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Yun be hota hy
« on: November 03, 2018, 03:29:57 pm »

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Dear readers main aj pehli bar apni story likh raha hun. aaj se pehlay tak to main yahan ka aik silent reader he thaa or yahan ke bohat se stories main parh chuka hun ab yahan kia sach or kia jhut hota hy is se ziada important ye hai k story kitnay mazay ke hay or story se aap kitnay readers ke attraction hasil kartay hain or aap ke story ko kitna pasand kiya jaa raha hay. lakin phir be main bata deda hun k jo incident main yahan batanay jaa raha hun wo 100% sach hy lakin us main kuch minus plus zuror kar raha hun i mean kuch mirch masala;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;

khair baat kissi or taraf nikalli jaa rahi hay or is se pehlay k hum bohat door nikal jain main aap ko apna taruf (introduction) karwaa deta hun.

mera name Ahmed Bilal hay or sab mujay Ahmed he bulatay hain meri age is waqat koi 30 saal k karib hay or hum rawalpindi kay rehnay walay hain. har insaan ke tarha main be apnay aap ko acha khasa khubsurat or samajdaar samajta hun or parha likha be hun or apna chota sa setup be hay jo bohat acha chal raha hai aik saal pehlay shadi ho chuki hy or abi tak koi hum 2 he hain yani main or meri B.V or 3 honay ke koshesh takriban roz he raat ko kartay hain but abi tak 3 honay ke koi khushkhabri nahi mil saki laki umeed hy ye khushkhabri be jaldi he mil jay gee.

umeed hay itna taruf kafi hoga baki chezain sath sath chalti rahain gee.

aatay hain story ke taraf

too baat kuch yun hay k main sex k mamlay main kuch ziada he lucky raha hun kaafi kam age se he kuch na kuch hota he raha or aaj be kabhi kabhi ghar ke daal k alewa bahir kabhi koi murghi khanay ko mil he jaati hay. apnay tamam experiences to main yahan aaj share nahi kar raha lakin isi tarha ke choti choti stories aap logu se share karta rahuga. huva kuch yun k pehlay hum log apnay gaun (abbotabad k karib) main he raha kartay thay main abhi 3 ya 4 saal se he pindi main reh raha hun. to huva kuch yun k main jab college main parhta thaa us time ke baat hy k aik din maray aik dost nay mujay bataya k aik jagha par hamara cricket match hay next sunday ko. main nay us ko apnay aanay ka keh diya kiyun k jahan be kabhi koi acha match hota thaa to wo mujay lazim lay kar jatay thay kiyun k main aik acha player thaa or un ko bohat match jitwaa be chuka thaa.

khair main sunday ko subha subha he ghar se tiyar ho kar nikal para or apni mukarrar karda jagha par un sab se pehlay he ponch gia. kuch he time huva tha mujay wahan ponchay huvay k aik aik kar k hamari sari he team ponch gai or phir hum wahan se aagay koi 15 se 20 minit ka paidal rasta thaa ground tak wahan k lea aapas main gapain martay huvay chalnay lagay.


ground se thora he pehlay aik paani ka chahsma sa thaa jahan se us gaun ke bohat se aurtain paani bhar kar lay jaati theen or apnay kapray be wahin dhoti theen. main is ground main aaj pehli baar to nahi aaya thaa lakin ye baat zuror thee k main aaj kaafi arsay baad yahan aaya thaa. khair dusri team pehlay se aai hui thee shayed wo log wahan karib k he rehnay walay thay jin main se kuch larku ko main janta be thaa sab k sath salam duaa hui or phir match shuru huva.


match khailtay jis ko be pias lagti wo chashmay par chala jaata or paani pee aata main be aik 2 baar match k doran paani peenay gia wahan koi na koi aurat ya paani bharnay ya kapray dhonay aai hui hoti or wo hamain paani bhar kar day deti or hum pee kar wapis bhag aata thay. ab tak hum 10/10 overs k koi 2 match puray kar chukay thay or dupher be ho chuki thee lakin wo log aakhri match khailnay ke zid karnay lagay to na chahtay huvay be hamain aik match or lagana parra lakin pura din bhag bhag kar ab mujay achi khaasi bhook lag rahi thee lakin wahan koi hal be to nahi thaa bass pait bharnay ko aik paani he thaa or ab wo be khaali pait main tang kar raha thaa.


