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Re: INTAQAM-E-MUHABBAT (3rd Update)
« Reply #36 on: November 11, 2013, 01:20:35 pm »
Soch lo bhai ...agar update nahi ki tho is sey aagey ki kahani mai write karna shuru kar dounga..aur pir khud hi soch lo ke kahani ka kia hashar hoga:oops:

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Re: INTAQAM-E-MUHABBAT (3rd Update)
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Re: INTAQAM-E-MUHABBAT (3rd Update)
« Reply #37 on: November 11, 2013, 03:07:26 pm »
Soch lo bhai ...agar update nahi ki tho is sey aagey ki kahani mai write karna shuru kar dounga..aur pir khud hi soch lo ke kahani ka kia hashar hoga:oops:
nahiii
Meri story pe alam-e-ghaib ki zuban na bolna
Tm bole to DG ne b shuro ho jana :hang:
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Re: INTAQAM-E-MUHABBAT (3rd Update)
« Reply #37 on: November 11, 2013, 03:07:26 pm »

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Re: INTAQAM-E-MUHABBAT (3rd Update)
« Reply #38 on: November 11, 2013, 03:08:03 pm »
Soch lo bhai ...agar update nahi ki tho is sey aagey ki kahani mai write karna shuru kar dounga..aur pir khud hi soch lo ke kahani ka kia hashar hoga:oops:
nahiii
Meri story pe alam-e-ghaib ki zuban na bolna
Tm bole to DG ne b shuro ho jana :hang:
main ny boycott ker dia hoa hy is topic ka wesy h :ban:

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Re: INTAQAM-E-MUHABBAT (3rd Update)
« Reply #39 on: November 11, 2013, 03:14:16 pm »
Soch lo bhai ...agar update nahi ki tho is sey aagey ki kahani mai write karna shuru kar dounga..aur pir khud hi soch lo ke kahani ka kia hashar hoga:oops:
nahiii
Meri story pe alam-e-ghaib ki zuban na bolna
Tm bole to DG ne b shuro ho jana :hang:
main ny boycott ker dia hoa hy is topic ka wesy h :ban:
o meri dushman naraz hy
Chal main update daine laga hon abi k abi.
Andhera hai Buhat....
Aao Dil Jalate Hain

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Re: INTAQAM-E-MUHABBAT (3rd Update)
« Reply #40 on: November 11, 2013, 03:20:43 pm »
Soch lo bhai ...agar update nahi ki tho is sey aagey ki kahani mai write karna shuru kar dounga..aur pir khud hi soch lo ke kahani ka kia hashar hoga:oops:
nahiii
Meri story pe alam-e-ghaib ki zuban na bolna
Tm bole to DG ne b shuro ho jana :hang:
main ny boycott ker dia hoa hy is topic ka wesy h :ban:
o meri dushman naraz hy
Chal main update daine laga hon abi k abi.
\itni aldi ki b ab zarurat nai. araam sy dena mager theek tarah sy likh ker dena update. chawal na maarna koi huh

