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ZEESHAN-THE WARRIRO
« on: February 14, 2014, 11:55:09 am »
APNI PEHLI KAHANI LEKAR AAP KE SAAMNE PESH HUA HUN..

AAP LOGO SE GUZARISH HAI KE MUJHSE HONE WALI GALTIYO KO MAAF KIJIYEGA
OR APNE NAZARIYE SE MUJHE ZAROOR WAAKIF KIJIYEGA KE STORY KE BAARE ME AAP LOGO KA
KYA KHAYAL HAI,,:)

TO LIJIYE PESH-E-KHIDMAT HAI..


ZEESHAN - THE WARRIOR
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UPDATE NO:01
Wo bohat andheri raat thi shayad
amavsya ki hi ho hogi jo chand bhi
dikhyi nahi de raha tha raha tha
wo akeli sunsaan byaban
rasto or galiyo me duadi jaa rahi
thi jism par maujood kapde kahi
jaghao se phat chuke the or un
hisso se khoon ris raha tha
kafi dari or sehmi hiu se thi wo or
aise bhag rhai thi jaise koi uska
peecha kar raha ho..
achanak peeche se ek bohat
zordaar awaaz aati hai....
..ruk sali bach kar kaha jayegi..
hum thujhe itni asaani se chodne
wale nahi hai...
or thodi hi der me un logo ne use
akad liya or uske ball pakad kar ek
jhatka diya or wo seedhe zameen
par aa agiri..
wo chaar log the shakal se hi
gunde badmaash or ek numbar ke
ayyiyash lag rahe the..unme se ek
jo unka leadar lag rha
tha usne kaha..
..tune kya socha tha ke TERi itni
tagdi rakam chukane ke baad mai
aise hi tujhe jane dunga are
bewakoof ladki mai to ek
ek damdi ka badla teri chamdi se
wasoolunga..hahaha.or wo leader
or uske sathi bohat hi bhadde
andaz me hasne lage...
unmese ek aage bada or us
masoom ladki par bhuke kutto ki
tarha jhapta ada or uske bache
kuche kapde bhi phadne laga...
ladki bechari rone lagi minnate
karne lagi ke.....MUJHE CHOD
DIJIYE MAINE AAP LOGO KA KYA
BIGADA HAI ALLAH KE WASTE
MUJHE
JANE DIJIYE ... par un zalimo par
uski fariyad ka koi asar nahi hua
ek ek karkre wo sabhi us bechari
par toot pade
or uske jism ke alag alag hiiso ko
badi berahmi se ragadne lage...jab
wo ladki thodi si adhmari halat me
aa gayi to sabke sab
khade hue or apne apne kadpde
utarne lage... ladki ne apne dono
haath peeche ki janib kiye or jaise
hi un logo ne dobara
uspar tootne ki koshish ki usne
dono hatho se dher sari mitti un
gundo ki aankho me jhonk di sare
badmaash apni aankhe malne
lage or use betahasha galiyaan
dene lage or wo ladki ekbaar phir
waha se bhag nikli abhi thodi hi
door ohanchi hogi ke achanak
use phir unhi gundo ki awaaz
sunai di....
BOHAT KHEL HO CHUKA AB TU
BACH NAHI SAKTI HUMSE... HUM
SAB MIL KAR TERI BOTI BOTI
NOCH DALENGE...
ladki ne jab ye awzaaz suni to dar
ke mare uski bhi halat kharab
hogayi par phir bhi wo daudti rahi
in kamino se peecha jo
chudana tha use..
ab uske paao bhi dagmagane lage
bechari thi bhi to nazuk si or ek
aurat zaat kaha tak in bamaasho
ko takkar de pati
usne dil hi dil me allah se dua ki
KE... AYE MERE MALIK MERI
HIFAZAT KAR MERE ALLAH MUJH
KAMZOR ME ITNI TAKAT NAHI HAI
KE
IN ZALIMO SE LAD SAKU TU HI
MERI MADAD KAR MERE MALIK....
or wo hir bhagne lagi bechari karti
bhi kya agar rukti to pakdi jati
bahgte bhagte wo ek galiyo wali
chowk ar pohancti hai jaha char
choti choti galiya use dikhayi deti
hai wo abhi ye sochti hi hai
ke kis taraf jaao ke achanak ek
haath uske peeche se uske taraf
aata hai or uska mooh daba ka
use ek choti si gali ki
taraf khincne lagta hai... ladki
ekdum ghabra jati hai or sochne
lagti hai ke shayad aaj uska khuda
bhi uska sath nahi
dena chata...or wo ab nahi
bachegi..hir bhi wo himmat karke
or
zara zor laga kar apne hont uski
mazboot giraft se azaad karati hai
or chikne lagti hai..
CHOD KAMINE KAHI KE... CHOD
DE MUJHE MAI TERE SATH NAHI
JANA CHATI..CHOD MUJHE
MARDOOD KAHI KE ..TUJH PAR
LANAT BARSE CHOD
DE MUJHE KUTTE ... or isi ke sath
ladki aPne dant us aadmi ke
bazuoo me gada deti hai ...
OOOOOHC.... KYA KARTI HO.....?
ek meethi sii awaz uske kano me
padti hai ..
MAI TO TUMHE BACHANE AAYA
HUN ... MUJHE KYU MAR RAHI
HO ..? DEKHO TUMNE ITNI ZOR SE
KATA KE KHOON NIKAL AYA..
ladki use hairat bhari nigaho se
dekhne lagi
AB CHUP CHAP MERE PEECHE
PEECHE CHALI AAO WARNA AAJ
YE LOG KAFI BADA JASHN
MANANE KE MOOD ME DIKH RHAE
HAI..
ladki ne kaha .NAHI MAI TUMHE
NAHI JANTI KE TUM KYA HO OR
KAUN HO MAI AISE KAISE
TUMHARE SATH AAOO MAI NAHI
AANE WALI ..
in dono ki bate abhi chal hi rahi
thi ke wahi gunde Phir se us
chaurahe Par nazar aaye ladki ke
sath wale aadmi ne use foran
aPni taraf khincha or use apne
sath chalne ko kaha par phir bhi
wo nahi mani to usne phir se us
ka mooh dabaya or uske pair
pakad kar use apni god me utha
liya waha se niklne wali ek patli se
gali me use lekar daudne
laga...ladki thoda virodh karne
lagi par phir bhi us ajnabi ki
pakad uspar se dhili nahi
hui ...thodi der baad ladki ne bhi
virodh karna chod diya
ladki ko na jane kyu us ajnabi par
bharosa sa hone laga ke ye mere
sath khuch galat nahi kar sakta or
uski bohat badi wajha
us ajnabi ke chere par chayi hui
masoomiyat bhi thi bada hi bhola
or masoom sa chera tha us ajnabi
ka...lekin wo ab bhi bohat
dari hui thi..15 ya 20 mint daudne
ke baad wo ek pakki sadak par
nikal aaye yaha se dusere taraf ek
bohat badi colony nazar aa rahi
thi bohat bade bade banglow or
apartments the waha par ...un
apartmentsor banlow ke rasto se
hote hue wo
ek chote se banglow ke samne ruk
gaya..or us ladki ko ani bahon
se utaar diya...or usse
bola..BHAGNA MAT PLZZ TUMHE
MUJHSE KOI KHTRA NAHI HAI
MERA BHAROSA KARO plzz.. wo
ajnabi aage bad kar
gate ka tala kholne laga..ladki
chupchap khadi hokar use dekhne
lagi..lock kholne ke baad usne use
andar chalne ko kaha
par wo ladki wahi murti ban kar
khadi rahi..ajnabi ne phir
kaha ..AB TUM ANDAR CHALOGI
YA PHIR SE TUMHE UTHAAOO...??
ye sunte hi wo bina khuch bole
ladkhadate hue kadmo se andar
jane lagi wo kafi kamzori mehsoos
kar rahi thi ajnabi
ne use sahara diya or andar lakar
bed par bhitha diya or jaise usne
room ki lights on kii ajnabi ko
uska adhnanga jism
jisme jaga jaga se khoon tapak
raha tha or phate hue kapde jhul
rahe the nazar aaye ..ajnabi ne

