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NUMBERDARNI
« on: December 26, 2017, 12:20:11 pm »
Hey Dosto  yeh meri first story hai jisse mein non adult section mein post karne ja rahi hoon  agarcheh iss mein kuch adult part bhi jo keh kahni ka markazi kheyal ya plot ke liy zaroori tha  iss liye  umeed hai aap ignore kar dein ge  umeed hai meri kawish ke bare bila takalaf raay dein ge aur criticle comments de kar mashwaron se zaroor nawazein ge ........  . kosshish hogi ghair zaroori  waqeaat se bachte hoye aik hi part mein story ko tamam kar sakoon . ..yeh tu aap jante hi hein mein story khud likhti hoon coppy nahein karti  iss liye ghalti salti ki zimadar bhi mein hoon ....   story kuch yun hai ........
Bila shubba janaza bahut bara tha .aik jame ghafeer umand aya tha aur uss waqt ke bahut bare janazon mein  shumaar kiya ja sakta tha . . Hashmat khan Numbdar ki baiti , Numberdar Azmat ali khan ki bahoo , Numberdar  Fateh Ali khan ki beevi aur numberdar Hasnaat ki maa ka janaza itna bara nah hota tu heirangi hoti . 60 saal duniya ke nashaib o fraaz se dekh ke  woh apni gor ki traf rawan doan thi .uss ke janaze ko bari bari sab hi kandha de rahe they magar Mansoor Khan Alwi  ne janaza uthate hoye jo painti ka paya pakara tha woh uss ne akher janaza gah tak pakre rakha kissi doosre ko badalne nah deiya . uski ankhon se ansoo rawan dawan thay aur issi treh  Mrhooma ka baita  Numberdar Hasnaat  Ali khan bhi zaro qatar ro rah tha. Sufia Fateh Ali Khan ne 60 sal pehle  Numberdar Hashmat khan ke ghar janam liya . woh akeli aulad hone ki wajeh se  laadli bhi thi jiss ke liye 2-2 khadmaein khidmat ke liye har waqt tiyar rehti thein . dolat ki rail pail ke sath sath qurat ne usse husan ki dolat se bhi mala maal kiya tha jo dekhta woh dekhta hi reh jata. abhi uneeswan nah laga tha Sufia ki apne cousin  Fateh Ali khan jo keh uske bachpan ka magetar aur  pass wale gaaon ke numbardar ka baith tha shadi hogai . Sufia 10 murabah jaheez mein laay thi jiss ka  gaaon mein bara charcha hoa aur Sufia ki apni aik shanakht ban gai . waise bhi woh hamdrad aur dostana tabiyat ki malik hone ke naate ghareebon kami logon mein bari pasandeeda shakhseiat thi . maike gaaon aur aur ab apne susrali gaaon mein usska aik maqam tha jiss ka  uss ko khud bhi ehsaas tha . shadi ke do saal ke baad uski goad hari hoi aur woh aik bairte ki maan ban gai jiss ka naam Hasnat Ali Khan rakha geya . shadi ke teesre saal uska susar Numberdar Azmat Ali Khan ke wafaat pane ke baad  numberdari uske baite Fateh Ali Khan ko muntaqil ho gai . uske baad usse Numberdarni kah jane laga aur aaj tak usse numberdarni kah jata rah . aur shaed aik 2 nasal mazeed numberdarni keh kar hi yaad kiya jata rahe . sufia kiss muamla mein lucky thi keh keh uska khawand jo keh shadi se pehle doosre zimeendaron ki treh har qism ke aibon mein mubtala tha . ne shadi ke baad koi aisi harkat nah ki jiss se Numberdarni Sufia ko koi takleef hoi ho . woh khud itni haseen aur khoobsorat thi keh uss ke samne kissi aur ki daal gal hi nah sakti thi . phir har treh ki ashaaesh aur befikri ne usse jinsi lehaaz se bhi jazbati had tak mutharak bana diya tha .  Fateh Ali Khan ne bhi uski jinsi zarooriyat ka poora sath de kar usse nehaal rakha . issi liye mian beevi ka piyar aik misaal ban geya tha . 5 saal pehle Fateh Ali Khan ka aik accident mein inteqaal ho geya aur Sufia bewa ho gai . Numberdari uske baite Hasnaat ali khan ko muntaqel ho gai . ab uski beevi numberdarni thi magar Sufia ko hi numberdarni kah aur sajha jata tha . dar asal maike aur susrali gaaon ke aas pass ke gaon bhi sufia ki sakhawat  hamdardi gham gsaar tabiyat ke muhtref thay ,aur uska aik aisa maqam ban chuka tha keh uska baita numberdar ho kar bhi kafi peeche tha. hkawand ki wafaat se pehle tak Sufia ne har treh ka sukh dekh rakha tha aur befikri ki zindagi guzari thi . magar khawand ke marne ke baad usse tanhai ka ehsaas hone laga aur uski hasbe mahmool jinsi talab apna taqaza karne ka jawaz dhoondhti . doosri shaadi ka sochna bhi muhaal tha aik tu rasam wa rawaj doosra uska social status iss ko iski ijazat hi nah de sakta tha. uss ne sabar karne ki than li magar yeh aik bahut sakht marhala tha jiss ke liye bahut tapasiah karni parti hai ... uss ne malesh ke zarea kamu Naein se madad li magar uske jism ki demon kuch aur thi . kabhi khud se khel kar aur kabhi kamo naein se molish karwa ke
aik masnoohi se taskeen hasel karne ke bad bhi woh piyasi rehti . din raat guzarte gay 3 saal hone ko thay . aur uski khusk khaiti abre bado baaran ke liye tars gai thi.
Aik subah uthi tu usse haweli mein  astabel mein aik neya fard nazar aya jo keh horse ki molish kar rah tha . woh usse dekhte hi jhuk sa geya aur pass aa kar Sufia ko salam kiya .
sufia uske tano mand badan  par nazar dalte hoye salam ka jawab diya  aur uss se poochne lagi
jawan tum ko pehli bar dekh rahi hoon tum kaun ho tumhein kiss ne mulazmat ke liye rakha hai .
Numbardarni jii mera naam Mansoor Khan Alwi hai . aur mein mulazim nahein hoon.  mujhe NUmberdar Hasnaat kha n ke dost ne silanwali se kuch din mehman ke taur bheja hai ........... oh acha accha . hasnat ne muhe bataya tha tumhare bare mein koi police ka chakar hai shaed khair tum be fikar ho kar raho agar koi takleef ya shakaeyat ho tu hasnaat ya mujh se keh dena . kissi qism ki preshani ki zaroorat nahein . woh uss ke kasarti jism par bharpoor nazar dalte hoye aage barh gai . aur ussi ke bare sochne lagi . dar asal mansoor Alwi hasnaat ke dost jo bara zameendar tha ka khas admi tha jiss ne 2 qatal kiye aur maqtool khandan aur police ab uske peeche thay magar zameendar aik doosre ki maddad karte rehte hein . ab Hasnat Ali Khan ne  Mansoor Alwi ko panah de di tthi . jab takkeh muamla thanda nahein ho jata Mansoor ne yahein rehna tha. waqt urta rah Sufia ki jism ki piyas barhti ja rahi thi magar woh har aise qadam uthane mar jana behtar sajhti thi keh jiss se woh badnaam ho jaay.
