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Dard-E-Mohabat
« on: April 18, 2017, 09:59:22 am »
hi frnds this is mu first experition

so agar mujhse meening mistake ho to plz don't mind

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Dard-E-Mohabat
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Re: Dard-E-Mohabat
« Reply #1 on: April 18, 2017, 10:21:07 am »
Bejan dil ko tere ishq ne zinda kiya
fir tere ishq ne hi is dil ko tabah kiya



tadap tadap ke is dil se ah nikalti rhi
mujhko saja di pyar ki aisa kya gunah kiya jo lut gaye ha lut gaye
to lut gaye hum tere mohabat me (3 bar repeat)

ajab hai ishq yara
pal do pal ki khusiyan
gum ke khajane milte hai fir milti hai tanhaiya
kabhi anshu kabhi aahe
kabhi shikwe kabhi lale
tera chehra nazar aaye
tera chehra nazar aaye mujhe din ke ujalo me
teri yaade tadpaye
tri yade tadpaye rato ke andhero me tera chehra nazar aye
machal machal ke is dil se ah nikalti rhi
mujko saja di pyar ki aisa kya gunah kiya to lut gaye ha lut gaye to lut gaye ham teri mohabat me


agar mile khuda to puchuga khudaya
jishm mujhe deke mitti ka sise sa dil kyo banaya
aur uspe diya fitrat ki wo karta hai mohabat
wah re wah teri kudrat
wah re wah teri kudrat uspe de diya kismat
kabhi hai milan kabhi furkat
kabhi hai milan kabhi furkat hai yehi kya wo mohabat
wah re wah teri kudrat
sisak sisak ke is dil se ah nikalti rhi aisa

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Re: Dard-E-Mohabat
« Reply #1 on: April 18, 2017, 10:21:07 am »

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Re: Dard-E-Mohabat
« Reply #2 on: April 18, 2017, 10:27:36 am »
kya gunah kiya jo lut gaye ha lut gaye
to lut gaye ham teri mohabat me
tadap tapad ke is dil se ah nikalti rhi
mujhko saja di pyar ki
aisa kya gunahkiya jo lut gaye ha lut gaye
to lut gaye ham teri mohabat me

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frnds update approval ke bad dunga


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Re: Dard-E-Mohabat
« Reply #3 on: April 18, 2017, 10:30:43 am »
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Re: Dard-E-Mohabat
« Reply #4 on: April 18, 2017, 09:40:02 pm »



hello frnds
mera nam samir khan hai
ye story meri jindgi ki kahani ka ek hissa hai
jo mai aplogo ko sunane ja raha hu

introduction

1-mere abbu...mastan(sher khan) age-44 years
2-meri ammijan...naziya begum age-42 years
3-mai samir khan apne khandan ka eklauta waris age-21 years

4-chachu...shamim khan age-42
5-chachijaan...fatima begum age-40
6-meri jan chachu ki beti ayesha parveen(nuri) age-19

ye kahani hai meri or me cousin sis ayesha ka

mai apko batana bhul gaya mere mom dad ki intkal ho chuki hai fir v unka intro diya hai



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Re: Dard-E-Mohabat
« Reply #5 on: April 18, 2017, 09:43:55 pm »
ab update aproval ke bad dunga
aprov karne me bahut time liya ja rha hai

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Re: Dard-E-Mohabat
« Reply #6 on: April 19, 2017, 07:14:54 am »
update-1
mai or meri cousin sis ayesha college ja rhe the
collage pahuchne ke bad ham apne apne class me chale gaye
launch ke bad ham canteen me baithe the
ki mere clss ki ek khubsurat si ladki
hamare pass aa ke ruki or mera hath pakad kar boli
sobi(ladki ka nam)...samir mujhe tumse kuchh kehna hai

samir...bolo
sobi...kaise kahu samajh me nhi aa rha hai
samir...jo bolna hai bina dar ke bolo
sobi...samir wo wo i love u
samir...kya
sobi...i love u so much
samir...ye kya bakwas hai mane tumhe aisi nazar se kabhi nhi dekha
maine sirf tumhe ek dost mana hai sorry sobi
sobi...it's ok
aayesha jo ab tak chup chap baithi thi usne mera hath pakada or bahar ki or le jane lagi
samir..kya hua
ayesha...chaliye mere sath mujhse apse bat karni hai
samir... To bahar jane ki kya jarurat hai yehi bolo
aayesha...nhi plz aap chalo
samir...thik hai yar chalta hu hath to chodo
fir usne mera hath chhod diya
or ham apni car se nikal pade ek park ki or

