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ghreeb ki zindagi
« on: December 04, 2018, 02:01:22 am »
ye ek suchi kahani hai mera naam bashir ahmad hai punjab ke ek shehar narowal ke ek chute se goin mein rahta ho mera gion ka naam sion wala hai loog humere gion ko soin loog pand bolte hein es ki wahja bi hai humere gion ke ek bazrhg the jo allha pak ko pyere ho ge hein wo kisi ka bazzo toot jye ya kisi ki thang toot jye ya haddi nikal jye to wo elaaj karte the masshllah boht pohnje ho bahzrhg the on ke taveez se shartia elaj tha lete dete kuch nahi the jo koi apni marzi de de rahk lete the kisi ne 10 rupe die onho ne rahk lye kisi ne 10 hazar dia rahk lye mahgte nahi the kisi ki alad na ho taveez dete the dum karte the alad ho jati thi barri phonji hovi hassti thi baba sion g on ke naam se hi humere gion ka naam sion loog pand pare ab to wo allha pak ko pyere ho ge hein ab on ki jahga on ka beta kallo phalwan dum darod aur bazzo wahgra churrta hai masshallh sher jawan hai nazar na lahge 6 foot lumba churra jawan hai kallo sion ya kallo pahlwan kyen k wo pehle pehlwani bi karta raha hai jab on ke abba hazoor hayat the tab ab jab on k abba hazoor pardha farma ge hein es donya se to ab on ki jahga kallo pahlwan ne sambhal li hai to ab loog on ko kallo sion bi bolte hein aur kallo phlwan bi humera pand ya gion jo bi ap samje etna chuta bi nahi hai 200 ya 250 ghar to lazmi ho ge main mahkme daak ka malzm ho ab ap se kya chupna postman ho 5 jamte pass ho urdu lihk parh sakta ho engrzi tohri boht samj sakta ho lihk nahi sakta boht pehle meri maa chudhari saab ke ghar kaam kaaj karti thi chahdri saab ka dhamd post office ka barra shab tha ammi ne on tarle mant kar ke moj ko bi nukari dalwa di tab acche waqt the 5th pass ko bi nukri mil jati hai ab to bhai saab sarkri nukri nahi milti khuda meri maa ko junat mein jahga de on ki wahja se hi aj sarkri nukri kar raha ho mashallh hum 5bhai bhan hein meri 4 bhane hein aur main akla bhai ho main sab se chuta ho boht ghrreb log hein hum ap loogo se kya cuhpna ab meri 4 bhano ki shadye ho gi hein ghreeb admi ko kon rishta deta hai jaha se koi rishta atta amma kar deti karti bi kya buchri ghar bhaddi omere ho rahi thi zada samj le jin ka koi rishta nahi mil raha tha jin mein koi na koi aaab tha jin ko koi beti nahi deta tha hum ko on se shadye karwni parri apni bhano ki mujbori thi ab ghar to bhadda nahi sakte the jo jo naseeb the on k on ko mil ge baqi ghreeb insan ki koi zindagi tohri hoti hai pehle hum es gion me nahi rahte the aur gion tha chuta sa oder bi karye ka hi ghar tha par allha bhala kare chudhri saab ka hum se karya nahi lete tye main oder hi padda hova tha wo pand ab bi moj ko yaad ata hai oder na amma kaam karne chuli jati thi chadri saab ke ghar main school ke bad ghumta parhta rahta 3 bhanse thi ek gaae thi 6 bakrri thi ek ghada tha 15 ke ass pass murhgya thi chuta sa ghar tha puche 3 kamre the ahge barnda tha ya haal bool lo chuta sa sehn tha jaha moj ko yaad hai ek barri ka darht bi tha moj ko yaad hai main os ke beer kahta tha bejli thi light thi gion me par humere ghar nahi thi allha junat mein jahga de abba humere ko sanp ne kaat lia tha foot ho ge the main ne abba ko dehka nahi hai main tab doodh peta bucha moj ko yaad nahi amma ne bari mehnt kar ke pala hai hum sab bhan bhaion ko parha lihka bus main hi ho 5 jamte pass ho bhano ne bus quran hi parha hai jaha ap ka buchpn gghozrra ho wo bhilta qab hai humera ghar gion ki ek nukar par tha chuta sa ghar tha ek kamrre mein junwaro ki torri aur toka parra tha jis se meri bhane junwro ke lye chura katti thi junwar garmion mein to sehen me hi bhandte the par sardion mein ya barsh mein on ko barhnde  mein kar lete the kuchen nahi tha bhhar sehen me hi ek nukar pe jalha jalte the wahi khana shana paka kar wahi roti kha lete the bhatroom bi bus nam ka tha chuta sa 4 ft tak dawar thi opar chuta nahi tha pani ki moter nahi thi nalka tha moj ko sara yaad hai tab ka bathroom ko darwza nahi tha bus chudr lahgi thi ek main chuta tha to etna kaam kaaj nahi karta tha dosra ghar wale bi karwte nahi the os ki wahja hai k main ek dafa bumar ho gya tha bhakar chur gya tha ek mehne tak nahi utara hadi toor bhkar ho gya tha rooz sham ko amma sion se dum karwti thi taveez bi onho ne dia tha tab thek to ho gya lekin mera qaad nahi barha tab se hi main patla sa ho mera qaad 4 ft 8 inch hai bus jab ke meri ammi aur sarri bhane thek thak qaad ki hein bus main hi bumari ki wahja se chuta rah gya mere hise mein ghar se bhhar ke hi kaam ate the doodh wahgra sath wale barre gion me loogo ke ghar me deh ata