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Re: INTAQAM-E-MUHABBAT (4th Update)
« Reply #41 on: November 11, 2013, 03:57:45 pm »
Salam...
I know
I know
Ap logon ko ghusa aa raha hoga k aa gai yad isko b story update karni ki.
Bs plz mauf kar dijiye ga
Ainda itna late ni honga.
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Arsal ne darwaza khola to samne muhallay k kafi log kharay thay.
Is se pehle k arsal un se kuch pochta ya samj pata.
Ek hata kata banda agay barha aur bola "sun oey kya tamasha lagaya hy tu ne?"
What? Maine kya kiya hy?
Arsal herangi se bola.
Tm ek na-mehram ladki k sath ek hi chhat k neechy reh rahe ho.
Ye theek ni hy.
Wo shakhs dahara.
Qasim ji ye hamara masla hy ap kaun hote ho aesi bat karne wale
Arsal cheekhte huwe bola. Wo usy pehchan gya tha siwaye awara gardi k qasim ka koi kam na tha aur ab wo ghairat ka jhanda pakar k khara tha jo khud dosaron ki izat ko takta rehta tha.
"beta ye ghalat hy muhallay mein log baten bna rahe hain, hum to tmhare bhalay k liye aaye hain tm us ladki se shadi krlo ya koi hal nikalo"
Ek sufaid darhi wale bazurg bole.
Wah wah wah mera bhala?
Tb ap kahan thy jb mere parents chin gaye, jb main bhooka marta raha tb to koi nai aaya k 2 bachy mushkil mein hain to koi sath dain inka. Aj apko bra kheyal aaya hy
Arsal ka lehja sakht tha.
Tb tak amber b gate tak aa gai thi.
Log apni apni baten bole ja rahe thay k ek aur lafanga bola "wo aa gai rakhel iski"
Arsal ne jese hi ye suna wo us pe jhapat para, jb tak logon ne unhen churaya tb tak wo uske naak ki haddi tor chuka tha.
Ek aur admi ne us ladke ko wahan se dhakay dy kr bhaga dia.
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Ap sb yahin ruko agr apne iman k pakay ho to.
Ye kehte huwe arsal palta aur sehmi hui amber ko sath khench kr andar le gya.
Logon ka tola gate pe khara sargoshian karne lag gya.
Arsal ne andar jate hi ghafoor chacha ko call ki wo itfaq se ghar pe thay usne sb kuch unhen btaya aur kaha k foran ek nikah khawaan layen aur hamara nikah karwa dain.
Chacha ne usy hosla dia k koi garam khon wali harkat na karna main aata hon.
20 minuts mein chacha unke ghar pe thay.
Unhon ne muhallay daron ko samjhaya km unki beizti zeyada ki k tmhare apne gharon mein b bete betiyan hain kisi pe ilzam tarashi karne aur shak karne se pehle unka chehra daikh liya kro.
Chacha ne sara intazam kiya aur agly din un donu ka nikah ho gya.
Arsal to chup chap shadi karna chahata tha par ghafoor chacha na mane aur unhon ne theek thak intazam kar dala.
Amber ko wo apne ghar le kr gaye jahan arsal ek choti si barat le kr geya aur amber ko beyah kr apne ghar le aaya.
Jahan wo 2nu ek dojay k ho kr buht khush thay wahin unhen apne parents k na hone ka dukh b tha.
Shayd dunia ki pehli rukhsati thi jis mein dulha b ro raha tha.
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Hujla-e-aroosi mein puhanch kr arsal hawanak bana khara raha k kya kron???
Phr ehmaqana harkat ki aur bahir aa geya. Amber heran reh gai k isy kya huwa hy.
Arsal k ghar pe ghafoor chacha and family b mojod thay unke bolne ki awazen sun kar wo andar amber k pas chala gya.
Wo kafi upset tha usy samj ni aa raha tha k kare to kare kya?
Jb wo budhoo buht dair tak yahan wahan tehalta raha to amber se na raha geya aur wo bol pari
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"agr sari rat yehi karna hy to bta do, main lait jaon, kamar toot gai aese bethe bethe"
Arsal kuch na bola par himmat kr k bed pe ja betha.
Usne kuch pal apne hawas ko jama kiya aur phr amber ka ghoonghat utha dia.
Wo ek lehzay mein apna ap bhool geya, amber haseen to shuro se thi par dulhan ban kar wo ek sarapa-e-qayamat lag rahi thi jo uske dil pe bijliyan gira raha tha.
Arsal ki zuban ko jese tala lag geya tha wo kuch bol na paya. Usne bs dheere se apni pocket mein hath dala aur ek anghoti nikal kr dheere se amber ki ungli mein pehna di.
Amber ne sharmate huwe palken uthayien aur agly hi lamhy arsal ko apna ap ek neelay bhanwar mein doobta mehsoos huwa.
Wo bechain sa ho geya. Is sada se kamre mein jis mein bs ek bed aur almari thi amber ki mojodgi usy jannat ka nazara krwa rahi thi.
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Usne akhir hosla kr k amber ka hath pakra aur bolta chala gya.
"mujhe aj pta ni kya ho gya tha k tmhare pas aane se jhijak raha tha, shayd ye sb socha ni tha, ya pta ni tmhare samne meri sitti gum jati hy, par jo b hy
I am happy , and i love u.
Amber k hont chup rahe par uski ankhen bol rahi thi.
Phr barg-e-gulab mein jumbash hui aur arsal k kano ko unki umeed ka ras mil geya
I love u too, amber ne ye keh kr ankhen jhuka lien.