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Re: Dard-E-Mohabat
« Reply #7 on: April 19, 2017, 07:37:27 am »
park pahuch kar ham ek ped ke niche baith gaye
samir... Bolo nuri kya bat hai
nuri...aap ne sobi ke perposel ko kyu thukraya ko kyo thukraya
samir...iase hi tu kyo puch rhi ho
nuri...thik kiya jo aapne thukra diya
samir...kyo
nuri...agar apne sobi ko bola hota to mera kya hota
samir...kya matlab
nuri...bhaiya i love u so much
samir...kya tum pagal ho gayi ho tum janti ho tum kya bol rhi ho
nuri... Ha pata hai or mai aaj se nhi bachpan se aapse pyar karti hu
samir...aisa nhi ho sakta
nuri...kyo kya kharabi hai isme
samir...dekho nuri maine tumhe kabhi aise rup se nhi dekha
nuri...mujhe kuchh nhi pata agar apne mujhe nhi apnaya to mai mar jaungi
samir...nuri aisi bat mat kar plz
nuri...to boliye na aap v mujhse pyar karte hai
samir...mujhe time chahiye
nuri... Thik hai bhaiya lekin yaad rakhna apke ek ha ya na par meri zindgi ki faisla hai
samir thik hai ab chal college

fir ham waha se college gaye or uske bad ghar

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Re: Dard-E-Mohabat
« Reply #8 on: April 19, 2017, 08:11:59 am »
ghar pahuchne ke bad mai yehi sochta rha ki kya karu or kya na fir maine agle din use usi park me le gaya

or usko i love u 2 bola wo khusi ke mare mere gale lag gayi

aise hi hamara pyar ka rishta chalta raha fir wo din v aa gaya jab mujhe usse dur hona pada
hua ye ki usko uske mama ke ghar jana pada
or jab wo wapas aayi to mere liye us din ki tahar or koi kala din na tha

wo jab aayi to mai college gaya tha
jab mai college se aya to use dekh kar meri khusi ka thikana na raha
lekin ye khusi pal do pal ke the
jaise hi maine use gale lagana chaha usne mujhe dhaka diya mujhe samajh me nhi aaya ki hua kya hai
jab mai dobara gale lagane pahucha to usne mujhe roka or boli khabar dar jo mere pass aaye
ye sun mere pairo tale jamin hi nikal gayi usdin ke bad mai hamesa kosis karta rha ki usse bat karu magar usne mujhe kabhi moka hi nhi diya or isi tarah din nikalta raha

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Re: Dard-E-Mohabat
« Reply #9 on: April 19, 2017, 08:24:27 am »
isi tarah din bitate gaye mujhe pata v na chala ki aakhi meri galti kya hai

fir maine police ka form apply kiya or usme mera selection ho gaya

mai roj nuri ko call karta taki usse bat ho sake lekin koi fayda nhi hota
fir ekbar 1 mahine ki chuti par aya to pata chala ki nuri ki sadi hone wali hai
mai to ye sun ke ek barf ke khambe ki tarah jam gaya tha
mujhe vishwash nhi ho rha tha ki aisa bhi kymuchh ho shakta hai

or mai rat bhar yehi sochta emraha ki akhir meri galti kya hai jo mujhe aisi saja mili
or mai rat bhar rota rha
ye mera routin ban gaya tha roj rat ko rona din me normal hone ka jhuta dikhawa karna

aise hi meri jindgi ki rani mujhse dur ho gayi or mai wapas apne job ke liye ghar se nikal gaya apne police station me

yehi thi meri pyar ki dastan


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Re: Dard-E-Mohabat
« Reply #10 on: April 19, 2017, 08:29:57 am »
ye thi meri first expreance

thoda short me likha hu lekin kya karu uss ghatna ko sochta hu to mai pagal ho jata hu isliye short me hi likha hai
waise v mai koi profecnal writer nhi hu so jo galti hue hai uske liye i m sorry
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Re: Dard-E-Mohabat
« Reply #11 on: April 19, 2017, 12:01:30 pm »
bohat achi koshish hai


aese hi mazeed kahaniyaan likhney ki koshish karo,


haan agar kahani k har 1 pehlo ko bohat tafseel se likho gaye to aap bohat ache writer ban saktey hain. ye just mera khiyaal hai. waise aap ne achi kahani likhi hai.


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