mujay piass lagi to main phir se aik baar paani peenay gia to wahan par aik jaani pehchani se aik larki mujay bethi kapray dhoti hui nazar aai or itfaaq se us time wahan koi or be nahi thaa bass wo akaili he thee shayed dupehar ka waqat thaa to sab khanay ka time honay ke waja se apnay apnay gharun ko jaa chuki theen khair main us larki ko pehchannay ke koshesh kar he raha thaa k us nay kapray dhotay dhotay apni nazar uthaa kar meri taraf dekhaa or phir wo be mujay dekhti  he chali gai.


wo mujay dekh rahi thee or main usay dekh raha thaa or donu aik dusray ko pehchannay ke koshesh kar rahay thay k achanak wo boli k tum ahmed ho naa.... wo chacha bilal k betay main us k yun achanak bat karnay se thora harbarra gia lakin phir apnay aap ko sambhaltay huvay jawab diya G HAN MAIN BILAL SAB KA HE BETA HUN LAKIN .......MAIN NAY AAP KO NAHI PEHCHANA

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Yun be hota hy
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« Reply #1 on: November 03, 2018, 03:33:06 pm »
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« Reply #3 on: November 04, 2018, 03:42:55 pm »



wo boli main kosar hun naaa sharif sab ke larki itni jaldi bhul gay hoo wesay kahan hotay ho itnay arsay se nazar he nahi aay. us k batanay k foren baad he mai usay pechan gia wo hamaray mohallay se shadi ho kar yahan aai hui thee or kahin dur paar se hamari rishtaydar be lagti thee or is ke shadi ko koi 7 se 8 saal ho chukay thay or shayed shadi k baad ye mujay aaj he mili thee or maray to gumaan main he nahi thaa k ye mujay yahan milay gee.


khair main nay paani piyya or baatu k doran us k puchnay par main nay us ko bataya k main yahan khailnay aaya huva hun or ab aakhri match hai us k baad hum wapis jaa rahay hain to wo boli yahan subha se yun he bhukay piasay naach kudd rahay ho is lea bhuk lagi hoge maray sath chalo ghar se kuch khaa k wapis aa jana


main nay shadeed bhuk lagnay k bawajood us se kaha k nahi kosar baaji abi aakhri match chal raha hay us k baad ghar jaa rahay hain to ghar jaa kar he khana khaa lunga lakin wo zid karnay lagi k asay kesay chalay jao gay bhala khair main nay us se kaafi behas o takraar kee lakin aakhir faisla yahi huva k match khatam honay k baad main un k ghar aa jaunga jo k wahan se karib he thaa mujay malume to nahi thaa lakin us nay isharay se mujay thoray he door zameenu k beech aik akaila sa ghar dekhaya k wo samnay wala ghar un ka hay match khatam kar k aa jana tab tak main jaa kar rooti pakaati hun.


us time mujay be jaldi thee aagay he us k sath bat cheet main kaafi time zaya kar chuka thaa or udar meri bating be aanay waali he thee in short match khatam huva to main baki larku k sath apnay ghar ke taraf chal para kiyun k us waqat tak mujay yaad be nahi raha thaa k mujay kosar baaji apnay han aanay ka keh kar gai hui hain abi main thora sa agay he gia thaa k mujay pechay se kissi nay aawaz lagai


main nay pechay murr kar dekha to pechay aik chota sa larka khara mujay aawaz lagata huva hamaray peechay aa raha thaa hum sab he ruk gay to wo pass aa kar bola k ahmed bhai aap kahan jaa rahay hain aap ko aami bulaa rahi hain. mujay achanak se kosar baji yaad aa gain main nay wahan be jaan churanay ke kaafi koshesh ke lakin us bachay nain meri jaan he nahi chori or mera hath pakar kar mujay wapis pechay ke taraf khenchnay laga or aakhir main nay baaki larku ko bola k tum log jao main yahan apnay rishtaydar hain un k han se ho kar aa jaunga.


wo log chalay gay or main us bachay k sath chalta huva un k ghar aa gia. jaisay he main ghar k gate se dakhil huva mujay samnay he kosar baji khari nazar aain or wo bacha bhagta huva un k pass gia or un se kuch khusar phusar karnay laga.


