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2 Premi
« on: January 15, 2017, 12:17:36 am »
Ajj phir Zebo Naain  uska sandesa(paighaam) le kar aai aur mein ne usse phir bola keh  usse saaf lafzon mein bol de keh yeh nammkanat mein se hai , jo ho hi nahein sakta uss baare sochna hi bekar hai  mere liye zebo Javaid ka paigham aik hafta se rozana la rahi thi . Javed  London plat 40 saala hamari biradri se hi taluq rakhta hai . Asal mein 20 saal pehle uss se meri mangni hoi thi aur jaisa keh app sab jante hein keh mangni ki wajeh se larki aur larke ka taluq sa qaim ho jata hai aur woh aik doosre ko mustaqbel ka sathi samjhte hooye aik doosre se piyar karne lagte hein . khasoosan larkiya tu usko apna ranjhan bana leiti hein . mera bhi yahi haal tha . Javed ka naam ate hi dil ki dharkanein taiz ho jati thein .raat ko sone se pehle uss se bahut sari kheyali batein karna aur khawabon mein us ka ana. Pind mein khandan ke log sab aik doosre se milte hi rehte hain ,magar mangni ke baad mangetron ka apni mangetar se milna ya baat karna mahyub samjha jata tha ab tu halat badal gay hein magar jab hamara waqt tha tu bahut si restrictions thein . javed ne Zebo jo uss waqt kanwari thi aur mere sath uss ki acchi banti thi , ke hathon ruqah jat bhejna shuroo kar diye . shuroo mein tu mein ne jawab nah diya magar zebo ne bataya keh javed bahut piyar karta hai tum se aur jab jawab nahein deiti ho woh bahut udas ho jata hai . aik baar uss ne apne khoon se muhaabat nama mujhe bheja . mujhe bahut afsoos hoa keh dil mein usse chahte hoye bhi kitni kathore bani rahi , mein ne pehla mubbat naama hi apne khoon se likha . yun zebo hamare durmian paigham risaan ke liye kabootri bani rahi aur akher ham raat ko chori chuppe  milne bhi lage . magar achanak kissi choti si bat par hamari biradri mein ikhtelaaf hoa aur baat itni barhi keh huqqa pani band . javed ke waldain doosri parti ke sath thay aur jaisa keh hota hai keh khandan ki larrai mein, mein aur javed qurbani ka bakra ban gaey aur hamari mangni toot gai . ham dono ki jo halat honi thi woh biyan se baher hai . jab mangni toot jaay tu larki ke maa baap chahte keh jald se jald doosra rishta ho jaay takeh bachi ke liye log batein nah karte phirein . mere maan baap ne aik rishta dekha jo biradri ka tha magar hamari tarf tha . Javed ne mujhe aik paigham bheja keh mein ab yahn nahein rahonga kiunkeh jab tum nah mil saki tu yahn mera aur koi bhi nahein rah . woh 2 hafton ke andar hi karachi chala geya aur apni yaadein mere pas chor geya . wahn se woh kissi treh London chala geya . uss ke khabrein tu milti rehti thein . pind mein koi baat ho tu chuppi tu nahein rehti . phir kuch arsa baad hamari poori biradri mein sulah safaai ho gai magar jo chot mujhe ya javed ko lagi uss ka zakham hamesha rista hi rah . meri shadi ho gai  phir suna javed ne bhi wahn shadi kar li hai kissi gori se . uss shaam mein bahut roi aur dil mein thaan li keh ab javed ko kabhi yaad nahein karongi , magar sach tu yahi hai keh khud apne se chupp kar bhi mein usse yad karti rahi kabhi bhool nah paai thi mein ..........  haan wohi javed aik hafta pehle 20 salon ke baad pind wapis aya . suna uske 2 baite aur aik beiti hai . uski beevi ka inteqal ho geya hai . aur ab kuch arsa yahn rehne ke liye aya hai . usske maan baap dono faut ho chuke thay aur apni jaiedaad waghera ka bhi koi bandobast usse karna hoga . mere haan tu aulaad hoi nahein aur mera mard karachi mein kissi factory mein Gaurd ka kaam karta hai . shadi ke waqt woh pak army mein hawaldar tha magar uss ne waq se pehle hi retirement le li aur 6 mah baad karachi ja kar mulazmat kar li ....... pehle saas sussar thay woh bhi chaly gay tu ab akele ghar rehti thi . jab javed ke aane ka suna tu dil chah keh usse dekh loon keh kaisa lagta hoga ab , kitna tabdeel ho geya hoga . magar aurat ki majboori nah koi samajh saka nah hi koi samjh sake ga. meri majboori meri tooti hoi mangni mere aarre aa