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Re: Murder..Gehri Sajish
« Reply #12 on: May 17, 2016, 07:13:44 am »
hmmmmmmm... nice one start bro
:thanks: bro

dusra update kal dunga

Bro font size thoda bada karo... padhne me problem ho rhi hai.  :oops:

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« Reply #12 on: May 17, 2016, 07:13:44 am »

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Re: Murder..Gehri Sajish
« Reply #13 on: May 17, 2016, 09:04:04 am »
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Re: Murder..Gehri Sajish
« Reply #14 on: May 17, 2016, 09:48:18 am »
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Re: Murder..Gehri Sajish
« Reply #15 on: May 17, 2016, 07:35:46 pm »
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Re: Murder..Gehri Sajish
« Reply #16 on: May 17, 2016, 11:52:37 pm »
Update : 2 (Court ka Faisla)

police vale uss shaks ko court ke andar leke aate hai aur fir use right side vale katghare me khada kar dete hai
abhi uss shaks ke haatho se hath kadiya  nikal di gai thi..dhire dhire karte hue court full bhar jata hai
sabse akhir me iss shaks ki behen aati hai aur vo second row ki pehle seat pe jaake baith jaati hai
fir sarkari vakil bhi aate hai..aur saath me iss shaks ka vakil bhi aake baith jaata hai

judge ki seat ke agal bagal me do log khade hue the haath pankha liye hue..unme se ek announce karta hai ki judge ab aa rahe hai

yeh announcment sunkar sab log khade ho jate hai aur fir judge aata hai aur aake baith jata hai..uske baith te hi baaki sab bhi baith jaate hai

Judge apni jagah par baithne ke baad "case ki sunwai shuru ki jay"

tabi ek Sarkari vakil khada hota hai aur judge ki aur jukte hue "My lord..yeh case ab puri tarah se saaf hai..isi ne uska khoon kiya hai aur sare saboot iske khilaf hai..mai adalat se darkhwast karunga ki ise kadi se kadi saja di jay..That's all my honour"

sabhi ki najar iss waqt uss insan par thi jo katghare ke andar khada tha

Judge uss shaks ke vakil ki aur dekhte hue "tumhe kuch kehna hai Mr Roy..??

Roy apni jagah se khada hota hai aur samne aake "No my Lord"

Sarkari vakil Roy ki aur dekhte hue "so my friend..tumhe iski begunahi ka koi sabut nahi mila (fir judge ki aur dekhte hue) My lord..isse yeh saaf sabit ho raha hai ki mere kabil dost ke pass iski begunahi ka koi saboot nahi hai..so mai adalat se darkhwast karunga ki ab iss case me adalat apna kimti waqt jaya na kare aur jald se jald iss case ki sunwai ki jaye..that's it My honour"
kehte hue Sarkari vakil Judge ke samne jhukta hai aur fir apni jagah pe jaake baith jata hai aur uske saath saath Roy bhi same vahi karta hai aur apni jagah pe jaake baith jata hai

Judge thodi der pichli sunwai me diye hue saboot ko ek baar firse dekhta hai aur fir thoda paper work karke

Judge sign karte hue "tamam sabooto ko study karte hue..yeh adalat iss natize pe pahuchi hai ki..sare saboot duniya ke mashur bussiness empire ke varis ke khilaf hai..adalat ise mujrim karar dete hue saja ae maut ka hukum deti hai..mujrim ko kal subah 7 baje fansi di jayegi"

fir hammer se declare karte hue "Court is adjurned " kehte hue judge vaha se chala jaata hai

dhire dhire karke court bhi khali ho jata hai aur ab vaha reh jaate hai bas kuch gine chune log jo the vo shaks, uski behen, do police constables, commissioner aur advocate Roy

voh dono police constables uss shaks ke haatho me hathkadiya pehnate hai aur fir use vaha se chalke jane lagte hai ki tabhi Roy unn sab ke pass aata hai

Roy kuch kehne jaa raha tha uske pehle hi vo shaks kehta hai "no probs Mr Roy..it's okay..apne apna kaam immandari se kiya..muje acha laga..aapko apki payment mil jayegi "
aur fir kehte hue vo vaha se jane lagta hai fir achanak rukar apni behen ki aur mudkar dekhta hai aur kehta hai