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ghreeb ki zindagi
« on: December 04, 2018, 02:01:22 am »

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Re: ghreeb ki zindagi
« Reply #1 on: December 05, 2018, 12:42:33 am »
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« Reply #1 on: December 05, 2018, 12:42:33 am »

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Re: ghreeb ki zindagi
« Reply #2 on: December 08, 2018, 01:41:31 am »
replay karo kch pher baqi ki baat suno ga


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Re: ghreeb ki zindagi
« Reply #3 on: December 08, 2018, 08:20:03 am »
Ye reply ki Kya shartain laga rahey ho bhai?
Nahin likhni tau na likho !

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Re: ghreeb ki zindagi
« Reply #4 on: December 08, 2018, 10:54:07 am »
Bhai start to karo......
1-2 update or karo...
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Re: ghreeb ki zindagi
« Reply #5 on: December 08, 2018, 06:49:19 pm »
nice start


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Re: ghreeb ki zindagi
« Reply #6 on: December 08, 2018, 10:38:07 pm »
nice start ...but one thing never ever use word A--- one this fourm plz its a sex fourm ...

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« Reply #7 on: December 10, 2018, 03:50:38 am »
doodh wahgra sath wale barre gion me loogo ke ghar me deh ata   masshlah humeri bhansse aur gave kol mila ke ek time ka 15 kolo subha aur 15 kolo sham ko doodh niklta ata tha main har roz garmi ho ya sardi barsh ho ya teez tofaan apni parni ci cycle pe sath wale gion me loogo ke gharo mein doodh de ata tha
main ne hi jana tha aur kisi nahi jana tha ghar ka ekla mard jo main hi tha
es lye bhhar ke sare kaam moj ko karne parte the par ye kaam bi mere lye moshkil tha kyen k main tohra kamzoor sa patla sa tha
bamarri ki wahja se mera qaad bi chuta raha gya tha aur sath wala gion bi koi pass nahi tha cycle pe jate jate pora ek ghnta lahg jata tha
raste mein chuti c nehaar bi ati thi pani to nahaar mein etna zada pani nahi hota tha par moj ko dar lahgta tha
kyen k main patla sa tha es lye darrta tha k nahhar ka pani moj ko bahh ke na lye jye
kyen k boht pehle ek dafa salaab aya tha to humere gion ki ek larki buchri dhhob gi thi aj tak os ki lash nahi mili allha os ko junat me jahga de
baqi rasta qareeb qareeb sunsaan hi tha bus ek jahga qabrstan hai waha pe bi tohra darr lahgta tha par me teez teez cycle chula ke nikl jata tha
par thak bi boht jata tha kyen k 15 kolo doodh
jis me doodh dalte hein wo kopi bi 7 kolo ki hoti hai kol mila ke 23 kolo wazn cycle pe le jana moj ko moshkil lahgta tha par le jata tha
ap such rahe ho ge k etni bhansse aur ek gave ka doodh sirf 15 kolo
asal me baat ye hai k kuch bhanse soni wali [ buche dene wali ] thi es lye wo doodh nahi deti thi
bhans wase bi 6 mehne hi doodh deta hai 6 mehne nahi
aur ek bhans to es bar bucha bi nahi hova tha es lye es saal os ne bi doodh nahi dia ha
bucha insan ka ho ya bhans ka allha ki deen hai jase jahye de jise jahye na de khuda pe kisi ka zoor tohri hai
bhans ne bucha nahi ia es pe meri barri bezti hovi thi ammi aur bhano se asal me kuch ghlti meri bi hai amma ne bola tha k sath wale gion ke kallo bhanso wale ke pass es sand hai os se bhans ko lahgwa lo [ lahgwa lo  ka matlab hai k apni bhans ko os ke saand se chudva lo ] kyen k kalo bhanso wale ke barre mein mashoor tha k wo apne saand ko desi ghee aur gharm hark kkhulwta hai
es lye jis bhans ko kallo bhanso wale ka sand chudta hai lazmi bucha deti hai
par main ne ghlati ye kar di k kallo bhanso wale ki buhjye apni hi ghion ke ek saand se bhans ko lahgwa lia
main ne sucha tha os ko etni door se balwo ga 200 rapa bi do ga tab 200 aj ke 2000 ke barbar hota tha hum ghreeb the sucha bucht ho jye gi gion wala admi 100 rapa leta tha aur bus chyee pe ke chula jye ga
jab ke kallo ko balion ga 200 bi do ga aur mhdyai ka ek kolo wala dabba bi leta hai aur sath desi muhrgi ke sath khana bi khata hai