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NUMBERDARNI
« on: December 26, 2017, 12:20:11 pm »

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Re: NUMBERDARNI
« Reply #1 on: December 26, 2017, 12:20:30 pm »
ho sakta hai kuch arsa baad woh iss masla par qaboo pa laiti magar Mansoor ki bharpoor jawani  dekh kar jinsi taqaza shadeed hogeya tha .  Mansoor ko mulazmeen ke kamron mein se aik kamra mil geya tha jo uski zarooriyat ke liye kafi tha . waise bhi woh shadi shuda tu tha nahein 28 saal ka jawan har waqt apni moonchon ko taao deta rehta . uski tabiyat aur awaz khurdari thi magar uski muskrahat bsbari zalim thi. aisa nahein tha keh woh khushk tabiya ka ho , nahein woh ashiq mizaj aur dil phaik bhi tha .Sufia choonkeh uss par nazar rakhti thi  iss liye kai bar uss ne Mansoor konaukraniun ke sath muzaq karte aur flirting karte ekh rakha tha magar jab bhi woh Sufia ke samne ata tu woh ba adab ho jata aur sufia ke liye koi chara kar nah reh jata keh woh ankh utha kar nah dekhe usse kaise warghalay ya seduce kare . woh apne aap se awazar hoti ja rahi thi aur uski chirchirahat ka andaza bhi sab ko hota ja rah tha . log umar ka taqaza samjhte rahe .aur Sufia apni aag mein khud hi jalti rahi . subah sawere horse ki malesh Mansoor ne apne zima laga rakhi thi kiunkeh woh
ghoron ko pasand karta tha.  aur uss waqt uske muscle dekhne ke liye Sufia bhi zaroor astable mein aati  aur chand aik batein uss se zaroor kart aur thandhi ahein bharti chali jati ..... aik din ussne mur kar dekha tu Mansoor ko apni tarf bare ghor se dekhte paya .aur
bare maan se chalti hoi zanan khane mein dakhel ho gai
usse uss ka dekhna bahut accha laga tha aur umeed ki shama bhi roshen hoi . Sufia uss din bahut khush rahi aur ghar ke naukar chaker bhi. raat ko bed par laiti tu Mansoor ki nighahon ka hasawar ne usse bekal kard iya woh kheyal jhatak deiti tu wohi ankhein roshandan se  jhankne lagtin wahan se nazrein churati tu woh khirki se dekhne lagtei . issi treh Sufia   so gai aur pehli  bar Mansoor ko khwab mein bhi dekha. subah uthi tu uss ne muskarte hoye jawan larkiun ki treh angraai li aur hajat se faregh hone ke baad ussne balon ko kangha kar ke bal apne shano par bikhra diye uss ne aik tight si qameez pehn li aur ooper chader le kar astble ki tarf nikli . samne
Mansoor hasbe mahmool horse ko molish mein masroof tha. woh apne dhiyan mein molish kar rah tha keh chadar ka paloo girate hoye Sufia ne larkhrane ki acting ki aur mansoor ne jaldi se aage barh kar Sufia ko sanbhal liya iss treh se keh uska aik hath sufiya ki kamar mein tha aur doosre hath mein uska bazo . Mansoor isko haqeeqat samjha tha keh numberdarni girne lagi thi aur Sufia ne bhi
yahi tasur diya keh paaonko thokar lagi thi . Mansoor ghore ki malish ki badolat paseena paseena ho rah tha usske passeena ki mehk ne Sufia ko aur behka diya . Mansoor uski nazron ki tab nah late hoye neeche dekhne laga aur woh muskarti hoi shukriya kehte hoye chal di . woh thori si apne koolehy matkati hoi chalt chalte zanan khana ke darwaze se andar dakhel hote hoe wapisi nazar duraai tu mansoor koapi tarf dekhte hoye paaya . woh muskarti andar dakhel ho gai .aur ghusal khana mein uss ne apna libas tabdeel kiya , ghusal ka socha magar Mansoor ke passena ki mehk dhul jane ka soch kar irada maltawai kar diya  nashta se fareg ho kar saheliun ke sath gup shup jo rozmara ka mahmool tha mein waqt guzara ....
Kamo Naein ko bulwa kar  apne sare jism ki malish karwai aur phir sandal ke sabun ke sath ghusal kiya aur sara din hashash bashash rahi .
socha tha aik hi qist mein story mukamal kardongi . magar doosra part  likhna hi hoga . please apni raay zaroor dein ..   
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Re: NUMBERDARNI
« Reply #1 on: December 26, 2017, 12:20:30 pm »

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« Reply #2 on: December 26, 2017, 12:41:39 pm »
Hey Dosto  yeh meri first story hai jisse mein non adult section mein post karne ja rahi hoon  agarcheh iss mein kuch adult part bhi jo keh kahni ka markazi kheyal ya plot ke liy zaroori tha  iss liye  umeed hai aap ignore kar dein ge  umeed hai meri kawish ke bare bila takalaf raay dein ge aur criticle comments de kar mashwaron se zaroor nawazein ge ........  . kosshish hogi ghair zaroori  waqeaat se bachte hoye aik hi part mein story ko tamam kar sakoon . ..yeh tu aap jante hi hein mein story khud likhti hoon coppy nahein karti  iss liye ghalti salti ki zimadar bhi mein hoon ....   story kuch yun hai ........
Bila shubba janaza bahut bara tha .aik jame ghafeer umand aya tha aur uss waqt ke bahut bare janazon mein  shumaar kiya ja sakta tha . . Hashmat khan Numbdar ki baiti , Numberdar Azmat ali khan ki bahoo , Numberdar  Fateh Ali khan ki beevi aur numberdar Hasnaat ki maa ka janaza itna bara nah hota tu heirangi hoti . 60 saal duniya ke nashaib o fraaz se dekh ke  woh apni gor ki traf rawan doan thi .uss ke janaze ko bari bari sab hi kandha de rahe they magar Mansoor Khan Alwi  ne janaza uthate hoye jo painti ka paya pakara tha woh uss ne akher janaza gah tak pakre rakha kissi doosre ko badalne nah deiya . uski ankhon se ansoo rawan dawan thay aur issi treh  Mrhooma ka baita  Numberdar Hasnaat  Ali khan bhi zaro qatar ro rah tha. Sufia Fateh Ali Khan ne 60 sal pehle  Numberdar Hashmat khan ke ghar janam liya . woh akeli aulad hone ki wajeh se  laadli bhi thi jiss ke liye 2-2 khadmaein khidmat ke liye har waqt tiyar rehti thein . dolat ki rail pail ke sath sath qurat ne usse husan ki dolat se bhi mala maal kiya tha jo dekhta woh dekhta hi reh jata. abhi uneeswan nah laga tha Sufia ki apne cousin  Fateh Ali khan jo keh uske bachpan ka magetar aur  pass wale gaaon ke numbardar ka baith tha shadi hogai . Sufia 10 murabah jaheez mein laay thi jiss ka  gaaon mein bara charcha hoa aur Sufia ki apni aik shanakht ban gai . waise bhi woh hamdrad aur dostana tabiyat ki malik hone ke naate ghareebon kami logon mein bari pasandeeda shakhseiat thi . maike gaaon aur aur ab apne susrali gaaon mein usska aik maqam tha jiss ka  uss ko khud bhi ehsaas tha . shadi ke do saal ke baad uski goad hari hoi aur woh aik bairte ki maan ban gai jiss ka naam Hasnat Ali Khan rakha geya . shadi ke teesre saal uska susar Numberdar Azmat Ali Khan ke wafaat pane ke baad  numberdari uske baite Fateh Ali Khan ko muntaqil ho gai . uske baad usse Numberdarni kah jane laga aur aaj tak usse numberdarni kah jata rah . aur shaed aik 2 nasal mazeed numberdarni keh kar hi yaad kiya jata rahe . sufia kiss muamla mein lucky thi keh keh uska khawand jo keh shadi se pehle doosre zimeendaron ki treh har qism ke aibon mein mubtala tha . ne shadi ke baad koi aisi harkat nah ki jiss se Numberdarni Sufia ko koi takleef hoi ho . woh khud itni haseen aur khoobsorat thi keh uss ke samne kissi aur ki daal gal hi nah sakti thi . phir har treh ki ashaaesh aur befikri ne usse jinsi lehaaz se bhi jazbati had tak mutharak bana diya tha .  Fateh Ali Khan ne bhi uski jinsi zarooriyat ka poora sath de kar usse nehaal rakha . issi liye mian beevi ka piyar aik misaal ban geya tha . 5 saal pehle Fateh Ali Khan ka aik accident mein inteqaal ho geya aur Sufia bewa ho gai . Numberdari uske baite Hasnaat ali khan ko muntaqel ho gai . ab uski beevi numberdarni thi magar Sufia ko hi numberdarni kah aur sajha jata tha . dar asal maike aur susrali gaaon ke aas pass ke gaon bhi sufia ki sakhawat  hamdardi gham gsaar tabiyat ke muhtref thay ,aur uska aik aisa maqam ban chuka tha keh uska baita numberdar ho kar bhi kafi peeche tha. hkawand ki wafaat se pehle tak Sufia ne har treh ka sukh dekh rakha tha aur befikri ki zindagi guzari thi . magar khawand ke marne ke baad usse tanhai ka ehsaas hone laga aur uski hasbe mahmool jinsi talab apna taqaza karne ka jawaz dhoondhti . doosri shaadi ka sochna bhi muhaal tha aik tu rasam wa rawaj doosra uska social status iss ko iski ijazat hi nah de sakta tha. uss ne sabar karne ki than li magar yeh aik bahut sakht marhala tha jiss ke liye bahut tapasiah karni parti hai ... uss ne malesh ke zarea kamu Naein se madad li magar uske jism ki demon kuch aur thi . kabhi khud se khel kar aur kabhi kamo naein se molish karwa ke
aik masnoohi se taskeen hasel karne ke bad bhi woh piyasi rehti . din raat guzarte gay 3 saal hone ko thay . aur uski khusk khaiti abre bado baaran ke liye tars gai thi.