Vo shaks thoda udas hote hue "Gudiya..apna khayal rakhna aur aajse hamare Empire ki eklauti varis ab tum hi ho"

vo ladki apna chehra gusse se dusri aur ghuma deti hai..jisse dekh uss shaks ko thodi hasi aa jati hai aur fir vo chal padta hai vaha se

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media ki puri sena khadi thi..jo har pal live coverage dikha rahi thi
unhone yeh khabar aag ki tarah faila di thi ki India ke mashur bussiness man ke bete ko fansi ki saja sunai gai hai
har ghar me, har sadko pe, har mohallo me.. yeh khabar aag ki tarah fail rahi thi

jab vo shaks ko court se bahar laya jaa raha tha..media valo ke camere usi ke chehre ke taraf the..ab har news channel pe vo shaks dikhai de raha tha..par usne apna sar niche juka ke rakha hua tha isliye camera valo ko kaafi dikkate ho rahi thiko
jese jese vo shaks court ki stairs ko utar kar niche aata hai..media vale uske aage aa jate hai uska interview lene ke liye

ek lady reporter : sir..aapko fansi ki saja di jane vali thi..yeh jante hue bhi aapke chehre par koi gham nahi ha..kya aapne yeh khoon jaanbuj kar kiya tha..??

Vo shaks vese hi muskurate hue "agar humne iss dharti pe janam liya hai toh kabhi na kabhi toh marna hi hai..toh fir marne ka ghum kesa"

dusra reporter : sir aakhir aapko yeh khoon karke mila kya..?? kyu kiya apne ek nirdosh ka khuun..??

isse pehle ki vo shaks inn sab ke sawalo ka jawab deta..commissioner bolta hai

Commissioner jo uss shaks ke saath saath chal raha tha "no more questions..yeh ek katil hai aur usse badhkar koi aur nahi"

fir vo iss shaks ko police van me bitha ta hai aur fir nikal padta hai jail ki aur..piche sare reporters chillate rehte hai "Sir Sir..one more question Sir" par unke sawalo ko sunke bhi unsuna karke nikal jaate hai

Time : 12 Noon

vo shaks iss waqt jail ki salankho ke piche baitha hua tha..uska sar jhuka hua tha aur vo kisi gehre soch me duba hua tha
uski aankho se aansu beh rahe the..pichle kuch dino ke baad yeh pehli baar aisa tha ki vo shaks ro raha tha..use apni life ki bitaye hue sare hasin pal yaad aajate hai
vo ektak niche ki aur dekhe jaa raha tha ki tabhi use mehsus hota hai ki uske pass koi khada hai aur use hila raha hai
vo apne hos me aata hai aur apna sar upar uthakar dekhta hai aur pata hai ki uske pass me commissioner khada hai
vo commissionar ko dekhkar turant khada ho jata hai aur apne aankho me aaye hue aansuo ko saaf karta hai

Commissioner thaodi narmi se "yeh sab karke tuje kya mila..mene tuje ek acha insaan samja tha..par aakhir tu bhi baakiyo ke jesa hi nikla..kyu kiya tune aisa...bol"
 uski awaaz me apnapan saaf jalak raha tha..ki vo bhi iss shaks ki saja se dukhi hai

Vo shaks apne najare hata deta hai aur ghum jata hai "uncle..mene yeh sab kyu kiya kese kiya vo sab aapko shayad mere marne ke baad pata chal hi jayega..bas aapse ek choti se request hai"

Commissioner : kesi request..?? (sawaliya bhari najro se dekhte hue)

Vo shaks thoda ruansa hote hue "uncle..Aarushi ko please sambhalna..vo jaan hai meri..bahut masum hai meri sis, mai uski aankho me kabhi aansu nahi dekh sakta..janta hu iss waqt vo tut ke bikhar gai hai..par mai yeh bhi janta hu ki sirf aap hi use sambhal sakte hai ab" aur apne chehre par aaye hue aansuo ko hata deta hai

Commissioner uss shaks ke kandhe par haath rakhte hue "thik hai..vada karta hu..usko mai apni beti ki tarah palunga"

aur kehte hue vo jail se nikal jata hai aur vo shaks firse apni yaado me chala jata hai aur intezaar karne lagta hai apni fansi ka

To be Continued...