jaldi se apni nazre dusri taraf pher
li


anpni aankhe band ki or apne
kandho se utaar kar apni leather
jacket uske bed par daal di or
ladki se kaha...



ISE PEHAN LO
TUMHARI HALAT KAFI KHARAB
HAI MAI DEKHTA HU SHAYAD
MERE PAAS FIRST AID BOX
MAUJOOD HAI TUMHARE ZAKHMO
KE LIYE
MARHAM PATTI TO KARNI HOGI...



ladki ne jacket apne jism par daal
li or us ajnabi ko hairat bhari
nigaho se dekhne lagi..



or uski shksiyat ke bare me sochne
lagi...


ye ladka kya hai..?


kaisa hai...?


kya koi
insaan aisa bhi ho sakta hai..?


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« on: February 14, 2014, 11:55:09 am »

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Re: ZEESHAN-THE WARRIRO
« Reply #1 on: February 14, 2014, 11:56:52 am »
KAHANI KA PEHLA UPDATE DE DIYA HAI DOSTO AB AAP KE COMMENTS KA INTEZAR HAI..


AAP KA APNA..
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Re: ZEESHAN-THE WARRIRO
« Reply #1 on: February 14, 2014, 11:56:52 am »

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Re: ZEESHAN-THE WARRIRO
« Reply #2 on: February 18, 2014, 12:36:55 pm »
Update no:02
kya koi insan aisa bhi ho.sakta
hai..?
ab aag..
ajnabi andar ke room me gaya or
waha se first aid box or garm pani
lekar aya
..or bed je taraf badne laga ladki
ne jab use apni taraf badte hue
dekha to apne aap.ko samet kar
bhaith gayi or uski taraf dari dari
nazro se dekhne lagi ..jaise hi
ajnabi bed par aakar bhaitha wo
or peeche hat kar bhaith
gayi..ajnabi ke chere par ek halki
si muskurahat aa agayi..usne ladki
se poocha ..TUM MUJHSE ITNA
DAR KYU RAHI HO ARE BABA MAI
TUMHE KOI NUKSAAN NAHI
POHCHAUNGA...ladki ne kapkapati
hui awaz se kaha..AAP MUJHE
MAROGE TO NAHI NA..?
ajnabi ne muskurakar
kaha ...ACHA BATAO.KYA MAINE
ABHI TAK TUM PAR HATH
UTAHAYA ..? YA KOI ZOR
ZABARDASTI KI WAHA SE TUMHE
UTHA KAR ISILIYE LANA PADA KE
KAHI TUMHARE SATH KHUCH
GALAT NA HO JAYE..OTHERWISE
MERE DIL ME TUMHARE LIYE KOI
GALAT FEELINGS NAHI THI
BABA..DEKHO MERI TARAF.. ladki
us ajnabi ke taraf dekhne
lagi...KYA MAI.TUMHE KOI
GHALAT AADMI NAZAR AATA
HU..ladki ne jaldi se apna sar na
me hila diya...PHIR MUJHSE ITNA
GHABRA KYU RAHI HO
PAGAL..?:-)..ajnabi ne ek pyari si
muakurahat ke sath usse
poocha..ladki ne phir darte darte
kaha..KAHI AAPNE MERE SATH
KHUCH ULTI SEEDHI HARKAY KII
TO..?
ajnabi ladke ne poocha .ULTI
SEEDHI HARKAT KA MATLAB...?:-)
ladki.ne hichkichate hue
kaha..AGAR AAPNE UN GUNDO KI
TARHA MERI IZZZAT....itna keh kar
wo ruk gayi shayad wo.aage khuch
bol nahi paa rahi thi...
ladke ne muskurakar kaha..