rahi thi. agarcheh iss mei javed ka koi qasoor nah tha  magar logon ko iss se koi gharz nahein hoti unke munh kaun band kar sakta hai ..... idher javed mujhe milne aur dekhne ke liye tarap rah tha . zebo uski halat batati tu uss ke jane ke baad mein pehron roti . yeh kheyal bhi satata keh mein ab kissi ki bevi hoon aik ghair admi ke baare sochna hi gunah hai magar sochon par kaun pehra bitha sakta hai yeh tu chori chori khud hi kahein se hamla karti hein . kai baar aisa hoa apne khawand ke sath sote hoye jab woh mere andar hota tu sochon aur kheyalon mein javed ki goad  mein hoti . yeh bhi tu cheeting hi hai.
Zebo chali jati tu mein sochne lag jati keh javed agar milna chahta hai aur mein bhi usse dekhne ko bechain hoon tu kiun nah hum milein aik doosre kaa haal poochein jo beeti tan aur mann par woh bantein magar . iss magar ka mere paas koi jawab nah tha... Ajj bhi zebo ko mein ne jawab de kar bheja tu woh bari mayus ho kar kene lagi seemo aik bar usse mil laine mein kitya harj hai kissi ko pata hi nahein chale ga. tu mein ne usse kah dekho yahi tu mein nahein chahti chori chuppe milna kabhi chupp kar nahein reh sakta aur phir chand charhta hai tu kul alam dekhta hai .phir rukte hoye kah woh khud kiun nahein ajata  mere ghar milne ke liye .akher hai tu rista dar hi .....aur sath hi zebo ko bola keh yeh usse nah keh deina kahein . aur uss se promise bhi liya keh yeh baat tum javed se nahein karogi .uss ke jane ke baad mein dil girfta ho kar ansoo peene ki koshish karti rahi aik gaay rakhi hoi thi usse pani pilaya aur  chara dal kar hamsai ke pass time pass karne ko chali gai . shaam ko ghar aai aur khana dupehr ka bana hoa hi kha kar so gai. doosre din din 9 baje ko kissi ne darwaza khatkataya aur mein samjhi hamsaai koi cheez mangne aai hogi . darwaza khola tu samne javed khara tha .usse apne darwaze par dekh kar shashdar reh gai . usse dekha ja rahi kuch bol hi nah saki yun laga mujhe bolna tu ata hi nahein mein hairani se usse dekhne mein mehve thi  keh woh bola seemo andar aane ke liye nah kahogi  . mein ne  jhat darwaze ke  samne se hat kar  javed ko andar aane ke liye rasta diya aur darwaz band kar ke aage aage chalti hoi usse waranday mein le aai aur charpai par baithne ke liye ishara kiya . woh jab baith geya tu mein bhi uss ke samne moorahe  par baith gai . sar uss ne bhi jhuka rakha tha aur himat  mujh mein  bhi nah  thi keh uss  ki taraf dekh pati . kuch der baad jab meri siskiyan oonchi ho gein tu javed bola "seemo"  uski bhi rundhi hi awaz sun kar sar utha kar uski trf dekha aur ansoon ki jhari wahn bhi lagi dekhi .   mein pagli bhool hi gai thi keh koi chaay paani bhi poochna hai . mein jaldi se uthi usse pani diya aur rasoi mein ja kar chahy banane lagi . usse chahy di khud bhi pii . woh kafi der baitha rah aur phir jane ke liye utha . nah woh kuch keh saka itni der nah mein hi kuch kehne ke qabil thi . hum ro rahe thay magar  aik doosre ko tasssali dene ke liye alfaaz bhi nahein thay  woh rumaal se moti  poonchta rah mein apne ansoo dupate ke hawale karti rahi . woh uth khara hoa mein usse kuch der aur rukne ko keh saki nah mein usse chorne darwaze tak  ja saki . aaji se pehle nah mein itni goongi thi nah meri tangein itni kamzor ....... usse jate hoye mein dekhti rahi darwaze se nikalte hoye bhi rumal nikaal kar uss ne apne ansoo poonche aur darwaza band karte mujh par alwidhahi nazar dalte aur chala geya .  mein oonchi awaz mein rooi jaise Vain kiye jate hein aur dharaam se uss charpai par gir gai  jahn woh baitha hoa tha .
Note .Dosto yeh meri apni story nahein magar yeh aik sacha waqeh hai jo hamare pind mein paish aaya . Dehati mahol aur rasam wa riwaj mein aise waqeaat aam hote hein . iss story ka anjaam bhi hai woh jald hi aap tak paunchaaongi . yeh aik sanjeeda story likhi ki try ki hai   Apki raay ka intezar rahe ga .
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2 Premi
« on: January 15, 2017, 12:17:36 am »