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Re: Murder..Gehri Sajish
« Reply #17 on: May 17, 2016, 11:55:19 pm »
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Re: Murder..Gehri Sajish
« Reply #18 on: May 18, 2016, 09:29:07 am »
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Re: Murder..Gehri Sajish
« Reply #19 on: May 19, 2016, 08:44:20 am »
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Re: Murder..Gehri Sajish
« Reply #20 on: June 02, 2016, 03:00:41 am »
Update : 3 (Nafrat)

Location : Somewhere in the Dream Land

Dream land ke sabse akhir me ek bahut hi bada empire tha..empire ke charo aur ek boundary bana rakhi thi aur main gate par kaafi sari tight security thi
iss empire me ek bahut hi bada bangla tha..yeh bangla kam haweli jyada lag rahi thi
iss bangle ke main hall me left side ki aur kuch sofe rakhe hue the aur unn sofe pe kuch log baithe hue the
left sofe par 4 ladkiya baithi thi..aur unn mese ek ladki kaafi der se roye jaa rahi thi

uski aankhe ro ro ke lal ho chuki thi..rone ki vajah se uska pura chehra bigad chuka tha..aansu the ki rukne ka naam nahi le rahe the..pani ki tarah aasnsu beh rahe the aur aansuo se uska pehna hua top bhi pura gila ho chuka tha
uske baal bhi uske chehre par aake chipak chuke the..uski halat dekhkar koi bhi keh sakta tha ki vo bahut der se ro rahi hai
aur uske rone ka karan bhi toh aisa tha..bahut dukh ho raha tha usko..ya yu kahe ki uski puri zindagi ab ujad chuki thi

tabhi main door se ek ladki andar aati hai..vo dekhti hai ki sofe pe baithi ladki bahut ro rahi hai, vo turant uss ladki ke pass pahuch jati hai aur uske pass me baithi ladki ki aur dekhne lagti hai jo uss wali ladki ke right side baithi thi..aur uska naam Palak tha aur umar thi 21-22 saal

Palak iss nai aai hui ladki ki aur dekhti hai aur uski aankho me dekhte hi use pata chal jata hai ki vo kya puchne vali hai..toh vo khud hi bol deti hai

Palak bhari gale se "yeh tabse hi ro rahi hai jabse tu yaha se gai..Aarushi ise ab tu hi samja..hamari baat toh yeh sun nahi rahi..shayad teri baat man jaye"

vo nai aane vali ladki ka naam Aarushi tha
Aarushi vahi par uss ladki ke pass apne ghutno ke bal baith jaati hai aur uska haath apne haatho me le leti hai..uski aankho se bhi aansu behne lagte hai
vo rone vali ladki ek najar Aarushi par dalti hai aur fir aur bhi jor jor se rone lagti hai..use saans lene me bhi bahut takleef ho rahi thi ab toh..vo saans bhi atak atak ke le rahi thi

Aarushi rote hue "please Anu..sambhal khud ko..mai jaanti hu tune usse sacha pyaar kiya hai..par vo tere pyaar ke layak nahi tha"

Palak bhi Aarushi ka saath dete hue "ha Anu..Aarushi sahi keh rahi hai..tu rokar apni health kyu bigad rahi hai"

Anu ke left side me ek aur ladki baithi hui thi jiska naam Vidhi tha aur uski bhi umar karib 21 saal thi

Vidhi "anu..please ab shant ho ja"

