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Re: Murder..Gehri Sajish
« Reply #24 on: June 09, 2016, 02:45:10 am »
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« Reply #24 on: June 09, 2016, 02:45:10 am »

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Re: Murder..Gehri Sajish
« Reply #25 on: June 09, 2016, 02:46:57 am »
Update : 5 (Rehasya)

Time : 12 Mid Night

yeh jagah Midtown city ke bahar ke side thi..ek jani pehchani Import Export ki company
vaha pe ek car teji se aake rokti hai..uske andar baith hua shaks kaafi ghabraya hua tha..uske chehre par dar ki lakire saaf dikhai de rahi thi..uska pura chehra pasine se bhiga hua tha

vo gate par khade security guard ko apna I-Card dikhata hai aur fir teji se apni car ko uss building ke basement parking me le chalta hai
fir vo shaks basement ke left side me rahi lift ki aur badhta hai aur life me chala jata hai

Iss company ke niche hamare desh ki Secret Defence ki office thi
vo shaks jis jagah par aaya tha vaha pe bina permission ke koi nahi aata jata tha..ya yu kahe ke company ke iss jagah ke bare me bahut hi kam log jante the

head office me enter hoti hi ek bada se hall aata hai aur hall ke saath karib 3 cabins bani hui thi
hall ke right side me ek badi si screen lagi hui thi jispar INDIAN DEFENCE SERVICE likha hua tha

kai log computers par baithe hue kaam kar rahe the toh kai log ek jagah jama hokar kuch discuss kar rahe the
yaha par abhi karib 25-30 log the jo alag alag kaam karne me mahir the aur har koi apne apne kaam me laga hua tha

tabhi vaha pe ek shaks daudte hue aata hai..uski sanse fuli hui thi..aur vo jor jor se sanse le raha tha
yeh vohi shaks tha jo abhi thodi der pehle car se yaha par aaya tha

vo apni najar charo aur dauda raha tha..aur thodi hi der me use vo shaks dikhai de gaya jise vo dhund raha tha
vo teji uss shaks ki aur chalne lagta hai..uske chehre par pareshani aur daaf saaf dikhai de raha tha
iss shaks ke aate hi sab log ispar ek najar dalte hai aur fir apne kaame me lag jate hai

jiss shaks ki aur yeh badh raha tha..vo iss vyakti ko apni aur aate dekhta hai aur fir apne haath me rahi file ko apne pass vale shaks ko de deta hai aur use jane ke liye keh deta hai
NOTE : Characters ka detail intro baad me aayega

jo shaks abhi aaya tha uska naam Samuel tha aur vo dusre shaks ka naam Niks tha

Samuel uske pass pahuchte hi "yeh sab kese hua..??"

Niks sirf itna kahta hai "hume head ke pass jana chahiye"

fir vo dono Head ki cabin ki aur chal padte hai aur head se permission milte hi vo dono cabin ke andar chale jate hai

Head iss waqt ek side khada tha aur kuch soch raha tha..uski umar karib 45 saal ki thi..vo dikhne me hata kata tha aur sar par baal thode kam the aur uska naam J V Mishra tha
uske chehre par bhi pasina tha

Samuel aur Niks ke aate hi vo Head unn dono ki aur turn hota hai aur kahta hai "tum dono ko Agent 25 ke bare me pata haina..??"

Samuel "yeh vo hi haina jise Mike ne Rider ke mission par bheja tha"

Head ha me apna sar hila deta hai "ha Sam, yeh vahi hai..par pata laga hai ki vo achanak se gayab ho chuka hai"

Samuel thoda chillate hue "whatt..??"