A
PAGAL.. PAGAL LADKI KAHI KI..
AGAR
MUJHE TUMHARI IZZAT HI LOOTNI
HOTI TO YAHA ITNI DER SE
BHAITH KAR TUM SE.BATIYATE
NAHI REHTA BOHAT PEHLE HI YE
KAAM KAR CHUKA HOTA
SAMJHI...:-)?


ladki ne kaha ..

phir
bhi aap bhi to ek mard hi hona..?
ladke ne phir muskurakar
kaha..

ACHA JI AB HUM AAPKO EK
HAWAS KE PUJARI NAZAR AATE HAI..
HAINA...?smile



ladki.NAHI AISI BAAT
NAHI JI BAS MAI TO AISE HI KEH
RAHI THI AAPNE SACH KAHA
AGAR AAP MERI MAJBOORI KA
FAYDA UTHANA CHATE TO KAB KA
UTHA CHUKE HOTE MERE JISM KO
DHAKNE KE BAJAYE USE NANGA
KAR DETE JIS TARHA UN
BADMASHO NE MERA HAAL.KIYA
THA AAP BOHAT ACHE HAI
MAI HI ZABARDASTI AAP PAR
SHAK KAR RHAI THI MUJHE MAAF
KAR DIJIYE..AAP..

ladke ne kaha .

KOI BAAT NAHI
BABA KOI BAT NAHI TUMHARA
DARNA BHI KUDRATI
BAATHAI..ACHA EK BAAT
POOCHU..?

JI..?


TUMHARA NAAM KYA HAI..??

J
JI MERA NAAM AISHA HAI OR
AAPKA...?

ajnabi ne muskurakar jawab diya...

mera naam hai..
ZEESHAN...:-)



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Re: ZEESHAN-THE WARRIRO
« Reply #3 on: February 18, 2014, 12:37:45 pm »