Aik subah uthi tu usse haweli mein  astabel mein aik neya fard nazar aya jo keh horse ki molish kar rah tha . woh usse dekhte hi jhuk sa geya aur pass aa kar Sufia ko salam kiya .
sufia uske tano mand badan  par nazar dalte hoye salam ka jawab diya  aur uss se poochne lagi
jawan tum ko pehli bar dekh rahi hoon tum kaun ho tumhein kiss ne mulazmat ke liye rakha hai .
Numbardarni jii mera naam Mansoor Khan Alwi hai . aur mein mulazim nahein hoon.  mujhe NUmberdar Hasnaat kha n ke dost ne silanwali se kuch din mehman ke taur bheja hai ........... oh acha accha . hasnat ne muhe bataya tha tumhare bare mein koi police ka chakar hai shaed khair tum be fikar ho kar raho agar koi takleef ya shakaeyat ho tu hasnaat ya mujh se keh dena . kissi qism ki preshani ki zaroorat nahein . woh uss ke kasarti jism par bharpoor nazar dalte hoye aage barh gai . aur ussi ke bare sochne lagi . dar asal mansoor Alwi hasnaat ke dost jo bara zameendar tha ka khas admi tha jiss ne 2 qatal kiye aur maqtool khandan aur police ab uske peeche thay magar zameendar aik doosre ki maddad karte rehte hein . ab Hasnat Ali Khan ne  Mansoor Alwi ko panah de di tthi . jab takkeh muamla thanda nahein ho jata Mansoor ne yahein rehna tha. waqt urta rah Sufia ki jism ki piyas barhti ja rahi thi magar woh har aise qadam uthane mar jana behtar sajhti thi keh jiss se woh badnaam ho jaay.
There is a broken heart behind every strong person.......

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Re: NUMBERDARNI
« Reply #3 on: December 26, 2017, 12:42:02 pm »
ho sakta hai kuch arsa baad woh iss masla par qaboo pa laiti magar Mansoor ki bharpoor jawani  dekh kar jinsi taqaza shadeed hogeya tha .  Mansoor ko mulazmeen ke kamron mein se aik kamra mil geya tha jo uski zarooriyat ke liye kafi tha . waise bhi woh shadi shuda tu tha nahein 28 saal ka jawan har waqt apni moonchon ko taao deta rehta . uski tabiyat aur awaz khurdari thi magar uski muskrahat bsbari zalim thi. aisa nahein tha keh woh khushk tabiya ka ho , nahein woh ashiq mizaj aur dil phaik bhi tha .Sufia choonkeh uss par nazar rakhti thi  iss liye kai bar uss ne Mansoor konaukraniun ke sath muzaq karte aur flirting karte ekh rakha tha magar jab bhi woh Sufia ke samne ata tu woh ba adab ho jata aur sufia ke liye koi chara kar nah reh jata keh woh ankh utha kar nah dekhe usse kaise warghalay ya seduce kare . woh apne aap se awazar hoti ja rahi thi aur uski chirchirahat ka andaza bhi sab ko hota ja rah tha . log umar ka taqaza samjhte rahe .aur Sufia apni aag mein khud hi jalti rahi . subah sawere horse ki malesh Mansoor ne apne zima laga rakhi thi kiunkeh woh
ghoron ko pasand karta tha.  aur uss waqt uske muscle dekhne ke liye Sufia bhi zaroor astable mein aati  aur chand aik batein uss se zaroor kart aur thandhi ahein bharti chali jati ..... aik din ussne mur kar dekha tu Mansoor ko apni tarf bare ghor se dekhte paya .aur
bare maan se chalti hoi zanan khane mein dakhel ho gai
usse uss ka dekhna bahut accha laga tha aur umeed ki shama bhi roshen hoi . Sufia uss din bahut khush rahi aur ghar ke naukar chaker bhi. raat ko bed par laiti tu Mansoor ki nighahon ka hasawar ne usse bekal kard iya woh kheyal jhatak deiti tu wohi ankhein roshandan se  jhankne lagtin wahan se nazrein churati tu woh khirki se dekhne lagtei . issi treh Sufia   so gai aur pehli  bar Mansoor ko khwab mein bhi dekha. subah uthi tu uss ne muskarte hoye jawan larkiun ki treh angraai li aur hajat se faregh hone ke baad ussne balon ko kangha kar ke bal apne shano par bikhra diye uss ne aik tight si qameez pehn li aur ooper chader le kar astble ki tarf nikli . samne
Mansoor hasbe mahmool horse ko molish mein masroof tha. woh apne dhiyan mein molish kar rah tha keh chadar ka paloo girate hoye Sufia ne larkhrane ki acting ki aur mansoor ne jaldi se aage barh kar Sufia ko sanbhal liya iss treh se keh uska aik hath sufiya ki kamar mein tha aur doosre hath mein uska bazo . Mansoor isko haqeeqat samjha tha keh numberdarni girne lagi thi aur Sufia ne bhi
yahi tasur diya keh paaonko thokar lagi thi . Mansoor ghore ki malish ki badolat paseena paseena ho rah tha usske passeena ki mehk ne Sufia ko aur behka diya . Mansoor uski nazron ki tab nah late hoye neeche dekhne laga aur woh muskarti hoi shukriya kehte hoye chal di . woh thori si apne koolehy matkati hoi chalt chalte zanan khana ke darwaze se andar dakhel hote hoe wapisi nazar duraai tu mansoor koapi tarf dekhte hoye paaya . woh muskarti andar dakhel ho gai .aur ghusal khana mein uss ne apna libas tabdeel kiya , ghusal ka socha magar Mansoor ke passena ki mehk dhul jane ka soch kar irada maltawai kar diya  nashta se fareg ho kar saheliun ke sath gup shup jo rozmara ka mahmool tha mein waqt guzara ....
Kamo Naein ko bulwa kar  apne sare jism ki malish karwai aur phir sandal ke sabun ke sath ghusal kiya aur sara din hashash bashash rahi .
socha tha aik hi qist mein story mukamal kardongi . magar doosra part  likhna hi hoga . please apni raay zaroor dein ..   
There is a broken heart behind every strong person.......

