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Re: INTAQAM-E-MUHABBAT (4th Update)
« Reply #48 on: November 12, 2013, 01:40:40 pm »
 :clap: :clap: :clap: :clap: :clap: :clap: Zabardast update wajahath bhai :rockon: :rockon:..aur yaad rakhna bhai agar next update ziada late howi tho.....mai ney likhna shuru kar deni hai story.hahahaha :yes:

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Re: INTAQAM-E-MUHABBAT (4th Update)
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Re: INTAQAM-E-MUHABBAT (4th Update)
« Reply #49 on: November 12, 2013, 01:55:02 pm »
:clap: :clap: :clap: :clap: :clap: :clap: Zabardast update wajahath bhai :rockon: :rockon:..aur yaad rakhna bhai agar next update ziada late howi tho.....mai ney likhna shuru kar deni hai story.hahahaha :yes:
thank u so much bro
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Nai hota late muje pta hy :punk:
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Re: INTAQAM-E-MUHABBAT (4th Update)
« Reply #49 on: November 12, 2013, 01:55:02 pm »

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Re: INTAQAM-E-MUHABBAT (4th Update)
« Reply #50 on: November 15, 2013, 02:54:14 pm »
good update ustad G  :rockon: :rockon: :rockon:

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Re: INTAQAM-E-MUHABBAT (4th Update)
« Reply #51 on: November 15, 2013, 03:36:33 pm »
good update ustad G  :rockon: :rockon: :rockon:

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Re: INTAQAM-E-MUHABBAT (4th Update)
« Reply #52 on: November 15, 2013, 03:48:38 pm »
nice

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Re: INTAQAM-E-MUHABBAT (4th Update)
« Reply #53 on: November 15, 2013, 04:33:35 pm »
Andhera hai Buhat....
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Re: INTAQAM-E-MUHABBAT (4th Update)
« Reply #54 on: November 15, 2013, 05:06:50 pm »
Wajahat bhai is story mai tho aisa kuch bhi nahi jis ki wajha sey aap ney muharram mai break laga di hay..update yaar :yes:

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Re: INTAQAM-E-MUHABBAT (4th Update)
« Reply #55 on: November 15, 2013, 09:32:39 pm »
Wajahat bhai is story mai tho aisa kuch bhi nahi jis ki wajha sey aap ney muharram mai break laga di hay..update yaar :yes:
kehte to theek ho yar
Hmm
Chalo karta hon update
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Re: INTAQAM-E-MUHABBAT (4th Update)
« Reply #56 on: December 06, 2013, 04:06:24 am »
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Re: INTAQAM-E-MUHABBAT (5th Update on Feb 26 2014)
« Reply #57 on: February 26, 2014, 06:10:53 am »
Majeed Sheikh agay barha aur amber pe jhapta magar wo side pe ho gai. Wo palat kar agay huwa aur amber ko phr dhamki di.
"maan ja ladki warna tera hashar b bura hoga aur arsalan ka b"
Magar amber pe uski dhamki ka asar na huwa
"tu jo kar sakta hai kar beghairat insan, tere jese to apni beti ko b na chorain"
Majeed ye sun kar aag bagola ho gya aur usne amber pe chalang laga di.
Par amber taiz nikli usne guldan agay kar dia.
Majeed ka sar zor se guldan mein laga wo gir gya tha. Uska sar phat chuka tha.
Wo jaldi se utha, amber peechy iss chakar mein uska pair ek kursi mein ulajh geya wo jb tak us se azad hui majeed tb tak uske sar pe puhanch chuka tha.
Usne ek zor daar thapar amber k moun pe mara wo palat kar peechy giri uska sar zor se table pe laga wo chakra kar reh gai.
Is se pehle k wo sanbhalti, majeed ne usko gardan se pakar kar 2,3 dafa table pe mara,
Amber neem behosh si ho kr farsh pe gir gai.
Majeed khoon se bhara apna matha saf karte huwe, shetani muskurahat k sath agay barha.
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Arsal andhi ki trah car urata huwa office wapis puhancha.
Ghusay se uski ankhon se lahu tapak raha tha.
Lift tak puhanchne mein usay chand lamhy lage aur 2 minuts bad wo apne office floor pe tha.
Poora floor khali tha wo bhagta huwa majeed k room tak puhancha jahan pe shokat kisi santari ki tarah khara tha.
"amber kahan hy? Tum yahan kya kar rahe ho?"
Arsal ne jatay hi sawal dagha.
Arsal ko daikh kar shokat k chehre pe hawaiyan urh rahi thein.
Mujhe kya pta kahan hy?
Shokat ne dhatai se jawab dia.
Arsal ne usko peechay dhakel kar darwaza kholna chaha par wo locked tha.
"keys kahan hain?"
Arsal ne ghusay se poocha.
Shokat chup raha aur peechy hatne laga.
Arsal ko sb samj aa raha tha wo us pe jhapat para.
Shokat ek hath ki maar sabit huwa wo adh muwa farsh pe para tha aur arsal uski jaib se keys nikal chuka tha.
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Majeed sheikh apni fatah pe khush tha ek bebas ladki ko neem behosh kar k,
Ab wo apna shetani mansooba poora karna chahata tha.
Usne apna coat utara , tie se amber k hath bandh diye
Aur phr pani pi kar amber pe jhukne laga tha
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Office ka darwaza ek jhatky se khula
Samne arsal khara tha.
Jiski ankhon se lahu tapak raha tha, majeed sheikh ka chehra bujh geya, uske hathon k totay urh gaye.
Arsal ne aao daikha na taao usne agay barh kar zor dar laat mari jo majeed k jabrray pe lagi wo dakrata huwa peechy ko ulat geya
Arsal ne usko galay se pakar kar uthaya aur poori taqat se muka uske pait pe dy mara aur phr wo us pe toot para
Kai latain, mukay marne k bad arsal ne usy utha kar sheeshy k table pe dy mara
Majeed table pe gira sheesha toot geya aur ek tukra uske pehloo mein utar geya
Wo dard se chilaya magar usi waqt arsal ne zor dar muka uski gardan pe mar dia
Wo neem behosh ho geya
Is se pehle k arsal aur kuch karta usy amber k karahne ki awaz aai usne amber ki taraf daikha uske sar se thora khoon nikla huwa tha
Arsal ko phr ghusa aaya usne poori jan se majeed ki tangon k beech laat raseed kardi
Us shetan k moun se ek falak shigaf cheekh nikli aur phr wo khamosh ho geya
Shayd mar geya tha
Par arsal ko parwah kb thi.
Usy to bs fikar thi to apni amber ki, apni izat ki, apni muhabbat ki.
Amber hosh mein thi aur phati phati ankhon se sb daikh rahi thi.
Arsal ne agay barh kr usy uthaya aur uske hath kholay.
Amber uske galay lag gai aur phoot phoot kar rone lagi.
Arsal ne usay tassali di aur pani pilaya.
Arsal kya ye mar geya hy?
Amber ne sawal kiya.
Acha hoga agar mar geya hy to dharti ka seena khush ho geya boojh kam hone pe
