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Re: INTAQAM-E-MUHABBAT (2nd Update)
« Reply #8 on: March 18, 2013, 10:06:50 pm »
very nice update  :clap: :clap: :clap: :clap: :clap: :clap: :clap:
shaam me prr rhi thi k lite off hogae so abhi cmnt krr rhi hun
very very nice
yum pr kaafi talented writers mojood hen keep it up
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Re: INTAQAM-E-MUHABBAT (2nd Update)
« Reply #8 on: March 18, 2013, 10:06:50 pm »

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Re: INTAQAM-E-MUHABBAT (2nd Update)
« Reply #9 on: March 18, 2013, 11:14:46 pm »
very nice update  :clap: :clap: :clap: :clap: :clap: :clap: :clap:
shaam me prr rhi thi k lite off hogae so abhi cmnt krr rhi hun
very very nice
yum pr kaafi talented writers mojood hen keep it up
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Thank u so much mahi.
Buht buht zeyada shukria k ap ne story read ki aur meri hosla afzai b ki.
Bs koshish kr raha hn k ek achi story ap logon ko dy sakon.
Buht thanx itni pasandeedgi ki umeed ni thi muje.
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Re: INTAQAM-E-MUHABBAT (2nd Update)
« Reply #9 on: March 18, 2013, 11:14:46 pm »