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Re: NUMBERDARNI
« Reply #4 on: December 26, 2017, 11:48:06 pm »
2nd part
Sham hote hi us ka jism tootne laga shewat barhne lagi yeh rozana ka mehmool tha magar aaj kuch jissm ki talab ziyada shadeed thi .raat ko jab numberdarni akeli kamre mein sone ke liye gaein (woh apne kamre mein akela hi soti thi halakeh aam gharon mein dehaton mein sara tabar bhi sota hai ) uss ke liye laitna mushkil ho geya aur woh karwat par karwat badalne lagi magar bahut beqarar rahi kuch der agar ankh lagi tu phir ankh khul gai . akhir woh takht ya takhta ka soch kar uth gai . raat ke 11 baj chuke thay usse kissi pal chain nah a raha tha. dehaton mein jahn sar e shaam log sone ke adi hein 11 aje tu unki raat arooj par hoti hai aur neend  ki devi unhein gehri neend sula chuki hoti hei . Numberdarni uss waqt bebtaab ho kar haveli ki dehleez  paar kar ke  darkton ke saay saay sarvent qurters , mulazmeein ke gharon ki tarf barh rahi thi . itefaaq se pehla darwaza hai Mansoor Alwi ka tha . ab numberdarni ko khadsha tha keh woh akela hi ho kahein uska koi dost wagher uske paas nah ho. uss ne  aik do bar darwaze ko khtka kar  apne aap ko aik oat mein kar liya takeh mansoor usse dekh kar khein ooncha nah bol de ya nymberdarni jii nah keh de ..... mansoor shaed gehri neend mein tha usse do bar phir darwaza khatkhtana para akher andar se charpaai ki choolein halne se usse andaza ho geya keh mansoor uth geya hai . uss ne aik bar phir khatkhtaya aur oat mein hogai .Mansoor ne darwaza khola aur baher nikal ke poocha kkaun hai  magar koi awaz nah paa kar thora aage ho kar aas pass dekhne laga uss ne aik do bar phir poocha keh kaun hai magar jawab nadarad . uski peeth darwaze ki janab thi NUmberdarni dabe paaon oat se nikal kar kamre mein dakhel ho ke aik janab khari ho gai . Mansoor andar dakhel ho kar darwaza band kar ke palta tu numberdarni ko khare paa kar hairaan reh geya . diya jal rah tha jiss ki madham roshni mein usse dekhte hooy uss ke munh se sirf itna nikla " App"  numberdarni ne kah . "bolo mat aur diya bujha do Alwi " Mansoor nah samjhte hoye bhi hukam ki tahmeel ki aur diya bujha diya . Numberdarni  char paai par ja kar baith gai aur orhi hoi chadar sarhaane rakh di . Mansoor idher aao kehte hoye numberdarni charpaai par lait gai aur mansoor jab qareeb aaya tu uss ka hath pakar kar apne pass bitha liya . "Numberdarni jee kiya hoa  iss waqt aap yahn " Mansoor ne poocha  magar numberdarni ne usse kah , bolo mat ,mujhe dar lag rah hai tum yahn lait jao kehte hye uss ne mansoor ka baoo kheincha . mansoor hairangi aur preshani mein aik robot ki treh uss ke sath lait geya . Manssor numberdarni boli mujhe apne seena se laga lo aur khud hi uss ke sath chimat gai .mansoor ne pehlo badal kar usse apne seena se laga liya . numberdarni  ke jism ki lamas aur uss ke sanson ki raftar ne mansoor ko kafi kuch samjha diya . woh 28 saala jawan tha jazabt rakhta tha jab se  haveli mein aaya tha . aurat zaat ki qurbat usse naseeb nah ho saki thi . uss ke aik 2 aurton ke sath taluqaat rahe thay aur yeh uss ki pasand thi yaa qismat hamesha usse umar raseeda khawateen  se hi milati rahi aaj bhi woh apni se dugni umar ki khatoon ke pehloo mein tha . kafi der seena se lagaay rakhne se mansoor ab sab kuch bhool kar aik nmard ban chuka tha aur uss ka ghora poori treh khara  numberdarni  ki sarhadon ko tapne ki koshish mein tha . josh mein aa kar mansoor ne numberdarni ke do chaar bose liye ,magar numberdarni ne galon  ko aage kar diya aur lubon ko nah milne diya . Numberdarni ko uss ke hathiyar ke uthne ka ehsaas tha aur woh chahti thi keh mansoor jald se jald hathiyar chalana shuroo kar de . woh  peeth ke bal lait gai aur tagein gutne tak mor kar apni shalwar ghutne tak  sirka kkar mansoor ko tangon ke beech aane ka ishara kiya . mansoor dhoti bahnde hoye tha  uss ne apna hathiyar nikala tu  numberdanri ne usse pakar kar maidan ke munh par rakh diya aur mansoor ko apni tarf khaincha . mansoor ka hathiyar seedha maidan ke munh se hota hoa phislan mein phisalte hoye aakher tak paunch geya .numberdarni ke munh se aik hoshruba si siskari nikli jaise  aik muddat ke baad uski khawish poori hoi ho . mansoor ne maidan ki khudai shuroo kar di aur aage peeche ooper neeche charon kono mein aik manjhe hoye kareegar ki treh phirne laga . numberdarni uss ka sath deine lagi . uss ki sansn ki raftar taiz tar hoti ja rahi thi uss ki siskariyon  aur mansoor ki peith ko khurchane se  uski iztarari halat ka bakhoobi izhar ho rah tha . magar is ke bawajood mansoor uske honton ka rass nah pi saka tha . shaed numberdarni abhi apne khaul se poori treh nah nikal saki thi  kuch bhi ho mansoor phir bhi aik kam darja ka fard tha . issi liye numberdarni ne  nah poori shalwar utari  thi nah hi qameez utar ke mansoor ko apni golaiun ka deedar karaya tha. mansoor samajh rah tha aur issi mein khush jitni dish uss ke samne rakhi gai ussi se insaaf karne ki woh poori koshish karte hooye akher hanpne laga aur numberdarni ke pehlo mein aa gira .uss ke hathiyar ne maidan ki khudaai acchi treh ki thi aur uss mein itna churkaao kiya keh sailab maidan ke kinaron se baher umad aaya . numberdarni ne pehlo badal kar uss ke bazoo par sar rakh liya aur uss ke seena ke balon se kheilne lagi . usse muddat ke baad aik jawan ki suhbat ne nehaal kar diya tha woh khush thi aur hole se mansoor ki garden ka bosa laite hoye uss se chimat gai . mansoor ne bhi numberdarni ko gale sse laga ka bheinch liya aur numberdani ko
tahfuz ka ehsaas hoa woh jan chuki thi keh woh mazboot hathon mein hai jo iski hifazat bhi kar sakte hein aur har khawish bhi poori kar sakte hein . magar abhi uski tassali nahein hoi thi woh mazeed ki khawishmand thi .  manssor ke seena ke balon se kheilte kheilte uska hath neeche ki janab naaf se guzarta  balon ke ghane guphe mein jaa pauncha . idher udher phirte hoye hath ne ghore ko pakar liye aur uski malish karne lagi  ghora araam kar rah tha woh biddak geya aur uss ne sar utha liya thora sa aur masaj ke sath ghora anpi jaulaniun mein mast khara ho geya .ab numberdarni se rah nah geya aur uss ne ghore ki sawari ki thaan li. agarcheh woh swari karna bhool hi chukki thi magar woh aik waqt acchi sawar thi . aur usse yaqeen tha iss ghore ko bhi pehle wale ghore ki treh sidha le gi ..... uss ne mansoor ko peeth ke bal litaya aur apni shalwar aik tarf phaik kar  uss ke ghore par sawar hogai . ghora agarche bahut akharrh type ka tha . magar aik accha sawar aise mast ghore ki swari pasand kaaarte hein unko akharr aur mast ghore ko sidhaane mein hi lutf ata hai . woh uchal uchal kar ghore ki sawari mein mast hoi jaa rahi aur khoob lutf utha rahi thi aik lambe arsa ke baad usse sawari ka mauqa milla tha aur woh uss se poori treh faeda utha rahi thi . woh be sudh ho kar mansoor ki chati ke balon ko khaeinchti kabhi uski tangon ko chappat lagati manzil ke qareeb aa pahunchi aur akher hanpte hoye mansoor ke seena par hi dhae gai .ghora bhi thak chuka tha uss ne neeche se 2 chaar acchi si taapein lagaein aur sari raal wahein baha di  aur  thori der baad ahesta ahesta uske neeche se nikal aaya . numberdarni bare piyar aur rachaao se mansoor ko dekh rahi thi aur uss ke galoon ko choomne lagi uske baalon mein ungliyan pherte hoye uski pashani ka bosa laite hoye phir mansoor ke pehloo mein laait gai ab woh kafi had tak pursakoon thi uski dharkanein ba tarteeb hone lagi thein usse ab jana tha ahesta se woh uthi aur shalwar dhoondne lagi abhi tak qameez uss ne pehn rakhi thi woh shalwar utha kar charpaai par baith kar pehn ne lagi keh mansoor ne usse peeche se jakar liya aur usski garden par boson ki baresh kar di  hath barha kar uski shalwar ka paucha baher khaich liya jo uss ne pehna hoa tha aur usse apne ooper