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Re: Dard-E-Mohabat
« Reply #12 on: April 19, 2017, 12:12:43 pm »
thanks sm bro
pehli bar likha tha na to aise hi sab kuchh short me likha hai

age puri koshish karunga ke details me likh saku

thank u so much sm

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« Reply #12 on: April 19, 2017, 12:12:43 pm »

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Re: Dard-E-Mohabat
« Reply #13 on: April 23, 2017, 02:38:19 pm »
nice story if you do more work at this story, then it's got a huge numbers of comments and likes.
any ways excellent story dear loveboy :-*

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« Reply #13 on: April 23, 2017, 02:38:19 pm »

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Re: Dard-E-Mohabat
« Reply #14 on: April 23, 2017, 02:38:51 pm »
bohat achi koshish hai


aese hi mazeed kahaniyaan likhney ki koshish karo,


haan agar kahani k har 1 pehlo ko bohat tafseel se likho gaye to aap bohat ache writer ban saktey hain. ye just mera khiyaal hai. waise aap ne achi kahani likhi hai.


is koshish k liye mein aap ko rep+1 deta hoon...
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« Reply #15 on: April 23, 2017, 07:24:12 pm »
Thank u so much dear maryam

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Re: Dard-E-Mohabat
« Reply #16 on: April 23, 2017, 07:27:26 pm »
thanks sm bro
pehli bar likha tha na to aise hi sab kuchh short me likha hai

age puri koshish karunga ke details me likh saku

thank u so much sm
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story likhne ka 1 raaz hamesha yaad rakhna...
jo b scene likho, fully likho...
q k fully likhney se aap ko maloom chaley ga k aap k likh saktey ho ya nahi...
waise ye aap ki pheli koshish thi is liye tension mat lain.
practice karne se hi story likhna aye gi dost
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Re: Dard-E-Mohabat
« Reply #17 on: April 23, 2017, 07:30:37 pm »
Yes sm bro
Pehle to socha tha long likhunga fir
Socha pehle short me likh lu
Bad me long likhenge

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Re: Dard-E-Mohabat
« Reply #18 on: April 23, 2017, 07:50:49 pm »
sahi socha... lekin next wali story jab likho tab story complete likh kar us k scene dobara se detail se likhna
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Re: Dard-E-Mohabat
« Reply #19 on: April 23, 2017, 08:21:56 pm »
Sm bro ye sirf trailer hai agla story yehi hoga
Wo pure details ke  sath thoda long hoga