Niks  "par kese..I mean kal tak toh vo sahi salamat tha..infact usine toh muje Rider ke bare me bataya tha ki vo kuch bahut bada karne vala hai "

Head apne chehre par aaye hue pasine ko saaf karte hue "muje uska voice mail mila hai" fir vo apne phone me aaye hue voice mail ko play kar deta hai

voice "Sir..it's a trap, it's a big trap, they are planning something big" aur tabhi ek gun ke fire ki awaaz sunai deti hai aur vo voice mail khatam ho jata hai

Head "Niks mai chahta hu ki tuje iske bare me jald se jald pata lagana hoga"

Niks "yes sir..mai abhi jaake ispar kaam karta hu" kehte hue vo vaha se chala jata hai

Head "Sam..now come with me..we have our own mission to complete"

Samuel "yes sir"

aur fir vo dono bhi uss company se nikal jate hai..Samuel raste par apni car ko teji se dauda raha tha

Location : Dream Land
Time : 7 AM

Inside Malhotra's Mansion

ghar me rahe sabhi log iss waqt TV ke aage apni najare gadaye baithe hue the..sabhi ki najar iss waqt TV pe aarahi news par thi..unn sabhi ke dil ki dhadkan bahut teji se chal rahi thi
jese jese ghadi ki suiya tick tick karke aage badh rahi thi vese vese unn sabhi ke dil ki dhadkane badh rahi thi

sirf yaha hi nahi..desh ke sabhi log iss waqt ki sabse badi khabar sun rahe the..sab log TV ke samne najre jamaye baithe the..jo ghar ke bahar the vo radio par news sun rahe the

Dhire Dhire waqt badh raha tha..Anu ki sanse joro se dhadak rahi thi..aur uska dil tha ki roye jaa raha tha..aur apna boj aankho ke jariye halka kar raha tha 

Court ke diye gai samay ke muatabik uss shaks ko fansi ho chuki thi..aur vo ab iss duniya se hamesa hamesa jaa chuka tha

News pe yeh khabar aag ki tarah fil gai..duniya ke har hisse me yeh khabar fail gai thi
jese hi news me Anu ne suna ki uska pyaar ab hamesa hamesa ke liye usse dura chala gaya hai toh vo khud ko rok na saki..vo teji se daudte hue apne room me chali gai aur door ko lock karke bed pe jaake ulti gir gai aur jor jor se rone lagi

uski aankho se behte har aansu me uske apne pyaar ke saath bitaye hue har lamhe ki yaad thi
uske pyaar ne usse vada diya tha ki vo marte dum tak uska saath nibhayega..par usne apna vada tod diya

Anu ne samne rakhi tasveer ki aur dekha aur rote hue hi kehne lagi "kyu kiya tha vada jab nibha nahi saka..kyu vo juthe sapne dikhye the jo tu pura nahi kar sakta tha..kyu kiya tune aisa mere saath..kya mila tuje yeh sab karke"

vo ek tak uss tasweer ke samne dekh rahi thi..aur fir vo apna ek haath aage karke uss tasweer ko le leti hai..aur fir apne chehre ke samne karti hai..aur pyaar se uss shaks ki chehre par haath firati hai..uski aankho se beh raha aansu uss tasweer pe girta hai

Anu uss tasweer ko apne dil ke pass lagati hai aur fir rone lagti hai
rote rote use kab neend aagai use pata hi nahi chala..aaj vo 4 din baad soi thi..vo sona toh nahi chahti thi..par vo majboor thi

Vahi bahar Aarushi apne bhai se bahut nafrat karne lagi thi..par tha toh vo uska bhai hi na..toh uski bhi aankhe bhar aai aur vo bhi rone lagi..vo bhi apne kamre me chali jaati hai aur door ke pass baithkar hi rone lagti hai

inn dono ki friends iss waqt yahi par maujud thi Palak Anu ke kamre ki aur jane lagti hai ki tabhi

Ritika : Palak..rehne de use..rolene de..use acha feel hoga

Vidhi : ha palak..Ritz sahi keh rahi hai

Palak ko bhi yahi sahi lagta hai..aur vo teeno vahi hall me rahe sofe par baith jaati hai..unki aankhe bhi thodi nam thi


To be continued....