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Arsal se ab sabar ni ho raha tha usne jhat amber ko apni bahon mein bhar liya.
Wo cheekhti reh gai k mujhe change to karne do par jesa behra ho gya tha.
Phr wo raat sehar hone tak intaha-e-ishq k sahar mein rahi.
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Waqt guzarta gya. Wo dono ab ek dam normal ho gaye thay aur apni nayi zindagi mein buht khush thay.
Wo acha kama rahe thay aur khoob enjoy kar rahay thay.
Unka har din eid tha aur har rat suhag rat jesi thi.
Par wo kehte hain na k waqt ka pta ni chalta kb kya se kya ho jaye?
Ye unko b pta na tha.
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2 mah guzar gaye unki shadi huwe wo behtareen firm mein kam kar rahe thay sath mein acha time guzarta tha.
Par ek masla tha wo ye k unka boss senti tha marriad mulazimo se wo hamesha na-rawa salook karta tha. Pta ni kiyu???
To arsal and amber ne apni shadi ka btaya hi nai kisi ko. Wo wahan bas cousins samjhe jate thay.
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Amber ko kuch dino se apne boss majeed sheikh ka rawiya badla sa lag raha tha ajeeb sa bartao tha uska wo na to isay bura samj skti thi aur na acha.
Majeed sheikh 45 sala marriad banda tha , shehar ka ameer aur behtareen business man mana jata tha.
Amber chah kar b us pe shak na kar payi. Usne arsal ko b kuch na btaya. Aur arsal par bhi majeed sahab kafi meharban thay par arsal ko shak nai huwa usay lagta tha k wo kafi mehanti hai to is waja se boss uski qadar karta hai.
Par ....
Ek aur imtehan unka muntizar tha haftay ka din tha wo dono boht khush thay ek to weekend tha dosara Arsal ki birthday thi wo aj ki raat ko dil se manana chahate thay unhon ne iski khoob tayari ki thi.
Magar boss ko dora para aur usne extra work unke galay dal dia aur arsal ko ek payment daine k liye bhej dia halan k ye uska kam ni tha.
Par jiska kam tha wo aaya nai tha arsal to khushi se payment daine geya k boss ko us pe itna aitbar ho gya hy.
Magar wo nai janta tha k agay kya hone wala hy???
Agr wo janta to kbi na jata
Par wo nikal chuka tha....
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Majeed intaha darjay ka kamina tha uski niyat kharab thi amber pe, moun se beti kehne wala wo insan dil mein shaitan paal kar betha tha usne ek mansobay k tehat sbko bhej dia aur apne ek khas chamchay ,amber aur arsal ko rok liya phr be waqt arsal ko payment k liye bheja aur amber ko apne room mein bulwaya.
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Amber andar gai to majeed buht alag dikh raha tha amber ko thora sa ajeeb laga par wo aram se beth gai.
Majeed ne usy ek project ki details btani shuro ki phr wo utha aur tehalne lag gya.
Amber documents khol k bethi thi majeed sahib uske peechy aaye aur uske kandhon pe hath rakh diye.
Amber ek jhatkay se khari ho gai.
Aur herangi se majeed ko daikhne lagi jiski ankhon mein nachati darandigi usy saf dikh rahi thi.
Is se pehle k wo kuch bolti ya karti
Majeed bola
"tmhara cousin ab tak mere admiyon k qabzay mein hoga, agr tm ne wesa nai kiya jesa main kahon to usy ya to maar dia jaye ga ya phir hath pair tor kar phenk dia jaye ga aur ye bhi ho skta hy k wo usy kuch na kahen par paisy le jayen ge aur main ghaban k ilzam mein usy 7,8 sal k liye jail bhijwa doonga"
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Amber ko apne kano pe yaqeen nai aa raha tha.
Us shaitan ko kuch b kehna bekar tha. Wo darwazay ki taraf bhagi. Magar ye kya darwaza lock tha.
Majeed hansane laga
Phr bola
"shokat bahir pehra dy raha hy ye kamra sound proof hai, aur ab yehi samjho k hum yahan nai hain"
Amber ki jan nikal gai
Par wo kamzor ni thi k ro parti ya minaten karti usne ek guldan utha liya aur majeed ko gusay ki nazron se daikhne lagi.
Usy is waqt khud se zeyada arsal ka kheyal aa raha tha jisko us zaleel insan ne jhooti payment k bahane pta nai kahan bhej dia tha.
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Arsal nikal to para magar usy address samjhne mein masla ho raha tha.
Usne ja kar ek PCO se boss k office ka number milaya.koi utha nai raha tha. Usne phir milaya phr koi jawab nai.
Usne phr se milaya
To kisi ne uthaya magar bola koi b nai wo rakhne laga tha k usy amber ki cheekh sunai di
"kutay peechy hat ja warna maar dalon gi tmhen , meri izat itni sasti ni hy"
Ek lamhay k hazarven hisay mein arsal sb samj chuka tha. Ek lamha zaya kiye bina wo car mein betha aur rukh apne office ki taraf ghuma dia.
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TO BE CONTINUED.....
Andhera hai Buhat....
Aao Dil Jalate Hain