Vidhi ke pass me ek aur ladki baithi hui thi jiska naam Ritika tha

Ritika "Anu..hum teri takleef ko samajte hai..par agar tu ese hi roti rahegi toh kese chalega..please Anu ab toh chup hoja"

vo charo ladkiya Anu ko samjhane ki bahut kosis kar rahi thi..par Anu thi ki bas roye hi jaa rahi thi
aur roye bhi kyu na..usne apne pyaar ko khoya tha aaj..vohi pyaar jiske liye vo apni jaan tak de sakti thi..vo ek baar bhi na sochti agar use apne pyaar ke liye apni khud ki jaan ko dena pade..vo khusi khusi apni jaan de deti..par uski kismat me kuch aur hi tha..usne apne pyaar ko khoya tha aaj..vo jispar usne sabse jyada bharosa kiya tha..usne kabhi sapne me bhi nahi socha tha ki uske saath kabhi aisa ho sakta hai
use vo din ki yaad aati hai jab vo pahli baar uss mili thi..aur vo sari baate yaad aate hi uski aankhe apna boj halka karne lagti hai aansuo ke roop me
sabhi ladkiyo ko iss waqt Anu ki halat ka andaza tha..isliye vo kuch der use aur rone deti hai
fir Aarushi uthkar Anu ke pass jaake baith jaati hai aur use apne sine se laga deti hai

Anu subakte hue "kk..kkyuu kiya usne aisa..kkkyaa..kkkya mila usko. yeh sab karke"

iss sawal ka jawab unn baaki ladkiyo ke pass bhi nahi tha..vo sab bas chup baithi rahti hai
Aarushi ko bhi ese chup baithe dekh Anu usse alag hoti hai aur uska haath pakad te hue kahti hai
rone ke karan use hichkiya aane lagti hai "please tu toh bata muje..tu toh meri best friend haina..??"

Anu ke iss sawal ka jawab Aarushi ke pass nahi tha..vo khadi ho jati hai aur mudkar jane lagti hai ki tabhi Anu uska haath pakad leti hai..jisse Aarushi ke badhte kadam ruk jaate hai aur vo vahi par ek putle ki tarah khadi ho jati hai

Anu fir Aarushi ke samne aake khadi ho jati hai aur fir vapis se apna sawal dohra ti hai

Anu uska haath pakadte hue "Aaru..please batana muje..tu milne gai thi na usse..usne bataya ki usne aisa kyu kiya..please bata na..dekh muje pura viswas hai ki vo aisa kabhi nahi kar sakta..hume jarur koi galat femi hui hai, mera dil keh raha hai ki uske kuch bahut bura hua hai"

Anu ki baate sunkar Aarushi ke man me jo gussa tha vo ab fut padta hai..vo Anu ke haatho ko jatakte hue jorse chilla uthti hai

Aarushi gusse se "I don't know damid..muje nahi pata uss kamine ne aisa kyu kiya..aur use kya mila yeh sab karke yeh mai nahi janti..aur nahi kabhi janna chahti hu..mai bas itna janti hu ki kabhi mera koi bhai tha hi nahi..uske karan kisi ne apna beta khoya hai..toh kisine apna bhai..tuje pata bhi hai ki unki kya halat ho gai hai..mene dekha hai unhe rote hue..uss bechare ko toh pata bhi nahi hoga ki uske saath yeh sab kya hua..uske parents abhi tak uss sadme me hai..aur uski behen toh tut chuki hai uss hadse se..aur tu chahti hai ki mai uss kamine se baat karu jiske karan yeh sab hua..kabhi nahi Aanchal..kabhi nahi"

uss ladki ka pura naam tha Aanchal Sharma, par use sab Anu kahkar pukarte the
itna kehne ke baad Aarushi bhi jor jor se rone lagti hai aur daudkar apne room me chali jaati hai

vaha pe khadi sari girls ekdum shocked ho gai thi..yaha tak ke Anu bhi
kyunki aaje se pehle Aarushi ko unn sabne itna gusse me kabhi nahi dekha tha..jis chehpre par hamesa ek cute si smile rehti thi vaha par aaj gusse ne ghar kar liya tha..jo har waqt masti karne vali ladki thi vo kahi ghum ho chuki thi
jab vo bol rahi thi tab use rokne ki kisi me bhi himmat nahi thi..yaha tak ke Anu ne bhi usse rokne ki kosis nahi ki thi
Anu bhi ache se samaj rahi thi..kyunki jo kuch bhi Aarushi ne bola tha..vo kahi na kahi sach hi tha

jaha Anu ne apna pyaar khoya tha vahi par Aarushi ne apne bhai ko bhi khoya tha..bachpan se usne apne bhai ko sab kuch mana tha
par inn sab ki zindagi me yeh ek aisa waqt aaya tha ki sab kuch tabah ho chuka tha aur kai sari zindigiya ujad chuki thi

