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Re: ساس میری سہیلی (Not in**st )
« Reply #312 on: April 20, 2020, 09:58:46 pm »
خوب کہانی کہی آپ نے... جیسے پروین شاکر نے عورت کے حقیقی احساسات کو غزل و نظم میں پرو کر عورت ہونے کا حق ادا کیا بعینہ آپ بھی سیکس یا ہزل کی دنیا میں عورت کی جانب سے خوب بولتی ہیں..


شیرو کے ساتھ جذبات سے بھرپور ایک ایپوسوڈ ہو جاتا بیوگی کے دنوں میں تو سواد ہی سواد ہی وکھرا ہوتا لیکن خیر آپ نے تو دو بول پڑھوا دیے..
یہ بھی خوب رہی..


زور قلم اور بھی زیادہ
رات بھر لوڑے کو رکھا یاد نے تیری کھڑا

ہائے یہ طرز ستم اک ناز کے پالے کے ساتھ

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Re: ساس میری سہیلی (Not in**st )
« Reply #312 on: April 20, 2020, 09:58:46 pm »

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Re: ساس میری سہیلی (Not in**st )
« Reply #313 on: April 22, 2020, 11:35:40 am »
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« Reply #313 on: April 22, 2020, 11:35:40 am »

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Re: ساس میری سہیلی (Not in**st )
« Reply #314 on: April 26, 2020, 08:22:40 pm »
hello ji,


kya haal ha apka. apki taraf lockdown kaisa ja rha ha. aggar ap bore rhy ho tu kya ap meri story par kr mujhe koi feedback kr sakty hoo.


story ka link
https://yumstories.com/index.php?topic=62492.0


thanks in advance.

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Re: ساس میری سہیلی (Not in**st )
« Reply #315 on: April 26, 2020, 08:22:57 pm »
hello ji,

kya haal ha apka. apki taraf lockdown kaisa ja rha ha. aggar ap bore rhy ho tu kya ap meri story par kr mujhe koi feedback kr sakty hoo.

story ka link
https://yumstories.com/index.php?topic=62492.0

thanks in advance.

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Re: ساس میری سہیلی (Not in**st )
« Reply #316 on: April 27, 2020, 04:13:34 pm »
Nice story ...

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Re: ساس میری سہیلی (Not in**st )
« Reply #317 on: August 09, 2020, 02:43:04 am »
Seema Naaz, just your story "Saas Meri Saheli". Thanks to Eng.Danial who provided the link of complete story. Let me admit that it was wonderfully written. You know ver well how to play with the words as well as with the sentiments of the readers. You seem to be a writer who has very good imagination and has a good knowledge of Urdu literature as well as movies and must have read some of best novels, I must say. But the story was ended abruptly which disappointed a reader like me. I was expecting a very erotic session of Nosheen with Shero, and a very  detailed session of Begum Saheba with Dino and a group session of all them. However, hats off to the writer like you who is providing good erotic stories to us.[/size]"Seema Naaz, tu poori kahani likho ya adhori, Humey tum pe Naaz hai"   

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Re: ساس میری سہیلی (Not in**st )
« Reply #318 on: August 09, 2020, 06:53:37 am »
Kuch halaat aise thay keh time nikaalna  mushkil ho raha tha . mein tweel kahaniyan nahein likha karti
iss liye yuksaaniyat  ke hathon bore  hona bhi  iss story ko  jald khtam karne maujb bna . mujhe afsos hai
keh aap logon ki umeedon ke mutaabeq  kahani  ko anjaam nah de paai . jis ke liye mein mazrat khawah  hoon .kehte hein tjrba behtreen ustaad hai . mein  bhi is tjarbe kuch seekha hai . aeinda tu kahani ka plot ziyada ae se
4 to 8 parts tk hoga . aur meri koshish hogi  apke mano ranjan ka  kahani  ki zarooriyat ke  mtaabeq poora poora samaan muhiya  kroon  . umeed hai meri kotahoiun ko  nazar adaaz kar ke meri  aane wali  stories se lutf andoz  honge .

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Re: ساس میری سہیلی (Not in**st )
« Reply #319 on: August 18, 2020, 12:15:52 am »
Seema Naaz achi story hay, apny free time mien update deti rahien bhaLay short ho, intizaar tu wesy bhi krty hi hien, na hony say kuch hona behter
Kiya Kiya na khwab Hijer k mosum mien kho Gaye
Hum jaaG tu rahy thay maGer bakhat so Gayee

 

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