Arsal ne safak lehjay mein jawab dia.
Ab kya hoga?
Police aaye gi?
Amber ka lehja sehma huwa tha.
Kuch ni hota. Aane do jo b aata hy hum ne kuch ghalat ni kiya.
Chalo chalen yahan se.
Par arsal daikho to ye zinda hy ya ni?
Amber ki bat pe usne agay barh kar majeed ki nabz check ki.
Zinda hy haramzada
Dil to karta hy khatam kar doon yahin pe.
Arsal leave him plz
Lets go
Ok theek hy chalo apna huliya darust karo hum chalte hain
Wo donu apne kapre set kar k, hath moun saf kar k office se nikal aaye.
Unhon ne elevator ki taraf qadam barha diye aur ye na daikha k shokat ghaib tha.
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Wo ground floor pe puhanch kr bahir nikle hi thay k police van aa kar ruki aur us mein se 4,5 police wale utray jinke sath shokat b tha
Wo dono thoray hat kar thay magar shokat ne daikh liya
Wo rahe dono
Wohi hain jo boss ka 50 lakh kha gaye hain aur opar boss ka qatal kar aaye hain.
Shokat ne kamal darjay ki fankari k sath uchalte huwe chila kar jhoot bola.
Arsal aur amber k ye sun kar hosh urh gaye.
Police wale unki taraf bhagay
Arsal ko aane wali qayamat dikhne lagi usne amber ka hath pakra aur sarpat bhagne laga
Bhagte bhagte wo kafi door aa gaye par police wale peechy hi thay akhir thak kar police walon ne hawai fire kiya
Wo dono dar gaye magar phr b arsal amber ko le kar ek jaga chup geya.
Wo ek park k pas thay jahan pe ek purana ghar tha jiske pas masjid thi aur wahan pe bargad ka purana darakhat tha ek dam masjid k sath, wo kafi bara tha aur masjid ki deewar ki taraf se khokhla tha uska tana wo wahan pe kharay ho kar chup gaye.
Magar wo zeyada dair wahan ni ruk sakte thay
Amber sehmi hui si arsal k seene se lagi hui thi.
Ae my life
Tmhen yahan se jana hoga.
Arsal ne sargoshi ki.
Kiyu? Never
Amber ne sawal mein jawab dy dia.
Pagal ladki
Hum pe 50 lakh ki chori ka ilzam hy aur majeed adh muwa para tha janti ho pakray gaye to jail jayen ge aur main tmhen zaleel hote ni daikh sakta.
Janti hoon par main tmhen chor kr to ni jane wali.
Amber ne sapat lehjay mein kaha.
Arsal ne uska chehra apne hathon mein liya
Meri jan tmhen jana hoga main police ko dosari taraf le jata hon tm wo samne wali galli mein jao wo tang b hy aur andhere mein hy tm main road pe puhancho gi agay se left ko jana pehli gali mein ok aur phr left aur chalti jana tum hamare area mein puhanch jao gi.
Arsal aur bolne laga
Magar amber ne phir inkar kar dia
Plz amber tmhen meri qasam. Jao aur seedhi ghafoor chacha k pas jana plz go.
Arsal ne iltija ki
Amber ne bebasi se uski taraf daikha. Arsal ne apne hont uske honton pe rakh diye.
Itne mein police walon ki awazen sunai di to wo alag ho gaye arsal ne usy ishara kiya wo dubdubai ankhon se usy daikhti hui palti aur bhagti chali gai.
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Arsal ne uski ulat simat mein dorr laga di.
Wo ja rahe hain pakro
Ek police wala chilaya
Andhere mein wo ye na daikh paya k arsal akela hy.
Wo andha dhundh bhagta raha phir ek fire huwa goli uski taang mein lagi aur wo uchal kar foot path se takraya uski ankhon k agay andhera chaa geya.
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Ankh khuli to wo hospital mein tha. Uski taang aur sar pe patti bandhi thi. Usay sb yad aa raha tha aur wo aane wale waqat k liye tayar tha.
Parinday chehchaha rahe thay bahir, matlab wo poori rat behosh raha tha.
Wo sooni ankhon se opar daikh raha tha.
Kafi waqt guzar geya phr ek nurse aai usy hosh mein daikh kar agay aai uska hal chal poocha phr wapis palat gai.
Thori dair bad ek inspector andar aaya.
Mr arsalan hosh mein aa hi gaye tm. Jail jane k liye
Arsal chup raha.
U know arsal
Tm ne apna ap barbad kar liya. Buht bura kiya tm ne.
Inspector zara sakht lehjay mein bola.
Is dafa arsal ne usy ankh bhar kr daikha wo usi ki age ka tha.
Main begunah hoon maine kuch ghalat ni kiya.
Tm begunah ho? Tm pe 50 lakh k ghaban ka ilzam hy, tm ne apne boss ko maar maar kar adh muwa kar dia. Uska ek hath, 2 pasliyan toot chuki hain , pehlo mein sheeshay ka tukra utar dia ,aur to aur tum ne to shayd usy namard b bana dia hy.
Inspector gusay se bola.
Acha huwa namard ban geya hy to wo behan ka taka meri izat...
Aur phr arsal sb bolta chala geya.
I am sorry arsalan par tm kuch sabit ni kar sakte