Location : Sector 19, DreamLand
Time : 9:30 PM

Sector 19 ke house no 28 ki baat karte hai..yeh ghar koi jyada bada nahi tha..ghar ko dekhkar yeh lag raha tha ki yeh ek middle class family ka ghar hai
ghar ke bahar name plate pe R V Ahuja likha hua tha

tabhi unke ghar ke aage ek gaadi aake rukti hai..jisme se Commissioner aur uske saath Anu, Aarushi aur Ritika bahar nikalte hai

vo sab ghar ke andar jaakar dekhte hai..sab log abhi vaha pe safed kapdo me baithe hue the..unke samne uske ghar ke varis ki photo rakhi hui thi aur jispar fulo ki mala lagai gai thi
ghar me maujud sabhi log jor jor se ro rahe the..par unme se koi tha jo ro nahi tha..bas ek tak uss tasweer ko dekh raha tha
vo shaks koi aur nahi Disha thi..uss ladke ki badi sis

Disha ke father Rakesh commissioner ko dekhte hai toh khade ho jate hai aur haath jodte hai

Rakesh : Thanks sir..aapne hamare bete ke katil ko saja dilwai..aapke kiye hue ehsan ko mai zindagi bhar nahi bhulunga

Commissioner : are rakesh bhai..isme thanks ki kya jarurat hai..yeh toh mera farz tha, guneghar ko saja dilwana

tabhi Rakesh ki najar Anu, Aarushi aur Ritika par jaati hai..Aarushi ko dekhkar thoda gussa toh aata hai par vo jahir nahi hone deta

Aarushi yeh baat samaj jaati hai aur vo rakesh ke pass jaakar...turant rone lagti hai aur Rakesh ke pair pakad leti hai

Aarushi rote hue "please uncle..maaf kar dijiye muje..mere bhai ki kiye hue ki saja muje mat dijiye"

Rakesh Aarushi ko ese dekh chaunk jata hai aur turant Aarushi ko utha deta hai aur use dekhne lagta hai..Aarushi ki aankhe bhi lal ho chuki thi rokar..vo puri duphar ko royi thi..jiske karan uski aankhe puri lal ho chuki thi

Commissioner : Rakesh..ise bachi ko maaf karde..isme iss bachi ki koi galti nahi hai..pehle se hi bahut saja bhugat chuki hai..logo ke bahut sare tane sun chuki hai

Rakesh aarushi ko gale lagate hue "beti..tuje maafi mangne ki koi jarurat nahi hai..humne tumhe kabka maaf kar diya hai"

Aarushi yeh sunkar thodi khusi hoti hai aur tabhi Disha ki maa bhi aajati hai aur Aarushi ke sar par haath firate hue

Ranjan (Disha's Mom) "beti chup ho ja..hum jante hai tere bhai ne jo kuch bhi kiya vo bahut galat tha..pata nahi use kya mila yeh sab karke" uski aankhe bhi thodi nam ho jati hai

Aarushi Rakesh se alag hoti hai aur Ranjan ke gale lagte hue "Aunty..kya mai aapko Mom bula sakti hu..??"

Aarushi ne itne pyaar aur bholepan se kaha ki Ranjan ki aankho se bhi  aansu nikal aaye..vo Aarushi ko kaskar gale se laga deti hai aur Ranjan bhi janti thi ki isme Aarushi ki koi galti nahi hai aur ab toh Aarushi ki dekhbhal karne vala bhi koi nahi hai

Ranjan : ha bilkul beta..aakhir tum bhi toh meri beti ho..jese Disha hai vese tum bhi meri hi beti ho

tabhi Disha jo ab tak chup khadi thi vo gusse me tilmila uthi ti hai aur chikhte hue kahti hai

Disha : nahi Mom..mai iske jesi hargiz nahi hu..aur nahi aap isse koi rishta rakhogi..samji aap