main ne bola k os ke etne nahhre hein aj bolo to 10 din bad k time milta hai kallo bhansso wale se
es lye main apni hi gion wale admi ko bala lia wo apni saand le ke humere ghar aa gya amma ne dehka k ye kallo nahi hai to amma ne moj ko side pe bala ke danttna shorr kar dia
ka sarri donya kallo bhanso wale ki saand se apni bhanse lahgwti hai os ko bolna tha es ko kyen balya es k saand se humeri bhans ko bucha na hova to kon zumedar hai
main bola amma fikar na karo main zumedar ho ye saand bi thek hai allha ne jaha to zoor bucha ho ga bhans ko
aur amma ye sirf 100 rapa leta hai kallo bhansa wala 200 leta hai
sath mahdayi ka dabba aur desi murhgi ke sath khana kha ke jeta hai es ko bus chyee pala kar behj de ge
tab meri barri baji hamida boli k kodo [ moj ko ghar me kodo hi bolte hein kkyen k mera qaad bamari ki wahja se chuta rah gya tha es lye ] hamida baji boli k kodo 100 rape ke puche agr bucha na hova to pora saal bhans ne na ke barbar doodh dena hai pher wo niqsan zada hai ya ye 100 ka naqasn
tab main bola k baji hamida allha na kare koi naqsan ho ap loog ase hi fikar kar rahe ho es ka saand bi thek hai humari bhanns ko lagwe ga allha ne jaha to lazmi bucha ho ga
etni deer me saand wale ne moj ko awaz de ke bala lia aur bola
apni bhans ko rassi kholo main ne bhans ki rasi khol di kille se os ne bi apne saand ko khula chhod dia
ab os ka saand humeri bhans ke pass a ke khar ho gya tohri deer bhans ko shonghta raha
pher humeri bhans ke puche a gya aur bhans ko puche se sohgne lahga
tab humeri bhans ne chulna soor kar dia qabi eder jati ghar me qobi oder aur os ka saand bi humeri bhans ke puche puche chulta jata
ap ka to pata hai humara ghar chuta sa to hai sirf 2 hi kamre hein ek haal hai jis mein sardion aur barsh me bhanso ko bhandte hein to kya hova k humeri bhan na ek kamre ke pass a ke ruk gi
os kamre me ammi aur baji hamida bhadi dehk rahi thi tab ek dum se saand ne apni ahgli dono thango ko utha ke humeri bhans pe rahk dia aur humeri bhans ko lahgna shoor kar dia tabi bhans ahgge jane lahgi
tab wo admi moj ko bola k kado bhans ko pakkro ahge mat jane dena
jaldi kar jaldi kar kodo
main bhar senh ke pass tha main door ke haal me aya haal adha foot uncha hai sehen se mera poin jaldi se setp ko lahga main nuche gir gya
oder wo admi bole ja raha tha bhans ko pakro bhans ko pakrro
tabi kamre se meri amma aur baji hamida ne a ke bhans ko gale me jo rasi thi os se pakar lia aur bhans ko ahge nahi jane dia
tab tohri jahtke mar ke sand otar gya saand ke otarte hi main bi apni thng milta milta phonj gya
tab meri brri bhan baji hamida gusse se boli kodo tum se koi kaam thek se nahi ho sakta
main sharmda sa ho ke bhans ko kale se rassi se bhand dia
tab wo admi bola allha ne chaya to kati ho gi kati [ kati bhans ki beti ko bolte hein ] main bola bola inshallh
os ko pher baji farida ne chye pali aur main ne 100 dia aur os ko behj dia tohri gupshap lahga ke tab os ke jane ke bad main ne barre fahkar ke sath 100 ka note halte hove amma ko dia
aur bola amma dehka 100 bucha lia na
tab amma dusse se boli ahgr bhans ne bucha na dia to dehkna kodo main tere andar se bucha niklo gi
aur 100 rapa pakar ke andar almri me rahkne lahgi
tab pata nahi kya such ke amma wapass mur gi aur 100 rapa meri baji hamida ko la ke boli k rahk lo kal parso kodo ke sath mela pe samn wahgra le ana ab din hi kitne rah ge hein tumhere mammo ki shadi ko kappre le ana
tab baji hamida boli k ammi es se to mere aur kado ke aur farida ke hi aye ge kappre wahgra to ammi boli kalo arshd doodh dahi wale ne bi humere passe dene hein ye sath wale gion ka ek doodh ki dukan wala hai es ko main doodh deta ho main tab jaldi se bola k amma main os ko bolo ga ke humere mammo ki shadi hai hum ko passe pehle hi de do shayd aj sham k jab dodh dene jao ga tab ahgr passe mil ge to lete ao ga pora 100 hai os ki tarf bi
tab baji hamida bali lazmi yaad se le ana bhol mat jana kodo


 

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