phir kosar baji nay mujay toilet ka rasta dekhaya or mu hath dhonay ka keh kar khud bahir nikal gain mujay ajeeb sa lag raha thaa aik to in se itni jan pechan be nahi thee or uper se ye aaj mujay itnay arsay baad to dekhai day rahi theen to yun un k ghar aana or wo be khana khanay k lea ...... main nain dil he dil main cricket ko khub galyan dee khar khana khaya or isi doran aik baba g apni laathi taik kar chaltay huvay wahan aay (kosar baji k susar) or mujse milay hal hawal pucha or pas he beth gay unhu nay motta sa chashma lagaya huva thaa or khud be kaafi kamzoor se lag rhay thay.


yahan kosar baji ke family ka taruf karwa dun k wo us time mujse koi 10 aik sal to bari honge he kiyun k meri age us time 17 ya 18 sal thee to un ke age 28 se 30 k lag bhag to thee he or un ka aik he 5 saal tak ka beta thaa jo mujay ground se lay kar aaya thaa baaki ghar main aik susur sab k alewa koi nahi thaa jab k baad main pata chala k kosar baji k husband navy main hain or karachi main duty kartay hain.


kosar baji dekhnay main achi khasi khubsurat hain or un ke body be kamal ke hay. un ka qad to kafi lamba thaa lakin jisam thora healthy honay ke waja se dikhnay main un ka qad chota he lagta thaa. un k rang acha khasa sufaid or bedaagh oily type ke jild or mammay kaafi motay motay thay or peechay se un ke gaand be kaafi se ziada he bhaari thee or chalnay phirnay se un ke gaand ke movement to mujay wahan se nazar hatanay he nahi day rahi thee or shayed ye baat kosar baji nay be note kar lee thee k main un ke bhaari gaand ke movement ko he dekh raha hun.

khana khanay k baad phir kosar baji k susar baba g maray pass se uth kar apni laathi taiktay huvay us room se bahir nikal gay or jatay jatay mujay rest karnay ka keh gay. mujay ab yahan rest kia karni thee ab main yahan se nikalna chahta thaa or jaisay he main uthnay laga samnay se kosar baji tray hath main pakray room main dakhil hui jis main chay thee.


main nay un ko chay k lea mana be kiya lakin wo kahan mannay wali theen khair chay peetay huvay hum batain be karnay lagay. kosar baji mujse study k baray main puchnay lagin k cricket he khailtay rehtay ho k parhai be kartay ho. main nay kaha k main nay FSC 1st semester k papers diyea hain. phir chay pee kar main nay uthna chaha to wo mujay uthnay he nahi day rahi theen kehnay lagi abi bethoo abi bahir bohat dhoop hay sham ko chalay jana jab dhoop kam hoge.


khair mujay un ke baat manna he parri thori dair k baad kosar baji ka baita be un ke jholi main so gia or hum batain kartay rahay phir kosar baji us ko dusray room main laitany janay lagin. jaisay he wo kursi se uthi or bahir ke tarah ko barhi meri nazar foren un ke gaand par chali gai.


hmmmm kia gaand thee yaarrr un ke........... peechay se bahir ko nikli hui or itni bhaari k un ke gaand main un ke kamiz dur andar tak chali gai hui thee or phansi hui thee ab gaand main kamiz phans janay se un ke gaand ke shape or ziada wazay ho rahi thee or un k chalnay se gaand ke movement pehlay se be ziada jaan laiwa or kaatilana ho rahi thee. main apni nazar un ke gaand se hatta he nahi paa raha thaa or door kahin khayalu ke dunya main chala gia thaa. dil he dil main soch raha thaa k kaash aesi he koi gaand mujay chodnay ko mil jay.


abi main apnay khayalun ke dunyan main mazeed aagay barh he raha thaa k mujay kosar baaji ke awaz aai. main nay jab is taraf dehan diya to pata chala k kosar baji mujay aawa day kar kuch keh rahi hain..................... aawaz ka to pata chal gia lakin ye samaj na aa saki k unhu nay mujay kaha kia hay.