Aarushi Disha ke kahi baat par halka sa muskura deti hai aur dhire dhire chalte hue uske pass aa jati hai..aur uske haatho ko pyaar se pakadti hai..par Disha uska haath jatak deti hai aur apne room me chali jaati hai

sab log vese hi khade khade dekhte rahte hai aur

Ranjan : beta..vo nahi manegi..bahut jiddi hai vo

Aarushi : mom..mai bhi kam jiddi nahi hu..unhe mana ke hi rahugi
aur fir vo bhi Disha ke kamre me chali jaati hai

Aarushi dekhti hai ki Disha apne bed pe ulti leti hui thi aur ro rahi thi..Aarushi room ke andar jaati hai..par Disha ko ehsas ho jata hai ki Aarushi aai hai..vo mudkar uski aur dekhti hai aur fir khadi ho jati hai aur gusse se Aarushi ko ghurne lagti hai

kya Disha Aarushi ko maaf kar paegi..??
aur akhir Aarushi ka bhai kaun hai..aur usne Disha ke bhai ko kyu mara hai..??
aur Ranjan aur Rakesh ne itni jaldi Aarushi ko kese maaf kar diya, ya fir unka koi natak hai
bahut se sawal hai jiske jawab milne baaki hai

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Re: Murder..Gehri Sajish
« Reply #22 on: June 08, 2016, 01:11:03 am »
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Disha Aarushi ko dekhte hi gusse se khadi ho jati hai aur uske pass aate hi jor jor thappad marne lagti hai...chhhhattt chhhaaatt karke 4-5 thappad Aarushi ke gaalo pe pad chuke the
vahi sab Disha ke room ke gate ke pass khade the aur yeh sab dekh rahe the..Ranjan andar aane jaa rahi thi ki Rakesh use rok leta hai aur naa me apna sar hila ne lagta hai

Disha 5 thappad marne ke baad ruk jaati hai..aur

Disha rote hue "kyu aai hai ab tu..aakhir kya mile use yeh sab karke..kyu mara mere haste khelte bhai ko..??"

Aarushi : aapko jeetna gussa nikalna hai nikal do didi..par please ese mujse naraj na raho..mera ab aap sabke alawa koi nahi hai..kaas ke iss waqt mere mummy pappa jinda hote (aur vo jor jor se rone lagti hi aur rote hue hi) toh shayad yeh kabhi na hota

Aarushi thodi der rukti hai aur fir kahti hai "Didi..mene aapko hamesa se apni badi behen mana hai..sirf kehne ke liye nahi..balki mene aapko apne dil se behen mana hai..aap abhi bhi iss choti behen ko maaf nahi karogi..??"

Aarushi ne yeh sab itne pyaar aur bholepan se kaha tha ki koi bhi uski baat man jaye..aur Disha ke saath bhi aisa hi hua..uske dil me aata hai ki isme iss pyari si ladki ka kya dosh..jo bhi kiya iske bhai ne kiya..uske kiye ki saja ise kyu mile
vo ek kadam aage badhti hai..par fir turant hi ruk jaati hai..uska dimag iss baat ki izzazat nahi de raha tha ki vo Aarushi ko maaf kare..vo chikh chikh kar keh raha tha ki yeh uss katil ki behen hai..iske bhai ne hi tere bhai ko mara hai..aur tu ise maaf kar degi..aur vahi dusri aur uska dil keh raha tha ise maaf kar de

iss waqt Disha itni ulji hui thi apne dil aur dimag ki iss ladai me ki vo tay nai kar paa rahi thi ki vo kya kare

Aarushi Disha ki halat ko samaj jaati hai aur firse vo vahi pyar se kehti hai jesa usne pehle kaha tha

Aarushi ruansi hote hue "didi..muje pata hai ki aap mere se nafrat karti ho..shayad meri yahi punishment hai ki mai akeli hi rahu..mere bhai ke kiye ki punishment bhi muje hi mile"

Disha yeh baat nahi sun pai..kyunki hona ho uske dil me abhi bhi vohi pyaar tha Aarushi ke liye jo pehle hua karta tha
vo turant Aarushi ko apne gale laga deti hai aur use tight hug karti hai..aur dono hi rone lagti hai

Disha thodi der ke baad chup ho jati hai..par Aarushi abhi bhi uske gale hue thi aur roye jaa rahi thi

