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Re: AKELA..TANHA..
« Reply #24 on: December 11, 2018, 09:19:24 pm »
Kamal ka start hai aur umeed hai yeh faizan urf faizi sy b brh kr ho gi keep it up I m always big fan of ur stories

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« Reply #25 on: December 11, 2018, 10:01:01 pm »
Nice start

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« Reply #26 on: December 11, 2018, 11:23:39 pm »
Nice start  , umdaa plot or muhtaat alfaaz ka chunao , ap bht acha likh rahy hain bro , story ka tempo bnaye rakhiye ga , waiting....
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« Reply #27 on: December 11, 2018, 11:40:54 pm »
Welcome again kaka and nice start with a nice story

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« Reply #29 on: December 12, 2018, 12:33:15 pm »
Nice again

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« Reply #30 on: December 12, 2018, 03:13:27 pm »
Asma ki muj se chair chhar jari thi lekin muje exams ki tansn thi..aur ma ache numbers se pass b hogya
Mamu maami aur aleeza us waqt kahin jane ki tayyari mein the
‘’wo…mera result agya ha mamu’’
Ma ne result card mamu ki taraf barhaya
Mamu: shabash..well done
Unho ne card pe sarsari nazar daal k muje wapis pakra dia
Ma sir jhukaye ooper apne kamre ki taraf ate hue apne abba aur amma ki khushi yaad kr raha tha jo unhe mere pass hone pe hoti thi
Koi udaasi si udaasi thi
Asma khana le ayi
Me: muje bhook nai ha
Ma tv on krte hue bola
Asma: aiwen nai ha bhook?
Us ne tray table pe rkhi aur bed pe charh k mere samne beth gae
Me: tumhe neeche kaam nai ha koi?
Asma: sb kisi shadi pe gye hue hn
Me: acha..ma kha lug a jb bhook lge gi..aur peechhe ho zara…laitna ha ma ne
Wo mere samne bethi thi ur is waja sa ma tv b nai dekh pa raha tha
Asma khisak k side pe hui aur ma tangen seedhi kr k lait gya
Asma: koi film lgao na..kya match dekh rai ho
Us ne apna rukh tv ki taraf kr lia
Ma ne khamoshi se channel change kr dia
Asma ki gaand side se meri thigh k sath touch kr rai thi jise ma ignore krne ki koshish kr raha tha
Lekin aj shayed asma kisi mission pe he ayi thi
Kuch der baad us ka hath meri thigh pe raingne lga…aur itne se he mera lun khara hone lga
Hum dono ka dhyan tv ki taraf he tha
‘’ma tumhe sohni nai lgti?’’
Us ne apna chehra meri taraf kia
Khubsurat to wo thi he..mamu ki betian gori chitti thn aur sb he 1 se barh kr 1 ..jb k asma apni gandumi rangat k sath b bohat pur-kashish thi
Ma ne bs han mein sir hila k apne khushk hote gale se thook nigla
Asma ne bethe bethe he rukh meri taraf kia..aur agle he lamhe mere jisam ko jhatka lga
Us ne trouser k ooper se mera lun apne hath mein le lia tha..zindagi mein pehli bar mera lun mere ilawa kisi aur k hath mein tha
Asma: kitna bara ha tera lun..itna sakht…
Wo surkh ankhon se meri taraf dekh k boli aur mere ooper se ho k meri left side pe lait gae
Us ka narm o gudaaz jisam mere jisam k sath chipka hua tha..ma ye sb mehsoos he kr raha tha lekin kuch kr nai pa raha tha..samaj he nai aa rai thi k kya kru…
Asma: meri shalwar mein hath daalo
Wo apni thighs khol k boli aur mera trouser neeche kr dia
Ma ne ahista se apna hath us ki shalwar mein dakhil kr dia
Asma: ssiiii…
Jese he meri fingers us ki garam aur geeli si phuddi se touch hui us ne gaand ooper kr k neeche ki aur us k hath ki girift mere lun pe sakht hogae
Asma: aise kro…unglion se
Us ne dosra hath mere hath pe rkha aur usay apni phuddi pe ooper neeche krne lgi
Us k hath hatane k baad b ma us ki phuddi ko rub krta rha aur wahan nami barhti ja rai thi
Asma ka hath b mere lun pe tezi se ooper neeche ho raha tha aur ma to tha he uswaqt maze ki dunya mein..apne hath se muth lgate hue kbi itna maza nai aya tha muje
Asma ankhen bnd kiye siskian le rai thi
Aur ye shayed us k hath ka asar tha k mere lun kuch jldi he pani chhor dia aur ma ne hath us ki shalwar se nikal lia
Asma: itni jldi hogye tum…muje b farigh kro na
Wo besabri se boli aur mera hath pakar k apni shalwar mein le jane ki koshish krne lgi
Me: nai..bs..
Ma sharminda sa ho raha tha aur jld se jld washroom jana chahta tha
Asma kuch buburati hue uthi aur kamre se bahir nikal gae