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Re: Murder..Gehri Sajish
« Reply #28 on: June 21, 2016, 02:24:19 am »
Update : 6 (Waqt ke saath Badalna hoga)

Time : 8:00 PM

sham ka waqt ho chuka tha..pichle kuch dino se jo chal raha tha uske karan Aarushi ko bahut kuch sunna pad raha tha..par ab usne yeh than liya tha ki jo kuch bhi uske bhai ki vajah se unki reputation bigdi thi vo kuch bhi karke vo vapis hasil karke hi rahegi

sham ke waqt vo apne kamre se bahar nikalti hai..uske chehre par ab pehle ke jesi masumiyat nahi rahi thi..vo bahar aake apni friends ke saath baith jaati hai

aaj vo charo friends chup chap baithi hui thi..unn mese koi kuch bol nahi raha tha
tabhi vaha pe Disha aa jati hai..uske chehre par gham toh tha hi apne bhai ke khone ka..par sath me vo khush bhi thi ki uske bhai ke hathiyare ko fansi ki saji mil gai thi

vo dekhti hai ki yeh sari ladkiya chup chap baithi hui hai

Disha bhi unn sab ke pass aate hue "kya baat hai..aaj yeh group itna shant kyu hai"

sabhi ki najar Disha par padti hai aur sab ek smile pass karti hai

Aarushi : kuch nahi di..ese hi..aap khadi kyu hai baithye na

Disha aake baith jaati hai..aur ghar ka naukar use pani serve karta hai aur fir chala jata hai

Disha iss sithi ko achi tarah se samaj rahi thi..aur use pata tha ki agar yeh sab ese hi chup rahe toh baad me inhe sambhal na bahut muskil ho jayega khaskar ke Aanchal aur Aarushi ki

Disha Aaruhsi ko dekhti hai aur use lagta hai ki jese vo kuch soch rahi hai "Aaru..itni tensed kyu hai..aur kya soch rahi hai..??"

Aarushi "kuch nahi di..ese hi"

Disha Aarushi ka kaan pakadte hue "hmm..acha toh ab tu mere se bhi baate chupayegi..??"

Aarushi thoda dard ke mare chillate hue "aaaaahhhh..di please chodo na..dard ho raha hai, mai batati hu"

Disha uska kaan chod deti hai "ha bol ab"

Aaurshi : Di..mai soch rahi thi ki uss kamine ke karan jo hamre reputation kharab hui hai..use muje thik karna hi hoga..varna Dad ki pure life ki mehnat pani me chali jayegi

Disha : hmm..ha yeh toh hai..toh tune kya socha hai..??

Aarushi : mai abse office jaungi..aur muje aapk help chahiye di

Disha : dekh Aaru..mai janti hu yeh karna bahut jaruri hai..par isse teri study pe nuksan hoga..toh tu yeh sab abhi sochna band kar de..uske bina bhi toh factory chal hi rahi thi na..aur Rohit uncle haina..vo sab sambhal lenge

tabhi Rohit ghar ke andar aata hai aur kahta hai

Rohit : ha beta..Disha sahi keh rahi hai..mai sambhal lunga..tum fikar na karo

Rohit..yeh shaks Malhotra's company ka Executive Manager hai..jo uss waqt se iss company me juda hai jabse yeh company shuru hui thi
vo Aarushi ko apni beti manta tha..kyunki uski koi aulad nahi thi..aur iss baat se Aarushi ya kisi aur ko bhi koi problem nahi thi

Aarushi khadi hoti hai aur "thanks Uncle..agar aap nahi hote toh"

Rohit uski baat ko kaat te hue "are isme thanks kesa..aur yeh factory meri hai..jo kuch bhi kar raha hu mai apne liye hi toh kar raha hu..aur mai yeh kehne aaya tha ki factory ki tum fikar na karo..mai sab sambhal lunga"

uske baad Rohit aur Aarushi ki kuch baate hoti hai company ke related..aur fir Rohit vaha se chala jata hai

Disha "ab toh khush haina meri gudiya..dekh ab mai teri help ek hi shart pe karungi"

Aarushi vo sawaliya najro se kahti hai "kesi shart di..??"