UDATE NO:03
OR AAP KA NAAM..?
ZEESHAN..:
ab aage
Zeeshan: CHALO AB YE JACKET
HATAO OR MUJHE BATAO TUMHE
KAHA KAHA CHOT LAGI HAI..?
AISHA: JI KHUCH KHARASHE AAYI
HAI ZYADA KHUCH NAHI HUA
MUJHE REHNE DIJIYENA MAI THIK
HI JAOOGI KHUD BA KHUD
.. zee(pet name of zeeshan) ne
dekha ke aish(short form of aisha)
maan nahi rahi hai to usne apne
hatho se
aish ke jacket.me se uska dahina
hath bahar nikala aish ke hatho
me jaga se khoon ris raha tha or
bazuoo se
hote hue uski hatheliyo tak aaraha
pura hath par jaga jaga daanto se
katne or nakhoono ki kharonche
nazar
aa rahi thi..zee: YE BADE BADE
ZAKHAM TUMHE MAMULI
KHARONCHE NAZAR AA RAHI
HAI..?aish ne zee ki.is baat par
khuch bhi nahi kaha bas ek.tak
zee ke chre ko dekhti rahi ..zee
phir se uske hath. ki taraf.dhyan
dene laga
zee ne aish pure hath or sare
zakhmo ko dettol mile garm pani
se ache se saf kiya or cotton or
banded ki
madad se uske zakhmo par patti
bandhi isi tarha dusre hath ki bhi
marham.patti ki.. khuch
zakhmo.ke nishanat
aish ke gale par or chatiyo par bhi
the gale par to zee ne patti band
di par baat jab aish ke sine par
aayi
to zee ruk gaya aish ke narm or
safed sine par bohat sare danto ke
nishan the or kafi zor se use kata
gaya tha
wha par...shayad aish ye baat
samajh gayi.thi ke zee ke hath kyu
ruk...achanak aish ko.is bhole or
masoom
ladke par bohat pyar sa aane laga
or wo sochne lagi..ALLAH KITNA
SIDHA OR MASOOM HAI YE LADKA
MERE JISM KO
HATH LAGANE SE BHI SHARMA
RAHA HAI OR EK WO.KAMINE HAI
JO MUJHE KACCHA CHABA JANA
CHATE THE....
OR MUJHE SIRF APNI WEHSHI
BHUK MITANE KE LIYE EK SAMAN
KI TARHA ISTEMAL KARNA CHATE
THE
..aish ye soch phir usne socha ke
zee ki mushkil.khudhi asaan kardi
jaaye usne zee se kaha
..KYA HUA AAP RUK KYU GAYE
KHUCH CHOTE ABHI BHI BAKI HAI
INKA BHI ILAAJ KIJIYE NA..
zee khuch bola nahi.bas cotton
lekar aage bada or or uske sine ke
zakhmo ko saaf karne
laga magar uski nazre dusri taraf
thi wo aish ke taraf nahi dekh raha
tha ..or idhar
aish uski is sharafat pe hazar
jaan.se kurbaan ho chali. or khuch
had tak use bewakoof bhi
.samajh rahi.thi.ke abhi agar iski
jaga koi.or hota to.na jane wo
mujh jaisi.khubsurat ladki
ke sath.kya kya kar dalta..or
hakikat thi.bhi yahi ke aish bala ki
khubsurat ladki thi uski
umar 19 ya 20 saal se zyada na
hogi khulta hua safed sang e mar
mar ki tarha ujla hua rang ..
kahdi nak thi sunhaire lambe baal
the jo kamar ke niche tak aate the
gehri kaali kaali or
khubsurat aankhe jinme wafa saaf
jhalakti thi kad uska 5"4 inch raha
hoga..or uske jism ka
har ek hissa mano kisi khubsurat
se saanche me dhal kar tayyiyar
kiya gaya tha kul mila kar
wo purane zamane ki kisi haseen
murat se kam.nahi thi bilkul kahi
ki rajkumari hi lagti thi..
par use kya pata tha uski yahi
khubsurti uski jaan ki.dushman
ban jayegi..khair...
zee ne jaise taise uske sine ke
hisse ki marham patti ki ... or use
pehanne ke liye khuc
kapde diye aish ne dekha ke ek
jeans or ej t-shirt hai..usne zee se
kaha..SUNIYE....
Zee; JII..? AISH.. AAPKE PAAS
KOI.OR KAPDE NAHI HAI KYA..?
MAINE AISE KAPDE
KABHI NAHI PEHNE..ZEE.. BAS
AAJ KI RAAT MANAGE KAR LO
YAAR KAL SUBHA MAI
TUMHE READYMADE SHALWAR
KURTI DILWA DUNGA THIK.HAI
NA...?=0D=0AAISH...JI THIK
HAI...ZEE.. ACHA MAI DUSRE
ROOM ME JA RAHA HU TUM
CHANGE KARLO OK...?
AISH...OK..=0D=0Azee dusre
kamre.me chala hata hai or thodi
der me aish ki
awaz aati hai ..AJAAYIYE MAINE
KAPDE BADAL LIYE ...zee us room
me jata hai ..
to ye kya aish to sar se lekar paao
tak qayamat lag rahi thi zee
to.khuch der
use dekhta hi.reh gaya jab aish ne
dekha ke zee use is tarha dekh
raha hai.
to usne sharm ke mare apni nazre
jhuka li or zee se kaha...AAP
MUJHE AISE KYU
DEKH RAHE HAI MUJHE BOHAT
SHARM AA RAHI PLZ AISE MAT
DEKHIYE...
zee achanak jaise nind se jaga
ho ..HAA NAHI NAHI KHUCH NAHI
WO TO MAI.
AISE HI BASSS..PAR EK BAAT TO
BOLNI PADEGI YAR AISHA YOU
ARE LOOKING
DAAAAAAAAMMMMMM CUTE
YAAR
SACHME...AISHA...MATLAB...?zeE
apna sar
khujate hue..KUCH NAHI JANE
DO.. ..aish bas use dekhti rah
jati hai..
zee aish se poochta hai..KAHANA
KHAYA...? uske jawab me aish
khuch nahi bolti
bas sar jhuka kar khadi rehti
hai ..phir zee khud bolta
hai..OFCORSE NAHI
KAHAYA HOGA ..YAR MAI BHI
KAISE ULTE SIDHE SAWAL POOCH
RAHA HU TUMSE 10 MINT
RUKO MAI ABHI TUMHARE LIYE
KHUC BANA KAR LATA HU..itna
kehkar zee kitchen ki
taraf chala jata hai..or aish zee ke
ghar ko dekhne lagti hai ye ghar
kam or
kabad zyada lag raha tha ek bhi
chiz jaga par nahi thi shoes kahi
to socks
kahi towel kahi to kapde kahi
books idhar udhar bhikri padi hui
thi overall
wo total kabada hi tha.
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Re: ZEESHAN-THE WARRIRO
« Reply #4 on: February 18, 2014, 12:38:25 pm »