Ab kuch din school se chuttian thn lekin agle din phir b meri ankh subah k waqt he khul gae
Mamu ko apne kamre mein ate dekh k ma uth betha..wo office ki tayyari mein the
‘’ye tumhara gift..pass hone ki kkhushi mein’’
Unho ne 1 dibba meri taraf barhaya..mobile set tha
Un k hath se gift lete hue ma ne un ki taraf dekha aur wo meri ankhon mein likhe hue sawal ko samaj gye
Mamu: teri mami ko pata ha..acha is k sath sim b ha wo daal lena is mein
Mamu ne kuch paise meri pocket mein daale aur chale gye
Un ka jane k thori der baad shanzay b agae
Shanzay: result card dikhao zara muje..aur ye lo
Wo muskurae aur 1 chocolate mere hath pe rkh di
Ma ne apna result card usay de dia
Shanzay: wow..itne ache marks..itne to mere b nai aye
Wo waqae bohat khush lg rai thi…aur jane se pehle us ne mere naye mobile mein sim daal k apna aur baqi sb k numbers b save kr diye


‘’kahin ja rai ho?’’
Ma lounge se ho k bahir ki taraf ja raha tha k mami ki awaz sun k ruk gya
Me: g..wo …dost k pas ja raha tha..
Ma darte darte bola
Mami: sham mein party ha ghar mein shanzay k pass hone ki khushi mein..100 kam hn ge..time pe ajana aur mobile on rkhna apna..number do muje apna..
Ma ne mami ko apna number btaya aur bahir agya
Shayed wo muje mobile dene k liye isi liye maani thi k agar koi kam meri gher mojoodgi mein pare to call kr k bula len



Babar old city  mein rehta tha..van se utar kr un tang lekin pur-ronaq galion se hota hua ma us k ghar pohnch gya
‘’arrey waah…naya mobile..wo b itna mehnga’’
Wo mera mobile hath mein le k bola
Me:mamu ne dia ha
Babar: aur muje bs 1000 mila ha inaam mein..mere sath chal
Babar k abbu ka wholesale ka kam tha aur yeh log ache khase ameer the
‘’tu theher ma abi aya’’
Wo apne abbu ki shop k andar jate hue bola
Unho ne abi shop kholi he this hayed kyu k abi koi customer nai tha
‘’ye len apna 1000..mobile le k den muje’’
Wo apne abbu se mukhhatib tha
‘’yar …’’
‘’ma ne kaha na k muje mobile chahiye…abi..paise den am le leta hn khud he’’
‘’acha yar le le…tu salim ki shop pe chala ja ma usay phone kr deta hn..kon se lena ha?’’
Us k abbu ki jhinjilayi hui awaz ayi
‘’ap phone kro jo muje pasand aya wohi lu ga’’
Babar ne b wohi model lia jo mamu ne muje dia tha