Disha : yahi ki tu ab pehle vali gudiya bankar rahegi aur hamesa khush rahegi..tu esi chup chup si achi nahi lagti

Aarushi thoda udas hote hue "par di yeh kese..mai yeh nahi kar sakti ab"

Disha : vo ma kuch nahi janti..varna mai ab firse naraj ho jaunga

Aarushi : nahi nahi di..okay mai try karungi

Disha : hmm..that's good girl

tab Vidhi achanak se bol padti hai "di..please Anu ko samjaye..vo kal se roye jaa rahi hai..aur yaha tak ki usne khana pina bhi chod diya hai"

Disha Vidhi ki baat ko sunti hai aur fir use Anu ka bhi khayal aata hai

Aarushi : uski fikar na kar..use mai dekhti hu
aur vo Anu ke kamre ki aur chali jaati hai..vo door ko knock karti hai..thodi der me door open ho jaata hai

vo Anu ki halat ko dekhkar thoda chaunk jaati hai..sirf Aarushi hi nahi vaha maujud har ek shaks chaunk jata hai aur unki aankhe bhi nam ho jati hai
iss waqt Anu ki halat kharab thi..ro ro ke aankhe suj gai thi..uske baal bikhre hue the..aur kapde bhi sahi nahi thi..koi chota bacha bhi use dekhkar keh sakta hai ki vo bahut roi hai

Aarushi use apne gale lagate hue "yy.yyeh tt..tune apni kya halat bana rakhi hai..??"

Anu uski kahi hui  baato ka koi jawab nahi deti..vo bas mudkar apne bed ki aur jane lagti hai..tabhi Aarushi uska haath pakad leti hai

Aarushi "Anu tu ese ro rokar apni life barbad kar degi..aur mai tuje ese nahi dekh sakti..janti hu iss waqt tujpar kya beet rahi hai..par tu uss kamine ke liye apni life kyu barbad kar rahi hai..tuje usse bhi acha koi mil jayega"

Anu ko Aarushi ki baat pe bahut tej gussa aata hai..aur vo mudkar ek tej thappad mar deti hai
Anu gusse me chillate hue "tune yeh socha bhi kese ki mai ab kisi aur ko mere life me aane dungi..aur tu apni bhai ko gali de rahi hai..usne bachpan se tuje pala hai..hamesa tera khayal rakha hai..har waqt tera saaya bankar raha hai..aur tu vo sab bhul gai..yaad hai college ka pehla din..usne kya saha tha tere liye..tu kese bhul sakti hai vo sab"

Anu apne pyaar ke khilaf ek shabd bhi nahi sun sakti thi..aur yaha toh Aarushi ne uske pyaar ko gali di thi..toh fir vo kese chup rah sakti thi..tabhi Disha bich me bol padti hai..uski ankhe bhi lal ho chuki thi nafrat ki vajah se

Disha "aur usne jo mere bhai ke saath kiya vo kya tha..?? kyu kiya usne aisa uske saath..vo toh dost tha na uska..fir kyu mara use..??"

Anu Disha ki baat sunkar shant ho jati hai aur vapis ane bed par jaake baith jaati hai
Disha fir uske pass jaake baith jaati hai aur Anu uske gale lag jaati hai aur firse rone lagti hai

Disha usko chup karate hue "Anu jo kuch bhi hua use bhul ja..abhi tere samne teri puri life padi hai..use ek bura sapna samaj ke bhul jaa..yeh tu bhi janti hai ki kisi ke jane se lfe nahi rukti, mai yeh nahi keh rahe vo tuje pyaar nahi karta tha..par vo tere pyaar ke kabil nahi tha"
ek samay Disha khud soch me pad jaati hai ki jo insan itna sab kuch kar sakta hai vo khuni kese ho sakta hai..par usne khud dekha tha use haath me chaku pade hue
uski aankho ke samne vo manjar aa jata hai jab usne apne bhai ko dekha tha, vo mara hua tha aur Malhotra ke haath me chaku tha aur uske haatho me khun laga hua tha

Aarushi Anu ke pass baithte hue "Anu..didi sahi keh rahi hai..tu khud ko waqt de..dhire dhire sab kuch thik ho jayega"

tabhi Disha ko iss mahol ko halka karne ke liye kuch shararat sujti hai aur vo kahti hai "are kai dino se mene Mr. Flirty ko dekha nahi hai..?? kaha hai vo"

Disha ki baat sunkar Vidhi thoda chidh jaati hai "hoga kahi pe flirt kar raha hoga kisi ke saath..muje kya..??"