Disha uske sar par pyaar se haath firate hue "ssshhhhh..pagli..ese nahi rote..dekh ab toh mene tuje maaf bhi kar diya..gudiya tu meri baat nahi manegi..?? aur tune kese soch liya ki tu akeli hai..hum sab tere saath hai"

Aarushi turant rona band kar deti hai..par abhi bhi vo halka halka sisak rahi thi "love you di..please aap muje chodkar kabhi na jana..aap chahe muje punish kar dena par please mujse ese naraj na hona"

Disha Aarushi ki baat sunkar usse firse apne gale laga deti hai..uski aankh se bhi ansu nikal aata hai "kabhi nahi aaru kabhi nahi"

fir sab log thodi der rote hai..aur isi bich Aarushi inn sab se kehti hai ki aaj ke baad vo sab bhi uske saath uske ghar pe rahenge
pehle toh sab mana karta hai par fir baad me maan jate hai Aarushi ke saath uske ghar rahne jane ke liye

Disha "thik hai Aaru..hum aayenge tumahare saath rehne ke liye..par abhi nahi thode din baad..vada hai yeh mera"

iske baat thodi baate hoti hai aur fir sablog vapis Aarushi ke ghar aajate hai

Commissioner apni car ko Aarushi ke bunglow ke bahar khadi rakhta hai aur sab utar jaate hai

Commissioner "Ritika..tuje ghar nahi aana..??"

Ritika na me sir hilate hue "nahi dad..mai aaj Aarushi ke saath rahungi uske saath..hum sare friends yahi par hai aaj"

Commissioner : okay beta..aur dhyan rakhna apna
fir vo bye bolkar chala jata hai..aur baaki ghar ke andar chale jate hai

jese hi sab ghar ke andar pahuche..anadar Anchal ka bhai baitha hua tha..aur uske saath me Vidhi aur Palak bhi baithi thi
Anchal apne bhai ko dekhkar turant uske pass jati hai daudte hue aur jaake uske gale lagkar rone lagti hai

Aanchal : bhaiya
vo bas itna hi kehti hai..uske muh se shabd nahi nikal rahe the ki vo kya kahe
Aanchal ke bhai ko sab kuch pata chal gaya tha..aur use pata chalta hi vo sidha yaha aagaya usko lene

Aanchal Bro : Anu..ab tu yaha nahi rahegi..mai tuje lene aaya hu..chal abhi ghar

Aanchal use alag hoti hai "nahi bhaiya..mai kahi nahi jaa rahi..mai yahi rahungi..aap meri fikar na kare..mai yaha Aarushi ke saath rahungi"

yaha bhi kaafi behas hoti hai par aakhir Aanchal ka bhai maan jata hai aur vo fir apni car leke nikal jata hai apne ghar jaane ke liye

dhire dhire waqt bit raha tha..aur ab gahri raat bhi ho chuki thi..par Malhotra's ke mansion me kisi ke aankho me neend nahi thi..sab log sirf aankhe band kiye hue baithe the

Aarushi apne bhai ke pyaar ki yaado me thi..vo soch rahi thi ki uska bhai ese kese kar sakta hai..jisse usne apne sabkuch mana tha vo bhai aisa kese kar sakta tha
uska dil yeh baat ki gawahi nahi de raha tha jo iss waqt ho raha tha..par vo sach tha..aur vo court me bhi sabit ho chuka tha..aur Aarushi iss baat ko juthla nahi sakti thi

vahi dusri aur Anu thi..jo apne pyaar ke saath bitaye hue hasin lamho ko yaad kar rahi thi..aur saath me uski aankho se aansu ki barish chalu thi


Time : 12 Midnight
Location : Some where deep inside the Midtown city

yeh jagah Midtown city ke bahar ke side thi..ek jani pehchani Import Export ki company
vaha pe ek car teji se aake rokti hai..uske andar baith hua shaks kaafi ghabraya hua tha..uske chehre par dar ki lakire saaf dikhai de rahi thi..uska pura chehra pasine se bhiga hua tha

vo gate par apna I-Card dikhata hai aur fir uski car teji se uss factory ke andar chali jati hai

To be continued....


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Re: Murder..Gehri Sajish
« Reply #23 on: June 08, 2016, 04:23:50 am »
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