‘’oye..pareshan na ho..pehli bar tha na isliye’’
Babar hanste hue bola..ma ne usay apna aur asma ka raat wala waqya btaya tha
Me: aj to wo muje nashta b nai de k gae
Babar: itni filmen dekhi hn hum ne xxx..wo kaam mein la zara
Me: acha..ab shayed zarurat he na pare
Muje lg raha tha k asma ab muje pas nai ane de gi


Ache khase log akathe kiye hue the maami ne party mein
Aur ma market k cakkar lga lga k thak chuka tha
‘’riz..catering walon k pas he bethna…kisi cheez ki kami nai honi chahiye’’
Ma ooper apne kamre mein jane ki soch he raha tha k maami ki awaz ayi aur ma bahir lawn mein bni hui partition mein chala gya
Ab jb tk function khatam nai hona tha meri duty yahin thi


3  4 din to asma ne muje lift he nai krae..bs khana rkh k chali jati thi
Aur ma chah k b us se baat nai kr pata tha
Asma: ab dekhte kyu rehte ho meri taraf?
Us din wo khana rkh k munh bna k boli
Me: wese he…
Asma: koi baat krni ha?
Me: han
Ma ne b himmat pakar he li…dosra muje ye b maloom tha k aj sari family bahir gae ha dinner krne k liye
Asma: bolo
Me: wo us din..pehli bar tha mera
Asma: acha g?tumhe to ata he nai kuch b
Wo hanste hue boli
Me: sb ata ha..ma ne fimen dekhi hui hn wo wali
Ma bed se utra aur usay banhon mein le lia aur us k hont apne honton mein le liye
Asma apne hont khol k kissing mein mera sath dene lgi
Jb meri zuban us ki zuban se takrayi to mere jisam ko jhatka lga..ye meri pehli bari thi asma ki nai
Us ne meri zuban ko honton mein khencha aur choosna shuru hogae..aur neeche mera lun akar k us ki phuddi mein push ho raha tha
Asma: kapre..utaro
Wo tez sanson k sath boli aur jldi se apne kapre utarne lgi..ma ne b ziada der na lgae apni shirt aur trouser utarne mein
‘’ajao’’
Wo bed pe lait k boli
Aur ma zindagi mein pehli bar koi nangi larki ya aurat apni ankhon k samne dekh raha tha
Asma k bare se mamme aur un pe tane hue nipples…us ki phuddi k jure aur phoole hue lips..
‘’aa b jao ab’’
Us ki awaz muje zara hosh mein le k ayi
Ma us k ooper us ki thighs k beech lait gya aur thora ooper ho k us dono mamme hathon mein le liye
‘’film dekhne mein ye maza kahan..’’
Ye sochte hue ma ne asma k 1 light brown nipple ko honton mein le lia
Asma: ahhh….mmm…..han ..kro aise he…
Ma kafi der tk us k nipples ko choosta raha aur asma apni gaand ooper utha utha k apni phuddi mere lun pe daba rai thi
Asma: ooohhh…daal do andar..
Lekin ma ab kafi confident hochuka tha aur usay btana chahta tha k muje sb ata ha chahe movies dekh k he sahi
Us k mamme chhor k ma kiss krte hue neeche ane lga
Us ki thighs mein beth k ma ne finger us ki geeli phuddi k lips mein pheri
Asma: ssiii…
Wo bnd ankhon k sath siskian le rai thi
Thori himmat mazeed paida kr k ma us ki thigh k beech ulta laita aur 1 gehra saans le k  zuban us ki phuddi pe pher di
Asma:hayee…ye kya….kia tum ne
Us ka sara jism kamp gya aur wo thori ooper ko hogae
Jawab dene ki bjaye ma ne ooper hua aur us ki phuddi pe zuban dorane lga
Asma: aahhh..sssiii…riz….ooohhhh
Me: maza nai aa raha ?
Asma: bohat aa raha ha…yahan se…kro
Us ne apni phuddi k ooper wale hisse pe 1 chhote se daane pe ungli rkhi
Aur jese he meri zuban us daane pe lgi us ki siskian buland hogaen aur wo apne hathon se mera sir apni phuddi pe dabane lgi
Asma: ab..daalo andar…chodo muje..
Ma jldi se seedha hua aur apna lun us ki phuddi pe rkha..lekin lun muj se us ki phuddi k sorakh pe set nai ho raha tha
Asma apna hath neeche le k ayi aur mere lun ko pakar k apni phuddi k sorakh pe dabaya
Asma: han..kro agay
Ma ne lun andar ki janib push kia aur muje aisa lga jese mera lun kisi reshmi aur garam cheez mein utar raha ho..wese asma ki phuddi  kafi tight thi
Me: aahhhh…
Ma b apni awaz rok na ska aur lun us ki phuddi se andar bahir krne lga
Asma: aaahhhh….ooohhhh…maza..thora tez tez..
Ma dhakkon mein tezi le aya
Asma: han..aise he..chodo muje…aaaahhh
aur ma wese he tez tez usay chodta raha..babar ki instructions k mutabiq jb muje mehsoos hota k mera pani nikalne wala ha ma kuch der k liye ruk k us k nipples choos raha tha ta k time kuch ziada lge
asma: ahhhh…ooohhh…hayeee..ma gae….oooohhhhhh
us ka jisam akarne lga aur muje lga jese us ki phuddi mere lun ko bhench rai ho
aur phir meri tangon mein b akrao ane lga aur ma ne apna pani us ki phuddi mein he nikal dia
us k ooper se utar k ma us k sath he lait gya aur mera saans us se b ziada tez chal raha tha
asma: tumhe to..waqae..sbbbbbbb pata ha..
agli subah ma utha to muje aisa lg raha tha jese ma ne koi qila fateh kr lia ho