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Re: 2 Premi
« Reply #1 on: January 15, 2017, 08:12:06 am »
Hmmmmmm. Aik aur...... Shot in the right way.....

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« Reply #2 on: January 16, 2017, 10:20:29 am »
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Re: 2 Premi
« Reply #3 on: January 16, 2017, 11:56:52 am »

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Re: 2 Premi
« Reply #4 on: January 16, 2017, 08:40:31 pm »
uss din ke baad sema aur javed ka koi rabta nah ho saka magar taqreebat waghera ein woh aik doosre ko dekh leina hi kafi samajhte .taqreeban 6 months ke baad javed ne wapsi ki thani magar abhi uske jane mein 2 hafte thay . keh aik din achanak seema ke khawand ki dead body ghar ki dehleez par paunch gai .woh aik factory mein security guard ki job karta tha aur wahn usko naamahloom afard ne qatal kar diya . pind ke chand afrad uss ki body ko ghar le kar aay . gaaon mein tu koi telephone hi nah keh itlah ki jati lehaza seema aur pind walon ko uss waqt us saneha ka ilm hoa jab mayiat gghar paunch gai . bahut bar saneha tha seema ke liye . magar qudrat ko aisa hi manzoor tha. ab phir javed ne umeed laga li keh ho sakta hai seema uss ki ho jaay . Idat ke baad biradri ke zareah javed ne seema ko paighaam bheja aur biradri ke dabaao dalne par seema shadi ke liye razamand ho gai .un dono ki shadi  hogai aur javed usse London le kar chala geya . wahn seem se javed ke 2 baite aur aik baiti hai aur 2 premi ab bare prem ke sath zindag ka lutf utna rahe hein
 
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Re: 2 Premi
« Reply #5 on: January 16, 2017, 09:22:02 pm »
روحوں کے ملاپ کی کہانی۔ بہت شاندار

A man’s accusing finger always finds a woman.

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Re: 2 Premi
« Reply #6 on: January 16, 2017, 10:09:55 pm »
روحوں کے ملاپ کی کہانی۔ بہت شاندار
Thank you Munni jee for comments .