:aish ne socha shayad zee akele hi
rehta hai tabhi usne ye sab saman
jaga
par nahi rakah hai..wo abhi ye
soch hi rahi thi ke use zee kitchen
nikalta
hua dikhai diya uske uske haath
me ek bada sa tray tha jisme alag
alag
type ka khane ka saman tha is
room me hi ek chota sa dinnig
table tha zee
ne us tray ko table par rakha or
aish ko awaz di..AISHA KAHANA
TAYIYAR
HAI MADAM... or muskurane
laga ..waise bhuk to aish ko.bhi
bohat zoro ki
lagi thi kyuke suba se usne khuch
nahi kahaya tha par phir bhi wo
thoda
sankoch kar rahi thi zee ne use
dekha or uski pareshani bhaanp
gaya zer
aish ke paas aya uska haath
pakda or use lakar dinnig table
par bhitha diya
or khud uske bagal me chiar laga
kar bhaith gaya..or use surve
karne laga
khuc omlets breds or toast the
plus juice or doodh ka ek mug tha
jisme doodh
ka rang khuc yellow yellow sa ho
chuka tha shayd zee ne usme
haldi mila di
thi..aish ne bred uthaya par.uske
haatho me chot hone ki waja se
usse khate
nahi ban paa raha tha zee ne jab
dekha ke aish niwala apne muh
tak nahi le
jaa pa rahi hai to usne plat utha
kar apne haatho me or khud use
apne hatho
se khilane laga aish chup chap
apne is anjaan se masiha ko
dekhti rahi or
uske hatho se khana khati
rahi..khane ke bad zee ne
zabardasti aish ko juice
or haldi wala doodh bhi pilaya
kyuki wo janta tha aish
ki.kamzori.in chizo se
jald hi dur ho jayegi..khane ke
baad jab wo uthi to aish se chalna
bhi nahi
ho raha tha shayad itna dodne se
uske pairo.ki nase akad gayi thi
zee ne ek
baar phir use apni god me uthaya
or bed par araam se lita diya..
or AC on karke uspar chadar daal
dii..or kaha...AB TUM ARAAM
SE SO.JAO BAKI KI SARI.BATE
HUM KAL SUBHA KARENGE
OK ..GOOD
NIGHT SWEET DREAMS MY
PRINCESS.. AISH...MATLAB...?
zee apna sar khujane lagta hai or
muskurakar kehta hai...
KHUCH NAHI SO JAO....



