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AKELA..TANHA..
« on: December 09, 2018, 06:10:10 pm »
‘’Hum 5 dost the..qismat ne humen akatha kr dia..is sheher ka 1 ilaqa ha jise juraim paisha afraad/criminals ka garh kaha jata ha…shayed waqt ne humen aisa bna dia ya shayed hamari apni choice thi k hum wahan ki underworld k badshah kehlaye jane lge halan k hum sb parhe likhe/educated the aur kisi kisam ka criminal background b nai tha hamara…hamare bare mein log kehte the k yeh log maut/death dhoondte phirte hn…phir bari bari mere Charon dost chale gye..un Charon mein se koi b qudrati maut nai mara…bs ma bch gya…akela…tanha..’’
Wo apni chin pe hath tikaye bohat ghor se meri baat sun rai thi
‘’aur yeh Arham…’’
Us ne park mein khelte chhote se arham ki taraf dekha
‘’ise mera beta he samjho…isi k liye ji raha hn ma ab..isi k liye wo duniya wo life chhor di ma ne’’
Ma arham ki taraf dekh k muskuraya
‘’akhir dhoond he lia na tuje…tu samajhta tha k tu chhup jaye ga aur muj se bch jaye ga?’’
Ma ne apne dayen taraf chehra ghumaya…
Phir arham ki taraf dekha..
Aur zindagi mein pehli bar muje maut se khof mehsoos hua…

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AKELA..TANHA..
« on: December 09, 2018, 06:10:10 pm »

Offline kaka123

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Re: AKELA..TANHA..
« Reply #1 on: December 10, 2018, 05:57:57 pm »
still not approved..
how do i contact moderator?
shall i post it to some other site?

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« Reply #1 on: December 10, 2018, 05:57:57 pm »

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Re: AKELA..TANHA..
« Reply #2 on: December 10, 2018, 11:36:42 pm »
Nice start kaka 123

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« Reply #3 on: December 10, 2018, 11:53:09 pm »
waah great intriguing start to another interesting looking story  :clap:

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« Reply #4 on: December 11, 2018, 12:16:01 am »
Nice start 👌👌

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« Reply #5 on: December 11, 2018, 01:02:29 am »
WEll come back  bro


Nice start


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« Reply #6 on: December 11, 2018, 06:34:21 am »
Nice start brother

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Re: AKELA..TANHA..
« Reply #7 on: December 11, 2018, 12:04:16 pm »
Well Come Back Bro with new story

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« Reply #8 on: December 11, 2018, 12:30:07 pm »
Sab Gaandu Stories approved horahi hai 80% incomplete chodke chale jaate hai...Kaka ki 2 stories complete aur best hai phir approved nai Hui...fuck yumstories moderators 👆👆👆
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« Reply #9 on: December 11, 2018, 01:38:48 pm »
خوش آمدید

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« Reply #10 on: December 11, 2018, 02:19:16 pm »
Nice bro good
Welcome jald any k lea

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« Reply #11 on: December 11, 2018, 02:54:27 pm »
‘’riz…zara market ja aur mere cigarette le aa jldi se’’
Ahsan bhai ne muje paise pakraye
Mera asal nam to  rizwan ha lekin 2 saal pehle jb ma yahan aya to shrink ho k riz hogya tha
Mere abba ki gaon mein thori si zamin thi aur usi pe guzar basar hota tha hamara
M parhae mein bohat acha tha aur mere abba ko bohat shoq tha k ma ziada se ziada parhun
Phir mere abba ki death hogae aur 1 hafte baad he amma b chali gaen aur mere mamu muje apne sath is bare se sheher le aye..us waqt ma 7th class mein tha
Mere 1 he mamu the bohat he ameer
Meri amma ki family to mere abba jesi middle class he thi lekin mamu ki lottery aise lgi k sheher mein jahan wo 1 office mein mamooli si job krte the us k malik ki beti ko wo pasand agye aur un ka boss apni ikloti beti ki zid maan’ne pe majboor hogya
Maami bohat maghroor aur nak charhi si aurat thi aur sari umer mamu ko un k samne nazar uthane ki jurrat nai hui thi
Ma zindagi mein pehli baar mamu k ghar aya tha aur itna alishan aur bara ghar dekh k meri ankhen phati ki phati reh gae thn
Mami ko mamu ki yeh jurrat pasand to nai ayi thi lekin mamu ne minnaten tarle kr k unhe mana he lia tha
Is bare se ghar ki chhat pe 1 chhota sa kamra tha aur mami k hukum pe wo 1 single bed k sath wo muje de dia gya
Shuru shuru ki kuch raaten to mere liye bohat khofnaak thn sari raat dar ki waja se ma so nai pata tha..lekin phir ahista ahista muje aadat ho gae thi
Mamu k 3 bete aur 4 betian thn
Aleeza aur vaneeza uni jati thn…warda college ki student thi aur sb se chhoti shanzay jo meri he hum umer thi…
Behen bhaion mein sb se bara ahsan tha jo mamu k sath biz dekh raha tha…mohsin aur jamal b college jate the
Mamu ne muje 1 sarkari school mein daakhil kra dia tha halan k un k apne bche mehnge school/college aur uni mein parhte the..shayed mami k ghusse se bchne k liye mamu ne muje sarkari school mein dakhil krwaya tha
School se ghar ane k baad mera ziada ter time ghar k kamon mein he sarf hota tha..un logon ko muft ka 1 mulazim mil gya tha
Ma ne kbi khana maanga nai tha lekin mil jata tha
‘’asma..riz ko khana de do’’
Agar ma neeche hota to mamu ya mami kam wali ko hukum de deti aur ma apna khana le k ooper apne kamre mein ajata..ya phir mera khana mere kamre mein he phncha dia jata
Rishte k lihaz se to mamu k 7 bche mere cousins he the lekin ma un k liye kuch b nai tha…siwaye shanzay k
Shanzay in sb se mukhtalif tabiat ki thi..bohat khyal rkhne wali..
Wohi thi jo mere sath kuch baat kr lia krti thi lekin sb k samne nai