khainch liya mansoor ab tak uss ka sath deta rah tha ab woh mann maani par utar aaya tha . uss ne numberdarni ko gale se pakar kar apne hont uss ke labon par rakh diye . numberdarni ne sar ko bara jhatka magar mansoor ki grift mazboot thi woh barabar uss ke honton ko choom rah tha usse yaqeen tha keh kuch dastakon ke baad darwaza zaroor khule ga . uss ne apni zaban numberdarni ke honton par pherni shuroo kar di aur zaban ki nok se uske honton ke durmian jageh dhoondne ki koshish karne laga . idher uska ghora phir tiyar ho chuka tha aur numberdarni ke jism se takra rah tha . besakhta numberdarni ne usse hath mein le kar masalna shuroo kar diya . numberdarni dheeli parti gai aur uss ne mansoor ka bosa qabool karte hooye uske honton ko choosna shuroo kar diya  aur apni zban mansoor ki zaban ke sath takraai tu mansoor usse choosne laga . numberdarni ab mukamal mansoor ke qabza mein thi . mansoor ne uski qameez bhi utar di aur neeche se shameez se numbardarni ne khud chutkara hasal kar liya ab numberdarni mukamal  barhana mansoor ke bazoun ke hisaar mein thi  mansoor ne usse hole se bistar par lita diya aur makhrooti gunbdon ki golaiun par hath pherte hoye unki dodiun ko apni zaban se tar karne laga . numberdarni apne hosh wa hawas kho baithi woh ab apna rakh rakhaao bhool kar uss ke auzaar ko masalne lagi  auzar ki topi ko bar bar punchti aur nehaal hoti jaa rahi thi keh mansoor ne achanak usske tangon ko utha kar auzaar sangam mein rakh diya . numberdarni ne uski kamar tangon se jakar li aur mansoor ne bari  bedardi se apna auzaar munni se jaa takraya . numberdarni ne hath se pakar kar usse rasta dikhaya tu munni ko cheerte hoy auzaar apna kaam karne laga . kaafi der auzaar se jab munni ke anj paran dheele hone ko thay tu mansoor ne numberdarni ko ghori ban ne ko kaha  jiss ki numberdarni ne khushdilli se tahmeel ki aur mansoor usske peeche se aa kar apne ghore ko phir maidan mein doraane laga . ghore ki taapon se meidan goonjne laga aur charpaai ki choolein bhi cheekhne lagein . issi treh bari lambi tapon ne maidan sar kar liya aur aik bar phir maidan ko jal thal kar diya jo keh pehle hi apna pani bhi chor chuka tha . mansoor numberdarni ke ooper hi gir geya  woh bhi tangein seedhi kar ke neeche hi lait gai . uski jinis khawish poori ho chuki thi keh ab woh pur sakoon ho chuki thi ghanoodgi mein kuch waqt nikal geya ab uski ankh khuli tu mansoor uth kar ghusal khaane ja chuka tha . woh sochne lagi keh yeh kiya ho geya?  .woh apne aap se swal karne lagi . keh tu itna kaise gir gai Sufia . yeh tum ne kiya kiya . numberdar ki baiti bahoo beevi aur numberdar ki maan ho kar tum ne apne aap ko itna gira diya . aik 6 inch ke maas ke liye jiss ko tu ne khud 2 inch ke cheechre mein tabddeel hote dekha ke liye tu ne khandan ki izat khaak mein mila di . woh pehle hawas aur shewat ke jinsi jabat se maghloob hoi thi. ab usse zameer ki purastash ka samna tha . woh phir haar gai aur uss ne apni zindagi ke khatme ka faisla kar liya . jaldi jaldi uss ne kapre pehne aur mansoor ke ghusal khane se nikalne se pehle hi us ka darwaza khol ke dekha  aas paas koi nah tha abhi raat ne andhere ki chadar orhe hoi thi uss ne darwaz zor se band kita aur chal di . mansoor ne darwaza band hone ki awaz sunni tu tu bhag kar darwaze ki tarf  aya khol kar dekha tu numberdarni haveli ki doosri janab ja rahi thi  mansoor hairangi se usse jate dekhta rah . jab numberdarni Bawali( Kuaan jiss mein seriehan hoti hein ) ki tarf muri tu phir mansoor ko ajeeb sa khatra mehsoos hoa aur woh jaldi jaldi numberdarni ke peeche chal diya  woh taqreeban seerhian utar chuki thi keh mansoor ne usse awaz di  "numberdarni jee ". magar numberdarni ne usse dekhe bina kaha "mansoor wapis chahle jaao" aur kuein mein chalang laga di . mansoor jaldi se neeche utra magar usse numberdarni nazar nah aaski  uss ne bhi jump laga di  pani mein ..............
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Re: NUMBERDARNI
« Reply #5 on: December 27, 2017, 12:08:37 am »
2nd part

Sham hote hi us ka jism tootne laga shewat barhne lagi yeh rozana ka mehmool tha magar aaj kuch jissm ki talab ziyada shadeed thi .raat ko jab numberdarni akeli kamre mein sone ke liye gaein (woh apne kamre mein akela hi soti thi halakeh aam gharon mein dehaton mein sara tabar bhi sota hai ) uss ke liye laitna mushkil ho geya aur woh karwat par karwat badalne lagi magar bahut beqarar rahi kuch der agar ankh lagi tu phir ankh khul gai . akhir woh takht ya takhta ka soch kar uth gai . raat ke 11 baj chuke thay usse kissi pal chain nah a raha tha. dehaton mein jahn sar e shaam log sone ke adi hein 11 aje tu unki raat arooj par hoti hai aur neend  ki devi unhein gehri neend sula chuki hoti hei . Numberdarni uss waqt bebtaab ho kar haveli ki dehleez  paar kar ke  darkton ke saay saay sarvent qurters , mulazmeein ke gharon ki tarf barh rahi thi . itefaaq se pehla darwaza hai Mansoor Alwi ka tha . ab numberdarni ko khadsha tha keh woh akela hi ho kahein uska koi dost wagher uske paas nah ho. uss ne  aik do bar darwaze ko khtka kar  apne aap ko aik oat mein kar liya takeh mansoor usse dekh kar khein ooncha nah bol de ya nymberdarni jii nah keh de ..... mansoor shaed gehri neend mein tha usse do bar phir darwaza khatkhtana para akher andar se charpaai ki choolein halne se usse andaza ho geya keh mansoor uth geya hai . uss ne aik bar phir khatkhtaya aur oat mein hogai .Mansoor ne darwaza khola aur baher nikal ke poocha kkaun hai  magar koi awaz nah paa kar thora aage ho kar aas pass dekhne laga uss ne aik do bar phir poocha keh kaun hai magar jawab nadarad . uski peeth darwaze ki janab thi NUmberdarni dabe paaon oat se nikal kar kamre mein dakhel ho ke aik janab khari ho gai . Mansoor andar dakhel ho kar darwaza band kar ke palta tu numberdarni ko khare paa kar hairaan reh geya . diya jal rah tha jiss ki madham roshni mein usse dekhte hooy uss ke munh se sirf itna nikla " App"  numberdarni ne kah . "bolo mat aur diya bujha do Alwi " Mansoor nah samjhte hoye bhi hukam ki tahmeel ki aur diya bujha diya . Numberdarni  char paai par ja kar baith gai aur orhi hoi chadar sarhaane rakh di . Mansoor idher aao kehte hoye numberdarni charpaai par lait gai aur mansoor jab qareeb aaya tu uss ka hath pakar kar apne pass bitha liya . "Numberdarni jee kiya hoa  iss waqt aap yahn " Mansoor ne poocha  magar numberdarni ne usse kah , bolo mat ,mujhe dar lag rah hai tum yahn lait jao kehte hye uss ne mansoor ka baoo kheincha . mansoor hairangi aur preshani mein aik robot ki treh uss ke sath lait geya . Manssor numberdarni boli mujhe apne seena se laga lo aur khud hi uss ke sath chimat gai .mansoor ne pehlo badal kar usse apne seena se laga liya . numberdarni  ke jism ki lamas aur uss ke sanson ki raftar ne mansoor ko kafi kuch samjha diya . woh 28 saala jawan tha jazabt rakhta tha jab se  haveli mein aaya tha . aurat zaat ki qurbat usse naseeb nah ho saki thi . uss ke aik 2 aurton ke sath taluqaat rahe thay aur yeh uss ki pasand thi yaa qismat hamesha usse umar raseeda khawateen  se hi milati rahi aaj bhi woh apni se dugni umar ki khatoon ke pehloo mein tha . kafi der seena se lagaay rakhne se mansoor ab sab kuch bhool kar aik nmard ban chuka tha aur uss ka ghora poori treh khara  numberdarni  ki sarhadon ko tapne ki koshish mein tha . josh mein aa kar mansoor ne numberdarni ke do chaar bose liye ,magar numberdarni ne galon  ko aage kar diya aur lubon ko nah milne diya . Numberdarni ko uss ke hathiyar ke uthne ka ehsaas tha aur woh chahti thi keh mansoor jald se jald hathiyar chalana shuroo kar de . woh  peeth ke bal lait gai aur tagein gutne tak mor kar apni shalwar ghutne tak  sirka kkar mansoor ko tangon ke beech aane ka ishara kiya . mansoor dhoti bahnde hoye tha  uss ne apna hathiyar