abi main puchnay wala he thaa k wo bolin Ahmed kahan khoo gay hooo main nay tum se kuch puchaa hay. ab main kia jawab deta main nay kuch suna hota to jawab deta main to un ke gaand k dilkash nazaray main khoya huva thaa. main nay un ke taraf sawalya nazrun se dekha to wo halka sa muskuraty huva bolin main dekh rahi hun Ahmed sab k aap ke nazrain kaha hain achaaaa


main yun rangay hathu pakray janay par sharminda ho gia or apni aankhain jhuka lein or bola k main nay suna ni aap ny kia puchaa hy wo bolin han han dehan kahin or ho to kuch sunai be kahan deta hy janab main nain ye puchaa thaa k agar rest karni hay to samnay walay room main jaa kar thori dair so jaoo abi bohat garmi hay. main nay jawab diya k nahi nahi sona kahan hay main to jana chah raha thaa ab aap zid kar rahi hain to main thori dair or yahan beth jata hun.


wo kehnay lagin achaa tum bethoo main rohail ko rakh kar aati hun. rohail un k bachay ka name thaa or ye be mujay abi he pata chala thaa. jab kosar baji rohail ko laitaa kar wapis aain to maray sath walay sofay par aa kar beth gain. main abi be un se nazrain nahi mila paa raha thaa lakin aik ahtminan thaa k unhu nay mind nahi kiya warna gussa ho jaati.


khair hamari phir se gap shap shuru ho gai or baat school ke ho rahi thee k rohail ko garmiyun ke chutyan hain or in chutyun main wo apnay aami abu k ghar be rehnay ko aain gee to main nain un ko apnay han be invite kar diya k jab aap wahan aain to hamaray ghar be lazim aana.

batu batu main wo kehnay lagin k agar wo mujay aaj wahan na pechanti to main nay kab un k ghar aana thaa to main nay un se kaha k asal main pechana to main nay be nahi thaa aap ko wo to aap nay bataya to he main nay pechaana baki rahi baat aanay ke to ab to main aata he rahuga


kosar baji bolin han han mujay pata hay kitna aaoo gay. itnay saal ho gay hain meri shadi ko aaj tak to yahan aay nahi main nay kaha aap dekh laina ab main aaya karuga wo pehlay to mujay pata be nahi thaa aap k ghar ka warna yahan hum khailnay to aatay he hain to yahan se pass he to hay is lea ab to main aata he rahuga.


wo bolin soch loo agar wada pura na kiya too. main bola nahi nahi kosar baji aap dekh laina main waday ka pakka hun aap aazma kar dekh laina. wo bolin ye to ab pata chal he jayega k tum waday k kitnay pakkay hoo lakin mujay lagta nahi hy k tum aaoo gay. main nay kaha kiyun nahi aaunga jab aap kaho ge main aa jaun ga aap aazma kar dekh laina.


wo bolin jab main kahun ge tum aa jao gay? main bola kiyun nahi aaunga aap jab be jis time be kaho ge main aa jaunga. wo bolin jis time be kahu ge tum aa jao gay? main bola han han jis time be aap kaho ge main aa jaunga wo foren bolin soch loo bachuu phir ye na ho k tum na aa sakko?


main be foren bola aaray aap keh kar to dekhain aap aazmaa lain. main nay soch liya hay main be josh main bolta chala gia lakin achanak he kosar baji bolin agar main kahun k raat ko 10 bajay aa jana tooo? main bola aa jaunga or. wo bolin or agar main kahu k raat 12 bajay aa jana toooo? main bola 12 bajay ya 2 bajay 100 bajay main jab aap kaho ge aa sakta hun.


wo bolin tumhain darr nahi lagay gaa. yahan naalay k pass jin bhoot hotay hain bachuu tum to darr he jaoo gay tum nahi aa saktay. main bola main nahi darta kissi jin bhoot se main jab aap kahoo aa sakta hun mujay nahi lagta darr sharr.


wo bolin achaaa dekhtay hain phir k tum waday k kitnay pakkay hoo tum kal raat ko 10 bajay aa jaoo main dekhti hun k kesay aatay hoo lakin meri aik shart hay? main bola kon se shart ? wo bolin tumhain akailay aana hoga warna agar tum kissi larkay ko sath lay aaoo to phir kia faida tum kitnay bahadur ho ye to tab he pata chalay ga jab tum akailay aaoo gay.