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Re: 2 Premi
« Reply #7 on: January 16, 2017, 10:40:45 pm »
Array seema ji yeh kiya kiya. abhi tou kahani ki ibtidaa hoi thi aur aap nay isko be dil ho ker aik afsanchay ki tarha sirf kahani ka plot byan ker ke khatam bhi ker diya... sahi kaha aap nay keh adult forum per non adult stories ko shayed log nahi parhtay.. laikin is wajha se aap apnay takhleeqi jauhar ko tou na bayen please... ab tou kion keh aap kahani ka drop scene de chukki tou iska poora veriosn shayed maza na de.. laikin part 1 parh ker yaqeenan aisa laga keh yeh humaray ird gird ki hi khani hay...humaray gali muhallay main gaun main baradriyon main aiay kai kirdar nazar aatay hayn. jahan do premi  kisi qaqya ya khandani jhagry ki bheent charh jatay hayn.. kaheen larka aur kahen larki is roag ko sari zindgi paal tay rehtay hayn aur kaheen dono... aapkay achootay andaaz e tehree s is khanai ko apnay rung se likhnay ki umeed thi magar ab shayed aap wapis apnay bold and daring romantic adut writing main laut gai ho... mein nay shayed pehlay bhi kaha tha aur ab bhi kehta hoon. aap apni takhleeqat ko thora katar byount ke saath apna majmooa ye takhleeqat publish karo... bahot saray loag aisay forums per nahee aa saktay laikin aapkay khamosh qadar daan hon gay.. iska yeh matlab nahi keh aap likhna chor do ya andaaz badal do.. you are awsome... and will be always awsome..... so please keep writing for us..
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« Reply #8 on: January 16, 2017, 10:49:28 pm »
روحوں کے ملاپ کی کہانی۔ بہت شاندار
no doubt...but.......................

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« Reply #9 on: January 17, 2017, 12:08:29 am »
Array seema ji yeh kiya kiya. abhi tou kahani ki ibtidaa hoi thi aur aap nay isko be dil ho ker aik afsanchay ki tarha sirf kahani ka plot byan ker ke khatam bhi ker diya... sahi kaha aap nay keh adult forum per non adult stories ko shayed log nahi parhtay.. laikin is wajha se aap apnay takhleeqi jauhar ko tou na bayen please... ab tou kion keh aap kahani ka drop scene de chukki tou iska poora veriosn shayed maza na de.. laikin part 1 parh ker yaqeenan aisa laga keh yeh humaray ird gird ki hi khani hay...humaray gali muhallay main gaun main baradriyon main aiay kai kirdar nazar aatay hayn. jahan do premi  kisi qaqya ya khandani jhagry ki bheent charh jatay hayn.. kaheen larka aur kahen larki is roag ko sari zindgi paal tay rehtay hayn aur kaheen dono... aapkay achootay andaaz e tehree s is khanai ko apnay rung se likhnay ki umeed thi magar ab shayed aap wapis apnay bold and daring romantic adut writing main laut gai ho... mein nay shayed pehlay bhi kaha tha aur ab bhi kehta hoon. aap apni takhleeqat ko thora katar byount ke saath apna majmooa ye takhleeqat publish karo... bahot saray loag aisay forums per nahee aa saktay laikin aapkay khamosh qadar daan hon gay.. iska yeh matlab nahi keh aap likhna chor do ya andaaz badal do.. you are awsome... and will be always awsome..... so please keep writing for us..
Chachu jan sab aap ki treh nahein sochte . iss forum per reader tu story ka woh part parhte hein jo jinsi milaap par mabni ho baqi story bhi koi mushkil se dekhta hoga ................ behr haal aap ka kah sar ankhon par ............. mein ne waqehi dil bardashta ho karstory ko khatam kiya aur aik happy ending mor de diya . ab aap ne kah tu not adult stories likhongi ............ magar abhi zip bhi khulni hai uss ke liye  mujhe agar yaqeen ho jaay keh computer band nah ho jaay tu likhna shuroo karo aur post karoon .......... mere sath aik aur masla hai mein agar story ke bare pehle se sochoon aur story ko kheyalon mein aage le jaaon tu mein likh nahein pati . kiunkeh mere jo jazbaat hote woh tu thande ho jate hein sochne se hi , iss liye jab likhne baithongi tu sath sath story khud bakhud chale gi .mein sochti nahein bas likhti jati hoonaur story acchi buri takhleeq ho jati .doosron ka tu pata nahein magar mere sath yeh problem hai keh mein story likhne se pehle khus se bhi discuss nahein karti ..........sorry app ka itna time le liya.....umeed hi mind nahein karein ge .