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Re: INTAQAM-E-MUHABBAT (2nd Update)
« Reply #10 on: March 30, 2013, 12:52:05 am »
Arsal dagmagata huwa deewar k sath ja laga
Aur dharraam se zameen pe gir gya.
Uske girnay ki awaz sun kar Amber ne t.v se nazrain hata kar uski taraf daikha to usy youn table k pas deewar k sath take lagaye tangain pasaray beth kar uske hosh urh gaye.
Wo bhag kar uske pas puhanchi. Arsal ro raha tha.
Arsal kak... Kya... Kya huwa ?
Wo haklatay huwe boli
Amber sb... Sb khatm ho gya... Wo rotay huwe bola.
Ary huwa kya hy? Fail ho gaye kya? Wo heejaan zada lehjay mein boli.
Amber amber wo... Mama papa....???
Arsal bat poori na kr saka aur b zor se ronay laga.
Amber tb tak uske pas beth chuki thi aur wo b rone lag gai
Huwa kya hy please btao btao kya huwa mama papa ko??????????
Btaooo
Wo chilla uthi
Wo nahi rahy...
Arsal ne deewar k sath sar takrate huwe kaha.
What...????
Kya.. Kya bol.. Rahe ho. Hosh mein ho? Ye... Nahi ho... Skta
Wo pagalon ki tra chillai.
Ho geya hy bomb blast huwa hy... Aur...
Arsal phoot phoot kr rone laga aur agay kuch na keh paya.
Amber kuch na bol pai
Bs ghash kha kar arsal ki jholi mein gir gai.
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Mr. And Mrs. Zamaan market gaye thay shoping kr rahe thay ek bakery se cake le kr bahir aaye thay k pas k hotel k samne khari car mein bomb blast ho gya wo kuch door to thay par bomb zeyada taqat war tha ird gird k 150 ft  redious tak jani aur mali nuqsan huwa tha wo 2nu 50 ft door rahe honge.
2nu moqa par hi dam tor gaye thay. Ye shukar tha k chehre damage ni huwe aur bomb blast k bad wahan lage hajoom mein unke muhallay ka admi mojod tha.
Usi ne 2nu ki shanakht ki aur phir arsal ko call b ki.
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Arsal aur amber ki dunia andhair ho gai thi.
Un 2nu ko koi hosh ni tha.
Bhala ho Ghafoor chacha ka jo zamaan sahib k dost thay unhon ne apni beti aur b.v k sath mil kar sb kuch sanbhala aur unke waledain ko sapurd-e-khak b kiya.
Warna wo 2nu is laiq ni rahe thay k kuch b kar patay.
Koi rishtadar b ni tha na koi aur apna. Par Ghafoor chacha ne 2nu ko sanbhala aur unhen hosh ki dunia mein le aaye.
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Arsal aur amber jese pathar k butt ban gaye thay unko kisi bat ka hosh ni tha. Yahan tak k unko tb b koi hosh ni tha jb mr. And mrs. Zamaan ko unki akhari aramgah ki taraf le jaya ja raha tha.
Wo to bs pathrai hui bejan ankhon se sb kuch daikh rahe thay. Pooray 3 din tak na kuch khaya na piya aur na kuch bolay.
Ghafoor chacha ne aur unki family ne bri mehnat ki din rat ek kar dia aur akhir kaar paanchvain din t.v pe usi bomb blast ki news daikhte huwe un 2nu ki khamoshi toot gai
Wo itni zor aur shidat se roye k ghafoor chacha , unki b.v aur beti k dil dehal gaye.
Wo 2nu ki bs ek hi takrar thi k kiyon? Aesa kiyon huwa? Ab to time aaya tha unki khushiyon ka.
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Kash ye bomb blast, firing, sucide attacks, aur dehshat gard ye samj pate k unke kartoot 2,4 afrad ki jan ni lete wo pooray pooray khandano ko barbad kr daite hain.
Kash ye watan dushman, awam dushman be zameer aur taqat k nashay mein choor log samj patay.
Hona kya tha? kuch b ni. 35 afrad ki jan gai thi , 80 k qareeb zakhmi thay par kya farq parta kisi ko. Siwaye unke jinke apne chalay gaye thay ya jinke apne aklotay saharay maut ki kashmakash mein doltay hospitals mein paray thay ya apahij ho kr apno ka gham aur barha gaye thay. Govt. Ne kaghazi karwai poori ki. Na maloom dehshat gardon ka karnama btaya geya aur bs qisa khatm.
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Arsal aur amber ek mah tak kafi sanbhal chuke thay . Ab ghafoor chacha ya unki b.v kbi kbi aa jatay thay. Wo 2nu m.b.a clear kr gaye thay jiski khushi khak mein mil chuki thi.
Wo 2nu ek chat k nechy rehte aur apne dukhon par marham rakhte rehte. Ghar k har konay se apne parents ki yadain aa kar unko rula jati thein. Par kehte hain k waqt buht bara marham hy 2 mah tak wo 2nu ek dam normal ho gaye thay aur apni aane wali zindagi ka soch rahe thay.
Zamaan sahib koi jageerdar ya buht ameer karobari insan to thay nahi. Ek firm k mamoli mulazim thay aur sufaid posh insan thay.
Unki jama poonji aur ghafoor chacha ki madad ne 2 mah tak sath dia tha par ab wo mushkil se kuch din aur guzara kar sakte thay aur uske bad....?
Unke pas ab aur koi chara ni tha siwaye iske k wo jobs dhondte.
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Wo 2nu job dhondne nikal paray. Halan k arsal amber ki job k haq mein ni tha par wo akeli ghar pe kya krti? Aur phr uska dil behlane k liye bahir aana jana acha tha ye sb soch kr arsal man gya tha.
Har jaga rishwat aur sifarish ka daira tha agar ghafoor chacha na hote to shayd unko itni jaldi job na milti.
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Unko ek sath ek achi firm mein job mil gai thi. 2nu ki khushi ka koi thikana ni tha.
Par unki ye khushi b halaat khatm krne pe tulay thay.
Jb insan ka waqt bura ho to uske ghar ka kuta b usy kat khata hy.
Yehi sb unke sath hone ja raha tha.
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Wo 2nu sunday k din apni pehli tankhawa se ki gai shoping ka samaan daikh daikh k khush ho rahe thay k darwazay pe dastak hui.
Arsal chonka
Ary is waqt kaun aa gya? Ghafoor chacha to thori dair pehle gaye hain.
Ary tm ja kar daikho to sahi yahin apne ap se hi sawal jawab bad mein karna.
Amber ne hamesha ki tra naseehat ki.
Wo darwazay ki tarf barha tb tak darwaza aur buri tra se peeta gya.
Ab ki bar amber b chonk uthi aur arsal k chehre pe fikar k saaye lehranay lage.....
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To Be Continued...
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Agay kya huwa?
Ye next update mein.
Ap sbke comments ka shidat se muntazir rahon ga.
Andhera hai Buhat....
Aao Dil Jalate Hain

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Re: INTAQAM-E-MUHABBAT (3rd Update)
« Reply #11 on: June 03, 2013, 12:06:14 pm »
buhat achi aur umda story hay, hear touching
BRAVO
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Re: INTAQAM-E-MUHABBAT (3rd Update)
« Reply #12 on: June 03, 2013, 12:52:47 pm »
buhat achi aur umda story hay, hear touching
BRAVO
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Thank u so much bro
And sorry to all readers main itne din guzarne k bad b update ni dy paya.
Try kr raha hn k zra time nikal lon aur apni sb stories ko regularly update kar sakon.
Andhera hai Buhat....
Aao Dil Jalate Hain

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Re: INTAQAM-E-MUHABBAT (3rd Update)
« Reply #13 on: October 20, 2013, 11:52:11 pm »
Good work dear
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Re: INTAQAM-E-MUHABBAT (3rd Update)
« Reply #14 on: October 21, 2013, 12:23:37 am »
Andhera hai Buhat....
Aao Dil Jalate Hain

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Re: INTAQAM-E-MUHABBAT (3rd Update)
« Reply #15 on: October 21, 2013, 12:35:16 am »
Oye teri hosla afzai k liye b 10 no ka chiter mangwana pare ga update kar iss ka foran :D
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