Disha palak ki aur dekhte hue aankh mar deti hai "par Vidhi mene toh tujse nahi Palak se pucha tha" sab log iss baat par hasne lagte hai

Ritz "di aapne toh uss mall vale din ki yaad dila di"

Disha  haste hue "hahahaha..ha vo din toh kese bhul sakti hu..vese Vidhi uss din toh kamal kar diya tha tune"
ek aur baar sabke thaha ko ki awaaz gunj uthti hai

Vidhi aur bhi chidte hue "didi..kya aap bhi vo uss waqt ki baat alag thi..aur vese bhi ab vo pehle jesa nahi raha"

Palak "acha ji..toh madam abhi aap ne aisa kyu kaha ki vo kisi ke sath flirt kar raha hoga"

aur fir vapis sab log jor jor se hasne lagte hai..yaha tak ki Anu bhi thoda has deti hai..aur yeh dekhkar sab log khush ho jate hai

Vidhi thoda hadbada jaati hai aur "didi..vo.voov"

Ritz "Di aap samji kuch..??" disha na me apna sar hilati ha "offo..kya di aap bhi..Vidhi ko jalan ho rahi hai kyunki Vivek sahi me kisi aur ke saath flirt kar raha hai..usse bhi khubsurat ladkiyo ke saath"

Vidhi gusse se "Ritzi..ruk abhi batati hu tuje toh" kehte hue vo Ritz ke piche bhagti hai aur Ritz usse bachne ke liye

Ritz bhagte hue "are sorry yaar..masti kar rahi thi mai toh"

Palak : dekho ab madam ko uske khilaf ek shabd bhi sunnana pasand nahi hai
aur sab log jor jor se hasne lagte hai

Vidhi Palak ki baat sunkar ruk jaati hai "ha toh..mai usse pyaar karti hu..aur mai janti hu vo ab sudhar chuka hai..aur tu kyu itna bol rahi hai"

ese hi sabke bich me masti chalne lagti hai..jo iss waqt bahut jaruri thi

Dhire dhire waqt biita ta gaya..aur saath me log iss ghatna ko bhi bhulne lage
Aarushi ab iss Mansion ki malkin ban chuki thi..Aarushi ke saath Anu, Disha aur uska pura family rehne aa chuka tha..vo sab bhi ab uss ghatna ko dhire dhire bhulne lage the

par sabse jyada muskil Anu ke liye ho raha tha..vo iss baat ko abhi tak nahi man pai thi..vo upar se toh dikha rahi thi ki vo ab sambhal chuki hai..par vo har pal ro rahi thi apne pyaar ke liye

Aarushi ko iss baat ka andaza tha..par use lag raha tha ki Anu dhire dhire khud ko sambhal legi

waqt badhta gaya..aur inn sab ki life bhi ab pehle ke jese chalne lagi
sablog apni college life ko enjoy kar rahe the..sivay Anu ke..par vo apne dosto ke liye unke saath raha karti thi aur upar se dikha deti ki vo khush hai
unn sab ka party karna, movies mall me jana bhi chalu ho chuka tha

ese hi 6 mahine beet gaye aur inn sab ki life aage chalti rahi

par koi tha jiske liye aane vala waqt bahut hi kharab tha..kaun hai vo..aur kya hoga uske saath..janne ke liye saath bane rahiye

Actual Story now begins..with thrill, love and lots of suspence


To be continued...


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Re: Murder..Gehri Sajish
« Reply #29 on: June 21, 2016, 06:58:41 pm »
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Re: Murder..Gehri Sajish
« Reply #30 on: August 08, 2016, 10:32:05 pm »
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Re: Murder..Gehri Sajish
« Reply #31 on: September 06, 2016, 01:59:48 am »
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