Tmhara wahid sahara baqol tmhare, tmhari wife thi
But she is not any more.
Inspector ne thanday lehjay mein jawab dia.
What? Kya kaha? Where is amber? Tm logon ne kya kiya uske sath?
Arsal ghuraya
Hum ne kuch ni kiya. Tm ne usay bhag dia tha na. Wo bhagte huwe truck k neechy aa gai aur moka par hi dam tor gai
I am so sorry
Arsal ko apna ap bikharta huwa mehsos huwa
Usne halak phaar kar chilana shuro kar dia
Aur kuch seconds bad wo phr behosh ho chuka tha.
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Inpector ne jo btaya wo theek tha amber na to chacha ghafoor k han puhanchi aur na hi apne ghar.
Uski kuchli hui si lash mili jiski shanakhat uske kapron se hui.
Arsal neem pagal ho chuka tha. Chacha ghafoor ko b ye sadma le betha unhen heart attack huwa wo b hospital puhanch gaye.
Arsal ko bs itna hosh tha k amber ko dafan kiya ja raha hy.
Uske andar jese jeene ki umang khatam ho gai thi
Wo kisi robot ki tarah zinda tha.
Uska case adalat mein puhancha ghafoor chacha ne sar torr koshish ki magar arsal k moun se ek word na nikla.
Bina uske bolay koi b wakeel kuch ni kar sakta tha.
Inspector talha arsal se mutasir tha usy b arsal sacha laga magar bina saboot k uske hath b bandhay huwe thay.
Aur jo saboot thay wo sb arsal k khilaf thay aur khud wo kuch bolne ko tayar ni tha.
Hona kya tha ek sal case chalta raha arsal ki halat to behtar ho gai wo bolne b laga magar case k hawalay se ek lafz b bolne pe razi na huwa usne ghafoor chacha aur talha waghera ko ek hi jawab dia
"main apni pakeeza muhabbat ko is gandgi mein ni ghaseet sakta, wo chali gai hy bs sb khatam"
aur phr arsal ko iqdam e qatal aur ghaban k ilzam mein 6 sal ki saza ho gai.
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Wo to bhala ho talha ka aur uske jigri yar yasir ka jo buht pehle america chala geya tha
Un dono ne arsal ka case phr se khulwa dia.
Yasir 7 sal bad jb wapis pakistan aaya to arsal se milne puhancha magar wahan usy dardnak kahani mili wo tarap kar reh geya.
Wo jail mein arsal se milne aaya aur arsal ko manane laga k main tmhen nikalon ga muje sach btao.
Magar arsal ne is baray mein bat karne se inkar kar dia.
Yasir ko talha ne sb bta dia tha magar wo arsal se sun'na chahata tha aur wo kuch btane pe razi nai tha.
Magar yasir b apni dhun ka paka tha. Wo har haftay aata aur arsal ko manata.
Akhir arsal ki khamoshi tooti aur usne sb kuch usy bta dia.
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Yasir ka khoon khol geya. Wo ab itna ameer tha k majeed jese ko kharay kharay khareed le. Wese b yasir ek tez ladka tha.
Wo badmashi b karta raha tha aur college k dino mein wo apne college ka don tha.
Usne majeed aur uske chamchay shokat dono ko uthwa liya.
Wo 2 pal b uski maar na seh paye. Aur sb kuch qabool kar liya.
Usne wo sb record kr liya aur phr inspector talha ki help se case reopen karwaya.
Is dafa majeed sheikh ki ek na chali yasir k paisy aur taqat ne usy dhool chata di.
Arsal ko ba izat bari kar dia aur majee, shokat ko jail jana para jal sazi , iqdam e asmat dari k cases mein.
Arsal riha ho geya magar amber ki yadon ki qaid se na nikal paya 3 sal guzar chuke thay magar wo wahin khara tha.
Yasir ne usy apne sath le jana chaha magar wo na mana,
Ghafoor chacha ne job le kr di magar wo na kar paya.
Ab wo bs badmashi karta tha aur ameer logon k maal pe hath saf karta tha.
Magar
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Ye kya???
3 sal 4 maah bad wo neeli ankhen uske samne thein
Ye awaz?
Jisy usne dafan hote daikha tha.
Ye chehra to kho geya tha.
Arsal pagalon ki tarah chila raha tha apne bal noch raha tha
Aur wo neeli ankhen pas aati ja rahi thein.....
Andhera hai Buhat....
Aao Dil Jalate Hain

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Re: INTAQAM-E-MUHABBAT (5th Update on Feb 26 2014)
« Reply #58 on: May 14, 2014, 12:11:48 am »
yar jal uppdate karo :yes:

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Re: INTAQAM-E-MUHABBAT (5th Update on Feb 26 2014)
« Reply #59 on: May 14, 2014, 09:59:06 am »
yar jal uppdate karo :yes:
bs bhai apne pangon mein aesa uljha hon na k time hi nai mil pata mind free nai hota.
Ab kher poori try kronga likhne ki
Andhera hai Buhat....
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