main bola aap dekh laina main akaila he aaunga or aap ko wapis be jaa k dekhaunga mujay nahi lagta koi darr sharrr dekh laina. wo bolin achaa g chalo dekh laitay hain tum kitnay pakkay hoo. main bola or agar main akaila aa gia kal raat ko 10 bajay to mujay kia milay gaa. wo bolin jo tum kahoo gay milay gaa lakin mujay pata hay tum nahi aa saktay. main bola aap lagaoo shart main aaunga lakin mujay kia milay ga phir?


wo bolin kaha hy na jo tum kaho gay milay gaa. meri nazar seedha un k mammu par gai jo k uper dupatta honay ke wajase itnay ziada wazay to nahi thay lakin un ke motaai to phir be wazay thee. mujay apnay mammu ko ghurta dekh kar unhu nay phir kaha Ahmed kahin pehlay ke tarha ghurnay k chakkar main ye na ho k tum nay suna he na ho k main nay kia kaha hy.


un ka saaf ishara maray apnay mammu ke taraf dekhnay ka thaa jaisay main pehlay un ke gaand ko ghurta pakra gia thaa lakin is baar main sab sun raha thaa. khair hamari isi tarha baat cheet chalti rahi or main moka miltay he un k jisam k wazay hessun ko dekh or tarrr be laita thaa jo k ab un ko be wazay toor par nazar aa raha thaa lakin ab wo mujay rook took be nahi rahi theen.



khair isi tarha shaam ko assar ka time huva to main uthnay laga k aik baar phir zikkar aaya maray aanay kaa to main nay un se kaha k kosar baji aap ye batain k main raat ko 10 bajay aa to jaun ga lakin aap to soo rahi honge to aap ko kesay pata chalay ga k main aaya huva hun  or ghar main baba g k alewa koi or hay be nahi jisay main bata k chala jau o main aa gia hun


wo bolin pehli baat ye hy k tum aa he nahi saktay tum to raat ko darr k maray ghar se bahir be nahi niklo gay or agar tum ghar se nikal he aay to yahan tak aa nahi sako gay wo be akailay itnay door. main bola acha farz karain main aa he jata hun to aap ko kesay pata chalay gaa maray aanay ka.


wo bolin ye samnay wala kamra mera hay main isi main soti hun or bahir ka chota gate asay he band hota hay kundi nahi lagi hoti usay han bara gate to band he hota hay usay hum kunda laga detay hain. wesy tum aa to saktay nahi ho lakin agar tum aa he gay to chota gate khol kar sedha andar aa jana or mera room ye samnay hay is main aa kar mujay bata dena k tum aa gay hoo.


main bola agar baba g nay dekh liya tooo? wo bolin un ko din ko nazar nahi aata to raat ko kahan se nazar aay gaa or wo wesay be raat ko so jatay hain lakin mujay yakin hay tum aa he nahi saktay ye shart to main wesay he jeeti hui hun.


main bola challo dekhtay hain kon jeetta hy aap kal raat ko dekh laina. or phir ye keh kar main uth khara huva or bahir ke taraf nikalnay laga to kosar baji apnay room main gain or aik shoper lay kar bahir aain or bolin mera aik kaam be kar daina main bola g han bolain kia kaam to wo kehnay lagin k ye suit hay mera ye maray ghar day daina or aami se kehna k silaai kar dain. main nay wo shopper liya or un se ijazat lay kar ghar ke taraf nikal aaya


saray rastay chalta huva yahi sochta raha k ye aaj maray sath huva kia hy? kosar baji nay maray sath shart kiyun lagai wo be raat ko aanay kee or mujay buzdil or bahadur k chakkar main dal kar raat ko aanay k lea raazi kar liya. wo mujay uksaa rahi teen or main un ke batu main aa gia. khair main ghar ponchaa or kissi tarha raat or din guzaara bass yahi sochtay guzra k agay kia karun.


yahan ye batata chalun k sex to main pehlay be kai baar kar chuka thaa or luckily bohat aala kisam ke phudyan maar chuka thaa lakin pata nahi kosar baji ko dekhny k baad mujay kia ho gia thaa k bass pichlay 24 hours main mujay bass kosar baji he nazar aa rahi theen. mera khayal bass un ke taraf he thaa yahi soch raha thaa k raat ko jaun k na jaun. agar chala gia to kia pata wahan jaa kar kuch ho he naa or ye na ho k wahan ponch he na sakun or ponch be gia to pakra he na jaun. yaani har kisam k waswasay se dil main aa rahay thay.