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Re: ZEESHAN-THE WARRIRO
« Reply #5 on: February 18, 2014, 12:39:36 pm »
update no:= 04
KHUCH NAHI SO JAO..
ab aage...
aish ne zee ke taraf dekha...or
kaha.. AAP KAHA SOYENGE ..?
zee: MAI YAHI NEECHE CHADAR
DAL KAR SO JAUNGA TUM FIKAR
MAT KARO...
Aaish: NAHI NAHI AAP APNE BED
PAR SO JAYIYE MAI NEECHE SO
JATI HU...
aish: NAHI AAP UPAR LETIYE NA
MERA KYA HAI MUJHE WAISE BHI
MUJHE
NEECHE ZAMEEN PAR SONE KI
ADAT HAI...=0D=0Azee: NAHI YAR
REHNE DO
WAISE MUJHE BHI ITNE NARM
GADDO PAR SONE KI ADAT NAHI
HAI...
Aaish: NAHI MAI..aish ne itna
kaha hi tha ke zee ne uski baat ko
katte hue gusse se bhari hui awaz
me kaha..
zee: EK BAR KEH DIYA NA TUMHE
UPAR SO JAO TO SO JAO CHUP
CHAP SAMJHI...
zeeshan ki itni robdar or kadak
awaz sun kar aish ekdum seham
gayi o
r jaldi se apne upar mulaim si
razai dal kar let gayi....zee ke
honto
par ek shararat bhari muskaan
nachne lagi..agar wo zara sakhat
nahi
hota to aish kabhi bhi uske
aramdayak bed par sone ke liye
razi nahi
isiliye usne aish ko bilkul ek
teacher ke andaz me danta or
bechari ek
choti si bacchi ki tarha dar kar so
gayi zee bhi kafi thakan mehsoos
kar raha tha usne ek choti si
chatai zameen par bichai or ek
patli si
chadar apne upar dal kar let
gaya..thodi der me use nind aa
gayi..kyunki
fan on tha isiliye liye zeeshan ke
jism se wo chadar bhi hat gayi...
aish
ne thodi der baad razai( jo usne
apne upar dal kar rakhi thi ) apne
chere
se hatai or chor nazro se zeeshan
ko dekhne lagi ....or apne dil me
sochne
lagi...DEKHO KITNA BHOLA OR
MASOOM LAG RAHA HAI YE ..
JAISE KOI CHOTA SA
BACCHA APNI MAA KI DAANT
SUNNE K BAAD RO DHO KAR SO
GAYA HO..BILKUL AISA
HI LAG RAHA HAI..
magar use thodi der pehle ki bhi
baat yaad aayi jab shan ne use
bed par sone ke liye danta tha ..
mere khuda uski to sari ki sari
personality hi change hokar reh
gayi thi use aisa laga hi nahi ke ..
ye to wohi zeeshan hai jo thodi der
pehle use itne pyar se apne
hatho se khana khila raha tha ..or
thodi der baad usi ladke ne
sirf apni aankho or zordar awaz se
hi use dara kar rakh diya tha...
aish shan (Zeeshan) ke bare me
sochti rahi or pareshan hoti rahi ke
ye kya chiz hai..phir wo shan ko
bade pyar se dekhne lagi..
waise zeeshan bhi kam smart nahi
tha tikhe nain naqsh the highet
takriban 6" ya usse thodi zyada hi
hogi kasrati or ghathila badan
or mazboot hath pair the shan
sando baniyan or lower me tha or
apni
bekhabri ki nind me so raha
tha ..zero.bulb ki halki si roshni
me
aish uske jism ke har ek hisse ko
bade dhyan se dekh rahi thi..
uske bazuoo ki machliya ( musels )
khud hi uski takat ka chikh chikh
kar ailaan kar rahi thi ek ek
musels alag alag dikhai pad raha
tha
sine par chest ki gali uski gardan
ke niche tak aayi hui thi .. badi
badi do aankhe thi jo hamesha
nind me dubi hui mehsoos hoti
unme
hamesha hi nasha sa paya jata
tha..rang bhi safed or gora tha .
sar
pe khale ghane bal the jo ud ud
kar uski peshani ko chum rahe
the ..
kul milakar zeeshan bhi khubsurati
ke mamle kisi bhi lehaz se aisha
se kam nahi tha bas shan ka rang
aisha se thoda kam tha.. aish use
dekh
hi rahi thi achanak shan ke mooh
se .ek halki si aah nikli or wo apne
daye bazu ko.sehlane laga wo
nind me hi tha.. or phir usne
karwat baldi or aish ke taraf
karwat karke let gaya aish ki nazar
uske daye bazoo par padi
jise shan sehla raha tha.. use us
ke daye bazu par ek zakham nazar
aya jismese khun nikal raha
tha ..par uske bawajoos bhi
zeeshan ki
nind me use koi fark nazar nahi
aaraha tha wo aise hi bekhabri ke
alam me chain ki nind soya hua
tha.. achanak aish ko.khayal aaya
ke
ye to kisi ke daanto ke nishan hai
phir wo.ekdum.se chaunk padi are
kisi or ke nahi ye to khud aisha ke
daanto ke nishan hai . jab shan
ne use pakda tha tab uski giraft
(.kabze ) se nikalne ke liya aisha
ne
use bohat.zor se kata tha isiliye ye
zakham bhi usi ke katne ki waja
se bana hai... aisha ko apne aap
me bohat gilty yani ke bohat
pachtawa
feel kar rahi thi... ke jis insan ne
uske zakhmo par marham lagaya
usne