nikala tu  numberdanri ne usse pakar kar maidan ke munh par rakh diya aur mansoor ko apni tarf khaincha . mansoor ka hathiyar seedha maidan ke munh se hota hoa phislan mein phisalte hoye aakher tak paunch geya .numberdarni ke munh se aik hoshruba si siskari nikli jaise  aik muddat ke baad uski khawish poori hoi ho . mansoor ne maidan ki khudai shuroo kar di aur aage peeche ooper neeche charon kono mein aik manjhe hoye kareegar ki treh phirne laga . numberdarni uss ka sath deine lagi . uss ki sansn ki raftar taiz tar hoti ja rahi thi uss ki siskariyon  aur mansoor ki peith ko khurchane se  uski iztarari halat ka bakhoobi izhar ho rah tha . magar is ke bawajood mansoor uske honton ka rass nah pi saka tha . shaed numberdarni abhi apne khaul se poori treh nah nikal saki thi  kuch bhi ho mansoor phir bhi aik kam darja ka fard tha . issi liye numberdarni ne  nah poori shalwar utari  thi nah hi qameez utar ke mansoor ko apni golaiun ka deedar karaya tha. mansoor samajh rah tha aur issi mein khush jitni dish uss ke samne rakhi gai ussi se insaaf karne ki woh poori koshish karte hooye akher hanpne laga aur numberdarni ke pehlo mein aa gira .uss ke hathiyar ne maidan ki khudaai acchi treh ki thi aur uss mein itna churkaao kiya keh sailab maidan ke kinaron se baher umad aaya . numberdarni ne pehlo badal kar uss ke bazoo par sar rakh liya aur uss ke seena ke balon se kheilne lagi . usse muddat ke baad aik jawan ki suhbat ne nehaal kar diya tha woh khush thi aur hole se mansoor ki garden ka bosa laite hoye uss se chimat gai . mansoor ne bhi numberdarni ko gale sse laga ka bheinch liya aur numberdani ko
tahfuz ka ehsaas hoa woh jan chuki thi keh woh mazboot hathon mein hai jo iski hifazat bhi kar sakte hein aur har khawish bhi poori kar sakte hein . magar abhi uski tassali nahein hoi thi woh mazeed ki khawishmand thi .  manssor ke seena ke balon se kheilte kheilte uska hath neeche ki janab naaf se guzarta  balon ke ghane guphe mein jaa pauncha . idher udher phirte hoye hath ne ghore ko pakar liye aur uski malish karne lagi  ghora araam kar rah tha woh biddak geya aur uss ne sar utha liya thora sa aur masaj ke sath ghora anpi jaulaniun mein mast khara ho geya .ab numberdarni se rah nah geya aur uss ne ghore ki sawari ki thaan li. agarcheh woh swari karna bhool hi chukki thi magar woh aik waqt acchi sawar thi . aur usse yaqeen tha iss ghore ko bhi pehle wale ghore ki treh sidha le gi ..... uss ne mansoor ko peeth ke bal litaya aur apni shalwar aik tarf phaik kar  uss ke ghore par sawar hogai . ghora agarche bahut akharrh type ka tha . magar aik accha sawar aise mast ghore ki swari pasand kaaarte hein unko akharr aur mast ghore ko sidhaane mein hi lutf ata hai . woh uchal uchal kar ghore ki sawari mein mast hoi jaa rahi aur khoob lutf utha rahi thi aik lambe arsa ke baad usse sawari ka mauqa milla tha aur woh uss se poori treh faeda utha rahi thi . woh be sudh ho kar mansoor ki chati ke balon ko khaeinchti kabhi uski tangon ko chappat lagati manzil ke qareeb aa pahunchi aur akher hanpte hoye mansoor ke seena par hi dhae gai .ghora bhi thak chuka tha uss ne neeche se 2 chaar acchi si taapein lagaein aur sari raal wahein baha di  aur  thori der baad ahesta ahesta uske neeche se nikal aaya . numberdarni bare piyar aur rachaao se mansoor ko dekh rahi thi aur uss ke galoon ko choomne lagi uske baalon mein ungliyan pherte hoye uski pashani ka bosa laite hoye phir mansoor ke pehloo mein laait gai ab woh kafi had tak pursakoon thi uski dharkanein ba tarteeb hone lagi thein usse ab jana tha ahesta se woh uthi aur shalwar dhoondne lagi abhi tak qameez uss ne pehn rakhi thi woh shalwar utha kar charpaai par baith kar pehn ne lagi keh mansoor ne usse peeche se jakar liya aur usski garden par boson ki baresh kar di  hath barha kar uski shalwar ka paucha baher khaich liya jo uss ne pehna hoa tha aur usse apne ooper khainch liya mansoor ab tak uss ka sath deta rah tha ab woh mann maani par utar aaya tha . uss ne numberdarni ko gale se pakar kar apne hont uss ke labon par rakh diye . numberdarni ne sar ko bara jhatka magar mansoor ki grift mazboot thi woh barabar uss ke honton ko choom rah tha usse yaqeen tha keh kuch dastakon ke baad darwaza zaroor khule ga . uss ne apni zaban numberdarni ke honton par pherni shuroo kar di aur zaban ki nok se uske honton ke durmian jageh dhoondne ki koshish karne laga . idher uska ghora phir tiyar ho chuka tha aur numberdarni ke jism se takra rah tha . besakhta numberdarni ne usse hath mein le kar masalna shuroo kar diya . numberdarni dheeli parti gai aur uss ne mansoor ka bosa qabool karte hooye uske honton ko choosna shuroo kar diya  aur apni zban mansoor ki zaban ke sath takraai tu mansoor usse choosne laga . numberdarni ab mukamal mansoor ke qabza mein thi . mansoor ne uski qameez bhi utar di aur neeche se shameez se numbardarni ne khud chutkara hasal kar liya ab numberdarni mukamal  barhana mansoor ke bazoun ke hisaar mein thi  mansoor ne usse hole se bistar par lita diya aur makhrooti gunbdon ki golaiun par hath pherte hoye unki dodiun ko apni zaban se tar karne laga . numberdarni apne hosh wa hawas kho baithi woh ab apna rakh rakhaao bhool kar uss ke auzaar ko masalne lagi  auzar ki topi ko bar bar punchti aur nehaal hoti jaa rahi thi keh mansoor ne achanak usske tangon ko utha kar auzaar sangam mein rakh diya . numberdarni ne uski kamar tangon se jakar li aur mansoor ne bari  bedardi se apna auzaar munni se jaa takraya . numberdarni ne hath se pakar kar usse rasta dikhaya tu munni ko cheerte hoy auzaar apna kaam karne laga . kaafi der auzaar se jab munni ke anj paran dheele hone ko thay tu mansoor ne numberdarni ko ghori ban ne ko kaha  jiss ki numberdarni ne khushdilli se tahmeel ki aur mansoor usske peeche se aa kar apne ghore ko phir maidan mein doraane laga . ghore ki taapon se meidan goonjne laga aur charpaai ki choolein bhi cheekhne lagein . issi treh bari lambi tapon ne maidan sar kar liya aur aik bar phir maidan ko jal thal kar diya jo keh pehle hi apna pani bhi chor chuka tha . mansoor numberdarni ke ooper hi gir geya  woh bhi tangein seedhi kar ke neeche hi lait gai . uski jinis khawish poori ho chuki thi keh ab woh pur sakoon ho chuki thi ghanoodgi mein kuch waqt nikal geya ab uski ankh khuli tu mansoor uth kar ghusal khaane ja chuka tha . woh sochne lagi keh yeh kiya ho geya?  .woh apne aap se swal karne lagi . keh tu itna kaise gir gai Sufia . yeh tum ne kiya kiya . numberdar ki baiti bahoo beevi aur numberdar ki maan ho kar tum ne apne aap ko itna gira diya . aik 6 inch ke maas ke liye jiss ko tu ne khud 2 inch ke cheechre mein tabddeel hote dekha ke liye tu ne khandan ki izat khaak mein mila di . woh pehle hawas aur shewat ke jinsi jabat se maghloob hoi thi. ab usse zameer ki purastash ka samna tha . woh phir haar gai aur uss ne apni zindagi ke khatme ka faisla kar liya . jaldi jaldi uss ne kapre pehne aur mansoor ke ghusal khane se nikalne se pehle hi us ka darwaza khol ke dekha  aas paas koi nah tha abhi raat ne andhere ki chadar orhe hoi thi uss ne darwaz zor se band kita aur chal di . mansoor ne darwaza band hone ki awaz sunni tu tu bhag kar darwaze ki tarf  aya khol kar dekha tu numberdarni haveli ki doosri janab ja rahi thi  mansoor hairangi se usse jate dekhta rah . jab numberdarni Bawali( Kuaan jiss mein seriehan hoti hein ) ki tarf muri tu phir mansoor ko ajeeb sa khatra mehsoos hoa aur woh jaldi jaldi numberdarni ke peeche chal diya  woh taqreeban seerhian utar chuki thi keh mansoor ne usse awaz di  "numberdarni jee ". magar numberdarni ne usse dekhe bina kaha "mansoor wapis chahle jaao" aur kuein mein chalang laga di . mansoor jaldi se neeche utra magar usse numberdarni nazar nah aaski  uss ne bhi jump laga di  pani mein ..............