asma us k 1 hafte baad mere qaboo mein ayi..lekin us ne muje btaya k usay periods hn
me: acha
ma mayoosi se bola
asma hansti hui mere pas beth gae
me: pehle kis k sath krti ho tum?
Asma: bs apni khala k bete k sath..mangetar b ha mera wo..wese..
Wo baat poori krte krte ruk gae
Me: wese?
Asma: kuch nai
Me: btao na
Asma: nai tum aiwen kisi k samne baat kr do ge
Me: nai krta yar..wese b muj se baat krta kon ha yahan?
Asma: wese tumhare mamu ki aulaad bare kamal ki ha
Wo hansi
Me: matlab?
Asma: un k teeno beton ne muj pe line maari lekin ma ne pakrae he nai di
Wo ahsan mohsin aur jamal ki baat kr rai thi
Me: acha?
Asma: aur kya..wese betian b kum nai hn
Her ghar mein kam krne walion ko un gharon mein hone wali bohat si baton ka pata hota ha jis mein se ziada ter wo apni khamosh observation se he jaanti hn
Me: wo kese?
Asma: dekho ma tum se baat kr rai hn..
Me: yar nai krta kisi se baat
Ma betabi se bola
Asma: aleeza ka apne mamu k bete k sath chakkar ha..1 martaba jb ghar koi nai tha to aya aur seedha aleeza k kamre mein..aleeza k kamre mein jo khirki lawn mein khulti ha na ma ne wahan se dekha to wo dono nange sath laite hue the..
Halan k ghar mein hamare ilawa uswaqt b koi nai tha phir b wo bohat ahista awaz mein baat kr rai thi
Me: aur…
Asma: vaneeza ko larkon se ziada larkian achi lgti hn
Wo munh pe hath rkh k hansi
Me: hain?
Muje waqae herat hui kyu k ma samja tha k lesbians sirf xxx movis mein he hoti hn
Asma: han na..ma ne khud dekha usay apni sahelion k sath chummiyan krte hue
Me: aur..
Muje kuch ziada he shoq ho raha tha mazeed baten jaan’ne ka
Asma: aur warda..wo to kehti ha us ne shadi he nai krani kbi..dekha nai k dikhne mein larka he lgti ha..mamme to jese hn he nai us k
Warda waqae tom boy type larki thi..bob cut se b thore chhote he baal rkhti thi wo
Me: khusra to nai ha wo?
Asma: arrey nai
Wo hanste hue boli
Me: phir?
Asma: hote hn in bare logon mein aise log …int..intellc..kya bolte hn..begum sahiba bol rai thn 1 din ye lafz…
me: intellectuals
ma ne bs ye lafz he suna hua tha muje is ka matlab b pata tha lekin ye hote kya hn ma nai jaanta tha
asma: aur apni shanzay to lgta he nai k in mein se ha..sb se mukhtalif sb ka khyal rkhne wali
shanzay k zikar pe mere chehre pe muskrahat agae