khair meghrib k baad main nay toilet ka rukh kia or achi tarha se neechay uper ke sufai kee or theek tarha se naha dhoo kar tiyar honay laga. main nay aaj khoob achay se tiyari kee thee k ho sakta hy koi chance ban he jay or aaj mujay kosar baji ke phudi mil he jay.


khub saari perfume be lagai or body spray se be apni body par khoob spray kee or raat k koi 9:30 baj rahay thay main nay khana khanay k baad ghar walun se kissi dost k han janay ka bahana kar k nikal aaya or apnay ghar se sedha baazar ke taraf aaya jo k wahan se koi 10 minit ke doori par thaa. wahan aik dukaan se choti se torch or pani k bottle lee sedha kosar baji k ghar ke taraf chal diya. hamesha ke tarha mera 9mm pistal be maray sath thaa is lea mujay apni hefazat ka koi andesha nahi thaa or jahan zururat hoti torch jala laita .


main paidal rastay se chalta huva bilkul us jagha k karib ponch gia jahan se aagay wo paani ka chashma shuru hota thaa or aik naala sa bana huva thaa jis main chashmay ka faltu or used paani behta thaa or wahan darakht is qadar ziada thay k ajeeb sa khoof aata thaa wahan se guzartay. main nay kuch dair wait kar k idhar odar ka achi tarha jaiza liya or phir pehlay ke nisbat taiz chaltay huvay naala cross kiya or ground k aik side par chalta huva sedha kosar baji k ghar ke taraf chalnay laga.


jab main un k ghar k karib poncha to main aik drakht ke ott main khara ho gia or un k ghar k ird gird ka jaiza laina laga. mera dil itnay zoor se dharak raha thaa k main bata nahi sakta. kuch darr be lag raha thaa lakin itna ahtaminan zuroor thaa k kosar baji k ghar main un k budhay susar k alewa koi nahi hoga. phir main us darakht k peechay se nikala or main nay aista chaltay huvay un k ghar ko cross kar liya or is tarha agay se ho kar wapis be aa gia or achi tarha jaiza lay liya k koi hay to nahi.

mujay koi khatra mehsoos nahi huva to main idhar odar dekhta huva sedha un k gate k pass ponch gia. time dekha to 10:45 ho rahay thay main nay gate k pass jaa kar jab chotay gate ko dhakka diya to wo halki se aawaz k sath khul gia. main nay apna sir gate k andar kar ke dekhaa lakin kuch be nazar nahi aa raha thaa andar bilkul andhera thaa.


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Re: Yun be hota hy
« Reply #4 on: November 04, 2018, 05:43:28 pm »
Good work Khoji ji
Looks Like Khooji ki Mauji lagnay wali hay
Achi Balanced Update and Suspense aur Natural andaaz se agay barhti hoi kAhani
Dekhiyie agay agay
Hota hay kiya


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Re: Yun be hota hy
« Reply #5 on: November 04, 2018, 07:01:52 pm »
Thanks engrdanial
ye aik choti se story hy bass 2 se 3 updates main khatam honay wali hy lakin ap ko bohat maza aanay wala hy next updates main
Han albata "yun be hota hy" topic jari rahay gaa sirf "KOSAR" name ke story muk jayge baki isi plot par mukhtalif stories jari rahain ge


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Re: Yun be hota hy
« Reply #6 on: November 04, 2018, 07:18:11 pm »
Thanks engrdanial
ye aik choti se story hy bass 2 se 3 updates main khatam honay wali hy lakin ap ko bohat maza aanay wala hy next updates main
Han albata "yun be hota hy" topic jari rahay gaa sirf "KOSAR" name ke story muk jayge baki isi plot par mukhtalif stories jari rahain ge
یہ ہی ہونا چاہئے
ایک ہی ٹاپک کے اندر اپ شارٹ سٹوریز بناؤ یا مختلف ٹاپکس
جیسے بینا   سیما اور شاہ جی
سات سے آٹھ اقساط مین کہانی مکمل ہو جانا چاہئے
ورنہ کوئی  مزہ نہیں  رہتا
یہ اپکا منفرد انداز ہو گا کہ ایک ٹاپک کے اندر اہنے مختلف  شاہ پارے مجتمع ر
کرین گے
Good Luck