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Re: NUMBERDARNI
« Reply #6 on: December 27, 2017, 11:13:12 am »
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Re: NUMBERDARNI
« Reply #7 on: December 27, 2017, 12:55:02 pm »
Sufia pairak thi aur terna janti thi magar aaj tu uss ka maqsad hi doobna tha .woh terne ki bajay seedha neeche teh ki tarf gai  sath hi Mansoor bhi uske peeche neeche utarta geia aur akher ko usse ja liya .sufia ne bari tago du ki magar aik jawan admi ke samne 58 saala aurat ka bas nah chal saka aur Mansoor usko ooper khenchta hoa
bamshkil paunch saka . usse uss ne seerhi par usse lita diya .Saufia ke seena par uss ne hath par hath rakh ke dabaya tu sufia ke munh mein se thora sa pani nikla aur sath hi khansi bhi aay . yeh Mansoor ke liye umeed ki kiran sabet hoi do teen baar uss ke seena ko dabane se sufia ka sanas bahal ho geya  aur usse mansoor ne apne gale se laga liyea. sufia ka jism tu bheega hoa tha magar uss ke anso bhi beh rahe thay woh uss ke gale se lagi uss ki peeth ko kkootne lagi . aur rote hoye kehne lagi  "mujhe nahein jeena mujhe marne do " magar Mansoor ne sajhte hoye usse kafi lamba lecture de dala . " keh agar iss treh tum doob kar ya masnoohi tareeqa se apna khatma karo gi tu poore khandan ki badnami hogi ab tak jo kuch apki izat aur waqar bana hoa hai uss ko sab bhool kar nit nai kahaniyan banaein ge aur aap mar kar bhi sakoon nah paa sakein gi  khandan wale munh chuppate phirein ge . " aisi hi baton se Sufia fateh Ali Khan ko samajh aa gai keh marna asan nahein hai magar usse yeh bhi ehsaas tha keh ab jeena marne se bhi mushkil hoga . khair Mansoor ne usse convince kar liya aur usse baazoun mein utha kar haveli ki tarf chal para aur sath hi  Sufia ko bola " agar koi rah mein mil jaay tum usse yahi batana hai keh  Sufia ko raat ko khawab mein chalne ki beemari hai aur issi wajeh se woh khawab mein Bawoli mein utri tu pani mein ja phisli . aur Mansoor itfaaq se wahn se guar rah tha tu maddad ko paunch geya . magar haveli ke andar jane tak kissi ki nazar un par nah pari thi halankeh  fajar ho chuki thi aur pao  phtt rahi thi . Haveli ke darwaze se andar dakheil ho kar  Sufia ne mansoor se kah ab tum jaao mein theek hoon fikar nah karna .....woh apne kamre ki tarf chal pari . aur andar jate hi attached bathroom  mein uss ne ghusal kiya aur nimaz parne ke baad in hi sochon mein gum thi keh  khadema ne nashta ka bataya keh lag chuka hai .  nashta karne ke baad aaj uss ne astable jana unaseb nah samjha aur soch bichar mein gum hogai .uss ka zameer usko chain nah leine de rah tha . woh janti thi woh kamzor irade ki malik hai phir uss se  aisi ghalti hone ka imkan rad nahein kiya ja sakta . tu uss ke pass zinda rehne ka koi jawaz nah rehta tha.  in hi sochon mein gum dupehr ho gai aur lunch ke baad qellola ke liye  jab bed par laiti tu issi soch mein thi keh koi aisi tarkeeb keh sanp bhi mar jaay aur lathi bhi nah toote . yehni uss ki jinsi zarooriyat bhi poori hoon aur badnami bhi nah ho , yahi sochti sochti uski ankh lag gai . poori raat woh nah so saki thi . taqreeban 2 hours uss ne bari gheri neend li aur khadma ke kandha hilane  se  uss ne ankhein kholi thein  saaf zahir hai khadma ne kai bar bulaya hoga . khadma zuhrane ka batane aay thi .  Sufia  ne nimaz parhi aur chaay le kar phir sochne lagi keh achanak uss ke zehn mein aik kheyal koonda
uski ankkhon mein roshni si chamki aur woh lawn mein chali aai . khadma se uss ne  2 kursiya table lagane ka keh kr sath mein khare khadem se kah keh jaao Mansoor Alvi ko bula laao . aur khud aik kursi par barajman hogai .  thori hi der ke baad Mansoor  salam kar ke khara ho geya Jii Numberdarni ji aap ne yaad kiya ."  haan Mansoor batho " uss ne kursi ki tarf ishara karte hoye kaha aur khadem ko bola jaao mansoor ke liye chahay le aao . jab khadem chahy rakh kar chala geya tu Mansoor ne poocha . Ji Numberdarni jee bolein kiya hukam hai "
Masoor " raat ko jo bhi hoa woh ghalti thi jiss ke liye mujhe mera zameer chain nahein laine de rah kiya tum bhi pachta rahe ho aisa kar ke " uss ne mansoor ki ankhon mein dekhte hoye kaha
"Nahein Jee mein ne jo kuch kiya apki khushi ke liye kiya aur mujhe kissi qism ka koi pachtawa nahein " Mansoor bare yaqeen ke sath bola .
" magar jo kuch bhi hoa aisa hona nah chahiye tha jiss ke liye mein apne aap ko muaaf nahein kar sakti " yeh kehte hoye Sufia ki awaz bhara gai thi . Mansoor tarap kar bola " nahein Numberdarni jee yeh aik waqti ghalti thi aur insaan khata ka putla hai  jiss  treh aap pachta rahi hein Rab e kareem  ke aage tauba kar ke muaafi mangein woh zat e kareem zaroor muaaf farma degi ." mansoor ne wahzaana tareeqa istehmal kiya . " woh tu theek hai mein tauba kar bhi chuki hoon aur muaafi bhi mangi hai aur hamesha mangti rahoongi  magar Mansoor mujhe dar yeh keh mein tauba tor nah doon kiunkeh mein iss muamle mein bari kamzor hoon " woh ankhein jhukaay bolti rahi . aur Mansoor uske dabdabe ko aur kafer nain wa naqsh dekhta rah .  Syfia ne anmkhein utha kar dekha tu Mansoor ko apne chere par nazarein jamay dekha tu thora sa upset hoi . Mansoor ne
poocha "agar ijazat ho tu mein aik mashwara doon " Mansoor tumhein issi liye tu bulaya hai koi mashwara do takeh kissi treh mera zameer bhi mujhe jhanjhoorta rahe  meri tauba bhi qaeim rahe aur khandan ki badnaami bhi nah ho". Mansoor ne kaha aap shadi kar lein. aap ke liye rishton ki koi kami nahein hogi  uss ne bat adhoori chor kar uski tarf dekha.  Yeh tu mein 3 saal pehle bhi kr sakti thi jab Numbdar saheb ka accident hoa tha . kai isharatan rishte aay bhi magar  mein aik tu tiyar nah thi doosra meri nazar mein koi jacha nah tha . mera hasb nasb
ass pass ke sab zameedaron se ooncha hai meri khud zati  10 murabah zameen hai jo unke kissi ke paas nahein 2 sal pehle mere walid ki wafaat ke baad bhi  meri zati zameen mein 5 murabah izafa hoa . agar kissi se mein shadi karoon tu mujhe kam aur unko ziyada faeida hoga . iss liye mein ne iss soch ko hi nikal diya tha .uss ne thandi sans laite hoye kah . " tu phir is ke ke ilawa tu mein kuch bhi kehne ki position mein nahein  Mansoor  bechargi se bola .
Mansoor mein tumhare bare ziyada tu nahein janti magar 6 mah se tumhein dekh rahi hoon
tum aik acche khandan se taluq rakhte ho agarcheh tum ne ghalt kaam kiye aur sar chuppay phirte ho magar tumhari adaat baithna uthna baat cheet ka andaz batata hai tum koi kami kameen nahein ho . tum sirf haalat ka shikaar ho " itna keh kar  Syfia uss ki tarf dekhne lagi / Mansoor khamoshi se sar jhukaay  rah . Sufia ne baat jari rakhte hoye kah . Mansoor  mera khawand  pehla mard tha jiss ne mujhe hath lagaya tha aur aaj raat ko tim doosre admi ho jiss ko mein ne apna aap supard kiya . mein ab kissi teesre ka pehloo garmana nahein chahti
uss ne tayaqan se kaha aur phir baat jari rakhti hoi boli . Mansoor" yeh nah samjhna keh mein kahongi keh mujhe tum se muhabbat ho gai hai ,nahein aisi koi baat nahein , haan itna iqraar zaroor karongi pehli bar jab tum ghore ki malish karte astable mein dekha tha tu mera dil zor se dharka tha magar baad mein normil  hogeya . phir bhi mein tum se poochna chahoongi kiya tum mera sath doge kiya tum mera sath nibhaaoge" . uss ne usse dekhte hoye sawal kar diya . Mansoor ne bina soche jaldi se haami bharte hoye Kaha "Numberdarni jee apka sath  har treh se daoonga bhi aur saath nibhaonga bhi" uss ka lehza se sachai jhalak rahi thi  . Sufia boli "kiya tum mujh se shadi karo ge" Mansoor usski tarf dekhne laga aur bola  " yeh kaise mumkin hai Numberdarni jee kahn zameen kahn aasman yeh baat tu namumkanat mein se hai woh sochte hoye bola . "tu phir iss ka yahi matlub hai keh tum mera sath nahein de sakte "uss ne udasi se kaha . nahein Numberdarni jee mera matlub hargaz yeh nahein . mein har treh se tiyar hoon magar itne bare zameindaron ke hote hoye mein aik be naam sa bdnaam shakhs
kaise  ho ga yeh sab kuch ....." " mein sirf yeh poochna chahti hoon keh iss umaar ke farq ke sath tum koi aitraz tu hoga mujh se shadi karne ke liye agarcheh tum ko doosri shadi balkeh chaar shadi ki mein ijazat doongi . "  NUmberdarni jee app jisse milein gi uss ko kissi doosri teesri ki zaroorat nahein rahe gi .aur rah umar a faraq tu yaqeen janein mujhe tu aap mein 20 sala larki se ziyada attraction lagti hai ".