‘’salaam sir g’’
Sir majeed school mein mere favourite teacher the..bohat he shafeeq insan the wo aur muj se to bohat pyar krte the..ma wese he un k ghar chala aya tha..mera un se talluq aisa bn chuka tha k wo mere sb halaat jaante the
Sir g: agae meri yaad tuje nalaiq
Wo muskurae aur muje andar le gye
Me: bs sir g..
Sir g: acha chal chhor..bta kya khaye ga
Me: kuch nai sir g..bs ap se milne ka dil kr raha tha
Sir g : acha kia tu agya yar..school k bgher to mera b dil nai lgta ghar mein…ustani g..
Baat k akhir mein unho ne apni wife ko awaz di jinhe wo hamesha ustani g he kehte the halan k wo teacher nai thn
‘’han g..arrey riz aya ha’’
Wo andar ayi aur mere pas aa k mere sir pe hath phera
Sir g: pulao bn gya?
Ustani g: bs thori der mein tayyar
Sir g: bs theek ha..riz b hamare sath he khana khaye ga aj
In dono ki aulaad nai thi koi…lekin jane kb se apas ki mohabbat k sahare sath he the dono..sir g ghar walon bohat bar bola tha un se k dosri shadi kr len..lekin wo ustani g se mohbt he itni krte the k unho ne saaf inkar kr dia tha aur apne gaon wale school se yahan transfer kra li thi
Me: sir g ye intellectual kon log hote hn?
Ustani g k jane k baad achanak he ye sawal mere zehen mein aya tha
Aur sir g hamesha mere her sawal ka jawab dete the
Sir g: riz puttar ma tuje asaan lafzon mein btata hn…ye wo log hote hn jo her cheez ko apne zawiya nazar se dekhte  aur sochte hn…bs damagh ko agay rkhte hn dil ki baat nai sun’te in mein se ziada ter log..aur ziada ter log jo hn un mein se kuch baaghi bn jate hn…kuch mazhab/religion se door ho jate hn..aur kuch aiwen mukhtalif nazar ane ki koshish krte hn aur kuch pagal ho jate hn..lekin in mein se jo dil aur damagh ko balance rkhte hn wo waqae inqelaab le k ate hn..ayi samaj?
Me: g sir g bilkul agae
Sir g: acha future ka kya plan ha tera puttar?
Me: parhna ha ..achi job krni ha..zindagi bnani ha apni
Sir g: tum bohat laiq ha riz..muje yaqeen ha tu bohat agay tk jao ge zindagi mein
Uswaqt hum mein se koi b nai jaanta tha k ma zindagi mein kahan tk jane wala tha…



































































































































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Re: AKELA..TANHA..
« Reply #31 on: December 12, 2018, 04:57:05 pm »
Very nice start kaka g best of luck

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Re: AKELA..TANHA..
« Reply #32 on: December 12, 2018, 06:12:13 pm »
Very nice Kaka g

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Re: AKELA..TANHA..
« Reply #33 on: December 12, 2018, 08:10:00 pm »
Very nice start kaka g best of luck
just developing the story and main character bro at the moment..hope k agay ja k ziada behter hojaye gi story

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« Reply #34 on: December 12, 2018, 08:10:38 pm »
Very nice Kaka g
just developing the story and main character bro at the moment..hope k agay ja k ziada behter hojaye gi story

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Re: AKELA..TANHA..
« Reply #35 on: December 12, 2018, 09:17:58 pm »
Very Nice Kaka Gi ....
Fablous writing ... :rockon: