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Anjaan rasta (by zaibi)
« on: May 21, 2012, 10:51:58 am »
Story Updates
Green color links are with proxy
Update 1 :: Update 1 ::
Update 2 :: Update 2 ::
Update 3 ::  Update 3 :: 
Update 4 ::  Update 4 (rape Scene) :: 
Update 5 ::Update 5 ::
Update 6 ::  Update 6 :: 
Update 7 :: Update 7 (4some Hot update ::
Update 8 ::Update 8(maria asad and hospital ::
Update 9 :: Update 9 ::
Update 10 ::   Update 10 ::   
Update 11 ::  Update 11(Aini and Hammad Hot) :: 
Update 12 :: Update 12 (Saima aur chaudri haider sain ::
Update 13 ::   Update 13 ( arfa aur hammad, shazia aur maria ::   
Update 14 :: Update 14 (hammad proposed Arfa, Asma ki entry ::
Update 15 ::Update 15 (Arfa ki suhag Raat aur..) ::
Update 16 ::  Update 16Romance ,Tension .... ::   
Update 17 ::  Update 17 (Asma aur waqas :Hot:) :: 
Update 18 ::  Update 18 (Arfa Kon?) :: 
Update 19  :: Update 19 (revenge) ::
Update 20 ::Update 20 (arfa ki wapsi SAD UPDATE) ::
Update 21    ::  Update 21 anum ki kahani
Update 22    ::    Update 22 Hammad ki kahani, 9/11 Attacks
Update 23 ::   Update 23
Update 24     ::   Update 24 (Hot ending)
Update 25   ::    Update 25 ( Arfa Hammad love kahani)
Update 26    ::  Update 26
Update 27 ::  Update 27 (Arfa Hammad ki judai)
Update 28  ::  Update 28
Update 29 ::   Update 29 arfa, hammad engagement,  maina aini and arfa HOT
Update 30   ::  Update 30 Arfa Hammad ka milan




Ye meri khud ki written story hai... meri apni to nahi lakin kesi ki apbeti hai jo main apne lafzoon main likh kar ap ki khidmat main paish kar rahi hun aur mera story likhne ka ye pehla experience hai... Umeed hai galtiyoon ko nazar andaz kartay howe meri islah karen ge ap....