 Syfia muskarte hoye boli tu tm ko mujh se shadi ke liye koi aitraaj nahein . kiun kiya mein aisa samjhoon .woh bari ummed se boli .  Jii mujhe nah sirf koi aitraj nahein balkeh yeh meri khush qismati hogi keh mujhe apki khidmat karne ka mauqa milla " kehte hoye Mansoor ne sar jhuka liya uska chera surkh laal ho geya tha aur Sufia usse dilchaspi se dekh rahi thi . phir woh boli dekhein tum bhi razi ho mein tu hoon hi razi
tu shadi tu ho jaeigi magar khandan aur biradari mein iski rukawat zaroor hogi " Sufia ne kah tu Mansoor uss ki baat uchakte hoye bola " yahi tu mein keh rah hoon yeh na mumkan hai " usski awaz mein mayusi thi .  " iss ka aik hal hai mere paas Sufia ne kah tu Mansoor ne kaha  agar aisa koi hal hai baat karein "  "hum khufia shadi karein ge " Sufia ne hal ki tarf roshni dali . aur baat jari rakhte hoye uss ne kaha , keh mein gunah ki zindagi nahein guzarna chahti tum agar mera sath do ge tu nehal ho jaaoge . hum milein ge tu miyan beevi ki treh apni hajat poori kar liya karein ge . bas thori ehtiat karni hogi ....... uss ne bat mukamal ki tu mansoor thori der baad bola theekhai Numberdarni jee jaisa aap
behtar samjhein mein aapke sath hoon uss ne Sufia ki nazron se nazrein milte hoye kah . tu Sufia ne kah phir mubarak ho hum 2 chaar din ke baad  kissi doosre sher mein jaa kar nikah karein ge aur phir wapis aa kar  mauqa dekh kar hum mil liya karein ge  uss ne sharmate hoye kaha tu mansoor bola khair muabarak aap ko bhi mubarak ho acch tajveez hai phir jo bhi programme ho kal ya parsoon jahan aap jana chahein chale chalein . iss ke bad unki yeh meeting khatam hoi aur doo khush khush apne apne kamron ki tarf chale gaye .........  do teen dino ke baad kissi doosre sher mein jaa kar dono ne shadi kar li . numberdarni khud mukhtar thi . baita hasnaat khan ab maan ke 15 murabon ka kheyal rakhne ke liye nanhiyali gaaon mein hi rehta tha  . agarcheh shadi ho chuki thi magar uss ke chauncle  baqi jawan zameendaron ke hi jaise thay .kali se le kar poora khila phool us ke ird gird khile rehte thay . iss wajeh se bhi woh apne maan ke haan ziyada nahein ata tha. aur maan khud bhi yahi chahti thi , woh bas chahti thi uska baita khush rhe .... numberdarni ne haveli ka aur zameino ka incharge mansoor ko bana diya . mansoor agrcheh apne kamre hi mein rehta magar 12- 1 baje aik saaya sa andhere mein nikalta aur haveli mein ghaeib ho jata . jab kabhi mauqa mille din ko bhi Sufia ke kamre mein chala jana uss ke liye mushkil nah tha .  Sufia pehle khawen ke faut hone ke baad
jiss treh udas rehne lagi thi aur chirchiri ho gai thi . woh phir wohi pehle wali hans mukh ban chuki thi har aik dukh dard mein shareek hona
ghareeb bachiun ka jaheez ho ya kissi beemar buzarg ka ilaaj woh hamesha maddad ke lliye tiyar rehti . milne milaane wale uske mamnoon thay .magar manssor ko har treh ke akhtiyar deine ki wajeh se cheh maigoiyan hona shuroo ho gai thein . shuroo mein tu mahmooli mahmooli . iss treh do saal beet gaey magar ab mansoor aur sufia  dono ki tarf ungliya uthne lagi thein . Sufia tak aisi batein kafi der ke baad paunchein . tu uss ne Mansoor se baat ki .  keh tum shadi kar lo . mansoor ne hairangi se kah meri shadi tum se ho chuki hai "  tu Sufia ne uss se kaha keh ungliyan uth rahi hein ishaare kinayun se baat aage barh chuki . tum doosri shadi kar lo . mujhe sirf bata do kiss se karni hai baqi sara bandobast mein kar longi ." mansoor bola  dekhein numberdarni jee agar yeh zarori hai tu rishta aap khud dekhein mein nikah kar longa . meri beevi tu aap hi hein doosri majbooran hi karni hai ..... nahein mansoor .Sufia ne  kah , jiss se bhi shadi hogi uss ke poore haqooq tum ada karoge . dekho shadi ke baad 40 ratein tum uss ke sath guzaro ge yeh mera hukam hai phir 2 ratein uss ke bad teesri raat mein hogi. kiunkeh woh mujhe se tu jawan hi hogi aur us ke jism ka taqaza bhi ziyada hoga . Sufia ne faisla suna diya .... theek hai jaise aap kahein. mansoor ne ji hazoori ka muzahera kiya .Gaon mein jawan larkiun ki koi kami nah thi . un mein se aik Sufia ko pasand aa gai uske ghar paighaam khud le kar gai aur bamuraad lauti . mangni ki rasam hoi aur  Mansoor ko 4 kinaal makan ke liye de kar uss par aik alishaan kothi
ki tameer shuroo kar di gai . 6 mah mein kothi mukamal hotu usske kuch dino baad  shadi bari dhoom dhaam se hogai . Mansoor ki kothi  haveli ke ain samne thi  mansoor ki shadi ke
10 din baad  aik raat ko mansoor ne Sufia ka darwaza khtkhataya  raat ka akhri pehr tha magar Sufia neend ki kachi thi dawaza khol ke deekha tu mansoor . andar aae ko kah aur poocha kaise ana hoa. mansoor bola aap se milne ko dil kar raha tha iss liye aaya hoon .
mansoor mein ne bola tha poore chalees din tumhari dulhan ke aur usske baad aik raat meri hogi . mansoor bola numberdarni jee app ka dil bhi tu mangta hoga iss liye aaj 10 din ho geya aaya hoon tu sufia boli nahein mein ne apne liye aur tumhare liye jo hadood bana di hein wohbarqarar rakhni hein mujhe bhi aur tumhein bhi . ab jiss din 40 ratein poori hongi woh hai budh  istreh tum jumaraat ko jab dulhan so jaay mere paas aaoge aur mujhe apna muntazer paaoge . yeh kehte hoye ussne darwaz khol diya aur mansoor baher nikal geya . din mein woh milte baat cheet karte magar sex ki mamaneat thi...... in chalees dino mein itna hoa keh ungliyan uthni band ho gaein aur ishare kinaye bhi maand par gay aur yahi Sufia ki marzi thi.... issi treh 40ratein guzar gaein . aaj jumraat thi Sufia ki raat . woh subah se hi iss raat ki tiyari karne lagi  aacha sa ghsal ooper neeche ki safaai mskara aur ghaza ke sath sham ko ban than kar diner ke liye aai tu usse chakar sa aya aur woh wahein gir gai . dekhte hi dekhte woh jan ki bazi haar gai ...... insan sochta kuch hai aur hota kuch hai . fauttedgi ki khabar ag ki treh charon su phail gai Numberdar Hasnaat aur deegar rishta dar tu aik ghanta mein paunh gay phir raat ko hi biradri bhi aana shuroo hogai . subah tak hazaron logon ka majmah gaaon mein jamah ho chuka tha . nimaz e janaza Jumaki nimaz ke sath hi tha . aao bakaa ke sath marhooma o dafna diya geya . aur zindagi phir rawan dawan ho gai .

 

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