‘’hamari b kya zindagi ha yar..meri nayi ammi azaab dale rkhti ha muje’’
School mein mera best friend babar he tha…4 saal pehle us ki mother ki death k baad us k father be dosri shadi kr li thi
Me: hmm..filmon mein b aisa he hota ha k soteli maa bohat zulm krti ha
Babar: tere sath b koi acha sulook nai hota yar..nokron ki tarah kam krwate hn tuj se
Me: ma farigh he to hota hn yar..aur pata ha mamu ne mere kamre mein chhota sa tv b rkh dia ha
Mamu kbi kbar jb mami ghar nai hoti thi mere kamre ka chakkar lga jaya krte the aur aksar kuch paise b meri pocket mein daal jate the
Babar: bs yar mera to dil krta ha ghar he chhor du…balke bhaag jaun kahin
Abi hum 9th mein the
Me: hum ache se parhte hn na yar..phir koi achi si nokri kren ge
Meri tarah babar b parhae mein bohat achha tha


‘’kya ho raha ha’’
Shanzay mere room mein ayi thi
Me: exam shuru ho rai hn to bs tyari mein lga hua hn
Shanzay: muje acha nai lgta jb ye log tum se itna kam krwate hn
Me: koi baat nai..mamu itne ache hn aur tum b to ho sb se achi
Shanzay: ma tumhe achi lgti hn?
Me: han na..tum ache se baat krti ho mere sath..khyal b rkhti ho
Shanzay: muje bohat bura lgta ha jb koi tumhe hamare sath khane ka nai kehta
Me: wo…koi baat nai ..muje to bura nai lgta
Ma us se kehna chahta tha k acha to muje b nai lgta
Shanzay: acha suno..ma na pait bhar k khana nai khaya kru gi..thora sa tumhare sath kha lia kru gi yahin ooper aa k
Me: nai nai tum pait bhar k khaya kro sb k sath he
Ma jldi se bola kyu k ma nai chahta tha k mami ka qeher us pe ya muj pe tootay
Shanzay: acha
Wo mayoosi se boli aur uth k neeche chali gae



Kuch dino se asma muje dekh k kuch ziada he muskura rai thi
Asma ki umer 17 18 saal thi aur us ki ma b mamu k ghar he kam krti aur thi aur us ka baap mamu ka driver tha..yeh log servant quarters mein rehte the
Wo raat ka khana le k ooper ayi aur jane ki bjaye wahin beth gae..aam tor pew o khana de k chali jati thi aur khali bartan ma khud he kitchen mein rkh ata tha
Muje us ki nazron se uljhan ho rai thi
Me: ma bartan rkh aun ga neeche
Asma: kyu muj se dar lgta ha tumhe?
Usay b is ghar mein meri hasiyat ka pata tha isiliye muje ‘’tum’’ keh k he bulati thi
Me:nai…dar kyu lge ga?
Gandumi rangat wali asma pyari to thi lekin abi tk muje us mein koi dilchaspi nai thi..1 to exam sir pe the aur ghar k kamon mein dor bhaag kr k muje raat kafi late tk parhae krni parti thi
Asma: phir meri taraf dekhte kyu nai ho?
Me: matlab..kya kru ga dekh k?
Ma chir k bola aur khana khane mein masroof raha
Asma: bohat kuch ha dekhne ko
Wo muskurae
Ma ne jldi se khana khatam kia aur bartan us ki taraf barhaye
Us ne bartan uthaye aur darwaze ki taraf chal di
‘’tumhara lun khara nai hota?’’
Darwaze k pas wo ruk k boli aur ma beyaqeeni se us munh khole us ki taraf dekhta raha
Wo hansti hui bahir nikal gae
Us k jane k kafi der baad b mera munh khula ka khula he raha



‘’hain ?ye bola us ne?’’
Babar ne pucha
Me: han yar…muje to itni herani hui k kya btaun..larki ho k aisi baat
Babar: dena chahti ha wo tuje
Me; kya dena chahti ha?
Babar: phuddi
Wo hansa
Me: jane de yar..kyu merwana ha muje
1 2 dafa jb babar k ammi abbu kahin gye hue the to us k ghar hum ne xxx movies dekhi thn
Babar: ma teri jagah hota to..
Me: tu ne kia ha kbi?
Babar: btaya to tha apni kaam wali k sath
Me: acha han..ma bhool gya tha..maza aya tha?
Babar: han na..muth se to behter he ha
Me: acha