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Re: 2 Premi
« Reply #10 on: January 22, 2017, 01:25:36 am »
Array seema ji yeh kiya kiya. abhi tou kahani ki ibtidaa hoi thi aur aap nay isko be dil ho ker aik afsanchay ki tarha sirf kahani ka plot byan ker ke khatam bhi ker diya... sahi kaha aap nay keh adult forum per non adult stories ko shayed log nahi parhtay.. laikin is wajha se aap apnay takhleeqi jauhar ko tou na bayen please... ab tou kion keh aap kahani ka drop scene de chukki tou iska poora veriosn shayed maza na de.. laikin part 1 parh ker yaqeenan aisa laga keh yeh humaray ird gird ki hi khani hay...humaray gali muhallay main gaun main baradriyon main aiay kai kirdar nazar aatay hayn. jahan do premi  kisi qaqya ya khandani jhagry ki bheent charh jatay hayn.. kaheen larka aur kahen larki is roag ko sari zindgi paal tay rehtay hayn aur kaheen dono... aapkay achootay andaaz e tehree s is khanai ko apnay rung se likhnay ki umeed thi magar ab shayed aap wapis apnay bold and daring romantic adut writing main laut gai ho... mein nay shayed pehlay bhi kaha tha aur ab bhi kehta hoon. aap apni takhleeqat ko thora katar byount ke saath apna majmooa ye takhleeqat publish karo... bahot saray loag aisay forums per nahee aa saktay laikin aapkay khamosh qadar daan hon gay.. iska yeh matlab nahi keh aap likhna chor do ya andaaz badal do.. you are awsome... and will be always awsome..... so please keep writing for us..
Chachu jan sab aap ki treh nahein sochte . iss forum per reader tu story ka woh part parhte hein jo jinsi milaap par mabni ho baqi story bhi koi mushkil se dekhta hoga ................ behr haal aap ka kah sar ankhon par ............. mein ne waqehi dil bardashta ho karstory ko khatam kiya aur aik happy ending mor de diya . ab aap ne kah tu not adult stories likhongi ............ magar abhi zip bhi khulni hai uss ke liye  mujhe agar yaqeen ho jaay keh computer band nah ho jaay tu likhna shuroo karo aur post karoon .......... mere sath aik aur masla hai mein agar story ke bare pehle se sochoon aur story ko kheyalon mein aage le jaaon tu mein likh nahein pati . kiunkeh mere jo jazbaat hote woh tu thande ho jate hein sochne se hi , iss liye jab likhne baithongi tu sath sath story khud bakhud chale gi .mein sochti nahein bas likhti jati hoonaur story acchi buri takhleeq ho jati .doosron ka tu pata nahein magar mere sath yeh problem hai keh mein story likhne se pehle khus se bhi discuss nahein karti ..........sorry app ka itna time le liya.....umeed hi mind nahein karein ge .

seema ji pehli bat to ye ke ap ki baton se kabhi bhi waqat barbad nahen hota to is liyeh aap to jitna ziyada likhen utna hi acha hota he for me at etleast . dosri bat is bat par main 200% agree hon ke jo bat or jo alfaz pehli dafa main nikalty hen voh 2nd time main naheen likhey ja sakty just abhi kuch din pehly beena20 ney kaha ke puri story likhi or miss ho gai or phir unhonney voh story nahen likhi or main ney un se kaha bhi naheen kyon ke i know voh bat 2nd time aati hi nahen jo pehli dafa main aati he is liyeh even jab main aap ki terheren parh raha hota hon to bhi is bat ka mukamal khyal rakhta hon ke aik to pury itmenan se parhon or dosry parhty ke sath hi us ka answer bhi kar don kyon ke dubara main voh maza hi nahen hota likhny ka jo live main he :)

to is liyeh aap achi achi chezen likhti rahen or vese hi likhti rahen jesi aap likhti hen chahy adult hon ya non adult ya poetry :)

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