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AKELA..TANHA..
« on: December 09, 2018, 06:10:10 pm »
‘’Hum 5 dost the..qismat ne humen akatha kr dia..is sheher ka 1 ilaqa ha jise juraim paisha afraad/criminals ka garh kaha jata ha…shayed waqt ne humen aisa bna dia ya shayed hamari apni choice thi k hum wahan ki underworld k badshah kehlaye jane lge halan k hum sb parhe likhe/educated the aur kisi kisam ka criminal background b nai tha hamara…hamare bare mein log kehte the k yeh log maut/death dhoondte phirte hn…phir bari bari mere Charon dost chale gye..un Charon mein se koi b qudrati maut nai mara…bs ma bch gya…akela…tanha..’’
Wo apni chin pe hath tikaye bohat ghor se meri baat sun rai thi
‘’aur yeh Arham…’’
Us ne park mein khelte chhote se arham ki taraf dekha
‘’ise mera beta he samjho…isi k liye ji raha hn ma ab..isi k liye wo duniya wo life chhor di ma ne’’
Ma arham ki taraf dekh k muskuraya
‘’akhir dhoond he lia na tuje…tu samajhta tha k tu chhup jaye ga aur muj se bch jaye ga?’’
Ma ne apne dayen taraf chehra ghumaya…
Phir arham ki taraf dekha..
Aur zindagi mein pehli bar muje maut se khof mehsoos hua…

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AKELA..TANHA..
« on: December 09, 2018, 06:10:10 pm »

Offline kaka123

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Re: AKELA..TANHA..
« Reply #1 on: December 10, 2018, 05:57:57 pm »
still not approved..
how do i contact moderator?
shall i post it to some other site?

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« Reply #1 on: December 10, 2018, 05:57:57 pm »

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Re: AKELA..TANHA..
« Reply #2 on: December 10, 2018, 11:36:42 pm »
Nice start kaka 123

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Re: AKELA..TANHA..
« Reply #3 on: December 10, 2018, 11:53:09 pm »
waah great intriguing start to another interesting looking story  :clap:

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Re: AKELA..TANHA..
« Reply #4 on: December 11, 2018, 12:16:01 am »
Nice start 👌👌

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Re: AKELA..TANHA..
« Reply #5 on: December 11, 2018, 01:02:29 am »
WEll come back  bro


Nice start


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Re: AKELA..TANHA..
« Reply #6 on: December 11, 2018, 06:34:21 am »
Nice start brother

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Re: AKELA..TANHA..
« Reply #7 on: December 11, 2018, 12:04:16 pm »
Well Come Back Bro with new story

 

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