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Re: Yun be hota hy
« Reply #7 on: November 04, 2018, 08:53:37 pm »
Thanks engrdanial
ye aik choti se story hy bass 2 se 3 updates main khatam honay wali hy lakin ap ko bohat maza aanay wala hy next updates main
Han albata "yun be hota hy" topic jari rahay gaa sirf "KOSAR" name ke story muk jayge baki isi plot par mukhtalif stories jari rahain ge
یہ ہی ہونا چاہئے
ایک ہی ٹاپک کے اندر اپ شارٹ سٹوریز بناؤ یا مختلف ٹاپکس
جیسے بینا   سیما اور شاہ جی
سات سے آٹھ اقساط مین کہانی مکمل ہو جانا چاہئے
ورنہ کوئی  مزہ نہیں  رہتا
یہ اپکا منفرد انداز ہو گا کہ ایک ٹاپک کے اندر اہنے مختلف  شاہ پارے مجتمع ر
کرین گے
Good Luck


شکریہ جی
کوشس کروں گا کہ اپنی پہلی کاوش سے پڑھنے والو کو انٹرٹین کر سکوں

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Re: Yun be hota hy
« Reply #8 on: November 04, 2018, 09:08:14 pm »
bahut khoob  :clap:

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« Reply #9 on: November 04, 2018, 11:16:25 pm »
Thanks engrdanial
ye aik choti se story hy bass 2 se 3 updates main khatam honay wali hy lakin ap ko bohat maza aanay wala hy next updates main
Han albata "yun be hota hy" topic jari rahay gaa sirf "KOSAR" name ke story muk jayge baki isi plot par mukhtalif stories jari rahain ge
یہ ہی ہونا چاہئے
ایک ہی ٹاپک کے اندر اپ شارٹ سٹوریز بناؤ یا مختلف ٹاپکس
جیسے بینا   سیما اور شاہ جی
سات سے آٹھ اقساط مین کہانی مکمل ہو جانا چاہئے
ورنہ کوئی  مزہ نہیں  رہتا
یہ اپکا منفرد انداز ہو گا کہ ایک ٹاپک کے اندر اہنے مختلف  شاہ پارے مجتمع ر
کرین گے
Good Luck


شکریہ جی
کوشس کروں گا کہ اپنی پہلی کاوش سے پڑھنے والو کو انٹرٹین کر سکوں
مزہ آئے  گا اگر بیچ ‫ین ھندکو کا تڑکا بھی ہو ڈائلاگ کا سواد دیسی اور لوکل مزہ مکس


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Re: Yun be hota hy
« Reply #10 on: November 05, 2018, 03:02:32 pm »
Hey .. me ne story read nhi ki abi bt i request k agr ye ap ki real life ki story he to plz write it same to same that happened in real life ... ap ne start me blkul thk bola k log attract krne k liey sb jhoot ya imagination ya fantasies likhte hen .. bt real bht km .. jo logon ki life me hua wo parhne ka zyada mza ata he muje to.. so plz ap real hi likhna r agy k parts me koi r events likho ge to wo b real life k hi likhna... ☺👍

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Re: Yun be hota hy
« Reply #11 on: November 05, 2018, 05:27:20 pm »
Hey .. me ne story read nhi ki abi bt i request k agr ye ap ki real life ki story he to plz write it same to same that happened in real life ... ap ne start me blkul thk bola k log attract krne k liey sb jhoot ya imagination ya fantasies likhte hen .. bt real bht km .. jo logon ki life me hua wo parhne ka zyada mza ata he muje to.. so plz ap real hi likhna r agy k parts me koi r events likho ge to wo b real life k hi likhna... ☺👍


Main incidents to as it is he likh raha hun but thora bohat march masala na lagao to story main maza ni ayga is lea thori bohat changings or sex styles likhna parta hy


Ye sirf aik story nahi hy bal k bohat saray incidents ko alag alg likha jaa raha hy with one topic "yun be hota hy"