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Re: INTAQAM-E-MUHABBAT (4th Update)
« Reply #42 on: November 11, 2013, 04:12:52 pm »
chalo aa gai post. ab mein araam sy kal persoon parchoth read kar loon gi.. thanx for uploading :innocent:

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Re: INTAQAM-E-MUHABBAT (4th Update)
« Reply #43 on: November 11, 2013, 04:31:50 pm »
Dair aayed dursat aayed
raat ko paroon ga abi to
boss di aaho :)
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Re: INTAQAM-E-MUHABBAT (4th Update)
« Reply #44 on: November 11, 2013, 04:57:09 pm »
chalo aa gai post. ab mein araam sy kal persoon parchoth read kar loon gi.. thanx for uploading :innocent:
u r welcome
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Re: INTAQAM-E-MUHABBAT (4th Update)
« Reply #45 on: November 11, 2013, 04:57:44 pm »
Dair aayed dursat aayed
raat ko paroon ga abi to
boss di aaho :)
sure pa ji
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Re: INTAQAM-E-MUHABBAT (4th Update)
« Reply #46 on: November 12, 2013, 10:02:43 am »
achi update hy.. goooooooood going.

per yaar pata lag ra hy ky aap ny jaldi mein likhi hy or doosari bar parhi b nai hy warna aap boht se lines ko change karty i am sure.

but first attempt mein b likhi hoi main aap ny kafi acha control mein rakha.. gooooood work....

:clap::clap::clap::clap::clap::clap:

ab agli update ka kab tak wait karn aparhy ga? :dots::dots::dots:

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Re: INTAQAM-E-MUHABBAT (4th Update)
« Reply #47 on: November 12, 2013, 11:38:19 am »
achi update hy.. goooooooood going.

per yaar pata lag ra hy ky aap ny jaldi mein likhi hy or doosari bar parhi b nai hy warna aap boht se lines ko change karty i am sure.

but first attempt mein b likhi hoi main aap ny kafi acha control mein rakha.. gooooood work....

:clap::clap::clap::clap::clap::clap:

ab agli update ka kab tak wait karn aparhy ga? :dots::dots::dots:
han last part jaldi mein likha tha.
Thanx dear for appriciation
Han next update k liye kuch wait to karna paray ga
Andhera hai Buhat....
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