"Main ne us ko dekhte hi pehchan lia tha. wo mere bachpan ki friend Maria thi. Train is waqt faisalabad station cross kar ke toba tak singh ke lye chal pari thi. maria mujh se thori door bethi hoi thi. us ne mujhe abhi nahi dekha tha lakin main ne pehli nazar main hi us ko pehchan lia tha. main is waqt apne baitay ke sath maikay ja rahi thi. maria ke sath bhi 3 bache thay 1 shayd us ki beti aur dosra baita ho ga uska.
main ne us ko taqreban 6 saal bad dekha tha. wo zayda na badli thi. pehle se thori si moti ho gai thi lakin face main masomiyat abhi bhi waisi hi thi. wo khirki se bahir tezz chalti train se bahir haray bharay khaitoon main dekh rahi thi. shyd kesi gehri soch main mubtala thi.
achank main ne apne baite ki awaz suni to meri tawajha maria se hat gai. meray baitay na kaha mama main ne sona hai to main ne us ke sonay ki jagha bnai aur us ke sonay ke bad main uth kar Maria ki taraf chal pari.
Maria ke pass pohanch kar main thori dair us ko dekhti rahi wo abhi bhi khirki se bahir ankhain jamaye gehri soch main mubtala thi. main ne us ke shoulder pe hath rakha to chonk gai aur foran mere chehre ki taraf dekha. meri taraf dekhte hi wo foran pehchan gai. pehchanti bhi kaise nahi akhir main us ki bachpan ki friend thi. us ne achank wohi bola jo main soch rahi thi. Anum? tum yahan? us ke chehray pe thori si ghabrahat dikhi lakin sath hi khushi ki laher bhi dor ai...
mujhe us ne apne pass bethne ko bola aur thori si side pe ho kar mere bethnay ke lye jagha bnai... main ne us se pocha ye bachay.... us ne kaha meray hain... bachay apni maa per gaye thay buhat hi cute thay sab bachay... hal ahwal pochne ke bad akhir meray lab per wo sawal a hi gya jis ka us ko bhi intzar tha kyn ke us ko pata tha main ye sawal lazmi pochna hai...
 Maria kahan chali gai thi? kesi ko teri koi khabar nahi hai?
Main aur Maria bachpan ki friends then...us ke ghar ki dewar hamaray ghar ki dewar se sanjhi thi... hum ne apna bachpan hansi khushi aik dosray ke sath guzara tha...
waqt kitni tezzi se guzarta hai pata bhi nahi lagta... hum ne matric aik sath clear kar lia... main hamesha us se aik 2 number se peche reh jati thi... ab ki bar bhi aisa hi howa... Maria 4 numbers ke farak se 1 position per thi aur main 2nd. kyn ke wo meri wahid friend thi is lye us ke jitne per mujhe khushi hi milti thi lakin us se next bar jitne ka ahad karti thi...
Mere parents ki taraf se aur parhne main koi harj nahi tha lakin Maria kay walid sahib ne  Maria ke aur parhne per pabandi laga di... jis ka mujhe buhat afsos howa... Maria mere pass ai aur us din wo buhat roi. Mere Abu ki maria ke abu se achi dosti thi.. is lye Maria meri mentain karne lagi ke main apne abu se kahon ke wo maria ke abu se bat karen aur college main parhne ki ijazat dilwa dain..
main apne abu ki ladli beti thi. mera kehna wo tal bhi nahi saktay thay..."


To be Continued...


 

 
« Last Edit: June 17, 2014, 01:30:44 pm by zaibi »
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« Reply #1 on: May 21, 2012, 11:27:12 am »
acha start lia hai ap ne .

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« Reply #1 on: May 21, 2012, 11:27:12 am »

