahin to main aap Jaise bhaion ko kbhi itna wait na krwata..
Aur pehle story mukamal likhta phir post krta..
Aap k is pyar ki Waja se main Jaise he free hota hun to Sirf update pe kaam
Krta rehta hun..lkn aap dosto ko zyada wait nahin krwata..
Again thanxxxxx
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Re: Bacha Larka Aadmi
« Reply #51 on: March 23, 2013, 02:33:42 am »
zberdast story SK

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Re: Bacha Larka Aadmi
« Reply #52 on: March 23, 2013, 03:01:01 am »
yar ziyadaaa likhaaa karo
main discharge late hota hoin
still waiting for your story plese do the needfull. JALDI karooo please mairah dick phaaat jayah ghaaa uffffffffffffffffffffffffffff

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Re: Bacha Larka Aadmi
« Reply #53 on: March 23, 2013, 03:09:46 am »
waah yaar classi and sexxi update

kya writing style hai bohot alaa yaar....

tareef ke liye words nahi hai yaar

bas issi se kaam chalao clap with standing...

 :clap: :clap: :clap: :clap: :clap: :clap: :clap: :clap: :clap: :clap: :clap: :clap: :clap:
 :clap: :clap: :clap: :clap: :clap: :clap: :clap: :clap: :clap: :clap: :clap: :clap: :clap:
 :clap: :clap: :clap: :clap: :clap: :clap: :clap: :clap: :clap: :clap: :clap: :clap: :clap:

plz jaldi update kar dena bohot achha intrest bna hua hai story me..... :devil2:

waiting for next update  :punk: :punk: :punk: :punk:

story running rocking yaar...... :rockon:
Dear bro thanxxxxxxx...
Mje idea he nahin tha k meri story ka itna acha response aye ga
Nahin to main aap Jaise bhaion ko kbhi itna wait na krwata..
Aur pehle story mukamal likhta phir post krta..
Aap k is pyar ki Waja se main Jaise he free hota hun to Sirf update pe kaam
Krta rehta hun..lkn aap dosto ko zyada wait nahin krwata..
Again thanxxxxx



yaar aapki story me dum hai tabhi to sab tareef kar rhe hai naa

or aapke writing style ke to kehne hi kya bohot alaa style hai

isko kabhi change mat karna aapne jo har scene ko itni achhi tarah se samjhaya hai essa lagta hai

sab kuch samne hi ho rha hai...bohot alaa yaar

next update ka besabri se intezaar rahega..... :punk:

keep it up.... :clap:

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Re: Bacha Larka Aadmi
« Reply #54 on: March 23, 2013, 03:17:16 am »
Going very good

Nazi aur chachu ka suspense jaldi khatam kar do
Hello zaibi g..
Mje to yaqeen nahin aa raha k aap
Jaisi bari writer meri is story per coment kr rahi hain
Zaibi g AB to boht soch smj kr new update ko post krna Ho ga k
Kahin koi ghalti na Ho jaye..
Thanxxxxx for appreciation in first comment..

Aray aisi bhi bat nahi
Jaisi hot story ap likh rahay hain wo is waqt ki hotttest story hai

Baqi stories ke sath ab apki story ki update ka shiddat se intzar rehta hai

Is liye ap jaldi si update den

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Re: Bacha Larka Aadmi
« Reply #55 on: March 23, 2013, 03:20:17 am »
WAITNIG FOR UR UPDATE ROZ CK KRTA HUN LEKAN KOI UPDATE NI
MALIKS1

 

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