usi ke bazuoo par zakham de
diye... or use bohat bura lagta
hai... achanak
aish ki nazre bed ke paas pade hue
first aid par padti hai..shayad
shan aish ki marham patti karne
ke bad use wahi bhul gaya
tha ..aish
khuch sochte hue box utha leti hai
or bed se niche utarkar shan ke
nazdik aakar bhaith jati hai or
uske zakhmi bazoo ko dekhne lagti
hai skin
jaga jaga se kati hui thi or unme
se khoon nikal raha tha.. aish ne
apne
hatho me cotton liya or use dettol
me bhigo kar shan ka zakhan saaf
karne lagi..
idhar shan nind me tha par use
achanak apne nazdeek ek pyari si
meethi meethi
or bhini.bhini khusbu ka ahsas
hone laga.. sath hi sath apne
bazoo par halki halki jalan ka bhi
ehsas hua
or isi jalan ki wajah se achanak
uski nind khul gayi or usne
bekhayali me apna baya hath utha
kar apne zakham par rakha par
ye kya uske hatho me kisi ka
naram naram or nazuk sa hath
agaya
usne foran palat kar dekha to
aisha ko apne kareeb paya uske ek
hath me dettol ki bottle or dusre
hath me cotton tha.. shaan ke
chere par ek halki si muskurahat
aa gayi or usne aish se kaha.
SHAN: YE KYA HO RAHA HAI
AISHA..?
zeeshan ka itna poochna hi tha ke
do bade bade aansu aisha ki
aankho
se nikalkar uske ruksaro ( chiks )
par behne lage..
shan ne jaldi se uske aansuo ko
apne haatho se pocha ..
or aisha se kaha...
SHAN: AISHA ITNI BADI BADI
AANKHO ME ITNE MOTE MOTE
AANSU ACHE
NAHI LAGTE..CHUP HO JAO KYU
RO RAHI HO PAGAL...?
aisha ne rote rote hue
kaha...AAPNE MERI LIYA ITNA
SAB KHUCH KIYA ..
BAS EK AAP HI MILE JIS NE MERE
JISM KO NAHI USPAR MAUJOOD
ZAKHAMO KO
DEKHA..OR MAINE AAP KE SATH
KYA KIYA AAP KO TAKLIF DI JIN
HATHO NE
MERI HIFAZAT KI MAINE UNHI
HATHO KO KATNA CHAHA..itna
keh kar wo
phir se rone lagi..shan ko us
bechari ladki se badi humdardi si
mehsoos
hui usne uska chera apne hatho se
upar uthaya or usse kehne laga..
DEKHO AAISHA TUMNE JO BHI
KIYA WO ANJANE ME KIYA
TUMHARA MAKSAD BHI
MUJHE NUKSAAN POHCHANE KA
NAHI THA TUMHARI JAGA AGAR
MAI BHI HOTA TO
SHAYAD YAHI KARTA TO PLZZ
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TUMHE PATTI HI
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Re: ZEESHAN-THE WARRIRO
« Reply #6 on: February 18, 2014, 12:40:14 pm »
par patti bandne lagi sath hi sath
wo baar bar shaan ko
dekh dekh muskurane lagi..thodi
der baad usne shaan se kaha
..AAP SE EK BAAT KAHOO..
SHAAN:- HAA KAHO NAA..
AAISHA:- AAP BOHAT PHUTRE
LAGTE HAI...
SHAAN:- PHUTRE MATLAB KYA...?
BOHAT BEKAAR DIKHTA HU KYA
MAI...?
AAISHA:- NAHI NAHI PHUTRE
MATLAB AAP BOHAT KHUBSURAT
DIKHTE HAI..
aisha ke is remark par shaan ne
apna sar neeche jhuka liya or
sharmane
laga or sharmane ki had to tab ho
gayi ke uska sara chera or kaan
tak
laal ho gaye ...achanak shaan me
ye badlao dekh kar aaisha ko
hansi
aane lagi usne hanste hue
kaha...ARE WAAH..AAP TO PARDA
NASHIN AURTO
KO BHI MAAT DE RAHE HAI..ITNA
KYU SHARMA RAHE HAI AAP...
..?
shan ne bina apna sar uthaye use
jawab diya..JII WO.MUJHE AAJ
TAK KISI.
NE AISA NAHI KAHA KE MAI
KHUBSURAT DIKHTA.HU SAB LOG
TO MUJHE BEWAKOOF
OR BUDDHU SAMAJHTE HAI..OR
KEHTE HAI ...ZEESHAN TU TO
SHAKAL SE HI.
BEWAKOOF NAZAR AATA HAI TERA
ZINDAGI ME KHUCH NAHI HO
SAKTA...ye kehkar
shaan udaas sa ho gaya...aish ne
jab dekha ke shaan ka chera utar
gaya
hai to usne foran shaan se
kaha...Pagal HAI WO LOG JO YEH
KEHTE HAI KE
AAP AISE DIKHTE HAI YA WAISE
DIKHTE HAI AAP MUJHSE
PUCHIYE NA MAI EK LADKI
HU MAI AAPKO.BATATI HU JITNA
KHUBSURAT AAP KA CHERA HAI
USSE KAHI ZYADA
KHUBSURAT AAPKA DIL HAI
SAMJHE AAP ISILIYE AB KABHI
AAP APNE AAP KO
AHSAS -E-KAMTARI KA SHIKAR
NAHI HONE DENGE WADA KIJIYE
MUJHSE...shan ne
aish ki taraf dekha or uske hath
par apna hath rakh.kar
kaha ..WADA... ..
itna kehkar aaisha ne uski banded
Band di..or usse kaha..SHABBA
KHAIR
( GOOD NIGHT )...
MERE KADEEM MULK KE
SHAHZADE... SHAAN:- KADEEM
MATLAB ..?
AAISHA:- KHUCH NAHI SO JAYIYE
KAL BAAT KARENGE....
or dono apne apne bistar par
chale gaye or ek dusre ke bare me
sochte sochte wo dono kab nind ki
aaghosh me chale gaye unhe khud
bhi ata nahi chala........