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« Reply #2 on: May 21, 2012, 12:24:32 pm »
Update 2
"Main ne abu se Maria ki mazeed study ke lye request k wo Maria ke abu se bat karen ke wo apni zaheen beti ko study se mat roken wo buhat laik hai us ko parhane dain... aur hum aik hi college main aik sath jaya karen gi to mujhe bhi us ka aasra rahay ga...
bila akhir mere abu ke kehne pe Maria ko college main admission ki ijazat mil gai. hum aik sath college janay lagen.. college main mahool school ke mahool se buaht diffrent tha. wahan aik azadi thi jo ke school main hum ne kabhi mehsos nahi ki thi... hamari wahan buhat larkiyoon se dosti hoi... lakin yahan aik aur bat jo mukhtalif thi school se yahan larkiyaan study ke lye kam aur enjoyment ke lye zaya ati then... buhat kam larkiyan parhai ko sanjidagi se leti then...
buhat si larkiyoon ke boyfriends thay... larkiyaan subho ati to uniform main then lakin college main a kar ghar se laye howe bag se dosra dress nikal kar change karti aur class bunk kar ke apne boyfriends ke sath nikal jaten... Maria aksar mujhe kaha karti thi in larkiyoon main apne maa baap ki izat ka zarra bhi khayal nahi hai... maa baaap in ko college bhejte hain achi taleem ke lye lakin ye yahan apne parents ko bhi cheat katen hain aur khud apni zaat se bhi cheating karti hain...
aksar larkiyaan college end honay per gate se bahir milti jin ko unke boyfriends shopping karwa ke phir gate per chor jatay... khair main aur maria larkiyoon ki in batoon per aksar afsos ka izhar karti then....
Mujhe achank Maria ki awaz ne chonka dia... main ne shadi kar li thi aur ab mere 3 bachay hain...
Lakin tum achank kahan ghayb ho gai thi? kis se shadi ki? ghar se bhagi kyn? zinda ho to apne maa baap ko khabar kyn nahi ki abhi tak tum ne? maa tmhari abhi tak tmhara rasta dekhti hai? akhir howa kia tha tmharay sath? tm ne mujhe bhi btana nahi chaha? main aik hi saans main sab sawal bol gai us se...
Maria kuch dair train ki chat ki taraf munh kar ke hawa main dekhti rahi phir maria ne bolna shoro kia...
"us ka nam asad tha. buhat hi handsome tha wo. aik bar college se wapis jatay howe meri nazar pari us per. pehli hi nazar main us per dil har bethi... wo aik mehngi si car main music on kar ke kesi ka wait kar raha tha... achank aik larki ne us ke sath wala front door open kia car ka aur car main beth gai... wo larki apne college ki hi thi...
Us larki ko car main bethete dekh kar mujhe aik hi nazar main apna pehla piyar khatam hota nazar aya ke wo to kesi aur ke lye aya hai yahan... Asad ne car star ki aur car slow chalti hoi road pe dosri gariyoon main ghum ho gai... main ne us ke chehre ko jatkana chaha apni nazar se lakin phir us ki tasweer meri nazar ke samne a jati... us ne sun glasses laga rakhe thay aur apni dhun main khayloon ke smundar main doba howa tha... us ke chahre per bala ki masomiyat thi...gora rang aur dress suit main bala ka khobsurat jawan lag raha tha... mere dil main aya kash main wo larki hoti jo us ke sath bethi hoti aur hum aik lambi drive per hotay... goya ke aik hi nazar main dil de kar main us ko apna sab kuch sonp dena chahti thi...
2 haftay guzar gaye thay main daily college khatam honay se 10 minute pehle hi gate se bahir a jati... lakin wo mujhe kahen nazar nahi aya... main roz dua mangti ke aaj us ki aik jhalak hi dekhne ko mil jaye...
2 haftay guzar janay per meri sari umadain dam tor gain...janay ye kaisi muhabbat thi mujhe se ishaq ho gya tha aik hi nazar main us ko kia khabar thi... meri halat aisi thi jaise mujh se meri apni cheez kahen kho gai ho...
Phir aik din achank Asad ko main ne usi waqt usi jagha per dekha. Mere dil ki darkhanain tez ho gain... mere qadam mere control main na rahay main besakhta us ki car ki taraf chalne lagi. Us ki car ka front samne ki taraf tha main back side se us ki car ke pass ja rahi thi... main jaldi main us ke pass ja kar us ko aur qareeb se dekhna chahti thi... main aisa kyn kar rahi thi is ka jawab mere pass khud nahi tha lakin aisa karna dil ko acha lag raha tha... ye jantay howe bhi ke wo kesi aur ko lenay ata hai mere qadam us ki taraf chaly ja rahay thay... abhi main car ke door ke pass pohanchi hi thi ke mujhe andar se aik larki ki awaz sunai di."


To be continued...

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Re: Anjaan rasta
« Reply #3 on: May 21, 2012, 12:33:29 pm »
abhi time nai hai baad mai parhon ge.

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Re: Anjaan rasta
« Reply #4 on: May 21, 2012, 01:13:26 pm »
normal stories se thori si hat ke ho gi story... ap ke comments ne pass ki story ko to mazeed likhoon gi
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Re: Anjaan rasta
« Reply #5 on: May 21, 2012, 01:31:11 pm »
Gud start... Every thing is perfect except Reply#3. Lolz
Zaibi next part post kro.achi story lag rahi hy abi tak to

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Re: Anjaan rasta
« Reply #6 on: May 21, 2012, 02:44:08 pm »
waiting next part .
saima g zaibi ki pehli story hai time nikal k zaroor perhna .

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Re: Anjaan rasta
« Reply #7 on: May 21, 2012, 06:51:19 pm »
story ki start to achi hy par incomp  :death: :death: comp: kro yaha tak to achi hy
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