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Re: ZEESHAN-THE WARRIRO
« Reply #7 on: February 18, 2014, 12:40:52 pm »

Update no:- 05
....wo dono kab nind ki aaghosh
me chale gaye unhe khud bhi pata
nahi chala ......
Ab aage
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Coming alfa coming alfa coming....
This is behraam speaking ..
coming alfa coming... Afsar kya
tum meri awaz sun paa rahe ho
afsar this is behran
speaking...=0D=0AEk adhed umar
ka aadmi
transmeter par jhuka hua alag
alag freqencies par signals bhej
raha tha shayad kisi se baat karna
chata tha... Wo.apne signals
bhej hi raha tha ke achanak
transmeter par maujood hara
button
jalne bhujhne laga behram ne
faoran transmeter ka reciver
uthaya
or usme phir se wohi codes
dhorane laga.....
yes i m got ur signal
sir behram ..this agent
afsar...dusri taraf se jawab mila..
Sir behran ne kaha...Haan kaho
afsar zeeshan ki khuch khabar
mili..?
Jawab me afsar ne kaha..Nahi sir
wo pichle ek mahine se gayab hai
kaha hai ...? Kya kar raha hai..?
Hum logo ko khuch bhi khabar
nahi mil
paa rahi hai uski...
Behram:- wo ghayab nahi hua hai
undercover ho gaya hai shayad
tum
jante ho jab bhi koi behad
important cases hote hai wo isi
tarha ghayab
ho jata hai.. Or apne tarike se
cases kii chan been karta hai...
Afsar:- par sir mujhe ye tarika
bilkul ghalat lagta hai is tarha
akele or tanha insaan aakhir kitne
logo se takra sakta hai wo koi
super hero thodi hai jo itne bade
group se akele nipat lega...
Behram:- sir behram ke chere par
ek halji si muskurahat aa gayi
or unhone kaha..... maine bhi usse
yahi baat kahi thi ke...
zeeshan tumhara is tarha se akele
bade bade mafiya or is tarha ke
dusre groups se akele
Takrana bohat ghalat baat hai
tum tanha kitno se ladoge....?
To usne muskurakar is baat par ek
sher sunaya tha mujhe ke......
JUNG ME KAGAZI AFRAAD SE KYA
HOTA HAI...
HIMMATE LADTI HAI TADAD SE
KYA HOTA HAI....
Afsar:-( bura sa mu bana kar) Sir
aapne usse is sher ka matlab
poocha tha kya..?
Behram:- haan poocha tha na
usne
bataya tha ke aap ke agaisnt me
chahe jitne bhi log ho agar
aap me sirf or sirf himmat ho to
aap un logo par hawi ho sakte
ho kyuki bejigar or nidarr insan se
har koi darta hai...
Afsar:- yani ke wo ye kehna chata
hai ke ..soowaro (pigs) ki fauj
ke liye ek sher hi kafi hota hai...
yahi matlab haina is sher ka sir...?
haan shyad yahi matlab
hai...behraam ne ne kaha
afsar> ye sab dakiya noosi baate
hai sir jab jaan par ban aati
hai na to sari deleri peeche ke
raste se nikal jati hai..
afsar ne bade hi jale bhune andaz
me kaha ...ek bewakoof
zeeshan hi kya kam tha jo ek or le
aya apne sath kya naam hai
uska ...haan vishal...vishal
Agnihotri...uski kahani bhi ajeeb
hai
sir bohat pada likha tha degriyo ki
line lagi thi uske paas par
rozgaar na milne par ek shatir
lutera ban gaya tha wo apni sari
padai likhayi or akalmandi ko usne
badi badi choriya or roberries
karne me laga di thi.. or robbries
bhi aisi jise dekh kar insaan dang
reh jaaye apne plans par use itna
bharosa tha ke
police tak ko chalange kar diya
tha ke jo koi bhi use pakdega wo
zindagi bhar uski gulami karega..
Beharm>>> or tumhe yaad hoga
uska challenge kisne except kiya
tha...??
afsar...ji haan aap ke us bekar se
zeeshan ne..? or isne bhi use saza
dilane ke badle humari
hi team me shamil kar liya...
Beharam:- lagta hai tum zeeshan
se khuch zyada hi unsecure feel
kar rahe ho...?
afsar ...nahi nahimujhe kya padi
hai jo mai usse unsecure feel
karunga
..afsar ne bhanna
kar kaha..wo to mere samne abhi
laonda hai....
Aafsar:- haan sir but phir bhi wo
hamesha oot patang harkate
hi kyu karta hai har case ko solve
karne me...
Behram:- uski har uut patang
harkat ke peeche koi maksad
chupa
hota hai afsar.. wo bina matlab
khuch nahi karta..
Afsar:- khair goli mariye use.. sir
aap se ek baat poochni thi..?
Behram:- haan poocho...?
sir..ye kernal Warior kaun hai...?
afsar ke mooh se ye naam sunte hi
behram chaunk jata hai...
Kyu tumhe kya janna hai kernal
Warior ke bare me..?
..khuch nahi sir bad aise hi bada
hi filmi naam lagta hai
bilkul kisi jasoosi novel ke
character ka naam..Kernal
Warioi..hahaha.
.afsar ye kehkar hasne lagta
hai...iske hasne ki awaz behram
transmeter
ke ispaar saaf sun leta hai.
Tumhe is tarha se kernal Warior
par
hasna nahi chahiye afsar...
kyu kya kerlega mera Kernal
Waroir...?
afsar ki hasi ab bhi jari thi..kon
hai ye Kernal Warior...
Behram:- ye to mai nahi janta bas
itna janta hu ke wo hamari secret
service me paye jana wala ek
bohat hi bada or khunkhar janwar
hai..
Tumhe ye nahi malum uski apni
khud ki ek personal force hai..jo
eagle
force kehlati hai us force ki tadad
matlab usme maujood commando
ki
sankhya kitni hai ye Kernal Warior
ke ilawa shayad hi koi or janta
hoga..
or wo ek ek cammando tumhare or
mere jaise dus dus agents par
bhari hai samjhe....?
Aagar wo kernal Warior sach me hi
itna khukhar hai to chuhe jaisa
chupta kyu phirta hai sabse samne
kyu nahi aata darpok kahi ka...
asfar ne ek chid kar kaha.....
ABehram:- uski maslihat wohi jane
hume isse koi lena dena nahi hai..
bas hume jo bhi orders milte hai
hum unhe pura karte hai ...
or Kernal Warior ke bare me bhi
maine tumhe isiliye bataya bataya
kyuke
tumne uske bare me poocha tha...
khair chodo in bato ko hame bas
zeeshan par
concentrat karna hai wo zarur
khuch na khuch plan kar raha
hoga....
uska sahi.pata hume sirf vishal se
mil.sakta hai zeeshan ke jitna
close vishal
utna shayad koi nahi tum vishal
ko todne ki koshish karo samjhe
afsar...?
AAfsar:- ji samajh gaya sir but us
vishal ko todna itna asaan nahi
hai wo
zeeshan ko apna ustaad or bada
bhai manta hai.. uske liye jaan de
sakta hai ya
jaan le bhi sakta hai.. yehi haal us
pagal zeeshan ka bhi hai aap ko
yaad hai
na vishal ko saza se bachane ke
liye wo hum sab ke khilaf khada ho
gaya tha..
.na jane in dono pagal ko ek dusre
me kya nazar aata hai jo ek dusre
par jaan
chidakte hai...?
Behranm:- unhe ek dusre me jo bhi
nazar aata ho us khoobi ko
samajh pana
tumhare bas ka rog nahi hai
afsar... tum bas utna karo jitna
kaha jaaye..
is thats clear...?
Afsar:- yes sir...mai dekhta hu
vishal se kya jankari mil sakti
hai...
Behram:- ok...over and all.ye
kehkar behram apne transmeter ka
switc off kar
deta hai .. .
or kisi gehri soch me doob jata hai
asal me wo khud is Kernal
WarWarior ki
shaksiyat se kafi zyada prabhavit
tha is Kernal Warior ke
sare karname use kisi kisse
kahaniyo ki tarha bhi lagte the
jinpar
sunkar yakeen kar lena bohat
mushkil kaam tha... bas wo inhi
socho
me ghum ho gaya... kabhi.na
kabhi to mai is Kernal Warioir se
mil kar
hi rahunga apne dil me ye baat
soch kar wo phir se apne kaam me
busy ho gaya
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